SKR FF 4:"Hum Sath Sath Hain.!" A modern time story.Updated @ page 145 - Page 18

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Khyati55

I actually don't know what to write or what to think... It's like all the negativities around had joined the hand to commit the sin and that too in worst possible way.. If I am feeling restless here then can't think of the situation Siya is in ... Can't speak much..

Somu you had done a fab job once again as connecting readers during such difficult track is not easy as if not executed and written in right way, it might either will turn into funny or will go out of the line... But not even for once I felt disconnected from your story and can easily put myself in place of Siya while reading,so 👏👏👏👏.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏.

So sorry for short comment but needed time to get relaxed.....I am really very sorry once again 🥺🥺😖😖😖..

True, every thing is going against the Raghuvanshis now. Siya is going to feel disappointed the most. For sending Lakshman like that. Lakshman is going to blame himself. What about Ram.? He will be so heartbroken.

And it's ok for the short comment. I understand sometimes we do not have words to tell about our emotions. Stay tuned for the next.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Sammy04

Let me get normalise now, because I am feeling literally scared and I am crying with Siya's situation. Vidhi likhit is the word for this. Jo hona he wo hokar hi rehta he. The entry on marich was something unexpected but you very intelligently portrait that part. Right from stealing the simcard to keeping Ram busy in the hospital, everything was plotted perfectly. Then whatever happened with Siya, gosh it was so painful and disheartening. Lakshman acted smartly here I must say, but then again he has to listen to his bhabhi and leave the palace ultimately. The last conversation between Siya and Lakshman made me cry. Siya's scoldings were nothing in front of her care. And Lakshman knows that, isliye he didn't mind anything for his bhabhi's bitter words. God, he will blame himself for the kidnapping or what? And what about Urmila, will she bear the pain and guilt? Feeling really very bad for LakshMila. Continue soon.

Love,

Sammy

Hmm true. Vishi likhit hi tha, isliye these things are happening.

Thanks for liking Mahesh's entry. Actually was thinking about another part but then things would have streched unnecessarily hence dropped that idea.

Siya and Lakshman, uff what to say about this devar bhabhi bond. They are the best. God knows what will happen to this family now. And moreover what will happen to Siya now.?

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Shraddhakonde4

EMOTIONAL UPDATE YAAR ....... accident ka plan bhi ker liya is raghvan and indrejeet ne 😡 ..... aur ram bhi judhe accident ke drama me phas gaya 😭 ...... but ram ko ye pata he nahi ke ye mahesh kon hai aur kyu aaya hai .siya ko kitni tension ho rahi hai kyuki ram ka phone switch off aa raha hai aur koi bhi tension lega kyuki siya ko pahile he negative feelings aa rahi hai 😪 . urmila aur lakshman bhi kitna samza rahe hai siya ko but siya nahi manegi jab tak wo ram ko nahi dekh leti ya phir baat nahi ker leti but ab ye impossible hai 😭😭😭😭 kyuki ab inke future me kus aur he likha hai. ram ko siya ko phone karne he nahi mila 😭😭.Siya ko phone aa he gaya but ram ka nahi .. Siya Ne jb us insaan ki baat suni to kitna shock ho gai kyuki use pahile he dur lag raha tha and now wo scene jiske bad he ramayan ka important part start hota hai ..... Lakshman ka shaq sahi tha ki ye raghvan ki planning hai but siya mane ko he ready nahi hai .. lakshman bhi sahi hai aur siya bhi siya ko ram ka dur hai aur lakshman ko siya urmi ka .... But ab jo hona hai wo hoga he laksh bhi chala gaya. jab siya lakshman ko lakshu bolti hai kitna beautiful part tha 😭😭😭 lakshman siya ka moment kitna beautiful tha ab pata nahi kab milenge siya lakshman ka moment ❤😭😭😭 Ab sirf siya and urmila he hai ghar pe and now indrejeet and raghav bhi aa chuke hai aur ab siya haran hoga 😭😭😭😭😭 please samuya please update kardo jaldi jaldi ... cliffhanger rakha hai ab me raat bhar sochungi ki aage kya hoga 😭UPDATE SOON ❤❤❤❤❤

How clever these baap beta are, accident plotting everything done so perfectly. Bechari Siya, our heart is paining for her isn't it.? She doesn't deserve this. But she has to go through all this.

Abb bas Urmila hai siya ke sath ghar par. What will happen now. Will Ram come to know about Raghvan's plotting before it's too late.? Let's see..

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Saumya96

Excitement yes. Siya and Lakshman always makes emotional. Lakshman had to listen to his bhabhi's pleads, though he was not willing to leave Siya and Urmila alone. Still he had to do that. Let's see what next.

I also liked the way you have showed Lakshman having a sense of some foul play like the original. And the in ways all the situations turned into, it's not abnormal that they all take decisions in a haste. At first not being able to connect with Bharat and Shatrughan, getting "their" emergency text, situation that held back Ram to check the phone, getting called from an unknown person, not having Manvi and Shruti as well- all these after Suvarna incident could make anyone's thought cloudy. None of them are in a proper state to think fully rationally...

In a light note, Marich ko Mahadev ka naam de dia! 🤣 (Just kiddin')

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Apukar

I also liked the way you have showed Lakshman having a sense of some foul play like the original. And the in ways all the situations turned into, it's not abnormal that they all take decisions in a haste. At first not being able to connect with Bharat and Shatrughan, getting "their" emergency text, situation that held back Ram to check the phone, getting called from an unknown person, not having Manvi and Shruti as well- all these after Suvarna incident could make anyone's thought cloudy. None of them are in a proper state to think fully rationally...

In a light note, Marich ko Mahadev ka naam de dia! 🤣 (Just kiddin')

Yes Lakshman had that trust that nothing could happen to Ram, but then he has to get agreed with Siya and has to listen to her pleads 💔🥺 how he is going to bear that guilt of leaving his bhabhi.? Hopefully he doesn't take the blame on himself, it will be so heartbreaking to witness Lakshman like that. And all the things which you have mentioned, yes it automatically happened with them.

P.S: oh I didn't noticed about "Mahesh", it just happened 😅..

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Posted: 4 years ago

Loved it Saumya dear

Awesome and interesting part🤗🤗

So it started with the proper plotting of Raghavan for making Ram & Lakshman leave the two girls alone in the mansion

Raghavan cleverly used their strength as their weakness to trap them properly ... Ram ke car ka accident & them moved to hospital for treatment

I really feel Ram should have been more careful about his phone but it is said that it was all fate as situation was tense too

Siya ke weakness hai Ram & his well being so usi ka fayda uthya in logo ne but no wife would be at peace after feeling her husband is in danger & Siya is no different

Siya emotional state made Lakshman & Urmila worried too ... Siya literally pushed Lakshman out to search Ram & didn't realized it was properly plotted

Finally lakshman seeing no option left the palace & now Siya & Urmila are alone & Raghavan is going for an abduction

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🤗🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: golden_aura

Loved it Saumya dear

Awesome and interesting part🤗🤗

So it started with the proper plotting of Raghavan for making Ram & Lakshman leave the two girls alone in the mansion

Raghavan cleverly used their strength as their weakness to trap them properly ... Ram ke car ka accident & them moved to hospital for treatment

I really feel Ram should have been more careful about his phone but it is said that it was all fate as situation was tense too

Siya ke weakness hai Ram & his well being so usi ka fayda uthya in logo ne but no wife would be at peace after feeling her husband is in danger & Siya is no different

Siya emotional state made Lakshman & Urmila worried too ... Siya literally pushed Lakshman out to search Ram & didn't realized it was properly plotted

Finally lakshman seeing no option left the palace & now Siya & Urmila are alone & Raghavan is going for an abduction

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🤗🤗

Hmm it was intentional. Sending Ram away and having Siya alone was the main motive. You said correctly, Raghvan used their strength as their weakness. He knows Siya will fall weak when it is something related to Ram.

It was all fate, true, otherwise the understanding Siya have loose her calmness and did the biggest mistake to send Lakshman away. 💔

Raghvan has already reached the palace, now it's the unfortunate time..!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hello all 🙋🏻‍♀️

Yesterday I saw this superb dance and wanted to share this with you all. As I am a learner of classical dance (Bharatnatyam), so found this beautiful piece really very appreciable. Also, the beautiful story portrait of Ramayana really gave happy tears in my eyes ❣️

It's from the show Super Dancer chapter 4 on Sony TV.


[YOUTUBE]https://youtu.be/nGpGb-P9Qms[/YOUTUBE]

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Posted: 4 years ago

Beautiful😍❤❤ what an awesome performance 🤗🤗🤗 god bless these talented kids

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Posted: 4 years ago

Beautiful perfomance ❤️❤️❤️ Thanks for sharing this Saumya dear ❤️

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