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Posted: 2 years ago

Name of the Fiction: Kuch to hai tujhse rabta prologue

Author (Username): AWolfAndParrot

Type of the Fiction (FF/SS/OS): SS

Genre: (eg. Romantic Comedy): romantic DRAMA

Couple and show: (eg. Arnav and Khushi from Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon): priya And ram from bade acche lagte hain 2

Word Count (approx.): 200

Reader’s Age Group (U/13+/16+/18+): u

Specify Death-of-a-Character/medical-illness/mental-health-issue: none

Specify description-of-sex/sexual-theme/other-adult-themes: none

Specify swear-words: none

Specify violence-and-gore (murder/kidnapping/suicide-ideation/self-harm/bullying/drug-usage/trafficking): none

Specify crime-against-women (rape/molestation/prostitution/domestic-violence): none

Other warnings (eating-disorders/trauma/abuse/miscarriage/child-abuse-or-neglect/others please specify): none

The extent of Trigger warnings mentioned above (Just mention/light/moderate/heavy): light

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Posted: 2 years ago

Name of the Fiction: Aag Barasti Hain Sawan Mein, Paani Ka Hain Naam

Author (Username): PangaNaLe

Type of the Fiction (FF/SS/OS): OS

Genre: (eg. Romantic Comedy): Romance

Couple and show: (eg. Arnav and Khushi from Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon): Sameer and Naina from YUDKBH

Word Count (approx.): 2500

Reader’s Age Group (U/13+/16+/18+): U

Specify Death-of-a-Character/medical-illness/mental-health-issue: None

Specify description-of-sex/sexual-theme/other-adult-themes: Yes

Specify swear-words: None

Specify violence-and-gore (murder/kidnapping/suicide-ideation/self-harm/bullying/drug-usage/trafficking): None

Specify crime-against-women (rape/molestation/prostitution/domestic-violence): None

Other warnings (eating-disorders/trauma/abuse/miscarriage/child-abuse-or-neglect/others please specify): Child abuse

The extent of Trigger warnings mentioned above (Just mention/light/moderate/heavy): Light (sex), Just mention (child abuse).

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: PangaNaLe

Name of the Fiction: Aag Barasti Hain Sawan Mein, Paani Ka Hain Naam

Author (Username): PangaNaLe

Type of the Fiction (FF/SS/OS): OS

Genre: (eg. Romantic Comedy): Romance

Couple and show: (eg. Arnav and Khushi from Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon): Sameer and Naina from YUDKBH

Word Count (approx.): 2500

Reader’s Age Group (U/13+/16+/18+): U

Specify Death-of-a-Character/medical-illness/mental-health-issue: None

Specify description-of-sex/sexual-theme/other-adult-themes: Yes

Specify swear-words: None

Specify violence-and-gore (murder/kidnapping/suicide-ideation/self-harm/bullying/drug-usage/trafficking): None

Specify crime-against-women (rape/molestation/prostitution/domestic-violence): None

Other warnings (eating-disorders/trauma/abuse/miscarriage/child-abuse-or-neglect/others please specify): Child abuse

The extent of Trigger warnings mentioned above (Just mention/light/moderate/heavy): Light (sex), Just mention (child abuse).


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Posted: 2 years ago

Name of the Fiction: We Go On Red

Author (Username): tournesol

Type of the Fiction (FF/SS/OS): Ficlet

Genre: (eg. Romantic Comedy): Romance

Couple and show: (eg. Arnav and Khushi from Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon): Ram and Priya from Balh2

Word Count (approx.): 724

Reader’s Age Group (U/13+/16+/18+): U

Specify Death-of-a-Character/medical-illness/mental-health-issue: none

Specify description-of-sex/sexual-theme/other-adult-themes: none

Specify swear-words: none

Specify violence-and-gore (murder/kidnapping/suicide-ideation/self-harm/bullying/drug-usage/trafficking): none

Specify crime-against-women (rape/molestation/prostitution/domestic-violence): none

Other warnings (eating-disorders/trauma/abuse/miscarriage/child-abuse-or-neglect/others please specify): none

The extent of Trigger warnings mentioned above (Just mention/light/moderate/heavy): none

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Posted: 2 years ago

Name of the Fiction: Kuch to hai tujhse rabta one

Author (Username): AWolfAndParrot

Type of the Fiction (FF/SS/OS): SS

Genre: (eg. Romantic Comedy): romantic DRAMA

Couple and show: (eg. Arnav and Khushi from Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon): priya And ram from bade acche lagte hain 2

Word Count (approx.): 800

Reader’s Age Group (U/13+/16+/18+): u

Specify Death-of-a-Character/medical-illness/mental-health-issue: none

Specify description-of-sex/sexual-theme/other-adult-themes: none

Specify swear-words: none

Specify violence-and-gore (murder/kidnapping/suicide-ideation/self-harm/bullying/drug-usage/trafficking): none

Specify crime-against-women (rape/molestation/prostitution/domestic-violence): none

Other warnings (eating-disorders/trauma/abuse/miscarriage/child-abuse-or-neglect/others please specify): none

The extent of Trigger warnings mentioned above (Just mention/light/moderate/heavy): light

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Posted: 2 years ago

Name of the Fiction: Pearls of Wonder

Author (Username): oye_nakhrewaali

Type of the Fiction (FF/SS/OS): OS

Genre: (eg. Romantic Comedy): Drama, Mythology

Couple and show: (eg. Arnav and Khushi from Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon): Moni Mekhala, Ream Eyso and Vorachhun from the Cambodian legend

Word Count (approx.): 1200+

Reader’s Age Group (U/13+/16+/18+): 13+

Specify violence-and-gore (murder/kidnapping/suicide-ideation/self-harm/bullying/drug-usage/trafficking): Violence

The extent of Trigger warnings mentioned above (Just mention/light/moderate/heavy): Moderate

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Posted: 2 years ago


When will I get it?

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Posted: 2 years ago


I will be working on it today. You should get it by tomorrow max. 😳

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Posted: 2 years ago

Name of the Fiction: my revengeful love three

Author (Username): AWolfAndParrot

Type of the Fiction (FF/SS/OS): SS

Genre: (eg. Romantic Comedy): revenge, thriller

Couple and show: (eg. Arnav and Khushi from Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon): Arnav and Khushi from Iss Pyaar ko kya naam doon

Word Count (approx.): 800

Reader’s Age Group (U/13+/16+/18+): all

Specify violence-and-gore (murder/kidnapping/suicide-ideation/self-harm/bullying/drug-usage/trafficking): none

The extent of Trigger warnings mentioned above (Just mention/light/moderate/heavy): all

Specific instructions to Beta-reader [Pls mention here what you want us to focus on while beta-reading your story. (Eg. flow of narrative, character development, plot, continuity etc). Kindly note in case of unspecified requests, the BR decides what kind of feedback they give]: please focus on plot continuity

Edited by AWolfAndParrot - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: AWolfAndParrot

Name of the Fiction: my revengeful love three

Author (Username): AWolfAndParrot

Specific instructions to Beta-reader [Pls mention here what you want us to focus on while beta-reading your story. (Eg. flow of narrative, character development, plot, continuity etc). Kindly note in case of unspecified requests, the BR decides what kind of feedback they give]: please focus on plot continuity

Please note we cannot give you a credible assessment of plot continuity for a single chapter, we would have to read the whole story to be able to assess that.

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