Maine Dil Tujhko Diya- *NOTE*

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saloni

@spring92

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Posted: 18 years ago

#11

sorry guys! i won't be able to continue today..i know i said i will but i have a lot of homework.. if i get a little time then i will try but most probably not sorry!

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Madiha

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Posted: 18 years ago

#12

great ff and part!! waiting for a-k's ending!! cont soon 👏

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Nisha

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Posted: 18 years ago

#13

awesome fan fic..plz cont soon..cant wait for the next part...

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saloni

@spring92

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Posted: 18 years ago

#14

thanks guys! i will definetly cont. today! 😊

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Sharmin

@Shazii

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Posted: 18 years ago

#15

just read it its amazing pls cont soon

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saloni

@spring92

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Posted: 18 years ago

#16

ill cont. in half an hour. promise!

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saloni

@spring92

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Posted: 18 years ago

#17

ok. i know you guys are going to be mad but i cannot cont. today! i am really tired and the second part is really long so it would take some time. but i WILL cont. tomorrow and if i don't you guys can come to my house and kill me 😆 !
soory once again!

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Sameen

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Posted: 18 years ago

#18

oh thats ok. i hope you feel better soon

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angullgrl91

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Posted: 18 years ago

#19

hey. i luv ur fan fic so far. its off 2 a great start. cont soon. cant wait 2 c how ak meeting goes. 😃

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saloni

@spring92

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Posted: 18 years ago

#20

ok! Finally i am here with part 2! hope you enjoy!!!

Next morning, at the airport, the whole khanna family is waiting for angad to come...

Aailya: Josh bhaiya, Bhai kab ayega.

Josh: Tujhse zara bhi wait nahi hota kya? woh abhi ajayega.

Kartik: ayega nahi aagaya! woh dekho Angad!!

Everybody turns in the direction that kartik is pointing towards. we see a hot hunk who was wearing a sleeve less white shirt and jeans. it was non other than ANGAD!!

Dilip: Angad!!!

Naina: Angad beta!

Angad: Mom, Dad, kartik, josh, aaliya. aap sab aye hai. wow!!

Naina: Kaise ho beta!

Tears started rolling down naina's eyes.

Angad: Oh mom! come on don't cry. ab to wapas aagaya hoo na.

Dilip: Angad, hum sab ko tumhari bohot yaad aayi.

Angad: Mujhe bhi tum sab ki bohot yaad aaye. lekin ab i am back!

Angad hugs everyone and then they go home.

At Home, During dinner...

Angad: Its good to be back home!

Aaliya: bhai, its good to have you back.

Angad: thanks. arree kartik, meri honewali bhabi kaha hai. mujhe to bataya gaya tha ki woh abhi mumbai mein hai.

Kartik: Angad, Mishti kal tak yehi thi lekin aaj subhe woh wapas nainital apne family ko lene gai hai.

Angad: ok, ok! mishti..hmmm..uska 1 bhai prithvi tha woh to mujhe pata hai lekin uski ek behen bhi thi na?

Josh: han Angad. tum to shaayad sharmas ke bareme kafi kuch bhool gaye honge.

Angad: mujhhe sirf prithvi yaad hai kyunki usne mere saath contact rakha. baki sab itne yaad nahi hai. i know there is suryaban uncle, gayatri aunty, prithvi, mishti aur ummmm....

Aaliya: Kripa!!!

Angad: Kya???

Aaliya: Aur kripa, bhai. tum kripa ko kaise bhool sakte ho. tum bachpan mein uske saath kitna khalte the.

Angad: ya ! ya! mujhe kuch kuch yaad hai. well, watever.

Naina: ok! ab jab woh yaha pe ayenge tabhi unhi se bate kar lena, angad. ab tum so jao kyunki tum thak gaye honge.

Angad went to his room and was trying to sleep. he tried remembering kripa. all he could remember was that she ws bubbly and always played pranks on him which he didn't like. Angad didn't give it much thought and went to sleep.

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the next morning in nainital (in the sharma house)

a lady is cooking in the kitchen and a man is watching t.v. when a guy comes into the kitchen...

Guy: Mrs. Gayatri Sharma, aap ne mere phone line kyu kat kardi.

Gayatri: basharam, apni maa ko naam se pukarta hai.

then the guy turns around and its prithvi!!

Prithvi: kyu maa, mein to papa ko bhi naam se bulata hoon, kyu mr. Suryaban sharma.

the guy who was watching t.v was suryaban and he said..
suryaban:chup kar. apne baap ko naam se pukarta hai.

Prithvi to himself: mar gaye!

gayatri was laughing...

he turned to his mom who controlling her laughter and said: sorry mom! mein to mazaak kar raha tha. lekin aap yeh bataaye ki apne meri phone line kyu kat kar di.

Gayatri: kyunki din raat tum phone pe hote ho, ladkiyon se baate karte hue. tumhe kuch pataa nahi hota ke ghar mein kya chal rahaa hai. jaise ki, tumhe ye bhi nahi pataa hai ki mishti kal raat wapas aagayi.

Prithvi: Kya? mishti aagayi! already! mein usse mil kar ata hu.

Gayati: arree, prithvi, pehle jaa kar tumhari behen ko mandir se bula lao.

Prithvi: o ho! woh phir se mandir gayee.

Gayatri: to usme kya buri baat hai?

Prithvi: maine kab kaha mandir jaana buri baat hai.

and he leaves to go to the neighborhood mandir.

at the mandir, we see someone doing aarti. she is wearing an orange salwaar kameez and is looking simple and very pretty in it.

Prithvi calls a girl's name: Kripa!!!

the same girl turns around and its non other than kripa!!!

Kripa: kya hai prithvi?!? tum to aarti bhi puri nahi karne dete.

Prithvi: arree stupid, mein tumhe yahi kehne aaya tha ki mishti mumbai se wapas aagayi hai.

Kripa: kya?? are you serious! chalo chalo ghar chalt hai mishti ko milne.

Prithvi: to mein wahi to keh raha tha stupid.

Kripa makes a face at him and then they go home. when kripa and prithvi reach home, mishti was already awake.

Prithvi: to aagayi tum??

Mishti: oh shut up and hug me.

Prithvi and mishti hug.

Kripa: Mishti!!!! i am so happy to see you! you haven't been here for like 2 weeks.

Mishti: i know kripa! mujhe maaf kardo. lekind ab mein tum sab ko lene aayi hoon.

Kripa: mein bohot excitied hoon. mein naina aunty, dilip uncle aur sab ko kitne waqt baad milungi. mazaa ayega!

Mishti: aur iss bar angad bhi hoga waha. remember him???

Kripa started thinking. she had a vague image of angad.she remembered that he was a rockstar now and that when they were little, they used to play togehter and angad played pranks on her which she didn't like.

Kripa: haan haan, usse to kitne saal baad dekhungi. woh to kitna badaa rockstar hai. mujhe to uske bare mein itna hi pata hai.

Mishti: mujhe angad ke bare mein kafi kuch pata hai kyunki kartik hamesha uske baare mein baat karte hai. lekin mein tumhe angad ke baare mein baadme bataongi. abhi tum jao aur apni packing karo. hame kal hi nekal jaana hoga.

Kripaleft to pack. she didn't really think much about angad but was very excited that she was going to meet the khanna family after a long time.

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ok guys this is all for now. will post part 3 soon. maybe in a day or two. i am still working on it. sorry for the delay on this part!
hope you guys liked it!
please leave comments

SALONI 😳

Edited by spring92 - 18 years ago