SKR FF 4:"Hum Sath Sath Hain.!" A modern time story.Updated @ page 145 - Page 16

Originally posted by: Apukar

It's being difficult to see Manda and Sulochona being insulted by Suvarna and others. You have nicely made the base of upcoming unfortunate event. It has that omnious feel to it. Great job! I am eagerly waiting for the next part...

It was quite difficult and time consuming. Was not understanding on how to exactly proceed. So finally Siya with LakshMila are there at palace. Now what next.? Will Siya send Lakshman too.? Let's see in the next part..

Originally posted by: Sammy04

👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 this was for Sulochana. I am becoming her fan day by day. I salute her himmat for having that strength to give it back to that useless family. And she doesn't have to blame herself for Siya's kidnapping, I know she will be supporting siya always in their house.

Moving towards the Raghuvanshi palace, you have defined the suspense and that part very beautifully. I was thinking continuously about where the seven people will be when Siya is going to get kidnapped. But see already five of them have left the palace and Lakshman and Urmila ko to may be Siya khud bhejegi.

God, the separation part was so so emotional, I am having tears at present. 'Me jaldi aaunga' and 'me wait karungi' was so heartbreaking. Inhe aise hi to behave karna hai jab tak Ram Siya ko wapis na le aaye. Why this pain of separation god.? It is going to be very difficult. Continue soon.

Love,

Sammy

Sulochana is gaining her fan following.! Kudos to her. And yes, Hopefully Sulochana and Manda will be supporting towards Siya and vice-versa.

Five of them had already left, remaining three in the palace. Let's see what will happen. Will Siya going to send Lakshman too.?

And last part, I was writing it since afternoon. I was getting interrupted with my work again and again and that's why the link was breaking 😅 still could manage to complete it till night. Let's see what happens next.

Originally posted by: Shraddhakonde4

amazing update ..... sulochna ne kya insult ke hai suvarna aur indrejeet ki 🤣 .... aur ye suvarna yedi hai manda , vaibhav ke bolne se nahi samzi to iske bolne pe kya samzegi .. is yedi ko to revenge cahiye 🙄🙄🙄 aur ye indrejeet mental hai 🤦🏻‍♀️ ab is sab me sulochna ki kya galti hai jo wo use bol raha hai 😡 ... sulochna ab ise kuch bolegi nahi kyuki she know ki inke aage kich bhi bolna headache hoga ... definatly siya ki help is ghar me sulochna he karegi ❤ siya ke sath koi to hoga.sira moment kitna cute tha ❤ bharat aur shatrughan Ghar se bahar chale gaye aur manvi aur shruti bhi aur wo kon hai jo bar bar inke bare me bata raha hai 😰😰😰 mandira ne bhi aaj he phone kiya 😭 aur phone hack karke bharat ke no. se ram ko message bhi ker diya😰 last moment 😢😢😢 siya ram ko to pata bhi nahi he ki kya hone wala hai aur in dono ka separation hone wala hai 😪😪😪😪 Ab bus ghar me lakshmila hai I hope urmila bhi kidnap hogi ... but muze ye bhi lag raha hai ki siya dono ko ghar se bahar bhej degi 😢 please saumya continue soon ab wait nahi ho raha.UPDATE SOON ❤❤❤

This yeda khandan deserves every bit of insult. Yes, thankfully Siya will have someone in that mental family.

Everyone has left the palace, Ram tak chala gaya. Jab bura time aata hai tab sabkuch against hota hai. Feeling literally bad for SiRa 💔

Let's see waht will happen next. Will try to continue soon.

Loved it dear Saumya

Awesome and interesting part🤗🤗

I really loved how Sulochna replied to her husband & Swarna at the right time & with the right words ... She being a strong person never bau down in unethical acts of her husband & Father in law

On the contrary the way she replied to inder for not wasting her time & energy on wrong person was absolutely bang on 🤭

Now coming to the framing of Sita haran was really interesting now; site pe bharat & Shatru gaye hai & there is no network

Shruti & Maanvi have gone to attend Mandira as she is sick & needed medical attention, she being alone needed help & girls did the same 😊

Now coming to the trick by messaging Ram was really interesting & Ram too leaves to site unwanted as he to have fears inside him after the incident that took place

Finally now ram left the palace & Siya will land up in trouble being alone 😔

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🤗

Originally posted by: golden_aura

Loved it dear Saumya

Awesome and interesting part🤗🤗

I really loved how Sulochna replied to her husband & Swarna at the right time & with the right words ... She being a strong person never bau down in unethical acts of her husband & Father in law

On the contrary the way she replied to inder for not wasting her time & energy on wrong person was absolutely bang on 🤭

Now coming to the framing of Sita haran was really interesting now; site pe bharat & Shatru gaye hai & there is no network

Shruti & Maanvi have gone to attend Mandira as she is sick & needed medical attention, she being alone needed help & girls did the same 😊

Now coming to the trick by messaging Ram was really interesting & Ram too leaves to site unwanted as he to have fears inside him after the incident that took place

Finally now ram left the palace & Siya will land up in trouble being alone 😔

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🤗

These qualities are really appreciable of Sulochana. She is indeed a strongest lady of the story. She has that courage and strength to reply a correct answer to her husband and father-in-law.

There in Raghuvanshi palace, things are getting more scary. Already Bharat Shatrughan and Manvi Shruti had left. Ram too have left Siya with Lakshman and Urmila. Now let's see what will happen next. Will Raghvan get successfull in his plans.?

........ Feeling terrible, frightened, wanna cry on how even the luck is playing it's cruel card, after reading the episode my mind got blank and I was literally having goosebumps, Infact I am commenting on the episode after taking a break of half an hour because, because I was not in the state to even comment as though I know that it's going to happen, yes this will be coming but when I was supposed to face it all my internal monologue, resolution, strength everything just got drained out and if as a reader I am having such feeling then can't even think of the emotional turmoil you might be having while writing, and it's just a beginning and I must say that you are really a strong willed, determined person because to be honest if I was at your place,I don't think that I might have been even able to give atleast 1% of what you have written, I might have ended the story at that particular point only because it requires a lot of brainstorming and pressure to build up to give such a beautiful outcome. As always you have stolen my heart Somu... And I am really very happy and proud to have a such a talented not only by skills but also such a wonderful soul as my friend 😊😊... You know what all my cousins knows about you now as after the marriage functions I had literally eaten up their brain by talking about you and your story on our way back to our city. Yaar I really feel very blessed to be the small part of your life ....

Now about the story the starting part without any doubt and without any failure once again got successful in increasing my BP , all the time when I think that no Khyati you don't have to use any wrong word or have bad thought for anyone,these Lankeshwar's always force me to break my resolution and appreciate them with my golden words and Platinum feeling.. Sulochana is actually doing good in treating them the way the deserve, but poor girl she knows that directly or indirectly she had face the consequences of the deeds of the so called always right men of her family. Without any fault her life is going to face a destruction which will change her life completely but you know destruction is the first step of new beginning,may be this destruction is what she needs from a long time to start afresh. I am really curious to know how her life will gonna change in future.

Next part brought tears , fear, disappointment, everything. So for the rest part I will say few lines of the poem by Hasmukh Mehta sir..

You may be feeling very bad

The heart may be filled and feeling very sad

It has something to do with on going play

We are bound to face something to stay

What can be joy if there are no challenges?

You come out of it and successfully manage?

It is all about success down fall or success story

We sometimes go down with anxiety and worry

Both sides are necessary and are relevant

They may invite adverse and favorable comment

We may cry and at the same time laugh it out

The life is full of extremes and can termed as all about

I wish to cry

But then ask why?

Why I run away and feel shy?

W must stick on, face and try

You love to stay in fray

It may not push you away

Whatsoever let be the circumstances,

I will always be there with you in every step....

Love you dear Somu 💖💖💖

Waiting for the next part but no need to hurry up by pressuring yourself too much.... Take your own sweet time and care💖💖💖💖

Originally posted by: Khyati55

........ Feeling terrible, frightened, wanna cry on how even the luck is playing it's cruel card, after reading the episode my mind got blank and I was literally having goosebumps, Infact I am commenting on the episode after taking a break of half an hour because, because I was not in the state to even comment as though I know that it's going to happen, yes this will be coming but when I was supposed to face it all my internal monologue, resolution, strength everything just got drained out and if as a reader I am having such feeling then can't even think of the emotional turmoil you might be having while writing, and it's just a beginning and I must say that you are really a strong willed, determined person because to be honest if I was at your place,I don't think that I might have been even able to give atleast 1% of what you have written, I might have ended the story at that particular point only because it requires a lot of brainstorming and pressure to build up to give such a beautiful outcome. As always you have stolen my heart Somu... And I am really very happy and proud to have a such a talented not only by skills but also such a wonderful soul as my friend 😊😊... You know what all my cousins knows about you now as after the marriage functions I had literally eaten up their brain by talking about you and your story on our way back to our city. Yaar I really feel very blessed to be the small part of your life ....

Now about the story the starting part without any doubt and without any failure once again got successful in increasing my BP , all the time when I think that no Khyati you don't have to use any wrong word or have bad thought for anyone,these Lankeshwar's always force me to break my resolution and appreciate them with my golden words and Platinum feeling.. Sulochana is actually doing good in treating them the way the deserve, but poor girl she knows that directly or indirectly she had face the consequences of the deeds of the so called always right men of her family. Without any fault her life is going to face a destruction which will change her life completely but you know destruction is the first step of new beginning,may be this destruction is what she needs from a long time to start afresh. I am really curious to know how her life will gonna change in future.

Next part brought tears , fear, disappointment, everything. So for the rest part I will say few lines of the poem by Hasmukh Mehta sir..

You may be feeling very bad

The heart may be filled and feeling very sad

It has something to do with on going play

We are bound to face something to stay

What can be joy if there are no challenges?

You come out of it and successfully manage?

It is all about success down fall or success story

We sometimes go down with anxiety and worry

Both sides are necessary and are relevant

They may invite adverse and favorable comment

We may cry and at the same time laugh it out

The life is full of extremes and can termed as all about

I wish to cry

But then ask why?

Why I run away and feel shy?

W must stick on, face and try

You love to stay in fray

It may not push you away

Whatsoever let be the circumstances,

I will always be there with you in every step....

Love you dear Somu 💖💖💖

Waiting for the next part but no need to hurry up by pressuring yourself too much.... Take your own sweet time and care💖💖💖💖

True, we can't do anything against the destiny. When luck is not doing well, everything goes wrong. And whatever you said it's absolutely right. It really took my inner peace while writing that part, SiRa part. If you notice then I have already reserved the post in the morning but I updated late in night. That was because of the last scene only. It almost took the whole day for writing that part. Whenever I was thinking about the lines, I was getting an interruption and then the link was broken up. So it was quite difficult to handle the emotional level. I will be honest, at one point I thought to take atleast a break from the story to calm myself. Because this is literally making me emotional. I didn't thought to discontinue the story but yes I thought to take a break for few days. But then, again the thoughts of storyline came into my mind. If I would have taken break then I would have lost the story line. So yes, I am taking my some time to write the part.!

Coming towards the first part, then this I am repeating for nth time that Sulochana is a great lady. She deserves every happiness for her. And yes you are right, we have to witness her after indrajeet, after she gets released from this unwanted relationship. She has to grow more and be more independent. Fingers crossed.!

Then the poem, aah you are great.! From where do you find the exact poems for the situation.? It's great great. Loved it.

And thanks for the words, I will surely do justice with the story. Hopefully.! Love you too 💓

Hey somu...so sorry for not commenting on last 2 updates 😔....so sorry....maaf kardae maathae ❤️🙏....somuuu...the last 2 updates killed me yaar...the first update....manda's confrontation with raghavan.....yaar....ye raghavan esa behave kartha hai jaisa Manda ek human bi nahi hai....usko ek trash ki tarah treat kartha hai vo raghavan 🤬....and vo suvarna 🤬🤬🤬🤬....such a selfish brat🤬🤬🤬.....Sab keh rahae hai....ki vo galath ki hai....par bhi this stupid couldn't realize it...yaani ki Manda Mae ye bi keh Diya ki kudka Grave math banao...par bhi....these stupids don't listen....they are irritating me to the moon and back 🤬😠😡....and then....aaya hamara funny cute family of raghuvanshis....yaar....they are too cute.....Nazar na lag jaaye😊....siya ki ladlaas are making cake for siya.....😍.....they are the cutest....and the banter was as usual the best😅...shatru ban gaya kumbakarn..... bharath ban gaya Baker .....aur laksh ban gaya romantic singer with terrible lyrics 😂....and shatru 😂😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣...gir gaya....and shruthi and laksh ka laughter 😂😂🤣🤣🤣😂😂....yaar.,..fir shatru ka gira hua photos in different different poses🤣🤣🤣😂😂....yaar these people are the nitrous oxide of raghuvanshi family 😊😅....and sira....kithnae adore kar rahae thae apnae siblings ki choti so banter ko😍😘....and then cake eating 😅😂🤣....siya ki ladlaas ka dance 😂😂🤣🤣🤣🤣....and then Diya ka comments😂😂❤️❤️❤️❤️....yaar emotional that yaar....bhabi devars ❤️💪....love them...❤️❤️❤️....and the last part....the surprise 😍...yaar ....shruthi ka mouthfold pulled the show😂😂🤣🤣....and the last conversation of sira at night....yaar....tufaan.....💔.....and I loved the ram nae siya ko kaha ki...mausum badl Raha hai boliye was the cutest thing 😍💓❤️😘...and the beautiful emotional moments...😭....siya has become ram's drug ....I don't know how he is going to handle her absence 😔😔....and the last photo of them😭😭😭....and the closing of the phone screen saver into black was such a ......what to say.... touching one😭😭😭😭....the last night of togetherness,😭😭😭.....................................................................❤️

Last update.......

Lankeswars are literally paagals.....sulochana is completely witty.....sathya kahi isnae....inko advise karnae ki jagah hum 10 gadhae ko Chala sakthae hai...... suvarna bka muh kuch dear kae liyae bandh nahi hotha Kya?😠....and indrajeeth 😠🤬😀🤬😡😡....such an irritating person he is....Sab mistakes Sulochana par dump kar Raha hai...they are really pathetic...😠...and then ...ram and siya ka cute so morning conversation 💔....yaaaaaarrr.... They are the cuteeeeeeee pies💓❤️... Aww...the way.... siya's dupatta stuck with ram's watch 😍💔....and then the cute figth❤️❤️❤️❤️....ram ko Mann hi nahi hai office kaam karnae ka.....na hi kisi other boys ko... Par ye panvel thing aagaya...💔.... bharath aur shatru nikal gayae....fir shruthi sir manvi bhi chalae Gaye ...sira aur lakshmila thae....abb vo man aur uskae boss😫....they have planned everything perfectly 💔💔💔💔.....ram ko bhi chalna pada 💔💔....and the last scene 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭...yaar....you are the best💔😭😭😭😭😭😭....the last goodbye kiss😭😭😭😭😭😭...and the bessttttt part was...."mae Jaldi aaunga.."......." Mae wait karungi".... 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭Yaaaaaarrrrrrr.....I am crying 💔💔💔💔💔....and the last flying kiss💔💔💔💔💔💔💔....Chala gaya raaammm😭😭😭😭😭💔💔💔💔....abbbb..... laksmila aur siya hai....you know what mujae na aisa prattet ho Raha hai....jaisa....ram kae phone number sae siya ko phone aayega....ram ko accident hogaya....bathakae....aur vo laksh ko jaanae kae liyae kahegi....but I am not sure about urmila.....maenae kahi baar tumsae pucha but tumnae usae suspence keh Diya....so...dekthae hai ...urmi laksh kae saath jaathi hai....ya siya kae saath rehthi hai... Urmi ki kidnap hothi hai ya nahi?😔.....next coming updates are going to be heartbreaking 💔....😭😭😭😭😭....and you know somu.....hamara story siya ke ram ka bohoth scenes dikaya....jaisa ki...vo dupatta watch Wala scene.....deer cake wala scene....siya ko hasane ki scene....by cooking.....and last sira ka conversation before separation 💔....Sab Mae skr ki scenes dikayi di.... waiting for the next update despiratly somu ..... update jaldi karna 💓....and you know I love...❤️.... love you to the moon and back somu...love you Soo much my oxygen giver ❤️❤️❤️❤️....Jai siya ram ♥️.

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Originally posted by: Srinivasan.R

Hey somu...so sorry for not commenting on last 2 updates 😔....so sorry....maaf kardae maathae ❤️🙏....somuuu...the last 2 updates killed me yaar...the first update....manda's confrontation with raghavan.....yaar....ye raghavan esa behave kartha hai jaisa Manda ek human bi nahi hai....usko ek trash ki tarah treat kartha hai vo raghavan 🤬....and vo suvarna 🤬🤬🤬🤬....such a selfish brat🤬🤬🤬.....Sab keh rahae hai....ki vo galath ki hai....par bhi this stupid couldn't realize it...yaani ki Manda Mae ye bi keh Diya ki kudka Grave math banao...par bhi....these stupids don't listen....they are irritating me to the moon and back 🤬😠😡....and then....aaya hamara funny cute family of raghuvanshis....yaar....they are too cute.....Nazar na lag jaaye😊....siya ki ladlaas are making cake for siya.....😍.....they are the cutest....and the banter was as usual the best😅...shatru ban gaya kumbakarn..... bharath ban gaya Baker .....aur laksh ban gaya romantic singer with terrible lyrics 😂....and shatru 😂😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣...gir gaya....and shruthi and laksh ka laughter 😂😂🤣🤣🤣😂😂....yaar.,..fir shatru ka gira hua photos in different different poses🤣🤣🤣😂😂....yaar these people are the nitrous oxide of raghuvanshi family 😊😅....and sira....kithnae adore kar rahae thae apnae siblings ki choti so banter ko😍😘....and then cake eating 😅😂🤣....siya ki ladlaas ka dance 😂😂🤣🤣🤣🤣....and then Diya ka comments😂😂❤️❤️❤️❤️....yaar emotional that yaar....bhabi devars ❤️💪....love them...❤️❤️❤️....and the last part....the surprise 😍...yaar ....shruthi ka mouthfold pulled the show😂😂🤣🤣....and the last conversation of sira at night....yaar....tufaan.....💔.....and I loved the ram nae siya ko kaha ki...mausum badl Raha hai boliye was the cutest thing 😍💓❤️😘...and the beautiful emotional moments...😭....siya has become ram's drug ....I don't know how he is going to handle her absence 😔😔....and the last photo of them😭😭😭....and the closing of the phone screen saver into black was such a ......what to say.... touching one😭😭😭😭....the last night of togetherness,😭😭😭.....................................................................❤️

Last update.......

Lankeswars are literally paagals.....sulochana is completely witty.....sathya kahi isnae....inko advise karnae ki jagah hum 10 gadhae ko Chala sakthae hai...... suvarna bka muh kuch dear kae liyae bandh nahi hotha Kya?😠....and indrajeeth 😠🤬😀🤬😡😡....such an irritating person he is....Sab mistakes Sulochana par dump kar Raha hai...they are really pathetic...😠...and then ...ram and siya ka cute so morning conversation 💔....yaaaaaarrr.... They are the cuteeeeeeee pies💓❤️... Aww...the way.... siya's dupatta stuck with ram's watch 😍💔....and then the cute figth❤️❤️❤️❤️....ram ko Mann hi nahi hai office kaam karnae ka.....na hi kisi other boys ko... Par ye panvel thing aagaya...💔.... bharath aur shatru nikal gayae....fir shruthi sir manvi bhi chalae Gaye ...sira aur lakshmila thae....abb vo man aur uskae boss😫....they have planned everything perfectly 💔💔💔💔.....ram ko bhi chalna pada 💔💔....and the last scene 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭...yaar....you are the best💔😭😭😭😭😭😭....the last goodbye kiss😭😭😭😭😭😭...and the bessttttt part was...."mae Jaldi aaunga.."......." Mae wait karungi".... 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭Yaaaaaarrrrrrr.....I am crying 💔💔💔💔💔....and the last flying kiss💔💔💔💔💔💔💔....Chala gaya raaammm😭😭😭😭😭💔💔💔💔....abbbb..... laksmila aur siya hai....you know what mujae na aisa prattet ho Raha hai....jaisa....ram kae phone number sae siya ko phone aayega....ram ko accident hogaya....bathakae....aur vo laksh ko jaanae kae liyae kahegi....but I am not sure about urmila.....maenae kahi baar tumsae pucha but tumnae usae suspence keh Diya....so...dekthae hai ...urmi laksh kae saath jaathi hai....ya siya kae saath rehthi hai... Urmi ki kidnap hothi hai ya nahi?😔.....next coming updates are going to be heartbreaking 💔....😭😭😭😭😭....and you know somu.....hamara story siya ke ram ka bohoth scenes dikaya....jaisa ki...vo dupatta watch Wala scene.....deer cake wala scene....siya ko hasane ki scene....by cooking.....and last sira ka conversation before separation 💔....Sab Mae skr ki scenes dikayi di.... waiting for the next update despiratly somu ..... update jaldi karna 💓....and you know I love...❤️.... love you to the moon and back somu...love you Soo much my oxygen giver ❤️❤️❤️❤️....Jai siya ram ♥️.

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First Vaibhav, then Manda, then Sulochana, everyone tried their best to make these people understand, but they will never pay any attention. Really these people are spoilt brat.!

Raghuvanshi family is always happy family. Sachme nazar lagne layak hai and ek bht bade janwar ki nazar already lag chuki hai. Their last few moments were so beautiful. SiRa ❤️ going to miss each other.

Indrajeet to hai hi useless, he has blamed everything on Sulochana, as in she is responsible for whatever blunder Suvarna has created. Sick son of his sick Appa.

Kidnapping plan already started. Raghvan has literally made a perfect plan. Luck ne sabko bahar bhej diya aur Raghvan ne Ram ko bhej diya. Gosh.! The last conversation was having a deep meaning hidden 💔

By the way nice guess. Bas thodasa change hai. Younwill get to know once I update. And SKR scenes, yes few of them were scenes from the show. Good that you have guessed that.

Will need some time to update. Stay tuned, love you Hema 🤗❤️