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Posted: 3 years ago
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Unpopular opinion: the chemistry between Raghav and Laxmi should be explored, they would make very good friends , they are very similar except one is black and one is white. I would love to see Raghav and Laxmi as friends, two stubborn and bonheaded people, together they could take down anything, the power they could wield. Aworthy sister for Raghav actually

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Posted: 3 years ago
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when i first saw the title i thought it was about SaiShi ngl because Shivangi is called the lakshmi of set and Rao is well from SKR of course 😆 but loved this oneshot so much!!!

Seeing Pallu give it back to the police officer and Raghav not be mad at his Pals baby anymore (or rather not ignoring her, still getting amused by her, etc.) was so nice ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Arre Aapne toh kamaal hi kardiya Prez ji....This was like so in sync with the Episode😳



I love how the continuations you give us are something that we all can imagine & written with such finesse. That kamarbandh scene becomes one of my favourite now☺️


And Pallavi's firm dialogue session with the ACP was exactly her👏

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Savage Pallavi at her best--this was really good

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Posted: 3 years ago
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So amazing 😍❤ amma praising pallavi even though she is angry with her is so cute, definitely she is one of the best itv saas who treat her like her own daughter. Loved laxmi singh dialogue ki duniya jiske samne jhukta hai vo pallavi ke samne juka hai 😍 and pallavi's ips section 😂 she is really a quuen ❤ so so good

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Posted: 3 years ago
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So amazing 😍❤ amma praising pallavi even though she is angry with her is so cute, definitely she is one of the best itv saas who treat her like her own daughter. Loved laxmi singh dialogue ki duniya jiske samne jhukta hai vo pallavi ke samne juka hai 😍 and pallavi's ips section 😂 she is really a queen ❤ so so good

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you, Arpita🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: nikkiGarg

wow… for a moment I thought its an actual scene from the episode (excuse my ignorance but I am not watching the show now) after reading this .. I felt like heading to hotstar and check the episode for myself but then when I reached the end… I realized.. its too good and too hot to be true … and definitely an OS… and it was… mind blowing…

Arreh tum chali kyun gayi?😭 Wapas aajao. The actual scene was also great❤️ The way he looked at her….uffff

Also, the current track is MINDBLOWING👏 Do try to catch up if possible.

Anyways, thank you🤗 Waise iss OS ko TS banane ka socha hain😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: MsPrez

Arreh tum chali kyun gayi?😭 Wapas aajao. The actual scene was also great❤️ The way he looked at her….uffff

Also, the current track is MINDBLOWING👏 Do try to catch up if possible.

Anyways, thank you🤗 Waise iss OS ko TS banane ka socha hain😆

bilkul bnao fir… neki or pooch pooch..

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Janam, dekh lo, mit gayi duriyaaan

Main yahan hoon, yahan hoon, yahan hoon, yahaan 🤗


Job aaj kal bohat hectic chal rahi hai issi liye I'm MIA with comments. During my 9-5 is when it's easiest for me to open IF in another tab, toh ab koi aur solution dhoondna parega warna bohat jald mujhe tags milna bandh hojayenge!


Khair... so as I mentioned, I've been reading this every morning. It gives me the perfect amount of early morning warm and fuzzies, brings an instant smile on my face. Every time I read it, I feel sad ke itna chota piece kyun hai because the impact is SO huge! Both Raghav and Pallavi got their due in this piece - you gave equal attention to their angst and frustration and their inability to resist each other. Bandi irritated hai, phir bhi apne Ghamandi Rao ki help ko mana nahi kar rahi. Banda naraaz hai, phir bhi apni Saree Ka Dukaan ko dekh ke smirk kar raha hai. Jab ek dusre se duur reh hi nahi sakte, toh koshish hi kyun karte hain?! 😵


I love how you picked up on the Raos' anger - Amma and Raghav love her too much to deny her of anything, whether it's their admiration or celebrating her favourite festival.


The kamarbandh was the sweetest catalyst to bring them physically closer. I think a lot of times when couples go through a bout of misunderstandings and arguments, all it takes is a slight touch to soothe your ghussa and think/speak thande dimaag se. Besides, Pallavi looked absolutely gorgeous that day, there's no way Raghav could've willingly kept his hands off. The way I see it, he needed an excuse and he took it as soon as an opportunity presented itself. I'm somewhat glad show mein yeh nahi dikhaya, screen pe aag lag jaati aur main filhaal ek naya TV afford nahi kar sakti! ☺️


Mrs. Rao's dumdaar jawab to ACP Singh was epic in every sense of the word! Bechari is so frustrated at everyone trying to corner her husband, uper se said husband bhi ghaas nahi daal raha hai, aur phir jo mushkil se dou minute mile the Raghav ke saath, uss mein bhi koi tapak parra. Bohat acha kiya suna diya! 👏


Please write a second part... I can see this going in multiple different directions. A little bit of remaining ghussa (I adore angsty Raghav and frustrated Pallavi) with lots and lots of PyaaR. 😉


P.S. Tumhe kya laga, akeli tum hi born smart ho?! 😎

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