House of Beta Readers #3 (Note p. 34) - Page 19

Name of the story: Children of War

Author (Username): oye_nakhrewaali

Length of story (FF/SS/OS): OS

Genre: Drama, Tragedy, War

Characters and show: (Please give full names & not abbreviations): Harleen and Imaan from P.O.W-Bandhi Yuddh Ke

Word count (approx.): 1750

Rating (Refer to FF rules for rating determination - G, M, R, X) : M

Trigger and content warnings(for list of Trigger warnings please refer to the FF rules): Mentions of war, terrorist attack, death, pregnancy, PTSD and speaking disability

The extent of Trigger/content warnings mentioned above ((Mild/Moderate/Severe): Moderate

Specific instructions to Beta-reader [Pls mention here what you want us to focus on while beta-reading your story. Kindly note in case of unspecified requests, the BR decides what kind of feedback they will give]

Exposition, sensitivity to topic, depictions of emotions, Flow of narrative, Continuity ( plot/ thought/ action/ character-driven), Summarized analysis (bird's eye purview of the story)

Originally posted by: oye_nakhrewaali

Name of the story: Children of War

Author (Username): oye_nakhrewaali

Length of story (FF/SS/OS): OS

Genre: Drama, Tragedy, War

Characters and show: (Please give full names & not abbreviations): Harleen and Imaan from P.O.W-Bandhi Yuddh Ke

Word count (approx.): 1750

Rating (Refer to FF rules for rating determination - G, M, R, X) : M

Trigger and content warnings(for list of Trigger warnings please refer to the FF rules): Mentions of war, terrorist attack, death, pregnancy, PTSD and speaking disability

The extent of Trigger/content warnings mentioned above ((Mild/Moderate/Severe): Moderate

Specific instructions to Beta-reader [Pls mention here what you want us to focus on while beta-reading your story. Kindly note in case of unspecified requests, the BR decides what kind of feedback they will give]

Exposition, sensitivity to topic, depictions of emotions, Flow of narrative, Continuity ( plot/ thought/ action/ character-driven), Summarized analysis (bird's eye purview of the story)

Taking

Name of the story: Worthy of Your Love (Better title suggestion required)

Author (Username): oye_nakhrewaali

Length of story (FF/SS/OS): OS

Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance

Characters and show: (Please give full names & not abbreviations): Ishaana and Omkara from Ishqbaaz

Word count (approx.): 2000

Rating (Refer to FF rules for rating determination - G, M, R, X) :

Trigger and content warnings(for list of Trigger warnings please refer to the FF rules): Divorce, Mentions of gambling, death, violence,

The extent of Trigger/content warnings mentioned above ((Mild/Moderate/Severe): Mild

Specific instructions to Beta-reader: Character development, Flow of narrative, Prose (usage of literary devices and story enrichment techniques), Dialogue & placement, Plot / plot development, Continuity ( plot/ thought/ action/ character-driven), Depiction of emotions, Exposition/ detailing, Summarized analysis (bird's eye purview of the story), Descriptions, setting and build-up, Point of view, Title (and it’s relevance to the story), Scope of the story

Originally posted by: oye_nakhrewaali

Name of the story: Worthy of Your Love (Better title suggestion required)

Author (Username): oye_nakhrewaali

Length of story (FF/SS/OS): OS

Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance

Characters and show: (Please give full names & not abbreviations): Ishaana and Omkara from Ishqbaaz

Word count (approx.): 2000

Rating (Refer to FF rules for rating determination - G, M, R, X) :

Trigger and content warnings(for list of Trigger warnings please refer to the FF rules): Divorce, Mentions of gambling, death, violence,

The extent of Trigger/content warnings mentioned above ((Mild/Moderate/Severe): Mild

Specific instructions to Beta-reader: Character development, Flow of narrative, Prose (usage of literary devices and story enrichment techniques), Dialogue & placement, Plot / plot development, Continuity ( plot/ thought/ action/ character-driven), Depiction of emotions, Exposition/ detailing, Summarized analysis (bird's eye purview of the story), Descriptions, setting and build-up, Point of view, Title (and it’s relevance to the story), Scope of the story

Taking :)

Originally posted by: tournesol

Taking!

P.S. Regarding grammar, unless all the previous comments of grammar has been implemented, the request is on-hold.

I hope you are done?

Originally posted by: AWolfAndParrot

I hope you are done?

I hoped you had checked your pm 😅

Originally posted by: tournesol

I hoped you had checked your pm 😅

I am sorry for the confusion

Originally posted by: AWolfAndParrot

I am sorry for the confusion

No problem, happens ❤

Name of the story: different shades of love (CH5)

Author (Username): AWolfAndParrot

Length of story (FF/SS/OS): SS

Genre: Romantic drama

Couple and show: Asad and Zoya from Qubool hai

Word Count*(approx.): 500+

Rating (Refer to FF rules for rating determination - G, M, R, X) - G

Trigger and content warnings(for list of Trigger warnings please refer to the FF rules): None

The extent of Trigger/content warnings mentioned above ((Mild/Moderate/Severe): None

Specific instructions to Beta-reader- Depiction of emotions, Scope of the story, Dialogues,

Originally posted by: AWolfAndParrot

Name of the story: different shades of love (CH5)

Author (Username): AWolfAndParrot

Length of story (FF/SS/OS): SS

Genre: Romantic drama

Couple and show: Asad and Zoya from Qubool hai

Word Count*(approx.): 500+

Rating (Refer to FF rules for rating determination - G, M, R, X) - G

Trigger and content warnings(for list of Trigger warnings please refer to the FF rules): None

The extent of Trigger/content warnings mentioned above ((Mild/Moderate/Severe): None

Specific instructions to Beta-reader- Depiction of emotions, Scope of the story, Dialogues,

Will take this