Badly Arranged- Last part -- pg 88 - Page 58

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Posted: 18 years ago
i cant stop laughing... ur so funny... its not that embarrassing... i didnt
blush at all... AWESUM prt!!! 👏
WHOA kripa... she jumped on him... i guess she wanted him... BAD!!! hehe
that poor boy!!! but he didnt back up either... so i guess he wanted her...
BAD too... hehe!!! i CANNOT wait to read more... so continue soon!!! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
aawww that was such a good part, and you thought it was retarted lol I like the part and you do know even though you post that you shouldnt read it unless your 18 come on that was like pg13 right there, that was no where close to R rated anything so if you post more parts like the last one and i will keep saying its only pg13 lol
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: love_jaan

what you naughty ishu buit don't tell many people 😉

btw great writhing you are so good pls don't be embaresse its just cute part i was reallty like 😳😳 while reading but now i am😆 kirpa is like wild cat (haha shr don dialoge😉)

when you meet muniza in real life...she is way different....plus id expect my 17year old cousin to be a better role model.

pity.... but anyways i agree with rejected part 13 was soooo PG13!

Edited by ishu124 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ishu124

when you meet muniza in real life...she is way different....plus id expect my 17year old cousin to be a better role model.

pity.... but anyways i agree with rejected part 13 was soooo PG13!

it was part 20 lol... 😳

Well i wanted to tone it down a bit since most of the ppl reading this are like little kids, but i didnt just cause i went so perfectly with kripa's character and because the kids reading this are probably more mature then me😆😆. I am glad you guys liked it, cause i personally didn't. And yes there are parts after this i think about 2 or 3. I am never sure since i always change around the story according to my mood.

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Posted: 18 years ago
lol if it makes u feel any better lol im 18 lol ohh man LMAO continue soon k!
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Posted: 18 years ago
woow!!! GO KRPIAA!! a gurl gotta do wat a gurl gotta do.. even to get her hubby!!!

lolz.. and i guess angad khanna gotta wsin even in this.. tsk tsk..

continue sooooooonnnnn
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Posted: 18 years ago
great part
wooo kripa was little too jumpy she just jumped on the boy 😆
cont sooon
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: munizaaa

it was part 20 lol... 😳

Well i wanted to tone it down a bit since most of the ppl reading this are like little kids, but i didnt just cause i went so perfectly with kripa's character and because the kids reading this are probably more mature then me😆😆. I am glad you guys liked it, cause i personally didn't. And yes there are parts after this i think about 2 or 3. I am never sure since i always change around the story according to my mood.

you might want to re-pharse the kids word to teens. 😳 and obivisouly we are much muture than you. 😆 why your the one, who looks at me at JK and blushs😳 on saturday.😆

plus muniza im only like 4 years younger than you and i have seen and read worse things😕 than you might have at the age of 13. 😕😭

Edited by ishu124 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
lol hahahaha
lmao omgggg
munizaaa it wasnt dat baddd u were going on as if sum1 was gonna b raped hahahaha
ive read ahem more unappropriate parts before:P lol
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆

Originally posted by: ishu124

you might want to re-pharse the kids word to teens. 😳 and obivisouly we are much muture than you. 😆 why your the one, who looks at me at JK and blushs😳 on saturday.😆

plus muniza im only like 4 years younger than you and i have seen and read worse things😕 than you might have at the age of 13. 😉

Well i am sorry but this is so like, against my personality, if you know what i mean😉 and i feel a bit guilty putting those kinds of part seeing the KIDS that read it.

I have read things that are probably worse then you can imagine(you'll know what i mean when you get to my age) but it still doesn't mean that i would want to put something like that up there. And i wasnt blushing it was a smile😆😆

Edited by munizaaa - 18 years ago

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