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Posted: 4 years ago
#81

Part- 80

Geet keeps on thinking the wholenight and the only thing she could do is free Maan off her responsibilities...yes,she'll not trouble him anymore...

But she can't believe that Maansaid all that, after all she knows that she is not the only one struck by thelove virus and she has seen Maan too suffer just like her...

Maybe he has overcome that infatuationand he knows what's good for him better, haina?

Yes, Maan deserves a much betterlife...

She knows she is no match for theKhuranas, specially MSK, and she has herself seen many offers for Maan from alot of their friend and business circle...

Dadi had been rejecting them justb'coz dadi believes that Geet is her bahu...

How would Geet know that Maan toohas the same belief...

Geet decides to go away fromMaan's life...

Yes, she has no right over him,after all she is no one to him and neither could she dream so big...

He has already helped her so muchand she is yet to repay him for that...

She comes down to tell this toMaan...

Maan is late today as he also hada sleepless night and he has just come for breakfast...

Dadi has finished her BF and sheleaves them alone...

Geet doesn't know how to tellhim...

Maan starts the conversationhimself...

Maan: toh batho Geet, tummare mannmein kya hai? tum kya chahthi ho?

Geet: wahi jo aap chahthe ho sir

Geet bursts out...she can't takethis anymore...

Maan is overwhelmed...so she isready to mingle...that's great...

Maan is so happy...but hishappiness doesn't last long...

Geet: jaise aap ne kaha ab meinbadhi ho gayi hoon aur ab mein kudh apna khayaal rakh sakthi

Geet: ab mein aapko aur pareshaannahi karoongi, aur ab toh mere liye meri final exams bahut important hai, abmein samajh gayi ki meri zindagi meri padayi hai, jaise veerji ne kaha

Maan also feels that Geet isright...she has to complete her exams successfully anf he doesn't want todistract her at the moment...he was also feeling guilty since Tejicalled...so Geet too has been thinking about that only...

Maan: that's good Geet

Even though Maan is a littledisappointed he thinks this is the right decision as far as Geet isconcerned...after all the hardwork she has put in all these three years wouldgo n vain if Maan becomes selfish and urges her to confess and take theirrelationship forward all of a sudden...

Though he is not concerned aboutanyone other than Geet when it comes to their life, he knows he has made apromise to Teji and he has to fulfill it...he has to make sure that Geetremains as Teji's innocent sister who trusted Maan and came with him withoutany conditions, and also Teji still believes that Maan will take good care ofhis little sister just as Teji would...Maan has taken up the responsibility ofher studies and he has forgotten it completely becoming selfish and his lovemade him blind folded...

Luckily Geet knows her prioritiesbetter...

Geet: mujhe patha hai aap bhi yahichahthe, haina?

Maan: tum jho bhi decide karogi,mein tummara saath hoon

Geet: toh teek hai, ab mein apnizindagi kuch samaloongi, mein hostel chali jaathi hoon, ab mein aapke ghar meinnahi reh sakthiJust then Maan realizes that Geet has misunderstood everythingand she was expecting him to confess...what has h done?

Maan: Geet, tum bhool gayi ho kiabhi bhi tum meri responsibility hai

Geet: mein ab aap ke liye bhoojnahi banna chahathi, jaise ki aap chahthe the waise hi mein bhi ab hostel jaanahi chahathi hoon, kyunke jaise aap ne abhi abhi kaha mein ab bachi nahi hoon

Maan: par Geet, tumme ghar chodneki koi zaroorat nahi

Geet: nahi sir, ab mera wahanrehna teek nahi hoga, mein akhela reh sakthi, mujhe kissi ki saath ki kyazaroorat? Kyunki ab mein badhi ho gayi hoon sir

Geet becomes sarcastic...Maanknows that she is frustrated and so she is angry...Maan knows that he can'tfulfill her expectations right now as that would only distract her from hergoal more...this is fine as she will be diverting her anger towards her goaland be more hungry to succeed...

Maan: toh tum mere saath nahirehna chahthi, right?

Geet: mujhe azaadi chahiye na?aapse

Maan: toh milgayi azaadi, iss keliye tumme ghar chodke jaana nahi padega, kyunki mein ghar chodke jaa raha hoon

Geet is shocked...

Mujhse bachne ke liye Maan sirkahan baghna chahthe hai, phir se jungle camping? Ye jagah bhi aaisa hi lagtha,toh ye trial tha?

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan Geet, ab tum badhi hogayi haina? Dadi maa ko tum akhele sambal sakthi haina? Ab Dadi tummarizamedari hai

Geet: par mein kaise?

Maan: dadi ke liye toh tum kuchdin aur rukh sakthi, tumme fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi, mein toh bas domahene ke liye jaa raha hoon, business ki silsile mein, tab tak tummari examsbhi katam hogi

Geet: haan, aur tab tak aap wapas aathe mein apne ghaavchali jaoongi

Maan: haan, phir tumari chutiyanhaina? Tum tummare pariwaar walon se milne jaa sakthi ho

Geet: haan mein hamesha hamesha keliye chutiyon mein chali jaoongi, aur kabhi wapas aake aapko tang nahi karoongi

Maan: kya?

Geet: aap bhi yahi chahathe haina?Azaadhi

Maan: ye tum kya kehthi ho?

Geet: mera matlab hai ki meriazaadhi

Maan smiles...haan, waise bhimeinne hi tumme tummare kismat se azaad kiya tha, tummare azaadhi mere haathmein hai

Maan thinks that he'll officiaalymarry her and give her freedom atlast...

Geet self talk...ye zabardasthika azaadhi kaun chahtha? Aap kya jaanthe ki meri azaadhi aap se judi hui hai,aur mujhe aaise azaadhi nahi chahiye jho mujhe aapse juda karein...par yeaapki zindagi hai, aap mere liye kyun badalenge? Haina? Aap sadoo ho toh sadoohi rahoge...haina babaji? Mein bhi kitna na samjh thi? Sapne toh sapne hothe hai,kabhi sach nahi hothe, haina?

Maan had actually kept postponingthis London project as he didn't want toleave Dadi alone and go, and after Geet came into his life he never wanted toleave her, initially he thought he would escape from her by taking up thisproject but some thing stopped him, he made up his mind that Geet is hisresponsibility and he can't run away from that, but the actual reason was hecouldn't leave her even for a few days for he was afraid that she will get intotrouble and she needs him to save her always...

Maan thought he is meant to be hersavior whether he wished or not and he liked to help her...he liked herinnocence and he liked the how she boldly faced him and stood up to him and putup a fight every time she thought she was roght and he was wrong...

She was never afraid to face hisanger...

Now that Geet also needs a breakfrom this love sick romeo to concentrate on her studies, and Maan won't be ableto leave Geet after marriage, he wants to finish this off before itself...

Maan: toh Geet all the very best

Geet thinks that Maan is wishingher for her new life...

She just stares him as if she doesn't understand for what he wishedher...

Maan: woh mein kal jaa rha hoonna, issiliye tummare exams ke liye abhi wish karna chahtha tha

Geet: thank you Maan sir

Geet still couldn't believe Maanis leaving her and she has to live on her own, but she doesn't know what she'lldo without him, she has to learn to live without him...

Adi calls and Maan leaves forKC...

Geet sits there without eating andjust keeps thinking about her future, she is a little scared for she hasdeveloped this habit of depending on Maan for everything since she leftAmristar...

She was not like this before, sheknew that she has to stand on her own legs and she has to depend on herselfalways...

Geet is already late and she isstill lost in her thoughts...

Dadi comes and finds her stillthere...

Dadi: Geet, geet bete

Geet: ji Dadi

Dadi: kahan kho gaye aap? Pinkyaap ke liye kab se wait kar rahi hai

Geet: woh dadi, mein chalthi hoon

Dadi: sambalkhe beta, aajkal aapka dhyaan kahan rehtha, aur exam ke time mein toh aaisa hi hotha, isse examfever kehthe hai

Geet knows that it's not her examsbut something else that bothers her...

Dadi is right, she has to forgetall this and think only about her exams...

Next day Maan leaves for Londonand Geet feels very bad...

She is afraid she might not seehim again ...

She just wishes she could see himbefore she leaves...

She keeps praying for his earlyreturn...

She knows that she has to get usedto this for she has a lifetime to spend without him...

Still her heart yearns to be withhim only...

Dadi finds Geet upset andstruggling to focus and she requests Pinky to come over to KM and study withGeet...

After Pinky comes Geet engagesherself in her studies and tries to put Maan's memories away...

Each day passes with a lot ofdifficulty and she always keeps looking at the steps waiting for Maan to comedown for BF and Dinner...

Even dadi misses Maan a lot...

Maan has not even called Geet andthat's more frustrating for her...

But he inquires about Geetwhenever he calls dadi and Dadi tells about that to Geet...

Geet thinks that dadi is trying toconsole her...

Maan too misses Geet and he hasnever been away from her more than a couple of days for the past threeyears...

They have been together even whenGeet went to her maika, haina?

Maan knows that Geet would haverealized what she is missing in these few days and she'll find out that lifewithout MSK is not difficult but impossible...

Now let's see what she wants,azaadhi or shadhi?

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Posted: 4 years ago
#82

Part- 81

It's been a couple of weeks sinceMaan left and there is not even a single day that passed without Geet longingfor Maan to come back...

Geet ko ab patha chal gaya ki Geetke zindagi ko smabalne wala toh sirf Maan hai...

Maan ke bina Geet ki zindagadhoori ho gayi hai...

Maan ke bina Geet ke liye koizndagi hi nahi, haina babaji?

Geet aks her babaji to bring herMaan back...

One morning Geet is sitting withdadi and dadi gets a call from Maan...

Geet pretends not to be interestedbut she wants to know whether Maan actually asks about her...

Dadi: Maan bete

Geet is excited to here hisname...

Dadi: achcha bete, sab teek haina?

Geet wants to know that Maan isfine...

She looks at dadi's face itselffor her eractions...

Dadi: yahan toh sab teek hai bete

Dadi: ye aap kya kehthe ho bete?

Dadi: teek hai bete

Dadi cuts the call...

Geet is disappointed that neitherMaan asked about Geet nor dadi mention about her to Maan...

Dadi: aap kya dekhthe ho?

Geet: kuch nahi dadi

Dadi: ye aajkal ke bache bhi na?humme toh samajh mein hi nahi aathi ki aapka problem kya hai

Geet: mujhe koi problem nahi haidadima

Dadi: mein toh Maan ki baat kar rahihoon bete

Geet babut pareshaan hojaathi...

Geet: Maan sir ko kya hua?

Dadi: unka kya hua ye toh hummemaloom ho ya na, par aap ko toh kuch ho gaya hai

Geet: meiin teek hoon dadima

Dadi: hum dekh sakthe bete, aapkitne kush hai

Geet is not worried about herselfnow...

Geet: dadima, Maan sir teek tohhaina?

Dadi: hum kya jaanthe, aap unko hikyun nahi poochthe?

Geet: woh mein kaise?

Dadi: aapke Maan sir agle flightpakadke wapas aarahe hai, aap ab unko kudh pooch sakthe ho

Geet: Maan sir aarahe hai

Geet jumps in joy...

Dadi just wanted to see this, ahappy smiling Geet...

And that's not possible withoutMaan, haina?

Dadi: sambalke bete, Maan aapkoaaise dekhenge toh na jaane kya karenge, I think he'll just jump off the flightand land before you right now

Geet blushes...

Dadi: ab lag rahe hai aap hummariGeet, itne din toh hummari Geet kahan kho gayi thi?

Geet: dadima Maan sir kab aa rahehai

Dadi: aaj raat yak al subha, hummeteek se nahi patha, I'll let you know later

Geet gets ready for college soonand is excited to share the news with her friends...

Dadi is also happy that Maan iscoming home...

That evening Geet goes tonizamudin to pray for Maan...

Geet comes home and startspestering dadi when will Maan come...

Dadi herself doesn't know theexact timings as Maan's mobile is switched off...

He may come at 1 am or he may alsocome at 6 am depending on the flight he catches...

He nay come anytime...

Geet keeps waiting afterdinner...

Dadi asks Geet to go to bed asthey don't know when Maan will come and the driver is there to pick him so theycan meet him in the morning...

But how could Geet sleep withoutseeing Maan...

She goes to her room and waitstill dadi is asleep and comes back and waits for Maan...

She tries to watch TV abd readsome magazines but she couldn't...

In all her excitement she keepsrunning to the door every now and then to see whether the car has arrived...

Finally she hears the driverhonking the horn at 3 am...

He is here, Maan is here...

She runs like a lunatic and findshim coming ...

Maan also can't wait to hold hisMishty in his arms again...

He stops seeing her runningtowards him...

She heads in full speed and haltsjust before him not knowing whether to hug him or not...

Maan nods his head to go ahead andshe just jumps on him and hugs him tight...

Maan too hugs her to console herand holds her tight...

After a passionate hug Maanreleases her and looks into her longing eyes...

Ohh they have been looking for himfor the whole night and still they are not tired...

They are only rejoicing his returnand they keep mersmerising him as always...

Maan tries to ignore them andwants to hear from her lips for a change...

Maan: kaisi rahi tummari azaadhi?

Geet: mujhe koi azaadhi nahichahiye, samjhe aap?

Maan: achcha? Tum toh ab badhi hogayi ho, aur ab akhele apne zindagi sambal bhi sakthi ho, jaise ki iss 15 dintumne sambala tha, haina?

Geet: aap aaise kaise mujhe yahanakhele chodke jaa sakthe ho?

Geet gets angry with him with thefull rights of a wifey...

Maan: tum akhele kahan thi? Meinhi akhela tha, aur tumme patha bhi hai ki ye 15 din meinne kaise kata?

Geet: phir aap mujhe chodke kyungaye?

Maan: tummari exams haina?

Geet: mere exams abhi bhi katamnahi hui, aap wapas kyun aaye ho?

Maan: ye toh tum bhi jaanthi hoGeet ki mein wapas kyun aaya

Geet: aap bhi na, pehle chodkejaathe ho, phir baghkke aathe ho

Maan: Geet, mein baghkke aayahoon? Par meinne dekha ki tum baghthe bagthe aayi ho mere paas

Geet: mein toh sirf andar se aayihoon lekhin aap toh London se hi baghthe aaye haina?

Maan: haan Geet, ab mein tummarebina ek pal bhi nahi reh saktha, chahe kuch bhi ho, hum saath hi sambalthe hai,ye dadi ke baat ko maanke meinne bahut badhi galthi kardhi

Geet: dadi ke baat?

Maan: haan, mujhe London bhejne kaplan Dadi ka hi tha

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, dadi ko pinky aurtummare koi Ms.Smiley ne complain kar dhiya ki aajkal tummara dhyaan padayimein nahi hai

Geet: par iss mein meri kya galthihai?

Maan: tummari koi galthi nahi?

Geet: nahiii

Geet stares Maan...

Maan: par Geet meinne suna hai kitum hamesha apne sapnon mein khoya rehthi ho, class mein bhi? Aaise bhi kyasapna hai? kya tummare sapnon mein bhi koi Rajkumar safed godhe mein aatha haikya?

Geet: aapko kaise patha ki meresapnon mein Rajkumar aatha? Aap ke sapnon mein bhi aaya tha kya?

Maan: Geet, mere sapnon meinrajkumar aake kya karega? Waise meinkaise sapne dekh saktha?

Geet: kyun? Aap sapne nahi dekhthe?

Geet is disappointed...Maan kesapnon mein Geet ko aana chahiye, haina?

Maan: mere neendh ko toh kissi nechura liya hai Geet, jab neendh hi nahi aathi toh sapne kahan se aayenge? HainaGeet?

Maan tries to get an answer fromher eyes...Geet blushes and avoids looking into his naughty eyes...

Maan: ab nazrein bhi kyun churathiho?

Geet: ab toh babaji aap ko pathachal gaya hoga ki ye sab kisski galthi hai? aap toh jaanthe haina ki aap kiGeet kitne bolibali hai

Maan: toh kya ye meri galthi haibabaji? Geet, tummara dhyaan padayi mein nahi lagthi toh mein kya kar saktha?

Geet: toh aap ne kuch nahi kiya?haina?

Maan: nahi toh

Geet: mujhe dekhke jawaab do, aapne kuch bhi nahi kiya?

Maan looks into her eyes andstarts drooling again...he can't help but commit this crime again andagain...

Maan: haan haan, mantha hoon ki galthimeri bhi hai

Geet: aap ki bhi, ye toh sirfaapki galthi hai, ek 18 saal ki masoom ladhki ko apne aakhon se hi pasakkeussko pagal kar dethe ho aur kehthe ho ki aapki koi galthi nahi hai?

Maan: achcha, mere ankhon ne tummepasaya hai toh teri ye nasheele aankhon ne kya kiya?

Geet: kya kiya?

Geet gets closer looking for ananswer...

Maan: kya kiyaaa? Abhibathatha hoon

Maan pulls her into a hugagain...

Geet too hugs him...she hadmissed the comforts of his cozy arms...

They get lost in each othersarms...

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Posted: 4 years ago
#83

Part- 82

Geet: Maan sir

Maan: hmmm

Geet: ab toh humein chalna chaiye

Maan: haan Geet, chalo

Maan scoops her and takes her tothe terrace...

He wants to spend some more timewith Geet...

Maan: I'm sorry Geet, mujhe maafkardho, mujhe aaise nahi karna chahiye tha

Geet closes his mouth with herfingers...

Geet: chup bilkul chup, ab toh aapwapas aagaye na, toh sorry ki kya zaroorat?

Maan: Geet, ye sorry uss din kihai jab meinne tummara dil dhukaya tha, tummare b'day wali din

Geet: woh aap kya kehthe ho?

Geet tries to act as if she didn'texpect anything from Maan that day...

Maan: meinne dekha hai Geet,tummare aakhon mein hazaroon sawaal, aur tum kitne umeed lekhe mere paas aayithi uss waqt

Geet: aaisa kuch nahi hai

Geet doesn't want Maan to know howmuch he had hurt her the other day for he'll always regret it and he won't beable to forgive himself for that...

Maan: Geet, joot mat bolo, tummareaankhen hamesha mujhe sachayi bathathe hai, issiliye tum koi bhi baat mujhse chupanahi sakthi, meinne ussui waqt dekha hai Geet, tummare aankhon mein dard, aurkaise tummare sapnon toot gaye the, par mein majboor tha Geet, aur mein tumsemaafi mangne ke liye tadap raha tha

Geet: ab toh hum ek saath hai, ab uss baat ko choddo, mein toh tabhi bhool gayi thi

Maan: nahi Geet, mujhe mat rokho,bolne do mujhe. Mujhe aaisa nahi karna chahiye, tum kitne kush thi, aur meinnetummari sari kushiyon ko ek minute mein gayab kardhi

Geet: aap toh mere maan ki har baat ko pad saktheho, lekhin phir bhi aapne aaise kyun kiya?

Maan: Geet uss din tumsephone mein baat karne ke baat mein toh pure jagah ko apne haathon se sajhayathe, aur mein tummara intrezaar karne laga

Geet: lekhin meinne aaisakuch nahi dekha? Kaise dekhthi, aap toh andhere mein beite hue the

Maan: Geet, tab mujhe Dadine call kiya tha

Maan tells Geet whathappened...

Dadi: Maan bete, aaj aapjadhi ghar wapas aayiye, humme aapse kuch zaroori baat karbi hai

Maan: par dadi mein aajjaldhi nahi aa saktha, muje ek zaroori meeting hai

Dadi: aap apni meetingabhi cancel karke aajao

Maan: par Dadi mein aaisenahi kar saktha

Dadi: what? I'll call Adiand cancel all the meetings

Maan: dadima, ye koiofficial meeting nahi hai

Dadi: so it's personnel,aap Geet se milne wale ho?

Maan: haan dadi

Dadi: aap ne Geet ka kyahaal banake rakha hai Maan bete? Uss bechari ka padaye pe asar lagne laga haibete, ye aap teek nahi kar rahe hai, as Geet's guardian I got a complain fromher college that she missed her models and all her hardwork is going in vain,and Pinky also confirmed that Geet is pretty much distracted these days, shehas completely forgotten her goal, she has promised her brother that she'llsuccessfully complete her studies, and you should be helping her not disturbingher at this time, you know how much she has struggled to reach this level, evenher professor is worried that Geet has lost track somewhere

Maan: par dadi, Geet issmarter than you think, she'll manage

Dadi: I know bete, butstill we have to make sure that she gets the best opportunities, for that sheneeds to score high like always

Maan too had that guiltthat he is distracting Geet too much and it's not easy for her to handle allthis at the same time...but still Maan wanted to confess ...

Dadi: Maan bete, I don'tthink it's the right time for all this, you just postpone this date

Maan: par Dadi mein Geetko disappoint nahi kar saktha

Dadi: you just promise methat you won't reveal anything until she finishes her exams

Maan hesitates...: parDadi

Dadi: Maan bete, I'm yourdadi, I know what's good for you better

Maan: Ok Dadi, I promise,but I can't cancel this date now

Dadi: that's your problem,bye bete

That's when Maan decidedthat he would make Geet confess instead...

He had only promised dadithat he'll not say anything to Geet but Geet can say what she feels and that'senough for Maan...

He tried his best toindirectly make her confess but Geet misunderstood him completely...

Geet then realizes hermistake, so she was right, Maan loves her more than she loves him...

Maan: Geet, pehle toh tummeri aadat thi, phir dhere dhere tum meri zaroorat ban gayi, aur ab toh tumzindagi ban gayi, Maan ki zindagu Geet ke bina adhoori hai Geet, mujhe tummarizaroorat hai Geet, tum hi meri zindagi ho, meri kushi ho, meri sab kcuh ho

Ab toh bathatdo Geet...

Geet runs and hugshim...: I love you Maan sir

Maan: Geet ab toh tummujhe Maan bhula sakthi haina?

Geet: hmmm

Suddenly thunder strikesand Geet tightens her grip...

Maan pulls her even closerand enjoys the moment...

Behne de mujhe behnede...

Maneet come back toreality after the rain stops...

Geet then realizes thatMaan must be tired and needs to sleep...

Geet: toh ab aapko sonachahiye, gud night

Geet tries to leave butMaan pulls and holds her back...

Maan: Geet, aaaj toh meintumme nahi chodoonga

Geet: kya?

Maan: kal se dadi ke samnehum aaise nahi mil sakthe haina, toh aaj

Geet: aaj kya?

Maan: aaj ke raat meintummare saath OH mein hi sojaatha hoon

Geet: Dadimaaa

Maan closes hermouth...chup bilkul chup

Geet stares...

Maan is not ready to leaveher...

Geet: jaane do na

Geet also doesn't want toleave...

Maan: toh jaao

Maan releases her for amoment only to pull her back and hug her more passionately...

Maan: I missed you verymuch Geet

Geet: miss you kya missyou, pehle I love toh bolo

Maan: uss ke liye tohtumme pehle ek graduate banna padega

Geet: kya?

Maan: I've promised dadi

Geet: toh

Maan: you'll have to waittill your graduation

Geet: nahi Maan sir meinitna intrezaar nahi kar sakthi sir

Maan: phir se sir kahoogetoh

Geet: toh kya sir? aap nehi Dadi ko promise kiya haina sir, toh aap bhi intrezaar karo sir

Geet irritates him callinghim sir again and again

Maan: Geeet

Geet runs off...

From the next morning theystart acting infront of dadi...

Maan only gets to see Geetat BF and dinner and that too along with dadi...

This is not fair and Geetenjoys seeing Maan tight lipped infront of dadi...

Poor Maan tries his bestto converse with Geet with signals but buddu Geet doesn't understand his plightand makes fun of him instead...

Maan has to do somethingor he will go mad playing this dumdsharades that too with Geet...

One night Maan finisheshis dinner fast and waits for Geet...

He asks her to finish herdinner fast...

Geet looks at himconfused...what's the hurry Maan sir?

Maan: Geet, aur kitne dherkhaogi? Jaldhi karo, humme padna haina?

Geet is shocked...ye Maansir ab kaise exam ke liye padaye kar rahe hai?

Geet: par Maan sir

Maan doesn't let herfinish...

Maan: hare Geet, tumnepoocha haina? Woh koi doubt, chalo mein tummare sare doubts clear kartha

Maan zabardasti Geet kowahan se lekhe jaatha...

Dadi smiles and lets Maango ahead...

After all Maan has beencontroling himself so well just as he promised dadi..

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Part- 83

As they reach the OH Maan catcheshold of Geet and pulls her into a hug...

Geet: Maan sir, ye kya kar raheho?

Maan closes her mouth...chupbilkul chup

Maan keeps staring Geet...

Maneeteyelock...mahiii...

Geet: ab aap yahan kyun aaye ho?

Maan: hare Geet, mein tummaridoubts clear karne aaya hoon Geet

Geet: mein toh bahut intelligenthoon, aap ke tara nahi, mujhe aapki madat ki zaroorat nahi

Maan: achcha?

Geet: haan, ab aap jaa sakthe ho

Maan: par Geet koi toh subjecthoga jismein tum weak ho jaise ki

Geet: jaise ki?

Maan: jaise ki apne pyaare pyaareadhaoon se apne aashiq ko deewana banana, apne nasheele aankhon mein apneaasjiq ko dubaana

Geet: mein kya BW ki heroin hoon?Mujhe ye sab karne ki koi zaroorat nahi, samjhe aap

Geet strictly rejects Maan'srequests...

Maaa: haan Geet, tumme kuch bhikarne ki zaroorat nahi, waise tum toh kissi BW heroin se kam nahi ho, aurtummare ye aadhaayaein toh mujhe already pagal deewana banake rakha hai, tumjaise bhi ho waise hi achchi lagthi ho, aur mein toh tummari iss bindaasattitude se hi fida ho gaya hoon

Geet: ab aapki lecture katam hotoh aap jaa sakthe ho

Maan: par Geet mein toh tummaresaath tummari padayi mein madat karne aaya hoon

Geet: toh ye thi aapki padayi?

Maan: Geet, zindagi ke kitab meinyahi sabse important chapter hothi hai

Geet: achcha? Mein abhi Dadi ko bhulathi hoon, wahi aakeaapki tuition lenge

Geet gets angry...

Maan: Geet, jab tum aaise gussakarthi ho toh tab aur khubsurat lagthi ho

Geet: aap na, bilkul pagal ho gayeho

Maan: haan Geet, tummare issshatir aakhon ne mujhe pagal kardhi

Geet: mujhe panda hai

Maan: toh shuru karein

Maan gets closer and gets readyfor action...

Geet pushes him off...

Geet: Maan sir, mujhe sach meinpanda hai,aap pls jao abhi

Maan: nahi jaatha toh

Maan gets closer and closer withhis eyes zeroing in on her trembling soft lips...

Geet: mein chilaoongi

Geet ki awaaz hi nahinikalthi...she is shivering under his huge torso...

Maan: chilakke dekho Geet

Maan dares her to try shoutingwith his lips ready to attack,almost touching hers ...

Geet: woh mujhe

Maan: tujhe kya Geet?

Geet: kal meri exam hai

Maan comes back to hissenses...

Maan steps back and Geetsighs...her heart is still thumping fast...

Maan: haan Geet, tum apni padayishuru karo, mein tumme disturb nahi karoonga

Geet: teek hai, aap jao, gud night

Maan: mein kahan jaa raha hoon,aaj toh mein yahi tummare paas rahoonga

Geet: kya?

Hare babaji, ye kya nayi musibayhai?

Maan: haan Geet, tumme chinthakarne ki koi zaroorat nahi, mein chup chap yahi ek khone mein beit ke apna kaamkartha hoon, tum bhi apna kaam karo

Geet starts her studies and Maanpulls the chair and sits beside her...

He keeps watching her and admiringher...

Now how could Geet concentrate inher books?

Geet: Maan sir, ye kya hai?

Maan: sshhh Geet, tum pado, meinbas apne Mishti ko raat bar aaise hi jee barkhe dekhna chahtha hoon

Geet: ab mein aasie kaise padsakthi?

Maan: kyun Geet? kya hua?

Geet: aap nahi samjhthe ki meri problemkya hai

Maan: Geet, ab toh meinne kyakiya? meinne toh tumme chua tak nahi aur na hi koi baat kiya

Geet: aap na, kabhi nahi sudhroge

Maan: Geet, ye teek nahi hai, meinkitne sharafat se beitke apna kaam kar raha hoon, waise hi tum bhi karo

Geet: isse achcha mein so hijaathi

Geet closes her books and getsready to sleep...

Geet: ab jao, mujhe sona hai

Maan: are you sure? Tummari padayikatam ho gayi?

Geet: haan, aaise padthi toh meinfail ho jaoongi

Maan: par Geet tummari exams

Geet: kal haina? Mein kal padsakthi

Maan: mujhe patha hai Geet, kaltummari exams nahi hai, issiliye toh meinne socha ki thode dher tummare saathmasti karoon, tumme bhi toh padayi se ek break chahiye haina?

Geet: haaan, aap mazak karrahe the?

Maan: aur kya? mein kasie tummedisturb kar saktha?

Geet: mujhe bhi bahut achcha laga,mein bhi soch rahi thi ki mein hi aake aapse batein karoon

Maan: toh phir tumne mujhe rokhakyun Geet?

Geet: hare Maan sir, jab ladhkimana karthi tabhi toh ladhke aur josh se apna kaam karthe

Maan: wah wah Geet, mujhe tohtumse bahut kuch seekhna padega

Geet blushes...

Maan: teek hai Geet, gud night

Maan kisses her gud night andleaves...

Maan doesn't want to disturb heranymore...he has had his share of romance for the rest of the week and he'llnot disturb her now...

After Geet's exams are over Geetis happy that she has successfully completed her mission and that her familywould be proud of her...Geet is the first female graduate from theirfamily...

And Nandhini always looks up toGeet for everything and she is now determined to follow her didi's footstepsand get into a good college just like Geet...

Geet has promised Nandhini to helpher in this matter, afterall Nandhini is not so lucky as Geet but she is luckyenough to be Geet's little sister...

Maan decides to celebratethis...

And he wants to make up for thatmissed date...

This time too Geet spends a whole2 hours getting the perfect look but Maan couldn't wait more and comes to takeher himself...

As Maan reaches OH and goes toGeet's room he finds it unlocked and he opens the door and enters in...

Geet is still working on hermake-up as she is still not satisfied for she wants to look special today justfor Maan...

Maan is bowled over by her beautyand he silently stands there watching her and admiring her...

Geet self talk...: Geet, ab basbhi karo, aur kitna dher lagaogi? Haan, ye teek hai, ye Maan sir ko pasandaayega...she keeps staring herself in the mirror...then she startsagain...nahi nahi...Maan sir ko loose hair pasand hai...she lets her hairloose and then she looks again...ye kaisi hai?

Maan decides that it's high timehe intervened or Geet would keep changing her looks the whole night...

Maan: Geet

Geet is shocked to see Maanthere...she didn't want him to know that she cared so much about herlooks...she never takes her looks seriously but after she started working forMaan she realized that personality does matter, and she always carried aelegant yet dignified persona at the official meetings and this is somethingpersonnel between Maneet and she thought she can try something bold andbeautiful...

Geet: Maan sir, aap?

Maaa: ye kya ho raha hai?

Geet: woh ...mein

Maan: Geet, mujhe patha hai ki tumye sab apne liye nahi mere liye kar rahi ho

Geet: woh meinne socha aap kopasand aayega

Maan: par Geet, tumme ye sab karneki koi zaroorat nahi

Geet is confused...itne mehnatkarne ke baat bhi Maan ko pasand nahi aaya?

Maan: Geet, tum jaise bhi ho waisehi achchi ho

Geet is a little disappointed thatMaan didn't appreciate her efforts...

Maan comes closer and standsbehind her back and their eyes meet in the mirror...

Maan gently holds her from theback...

Maan: waise Geet, aaj toh tum kuchzyada hi khubsoorat lag rahi ho

Geet blushes...

Maan: aur jab bhi tum sharmathihaina, tab mein apne aap ko rokh nahi patha, kuch kuch hotha hai Geet

Maan tightens his hold and placesa warm kiss on her neck...

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Geet freezes...she closes hereyes and forgets herself in his warmth...as she struggles to resist Maan and getsready for the next step Maan puts a check to his feelings at the right time forhe knows that it would be impossible for even the MSK to stop after this...

Maan whispers in his huskytone...

Maan: aaj ke liye yahi khafi hogi,haina Geet?

Geet doesn't know what to say...

Maan: par tum chaho toh mein

Maan pulls her closer...

Geet looks at him puzzled...

Maan keeps drooling and hershyness and innocence make him more and more attracted towards her...he keepsdrowning in the moment unable to restrain himself from the fragrance of herthat's intoxicating him like anything...

Geet: sir

Maan: hmm

Maan is still reeling in hisintoxications...

Geet: woh mein

Maan stops her from sayinganything...he doesn't want any disturbance...

Maan: sshhh chup bilkul chup

Geet finds it hard to handle thedrugged MSK...all thanks to her 2 hour beautification session...

Geet: Maaan sir

Geet tries to get him back toreality...

Maan: haan

Geet: humme dher ho rahi haina?

Maan: haan

Geet: toh chalein?

Maan: hmm

Geet takes him out almostforcefully from OH...

In the car...

Geet: Maan sir

Maan is still under the influenceof that beautiful moment he shared with his Mishty for the first time withoutthinking about any kind of pressure, he forgot everything, for him Geet is hismost presious possession and he is not bothered about their half- marriage,child marriage or whatever it is, he knows that now Geet is Maan's, Maan kiGeet and nothing else mattered even if they are not bound by anyrelationship...their love is more than enough to sustain their union foreternity...

Maan: hmm

Geet: hum kahan jaa rahe hai?

Maan doesn't know where they are going...

He has totally forgot about thedinner he booked at the best start hotel in Delhi and is now driving towardsnowhere as he didn't care about the route as long as he is travelling with hisMishty...

Maan: woh hum kahan hai?

Geet is shocked...ye kaisesawaal hai?

Geet: hum dinner ke liye nahi jaarahe?

Geet is a little disappointed butstill she won't complain as long as Maan is with her...

Maan: haan Geet

Maan then looks where theyare...and they have come far away from the city...

And that 5 star dinner looksimpossible for their time slot has expired...

Maan is very upset for spoilingthe date again...

But Geet is lookind veryhappy...

Geet: mujhe patha hai sir, aapmujhe kahan lekhe jaa rahe ho

Maan looks confused...

They have just passed Noida whereGeet's college is and they are nearing her favourite dabha...

Actually Geet too has only heardabout it and had never gone there before, she has heard many of her friendstalking about this new dabha that is so good...

Geet had only tasted the food thatonce Adi brought for her and Pinky and form that day she had been waiting forher chance to dine at that place...

Adi promised to take them one daybut he never had a chance...

So, it's Maan who has finallyfulfilled her wish...ye toh babaji ka kamaal hi hai...haina?

Maan: woh Geet, actually hum bahutdhoor aagaye, aur khafi late bhi ho gaye

Geet: nahi nahi , sir yahan tohparty abhi shuru hothi, hum sahi time pe aaye hai sir

Maan: par Geet

Geet: mein toh kab se yahan aana chahthi thi, parye Pinky toh college ke bahar katam hi nahi rakhthi

Maan has put this rule not to goout of the campus without Adi...Maan knows Geet is still nave and she thinksthat Delhi is just another city with all the sofistications and women have allthe freedom and safety that they desire...

Only Maan knows how her innocencecould easily deceive her and she could get into trouble...

It at all Maan ordered her shewould have dared to break his rules...

Geet is more than happy for shegets everything she needs at KM, and Dadi is always there for her whenever shewanted to go out...

Maan wonders what a woman she is!Always happy with whatever she gets and makes it look like she is the princessof whales with all the luxuries of the world...

That's what Maan loves about her,she only cribs when it comes to MSK and never cares about anything else...Maanhas learnt to look at life in a different angle after he met Geet, always lookat the positive side, as they say every cloud has a silver lining...

You can say that all herexpectations are from MSK , and in that matter you may say she is greedywanting to be loved more and more...who doesn't wish to be loved and cared forif there is someone like MSK ready to serve you anytime...haina?

Geet's excitement catches on Maantoo and Maan forgets that he is the MSK, with all those self imposed rules upomhimself, for a change he wants to be like Geet, without any added baggages,just MSK, without any tags, business tycoon, perfectionist, impeccable, head strongand stone hearted, to sum it all, inhumane...

As Maan slows down and stops for amoment to look for a parking space as there is no parking lot as such here,Geet jumps out of the car atonce...

Maan: Geeet Geeet

Maan didn't want her to get downas he is not ready to leave her alone waiting...

Geet: kya dekh rahe ho sir? Baharaao

Maan: par Geet, mujhe park bhi tohkarna hai

Geet bursts out laughing...

Maan: tum aaise kyun has rahi ho?

Geet: sir, yahan aap kahin pe bhipark kar sakthe ho, chalo yahi park kardho

Maan: what? yahi?

Maan is not ready to take anyrisk...

Geet: sir, aap ki gadhi ko kuchnahi hogi, aap bhi na? insaan se zyada gadhi se pyaar karthe ho

That's true for all the men, theylove their car more than their wives...haina?

I mean they drop us at some nastyspot, ask us to get down and go in search of a safe place to park their lovelycars...

Geet doesn't wait for him and shestarts walking...

Maan had to run after her like aprotective father running after his daughter...

Maan: Geet Geeet rukhjao

Maan then finds a corner tablewhich offered atleast some privacy that he wanted...

Geet finds it not so appealing butsettles there for Maan...she thinks that the corner tables are not attended properlyand are mostly ignored as no one occupies them when the other tables arefree...

Geet calls the man who is servingthe other table aloud...

Geet: bhaiya bhaiyaaa

Maan is embarrassed...

Maan: Geet, ye kya kar rahi hotum?

Geet: sir, mein order karnachahthi thi, hum toh yahan khane ke liye hi aaye haina?

Maan: can't you just wait for amoment, woh aatha hi hoga

Geet: nahi sir, ussko kaise pathachalega ki hum yahan hai, bechare ko kya patha hoga ki koi yahan pe phibaittega? Haina?

Geet teases Maan's choice oftable...

Maan: kyun? Yahan service nahi haikya?

Geet smiles...

Geet: yahan toh aaise koiconditions nahi hothe jaise ke aapke faltu ke multi-cuisine 5 6 7 starRestaurants mein hothe hai sir, yahan toh sab kuch hummarein marzi pe chalthihai, abhi dekho

Geet whistles to call himagain...

Maan just feels that he is out ofplace...

Maan: Geet, tameez se bhula sakthi

Waiter comes immediately...

Waiter is also in a good mood asGeet...

Waiter: haan ji, bolo kya loge?

Geet: Maan sir, aap ko kyachahiye?

Maan: pehle ye toh bathao ki yahankya milthi?

Waiter: aloo paratha, gobi paratha, lacha paratha,roti, kulcha, chicken masala, anda bhurjee, butter chicken, tandoori chicken,lassi aur pani bottle, kaho aap ko kya chahiye?

Maan stares him and he becomessilent...he avoids looking at Maan and waits for Geet to order...

He knows very well who is going toorder...

Geet: bhaiya, aap na jaldhi do aamki lassi lekhe aao, teek hai

Waiter: teek hai

He leaves...

Maan: Geet, tum lassi se shurukarogi?

Geet: sir, ye aap ke liye hai, wohkya haina sir? aap itna garam jho ho gaya ho toh meinne se socha lassi se aapka garmi thoda tand ho jaye

Maan: Geeet

Geet: sir, thoda intrezaar karolassi abhi aathi hogi, bhaiya thoda jaldhi karo na

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Waiter brings the lassi...and hewaits for the other order...

Maan doesn't like him waitingthere staring Geet...

Geet understands that and signalsthat waiter to go...poor man, he is just doing his job...

Maan: ye dusre lassi kisske liyeGeet

Maan had not finished his sentencethan Geet gulped the whole glass in a minute...

Maan looks at her with his eyespoping out...

Geet: wiase mujhe thodi bhook lagithi, issiliye, woh aap ne kaha ki hum dinner pe jaathe toh meinne socha lunchthodi light leloon

Maan: toh tumne lunch nahi ki?

Geet: nahi sir, just a littlesnack

Maan: lunch time mein snacks? Sandwiches?

Geet: sirf do chaar vada paav aurdus bhees gol gappe

Maan: kya? isse snacks kehthe?

Geet: sir aapki lassi, piyo sir,mein aur kuch order karhi hoon

Geet : bhaiya bhai...

Geet is about to shout louder whenMaan stops her...

Maan bahut pareshaan hojaatha...

Maan: Geeet, tum kehthitoh mein bhulatha na?

Geet: kaise?

Maan: waiter

No one but Maan could hearhimself...

Geet smiles and whistlesagain...

Maan doesn't know what to do withthis girl...

Geet: hare, aap itna pareshaankyun hothe ho sir? Just relax, yahan aap kuch bhi kar sakthe ho, koi bhura nahimanega, haina bhaiya?

Waiter has promptly arrived ...

He too smiles...but stillavoids looking at Maan...

Geet: bhaiya, ek butter chickenaur char lacha paratha

Maan: Geet, chicken tikka ko bhoolgayi

Maan reminds her about the spicychicken she ordered the last time they were at a dhaba...

Geet: haan, aap ko teeka pasabdhaina? Mein toh bhool hi gayi, bahiya unke liye chicken tikka

Geet winks...waiterunderstands...

This time Geet is not going totake any risk...it's only for Maan...

But Maan wouldn't mind, he loves alittle bit spice...

After the food arrives Maan tastesthe chicken tikka and the spice knocks him over...

That was really spicy...

Geet: kya hua sir?

Maan's eyes turn red and he isburning...

Geet takes the lassi and gives itto him...

Maan takes a sip and then grabsand gulps it in one go...

Geet: sorry sir, woh meinne

Maan: it.s OK Geet, life meinthoda spice hona chahiye

Maan enjoys the chicken withanother lassi by his side...

Geet takes a bite and she oculdn'thandle that spice...

Maan: kaise hai Geet?

Geet: sir, aap ne kyun khaya?

Maan: tumne itne pyaar se mereliye order kiya haina? Agar mein isse return kartha toh tummara bhaiya kaysochega? Ye aadmi itna kadoos aur ye hummari pyaari behen ke layak hi nahi,haina?

Maan didn't want Geet to feelbad...

Maan: Geet, ye toh kuch bhi nahihai, Dadaji ke haath ka chicken toh isse bhi teeka hothi hai

This time Maan remembers the pastwithout any regrets but with fondness...

Geet: haan dadi ne bhi kaha ki aapaur Dadaji bahut teeka khathe ho

Maan: tumne toh dadaji ki chickenki yaad dhiladhiya Geet, hum jab bhi yahan aayenge mujhe toh yahi chahiye,tummare bhaiye ko bholdena

Maan is so happy...all that griefhas gone...he has left them behind as dadi wanted...

Geet: aur Vicky bhai?

Geet then realizes hermistake...she shoudn't have mentioned his Bro...

But Maan didn't become sad, heanswered with the same smile on his face...

Maan: Bro toh itna teeka nahkhathe, unko toh Dadima ki haath ka khana hi pasand hai

Geet: haan mujhe bhi dadi ki haathka swaad bahut pasand hai, issiliye toh meinne ek Khurana banna chaha

Geet tries to distract him...

Maan: achcha? Tumme toh sirf ekKhurana banna hai? Mrs.MSK nahi?

Geet: kya karoon? Mujhe ab koichoice bhi nahi haina?

Maan: toh tumme choice chahiye?

Geet: it's always better to have ackice, haina?

Maan: par Geet, meinne tumme koibhi choice nahi di, tum meri ho, sirf meri, samjhi tum?

Geet: achcha? Aaise baat hai?

Maan: phir kaise?

Geet: manthe hai ki mein ussi waqtnaraaz hokke apna ghar chali gayi, toh aap kya karthe Khurana ji?

Maan: tummara ghar?

Geet suddenly realizes that it'snot her home anyhow...

Maan: toh mein agla flight pakadkeLondon nahi Amristar aatha, aur tujhe zabardasthi apne saath apna ghar lekheaatha, haina Geet?

Geet: hmm

Maan: ghar chalein Geet?

Geet: par Maan sir, aaj meri examskatam ho gayi

Maan: toh?

Geet: toh aap ko kuch kehna haina?

Maan: haan, mein toh bhool hi gaya

Geet gets ready...she is eager tohear it from Maan...

Maan: very good Geet, congrats

Geet: kya?

Maan takes out a pen from hispocket and gifts her...

Geet: ye kya hai sir?

Maan: Geet, iss lekhe tum apnehigher studies mein bhi aaise hi kamyaab ho

Geet: par sir?

Maan: kya hua Geet? tum bhi tohyahi chahthi haina?

Geet: haan sir

Geet thinks that she should teachhim a lesson...

Maan: toh tum aage kya karnachahthi ho Geet?

Geet: mein Amristar jaana chathihoon sir

Maan: what?

Geet: haan sir, kal veerji aarahehai, mujhe lene

Maan: what? tum mere saathjaanewali haina?

Geet: nahi sir, veerji kal aarahehai, aap ko takleef karne ki koi zaroorat nahi, waise bhi aap ne mere liye itnakuch miya hai, shaukriya sir

Maan: what? Geet, ye tum kya kehrahi ho?

Geet: bye sir

Maan is disappointed...

Maan: par Geet

Geet: dadi ne bathaya nahi?

Maan: nahi toh, aur tum ne kyunnahi bathaya Geet?

Maan wished Geet told him aboutit...

Geet: sorry sir, mein toh gharjaane ki kushi mein bhool hi gayi

Actually Geet is also verydisappointed to miss her journey with Maan...

Maan thought he'll stay as herhubby just like last time and have some fun until Teji comes...

He knows he has to talk to Tejiabout Geet...

Maan is a little angry with Geetto have spoiled his plans but Geet couldn't do anything when Teji called andtold her that he is on his way...

They keep thinking about missingeach other when they return...

And no one wanted to talk about iteither...

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Geet leaves to Amristar withteji...

Teji is proud of his little sisterand so is the whole family...

Teji wants Geet to get married forthis is the right time and he even has someone in mind...one of his collegueshe recently met and he has also spoken about Geet to him...

He is also very much interestedand Teji has come for that matter only...

He has to get his pagal family toaccept that Geet is not yet married and he has to convince them for this secondmarriage, for them it's like a second marriage only...

Geet's family is happy that Geetis here but they miss Maan, they wanted Maan to came along...

But Teji gets angry when someoneasks Geet anything about her sasuraal, for him they never existed and she isstill a little girl...wake up Teji, your sister has grown up...

Nandhini and Lucky keep askingabout jiju and Geet tells stories about Maan to them...

They keep asking Geet when wouldlMaan come...

Geet's papaji also wants Geet toask Maan to visit them...they also want to see him...

Geet speaks to Maan daily and shedoesn't want him to know how desperate she is to see him...

Maan keeps asking about Teji's reactionsand Geet says that he is still the same possesibe brother that Maan has metlast time...

Maan has to do something aboutit...

Maan goes to meet Geet along withdadi...

Geet is surprised to see dadi andMaan as Maan kept it a secret...

Geet knew that Maan would come totake her but she doesn't know how he will convince Teji...

Mamaji comes running with the goodnews...

Mamaji: Maan Khurana aa rahe hai,Geet, Geet

Geet hears it from the kitchen andis so happy and excited...

She runs towards the entrance andteji is surprised to see her so anxious...

Teji: Geet, kya hua? Kahanbhaagthi ho?

Geet: woh aagaye, woh aagaye

Geet stutters...

Teji: kaun?

Geet: woh dadima aur Maan sir

Teji is relieved that Geetaddressed him Maan sir...nothing to worry...

Teji goes to receive them...

Dadi is here for the firsttime...

Papaji and rajji come outtoo..."aayiye Dadiji, aaayiye"

They are so happy that Dadi hascome to their home...

Geet goes and hugs dadi and getsher blessings...

Lucky and nandhini too get herblessings...

Meanwhile Maneet start their usualeye talks...

Teji notices Geet glancing Maanevery sec and Maan to doing the same...

Dadi has got a lots of gifts foreveryone specially Geet...shagun?

Rajji prepares a scrumptious lunchand Geet helps her, Maan couldn't get naughty this time with Tejiaround...Teji takes Maan out for a walk...

Maan keeps praising Geet's effortsas a student and also how she has managed to do well beating even her peersfrom delhi...he says Geet is very intelligent and she has also worked for KCfor a while...

So that's why she called him Maansir...

Maan tells him how theirrelationship has evolved in these 3 years and he how Geet has become a part oftheir family...he says that even Dadi is so attached to Geet...

Teji could see the bigger picture,he knows that something has happened between the two...

He controls his anger for he hasseen the happiness that gleamed in Geet's eyes and the truth and sincererity inMaan's eyes...

After lunch dadi takes leave asshe has planned to visit vaishno devi shrine...

Maan is staying back and he ishere to take Geet to Delhi for her graduation day...

Teji is all confused...

Everyone treats Maan like a jammairaja ...

Driver comes with Maan's baggageand Lucky takes it to Teji's rrom, Maneet's room now...

Teji: oye Lucky, tu kya kar raheho?

Lucky: veerji jijaji ka samaanunka room pe rakh letha hoon, jijaji yahi teherthe

Lucky tells as if Maan frequentlyvisited them...

Teji: teek hai

In the evening Maan tells Tejithat he needs to talk about Geet...

They go to the terrace...

Maan: waise tum dekh sakthe ho,yahan sab mujhe tummare bahen ki pathi hi manthe

Teji gets angry...: toh?

Maan: par woh sirf unka soch hai,tummari behen abhi bhi sirf tummari behen hai, aur kuch nahi

Teji: ye behther hai

Maan: ek baat toh hai, chahe koiuss shadhi ko mane ya na mane, meinne kabhi uss Shadhi ko nahi mana, ye toh tumbhi jaanthe ho

Teji: phir kya problem hai?

Maan: par najaane iss theen saalmein Geet kaise meri duniya ban gayi, aur ab mein Geet ke bina ek zindagi kosoch bhi nahi saktha, ab Geet meri zaroorat bangayi hai, ab Geet se bina merajeena namunkeen hai

Teji: ye kya mazak hai?

Maan: ye mazak nahi hai, yahisachayi hai, aur mein kab se ye baat ko tumme bathana chahtha tha, par pehlemujhe Geet ki mann ki baat ko jaanna tha, aur ab sirf mein hi nahi tum bhi Geetki mann ki baat ko achche se jaan chuke hai, haina?

Teji: par Geet ek bachi hai

Maan: bachi thi, abhi nahi

Teji: ye kaise ho saktha?

Maan: as you know my future iswith Geet, I'm marrying Geet, this time for real, and I think you don't haveany problem

Teji gets a call from thecollegue...

Teji: bolo daman

Daman: mein kal aaraha hoon

Teji: koi zaroorat nahi

Daman: tummare behen se milna haina?

Teji: meinne kaha koi zarooratnahi

Daman: kyun? Kya hua? Koi problem?

Teji: nahi sare probems katam hogaye hai, aur meri Geet apne zindagi kudh chun gayi hai

Daman: aur tum?

Teji: Geet ki kushi hi meri kusgihai

Maan is relieved ...

Teji smiles atlast...

Teji: toh shadhi ki tayaari karoonkya? Geet toh yahan rehna hi nahi chathi hai...

Maan: tumme fikar karne ki koizaroorat nahi, meinne sare tayyari kardhi, shadhi agle shukrawaar ko hai aurmein Geet ko kal hi lekhe jaatha hoon, agar tumme koi itraaz nahi ho toh

Teji: ab mujhe kya itraaz hosakthi jab Geet ko hi koi itraaz nahi hai toh?

Maan: tum log char din pehle hiaajao, meinne sab se kehdhiya ki mein shadhi ki wachan ek bar phir lenachahtha, aur ye shadhi duniya ke liye nahi humare liye hai, duniya ke liye tohhum pathi pathni hi hai par mein Geet ko sache dil se apnana chatha, mein Geetko yakheen dilana chahtha hoon ki ab hum ek ho gaye hai, sare duniya ke samnemein ye kehna chatha hoon ki Geet ab meir hai, Maan ki Geet

Teji: mein toh kush hoon ki tumneapna vada imandaari se nibaya hai aur mujhe viswaas hai ki aaise hi tum merebehen ke diye har vada nibaoge

Maan: ab Geet tummari behen nahirahi, woh Maan ki ho gayi hai, ab tumme Geet ki fikar karne ki zaroorat nahipadegi, kyunki mein hoona

As they are talking Lucky comes tocall Teji...

Lucky: veerji mamaji aap ko bhularahe hai'

Teji: tu jaa mein baat kar rahahoon

Lucky: veerji samjo bhai, jijajiko bhi neendh aayegi

Teji: chalo Maan ji, gud night

Maan takes the ladder and Tejitries to help...

Lucky stops him...rehne doveerji aap kyun takleef lethe ho, Geet haina

Lucky: Geeet Geeet jijaji bularahe hai

Geet comes running...

She follows Maan quietly feelingshy and a little scared about Teji...

Teji smiles ...toh ye toh bahutaage badh gaye hai

Geet struggles and she skips astep when Maan holds her...

Teji too came forward but stoppedseeing Maan...

Maan: sambalke Geet, tummareveerji se kehna ki agle bar seedhiyon banana ki, warna mein tumme yahan aanenahi de saktha

Teji smiles and nods his head...:ji jijaji, jaise aap chahthe

Lucky: gud night jijaji

Maan: gud night Lucky

Maan takes Geet with him and Tejiis also happy...

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Part- 87

Maan is waiting eagerly to seewhat Geet does this time...

Now that teji has also given thegreen signal there is no way Geet can resist him...

Naughty Maan gets into action...

Geet is very happy that theirmarriage has been accepted by her veerji too and her family wants to see themhappy in their marriage...

Maan has won evryone's eheart andincluding her's...

Geet thinks about the moment shefirst met Maan...

She was trying to jump off thewindow not knowing the consequences. How stupid she was...

Maan came as a savior at the righttime, thanks to her babaji...

And Maan thought that she wastrying to end her life...

How funny? Pehli nazar mein hiMaan pagal ho gaya?

Geet couldn't remember what madeher agree for the marriahe with a stranger whom she met just a couple ofminutes back...

Forget Geet, what happened to MSKthen, how did he agree to marry a stupid girl whom he just saved from death?

It all looked like a dream and allthat Geet remembred is that she is in safe hands, and her life is saved fromthat rascal...

Here she is in a totally differentworld, her world has turned around the moment Maan entered her life...

All her fears and insecuritiesvanished into thin air and from the moment she took Maan's hands Maan has neverleft his hold...Maan was always there for her and is still with her now readyto tighten the grip never to leave her...

Though they didn't take those vowsseriously, Maneet have lived these three years like a couple standing with eachother and sharing their joys and sorrows, they has not been a moment when theyfelt that they are alone for they liked it or not they had been tied by somedivine bond, that they didn't want to break...

Over the years they have managedto turn their unfortunate tie up under pressure into a fond lastingrelationship...

Both of them took it as achallenge to defeat their ill fate and together they have suceeded inreclaimimg their lives back...

But this Maan is yet to say"ILU"...haina?

Geet considers that as the ultimateway of confession and she is only waiting for that before she could totallysurrender herself to Maan...

For her that's the only way toconvince her that Maan is also ready for a total surrender...duniya mein logdin mein 100 bar ILU kehthe rehthe par ye Maan toh ek bar kehne ke liye itnakyun soch raha hai?

Par MSK ek bar kehtha toh dubara kehneki zaroorat hi nahi padtha, Maan ki ek baat hazaroon promises ke barabar hai,ye toh Geet bhi jaanthi hai...

Maan keeps staring Geet...

Geet: aap aaise hi raat bar gurtherahoge?

Maan: kyun? Tum kya chahathi ho?mein kya karoon?

Maan gets closer...

Geet: woh aap ko kuch nahi karnahaia, bas kehna hai

Maan: kya Geet?

Geet: wahi jo mein sunna chahthi aur aap kehnachahthe

Maan: aaisa kuch nahi hai

Geet gets angry...: kuch nahihai? toh sojao, gud night

Maan: par Geet, iss bar kaun andarkaun bahar?

Maan reminds her of the last timethat she made Maan sleep outside...

Geet: mein toh andar so rahi hoon,aap ko mere saath ek hi kamre mein rehne se dar lagtha toh aap bahar jaa sakthe

Geet takes the pillow and bed-sheet and hands it over to Maan...

Maan: mujhe koi dar nahi hai Geet,par lagtha hai ki kissi ko toh mere saath hone se dar lagtha

Geet: aaisa kuch nahi hai

Geet replaces them on the bed...

Geet goes and sits in one cornerof the bed and Maan comes and sits beside her...

Geet is all shy and she isavoiding looking into his thirsty eyes...

Maan makes her face him...

Maan: kya hua Geet? tum itna chupkaise?

Geet is still speechless...

Maan looks into her eyes with alot of expectations...

He gently brushes her hair asideand drowns in her beauty...

Maan: aaj toh meri Mishtychandhini ki chand ke tarah chamak rahi hai

Geet blushes...

Maan: itna mat sharmaoo Geet, phirtoh mein apne aap ko shadhi tak bhi nahi rokh patha

Geet is surprised...shadhi?

Maan: haan Geet, kya mujhse shadhi karoge? Dubara?

Geet goes and hugs him...

Maan: bathao Geet, kya mujhseshadhi karogi?

Geet: ye kaise sawaal hai? Geettoh pehle hi Maan ki ban chuki hai, Maan ki Geet, aur mein bhi yahi chahathi kihummare mann ki baat ko hum iss duniya ko bathade takki hum khulkke pyaar karsake, haina?

Maan: kyun Geet? ab kya hum chupchup ke pyaar karthe?

Geet: aap toh MSK ho, jo chahojaise chaho karthe ho, besharam hokke sab ke samne flirt karthe ho, par meintoh ek 18 saal ki masoom ladhki hoon, mere liye toh ye bahut mushkil hotha hai

Maan: toh shadhi ke baat tummaribhi besharam ho jaogi?

Geet: aap ke saath rehthi toh kyapatha mein bhi aap ke jaise besharam ho jaoongi

Maan: achcha?

Maan pulls her into a hug...

Geet also hugs him back...

Maan kisses her forehead...gudnight Geet

They go to bed holding their handstogether...

And they slept peacefully withcolorful dreams of their second marriage...

Next day they leave for Delhi andsince dadi is not there Maan continues to be naughty making it more and morehard for Geet to keep him in check...

It's her graduation day and Maanhimself goes to wake her up...

Geet is still asleep when sheheard Maan's voice instead of her usual alarm...: Geet, utjao, jaldhi

Geet opens her eyes and finds Maanon her bed...

Geet: aap yahi sogaye?

Maan: kya? Geet tumne kal raatmujhe ek chor ki tarah yahan se bhagaya tha aur abhi poochthi ho ki mein yahiso gaya tha?

Geet: phir aap yahan kaise?

Maan: Geet, aaj tummari graduationhaina? Chalo mein tumme college lekhe jaatha hoon

Geet looks at the time and it'sonly 4 am, it's Maan's wake up time but not Geet's...

Geet: itne subhe subhe utke meinkya karoongi?

Geet lies back and covers herselffully...

Maan pulls her duvet back...:Geet, jaldhi tayaar hojao, warna late ho jaogi

Geet: Maan sir, mujhe sone dona...function toh 10 bajhe hai

Maan: Geet, aaj tummare liye kitnaimportant din hai, aaj kaise tum so sakthi?

Actually Maan is more excited thanGeet, he can't wait to see his Mishty receiving her degree...

Maan knows how much did Geetstruggle initially to cope up with her classes, the medium of study being aliento her, English...but now she has mastered that alien language very well andshe has also learnt a lot from Maan...

Geet had to sacrifice her sleep atleastfor Maan...

Maan gets ready fast and waits forGeet, Geet is still in OH...

Maan goes to call her and he isgrowing impatient...

How long would this girl take? Alife time?

Geet is almost ready and she lookscharming and splendid in her Green salwar...

Maan couldn't complain for hisangel he can wait for a lifetime...

Maan: you look pretty Geet, so weare ready to rock...

Geet: oh ho, wait a minute

Geet looks at Maan, he is comingto her college, it's her place just like KC is for MSK,and Maan is going to beGeet's guest for today and she wants him to look good to match her...

Maan looks hawt in his officeattire as usual, but Geet thinks that he looks more formal for the day and heshould try out one of his black shirts with the blue jeans which is Geet'sfavourite...

Maan wonders what's bothering Geetas she is looking at him and giving that weird look...

Maan: Geet, come on, let's go

Geet: wait a minute, she takes himto the mirror

Maan: what?

Geet: haan pls, look at you

Maan: am I getting smarter andsmarter?

Geet: of course Maan sir

Geet stresses on the word "Sir"

Maan: Geet, what's wrong? MSK islooking cool today, haina?

Geet: cool? Yeah cool like acucumber

Maan: what?

Geet: sir, do you have a importantmeeting today?

Maan: Geet, you know I've anappointment with my GF today

Geet: par sir, I don't think youcan go with her like this

Maan: what do you mean? What'syour problem now, come on Geet, every girl would love to be my GF

Geet: but sir, you look more likeher boss than her BF

Maan takes another look...: isthat so?

Geet: come on sir, I'll chose theperfect suit for you

Geet holds Maans hand and takeshim with her...

She selects her favourite blackshirt and tight jeans...

Maan changes and is surprised thathe looks really cool now...

Spending all his time at KC hasmade him boring and he needs a wardrobe change over...haina?

Geet: now you can come with me

Maan must appreciate Geet'schoice, haina?

So when it comes to your BF allthe girls are the same, including Geet...

Maan makes BF for them...Geetenjoys the delicious poha that Maan made, one of his dadaji's authenticrecipe...

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Part- 88

At the college...

The girls are waiting to see MSKback, and they are lucky that they get to see him often at their campus, thanksto Geet...

Maan's royal entry hits the campuslike a tornado and the girls are swept by it, they are awe struck and theystand still gazing Maan intensely with their eyes almost poping out, what akiller look, every girl would die for that smashing deadly looks...

Maan just steps out when Geetshouts...

Geet: Maan sir, rukh jao

Maan turns and looks at Geet, herface is worth seing, ohh the jealous factor, Geet is staring those innocentgirls as if to burn them into ash...

Maan: kya hua Geet?

Geet: aap andar beitjao, jaldhi

Maan: par Geet, we have to get in,it's time for the function

Geet: I know I know, you just getin she comes to the other side, literally pushes him in and shuts thedoor...she then gets back to her seat...

Geet: driver, andar jao

Maan: but Geet, you can't go inthe car

Geet: you don't worry, ourChancellor always comes in the car

Maan: but Geet, he's thechancellor

Geet: sir, you are MSK, the MSK

Maan: Geet, don't get yourself into trouble, this is not KC

Geet: sir, no problem, if theywant to throw me out let them, anyway this is my last day,so why bother

Maan wonders how possessive thisgirl could be and what's in store for him in future, how about a space suit,that would probably conceal his good looks, but our MSK would look hot in anysuit...

As they get down at the auditoriumentrance Geet runs and catches hold of Maan's arms and walks along with himsticking to him tight so as to declare to the girls that this is my man, stayaway from him...

Maan takes his seat in the guestspace while Geet settles with her friends though she didn't want to leave Maanalone...

She is only worried about Maan asall the girls are interested in him only, she keeps checking himconstantly...

But Maan is least bothered aboutthe hype around him and he is only here for Geet...

When Geet climbs the dias toreceive her degree from the chief guest, one of her proffessors, it's smiley,introduces Geet specially to the chief guest and praises Geet...Maan feltvery proud at that moment and is happy that Teji rightly sent Geet to Delhi topursue her studies...

Maan is lucky to have helped her alittle bit but it's all her own efforts that she had reached this positiontoday...if not for her zidd to study she would not have come to Delhi andMaan would have lost the most precious pearl that God gifted him...Maancouldn't imagne what his life would have been without Geet, by this time hemight have achieved all his goals as a businessman and still his life wouldhave remained empty...

Thank God Geet is so studious forthat matter, his Mishty is both intelligent and beautiful...

After Geet has done with her jobshe immediately takes Maan away from that place...

Geet takes Maan out...

She sighs after they come far fromthe crazy girls...

Geet: thank god aap bach gaye

Maan: Geet, what happened? Tumitna pareshaan kyun ho?

Geet: it's all my fault, mujhe naaapko ussi kapde pe KC bhejdena chahiye thi, look at them, ohh even hawks wouldnot match their hungry eyes

Yes, Geet is protecting Maan fromthe girls just like a chicken protects its chicks from the hawk...

Maan: relax Geet, poor girls, it'snot their fault, and don't you forget that you are also one among them, MSKdrooler

Geet: kya? ye galatfami abhi bhooljao, mein toh sirf dadi ki kushi ke liye aapko shadhi kar rahi hoon, smajheaap?

Maan: oh God Geet, tum kab se jootbolne lagi?

Geet: aap ko kya lagtha mein yeshadhi mere liye kar rahi hoon?

Maan: nahi Geet, mein jaantha hoonki ye shadhi tum mere liye kar rahi ho, haina?

That's also true...Geet wantedto help Maan get out of his past and in that process she became hispresent...she did this b'coz she wanted to see him happy...and now hishappiness lies in her happiness...babaji ne kya jodi banaya hai?

Geet stops at the chaatclub...and she looks at Maan...

Maan: what?

Geet: woh mujhe bhook lagi hai

Maan: no way Geet, humme jaana hai

Geet: kya?

Maan also wanted to leave as theyhave other plans...

Maan: Geet, jaldhi karo

Geet spots a couple of girlsfollowing them to speak to Maan...

Geet: haan haan, humme pehle yahanse jaana chahiye

Maan: haan Geet, we are gettinglate

Geet: for what? so you have yourmeeting today also?

Maan: correction Geet, we have ameeting

Geet: with whom? Mr.sinha? woh tohgale hafte hai

Maan: no my sweetheart, with eachother

Geet: what?

Maan: Geeet we are flyingto Goa

Geet is so happy...: what? areyou serious?

Maan: yeah Geet, and our flight iswaiting

On their way Maan thinks about hislife before and after Geet...

For once Maan wants to be humane,let his emotions take over him, he is tired of running away and hiding fromreality, how long would he shy away from his life, his happiness, his bundle ofjoy, his Mishty, fearing the pain of losing them...

Yes, Vicky left him at the wrongtime, just when he felt like he had the perfect life with Vicky getting marriedas Dadi wished...Maan only wanted to see Vicky sit back and enjoy the fruitsof his hardwork...that was the time for Vicky to savour the sweet taste ofsuccess in business and also step into family life...but God called Vickyback, as they say God recalls His favourite children to His Kingdomsooner...

Though Vicky is an inevitable partof his life even after he left Maan has now realized that Geet has slowly madeher way into his heart without his knowledge and before he himself couldrealize what was happening she became an integral part of his life, she didn'tfight for Vicky's place but she made a place of her own in Maan's not so bigheart...kanjoos Khurana, always skeptical about sharing his love with anyonebut his family...specially his big Bro...

Maan thinks about Geet's entryinto his life and the changes she brought within him, Geet on the other hand isdesperately waiting to hear those three word "ILU" from Maan, Maan has passedthat stage long back and he never bothered about words as words are not goodenough to express their love for each other and their love is not the ordinaykind, love at first sight, and the honeymoon period filled with all kinds ofpleasures ignoring the bitter reality about each others weak points and laterlamenting about them, Maneet's love story has been thru all the difficulties,they met at a point when both of them were at the worst part of their life,almost close to losing their battles with fate and losing all the hopes of alife ahead...

Yes, they had some startingproblem but once they overcame their early hick-ups then there is no lookingback, their lovestory has been on a roller coaster ride from there...

Here they are waiting to leaphigher and higher with all the hurdles cleared and ready to take on thechallenges in store for them in the future...

Geet has found someone whom shecan trust, someone who is there for her at the time she needed a support, someoneshe can rely on, not like her useless father or helpless foster family, here issomeone who can take care of her troubles and free her from worries about herfuture...that's what she has been yearning for, someone to lean on, someonewho is ready to take up her problems as his and always be there for herwhenever she needed a hand or a word of assurance, someone just to say "I'mhere for you, don't worry about anything and enjoy this moment without any fearabout the future" it's not the money she needed, it's the heart, thewillingness to own her as his,she is overwhelmed when he says Maan ki Geet,after all she is just a little girl with all the colorful dreams of a beautifullife, she always had a doubt that she doen't belong to anyone, she is allalone, on her own, being a part of another family and not knowing her limits,she always had this question poping out every now and then..."kya mujhe haqhai?" to ask for anything, to expect anything, to express her anger, to say noto anything that she doesn't like...

That's why sometimes she is soadamant to get things done as she wishes just to ensure herself that she is notalone and she keeps testing her rights that way...how many times she tellsherself that "I'm not alone and this is my family"...but still the questionlingers in her mind if this is real or she is trying to fool herself...

But with Maan she never had thefeeling that she is an outsider, whether it's dadi or for that matter MSKhimself Geet felt that she is one of them, she easily gets angry with him neverthinking about her position, that she is surviving under his support, for noteven once did Dadi or Maan made her feel that way...

Maan was mad about her only whenshe deliberately tried to come inbetween him and Vicky, Geet knew what she wasdoing and she also knew how hard it would be for Maan to accept that Geet isafterall right in this case and he has kept his eyes blind folded when it comesto Vicky and actually he is afraid to move on for he lost hold of his Bro'shands and Geet came to his rescue by lending her hand and though initiallyMaan's ego stopped him from accepting Geet's hands and coming out of thedarkness Geet persisted and succeeded atlast, Maan finally got hold of hislife, you actually need someone to hold on to in your life and that's when youwant to live, live for that someone, if you lose that someone your life becomesmeaningless and you lose interest to live, but luckily for Maan Geet came atthe right time as a replacement for Vicky in his life...

They reach Goa in the evening...

And Maan takes Geet straight tothe beach...

His eyes turn watery and he keepsstaring the waves for a while...

Geet waits for Maan to overcomehis emotions...

Maan returns to his presentquickly...

It's a beautiful evening with thesunset giving the beach a golden glow...

Maan: Geet, tum jaanthi ho ki humyahan kyun aaye hai?

Geet: hmm, Vicky bhaiya keaashirwaad lene

Maan opens his arms and welcomesGeet...

Geet runs and hugs him...

Maan: I Love You Geet

Maan shouts so that he can beatthe roar of the ocean...

Maan: I love Geet, haan, I LoveGeet handa

Geet is overwhelmed...

Geet: I love you Maan

Maneet passionate hug...

Maan: Geet, this is where my lifeended that day, and here I'm back at the same place to start my life afresh allover again, I never knew that I have another chance, a second life until I metyou Geet, you are the one who made me believe in life once again, and from youI learnt a lot, I learnt that when the road before you closes or reaches a deadend ,there is always another road which we can only see when we have thedetermination to proceed and reach our destination,I learnt it from the way youtried to turn all your weaknesses into your strength, always ready to fight inany situation, and never ever give up...it's that spirit of yours that has gotyou so far else your life would have ended in that small village itself...

Geet: par aap ke saath ke binamein kuch nahi kar pathi, aap hai toh mein hoon

Maan: ab mujhe patha chal gaya kimujhe kya karna, I want to live, I want to be happy, That's what Bro wished, hewishe to see me happy like a prince and so he wanted to built an empire, KCforme, how foolish I was to think that KC is his dream, no, my happiness is hisdream and he will be happy to see his Prince Maan starting a new life with hisprincess Geet, thank you Geet, thanks for everything, and I promise you Geet,infront of the same waves that took Bro away from me, that I'll be with you inall your joys and sorrows for the rest of our lives and beyond, will you marryme Geet, Maan takes out a diamond ring and proposes Geet in style...

Geet immediately accepts and Maanslides the ring into her finger and kisses her...

Maneet are married happily andstart their life with maaahi magic...

THEEND

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