Maine Dil Tujhko Diya- *NOTE*

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saloni

@spring92

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Posted: 18 years ago

#31

i might post the part tonight if i have time but it depends 😊

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Rutu

@berkeleygirl818

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Posted: 18 years ago

#32

interesting FF!!!!!! 👏 👏 continue soon!!!! 😃

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punjabi_kudi_03

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Posted: 18 years ago

#33

interesting....keep up the gud work. 👏 👏 👏

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saloni

@spring92

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Posted: 18 years ago

#34

ok guys! i am here with part 3! actually i was going to post this part yest. but i took a break and went to drink water and by the time i got back to the computer, somebody had already shut it down so all my hardwork was in waste! so now i am writing this part again! anyways have fun reading it and i hope you guys like it!!!!

PART 3:

The following morning in the khanna house...

Naina was going crazy....

Naina: chalo chalo jaldi karo! aur ghar ko saaf karo.

Josh, Kartik, Aaliya and Dilip are siitingat the dinning table, watching naina freking out.
Just then Angad comes down from his room and sees naina.

Angad (to everone at the dinning table): ye kya ho raha hai???(he said it with a confused look on his face)

Aaliya: mom is going crazy, bhai.

Angad: kyu??

Josh: Aaj suryaban uncle aur unki family aarahi hai na issiliye.

Angad: woh log aaj aa rahe hai!!

Kartik said(sarcastically): kyu tumhe kya laga meri shaadi ke baad aayenge!

Angad: HA HA HA very funny.

Dilip: The sharmas abhi 4-5 hours me aane chahiye.

Angad: to phir airport kaun kaun jaane wala hai.

Aailya: meinto jaaongi.

Naina: nahi aaliya! tum ghar rehna betaa aur dekhna ke ghar mein kuch messed up na ho jaaye.

Dilip: i think mein, naina, angad aur kartik jaayenge.

Josh anda Aaliya were jsut staring at DIlip with angry faces as if they were kids. 😆

Dilip noticed this and said: arrreee...mein tum dono ko issiliye nahi le jaraha hoon kyunki phir carmein jagaa nahi hogi. already hum do cars le jarahe hai.

Josh and Aaliya decided to stay home but thought that since they were home they will do something special and surprise the sharmas! since they loved the sharmas so much and especially krip! everyone in the khanna house loved kripa a lot just because she was so nice to everyone. even the house garderns and servants loved her!
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In nainital, in the sharma house...

Gayatri: chalo sab jaldi karo nahi to plane choot jaayega.

Prithvi: mom, aap bohot tension leti ho. abhi plane ke take off mein kuch waqt hai. aur waise bhi i am ready to go! bas apki do pyaari betiyaan bohot waqt laga rahi hai.

Scene shifts to kripa's room...

Kripa: Mishti! mirror ke saamne se hato naa. mujhe bhi tayyar hona hai.

Mishti: tu already bohot acchi lag rahi hai. ab mujhe acche se tayyar hone de kyunki kartik airport pe aane wale hai aur main unkeliye acchi dekhna cahati hoon. tujhe kab se tere looks ki itni chinta hone lagi. tu kiske liye tayyar ho rahi hai. kahi angad ke liye to nahi?!?HUH!

Kripa: o shut up mishti! kuch bhi bakwaas karti hai. aisa kuch bhi nahi hai. maine usse 10 saal mein nahi dekha.

Mishti: uhuh! ya sure!!

Kripa: just drop it ok. he...

Kripa was going to say something but just then suryaban called mishti and kripa and they had to leave.

(i just want everyone to know that kripa has seen angad's photo only a couple of times cuz she isn't really into his music. she loves music but was never into him. she has a blurry image of him)
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On the plane...

Kripa: Mishti! Mishti! oothnna. mein bore ho rahi hoo.

Mishti: to mein kya karu. mujhe to sone de. you can entertain yourself.

Kripa: lekin mein kya karu. i don't have anything to do. tu mujhse baatein kar.

Mishti: theek hai meri maa! ummmm.... ok , mein tumhe angad ke baare mein bataati hoon.

Kripa: lekin mein uske baare mein jaanke kya karungi.

Mishti: dekh kripa, hum abhi ground se 60,000 ft high hai aur iss uchai me kissi ka dimaag nahi chalta. mera bhi nahi. issilye agar tujhe angad ke baare mein soonna hai to sun warna mein phir se sojaaoingi.

Kripa: theek hai! theek hai! i guess i don't have a choice.

Mishti: ok then! ummm... Angad peechle 10 saal se amearica mein rahta that kyunki usse ek achi boarding school mein admission mil gaya tha. ussi waqt mein usse music ka shok hua aur phir woh ek bohot badaa rockstar ho gaya, as you know. sab ladkian uspe marti hai except you of course!

Kripa: i don't know usme aisa kya hai jo ladkiyan uspe itna marti hai. he has the looks but what really counts is a person's heart aur uske sanskar. mujhe to nahi lagta uske paas woh hai jaha tak meine usko samjha hai bachpan mein.

mishti: tujhe kaise pataa. een 10 saalon mein ek baar bhi usse baat ke hai.

Kripa: nahi lekin...

Mishti: to phir! now let me continue. Kartik ne mujhe bataayan that ki he loves his family a lot especially his siblings.

Kripa: haan woh to mujhe pataa hai. Aaliya auar Josh hamesha uske baare mein baat karte rehte hai.

Mishti: woh to hai! Karatik ne ye bhi kaha tha ki angad zara arrogant aur rude hai lekin dil ka bura nahi hai. aur ha! woh yaha apna last year finish karne aaya hai sur of course meri aur kartik ki shaadi attend karne ke liye!

Kripa: ya duh!

Mishti: HA HA HA! ab mein waapas sone jaa rahi hoon.

Kripa: lekin mishti!

Mishti was already asleep. kripa couldn't sleep. she kept thinking about angad. she wondered what he was going to be like. she was a bit eager to meet him. after all they were meeting after 10 yrs. she had many fond memories of him durin her childhood. soon kripa fell asleep.
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At the airport, kripa's plane was about to land and Dilip, Naina, Kartik, and Angad were waiting for the sharmas.

Angad: oh god! kitni der laga rahe hai.

Kartik: calm down! mujhe pataa hai woh log kyu der lagaa rahe hai.

Angad: Kyu?

Kartik: zaroor kripa koi ladke ko sabak seekha rahi hogi kyunki uss ladke ne probably kripa ko chedaa hoga.

Angad: haha!! aapko kaise pataa.

Kartik: kripa hai hi aisi! kripa apni izzat ko leke bohot protective hai. woh sab ladko ko sabak sekhati hai jo usse chdne ki koshish kare. lekin no one can help but look at kripa kyunki woh hai hi itni khoobsurat.

Angad: really!!

Kartik: Oy Angad! don't get any wrong ideas ok! kripa bohot bholi aur acchi ladki hai. woh sabka dil jeet leti hai.

Angad: ya watever!ok, mujhe bohot pyaas lagi hai so mein zaraa airport par pani kaha milta hai dekh kar aata hoon.

Kartik: ok!

Naina: jaldi aana. gayatri aur suryaban abhi aahi rahe honge.

Angad: ok!

and he goes towards the baggage claim area. kripa's plane has already landed and they are getting there bags...

Kripa: mom, mein zaraa pani le kar aati hoon.

Gayatri: theek hai.

Kripa is going towards the vending machine when she bumps into a guy!

they both fall on each other and have a little staring session.

she looks at him and its non other than Angad!(but she doesn't know that)

Angad and Kripa felt like they knew each other. there was some kind of familiarititybetween them.

Angad thought that kripa was the prettiest girl he had ever seen and kripa thought that angad was the most handsome guy she had ever seen.

They came out of thier trance and got up.
Angad felt something that he had never felt before but whatever it was, it soon turned into anger

Angad rudely said: dekh ke nahi chal sakti! meri acchi shirt bigaad di.

Kripa: oy! ek to tum dekh kar nahi chal sakte aur phir mujhe hi daat rahe ho. tum jaise ladko ko mein acche se jaanti hoon. jaan booj ke tak rate ho!

Angad: watch what you are saying! tumhe to mein dekh kunga. pataa nahi apne aap ko kya samajh ti ho. ye attitude mujhe mat dekhao.

Kripa: attitude ke bacche! attitude to tume hai.. pataa nahi kaha se itne rude log aa jaate. now get lost!

Angad: you know what, you get lost!

they both turn in the opposite direction and start walking! when they are walking kripa angrily turns around to look at him but he isn't looking so she turns back around then, angad turns around angrily but to only see kripa's back so he turns back around. both walk off angrily!

When Angad gets back to where kartik, dilip, and naina were standing, kartik asks him: why are you so angry. kya hua???

Angad: kuch nahi. ek stupid ladki takra gayee thi aur phiri mere saath behas karne lagi. sara mood off kar diya.

Kartik: ab shaayad tumhara mood accha ho jaye. woh dekho the sharmas. hi aunty, uncle. HEY KRIPA!!!

Angad turns aorund to see kripa and is shocked. its the girl that he bumped into!!! by this time, even kripa looks at angad and is shocked!!!

Angad(to himself): omg! ye towahi ladki hai!

Kripa: omg! ye to wahi ladka hai!

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Preview: Kripa at khanna house. How will Angad and Kripa behave with each other??!?!?!?!?

ok guys! this is it for now. hope you liked it. i am sorry if it was a bit too long. i will post the next part soon!!

love,
Saloni 😳

Edited by spring92 - 18 years ago