Janam, dekh lo, mit gayi duriyaaan
Main yahan hoon, yahan hoon, yahan hoon, yahaan 🤗
Job aaj kal bohat hectic chal rahi hai issi liye I'm MIA with comments. During my 9-5 is when it's easiest for me to open IF in another tab, toh ab koi aur solution dhoondna parega warna bohat jald mujhe tags milna bandh hojayenge!
Khair... so as I mentioned, I've been reading this every morning. It gives me the perfect amount of early morning warm and fuzzies, brings an instant smile on my face. Every time I read it, I feel sad ke itna chota piece kyun hai because the impact is SO huge! Both Raghav and Pallavi got their due in this piece - you gave equal attention to their angst and frustration and their inability to resist each other. Bandi irritated hai, phir bhi apne Ghamandi Rao ki help ko mana nahi kar rahi. Banda naraaz hai, phir bhi apni Saree Ka Dukaan ko dekh ke smirk kar raha hai. Jab ek dusre se duur reh hi nahi sakte, toh koshish hi kyun karte hain?! 😵
I love how you picked up on the Raos' anger - Amma and Raghav love her too much to deny her of anything, whether it's their admiration or celebrating her favourite festival.
The kamarbandh was the sweetest catalyst to bring them physically closer. I think a lot of times when couples go through a bout of misunderstandings and arguments, all it takes is a slight touch to soothe your ghussa and think/speak thande dimaag se. Besides, Pallavi looked absolutely gorgeous that day, there's no way Raghav could've willingly kept his hands off. The way I see it, he needed an excuse and he took it as soon as an opportunity presented itself. I'm somewhat glad show mein yeh nahi dikhaya, screen pe aag lag jaati aur main filhaal ek naya TV afford nahi kar sakti! ☺️
Mrs. Rao's dumdaar jawab to ACP Singh was epic in every sense of the word! Bechari is so frustrated at everyone trying to corner her husband, uper se said husband bhi ghaas nahi daal raha hai, aur phir jo mushkil se dou minute mile the Raghav ke saath, uss mein bhi koi tapak parra. Bohat acha kiya suna diya! 👏
Please write a second part... I can see this going in multiple different directions. A little bit of remaining ghussa (I adore angsty Raghav and frustrated Pallavi) with lots and lots of PyaaR. 😉
P.S. Tumhe kya laga, akeli tum hi born smart ho?! 😎
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