Shivi SS: Standing by each other Part 6 on Pg 24 20.07.2021(Completed) - Page 10

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Waiting for more like always👍

Thankyou😊 but it will take time😃🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Aww. This was beautiful! The sudden disappearance of the priest made it seem like it was God himself in guise of priest to give Raavi her hint towards her Khushiyan and the hail storm was for her realization. I am loving this progress. Shiv and his modesty with the clothes line in between. For her privacy! And that stolen moment of attraction. Glad Raavi corrected him. Hope she addresses that and tells him that he had the haq when they go back to the room. I'd love for her to take that first step towards exploring intimacy in all their consciousness, because Shiva would still be guilt ridden. Haha I wanted this to continue a little more.


P.s. though jhopadi concept is not new to ITV, I loved this PS touch to it because there were two couples stuck and they managed to have their own moments, but still be there for one another-especially in time of crisis.


And now to the sad part...will have to wait another lengthy period to read the next part. 😢 Please update soon!

I am so so glad that you got that priest thing and also mentioned it. Because I wrote it keeping the same thing in mind. Because I personally feel that some to in human's roop God comes and solve our problems.

Let's see who will take the first step when it comes to intimacy😉


Haha jhopdi concept bahut repetitive hai but kya karti kuch new samajh nahi aya😃

Aww. Will try and update soon🤗<3

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Posted: 4 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Foxii

So nice, loved the intimate moment they shared ☺️

Shiva is so caring.

Waiting for more

Thank you so much🤗

Will try to write soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: maanmeet1

wow....what an update....u made me fall in love with Shiva all over again.....


they both deserve love and happiness along with their craziness and passion


1st thing I read after getting up and brought such a big smile on my face .....thank you dear.....

Aww so sweet🤗

Thank you for such sweet comment🤗❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#95

Wooowww this was so beautiful!!❤️😳

Update soon!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel

I am so so glad that you got that priest thing and also mentioned it. Because I wrote it keeping the same thing in mind. Because I personally feel that some to in human's roop God comes and solve our problems.

Let's see who will take the first step when it comes to intimacy😉


Haha jhopdi concept bahut repetitive hai but kya karti kuch new samajh nahi aya😃

Aww. Will try and update soon🤗<3


I do too! Or invisible guardian angel. I have lived through it. We were on middle of a highway driving and all of sudden our car started spinning in circles. It would have almost flipped, but nothing happened. All of sudden the car was stopped on the side with no scratches on is or the car. It was almost surreal experience. And to think that no other car hit us on an expressway during busy hours?! I believed in some kind of external force.


Yay! Can't wait to read the next part!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#97

Wow... read all parts. This is amazing. Shivi bonding is really good. Kaash serial mein bhi aise track dikhaye tho...


This part is hot and so cute at the same time. The desires and the hesitation you penned it so beautifully.... 👏👏👏 mazaa aagayi...


Yaar please update soon... eagerly waiting for the next part..


Tc🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Beautiful update👏

Loved Shivi's intimate moment😳

Shivi are so comfortable with each other❤️

The priest's words were nice, I think it was God the way he disappeared

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Posted: 4 years ago
#99

Very beautiful chapter! I loved all of the shivi moments, their care and concern for each other ❤️

The pace of the story is great.. they're getting attracted to each other as well 👌

Waiting for the next one!

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Posted: 4 years ago

That was fantastic.Loving the progression of their relationship.loved it.

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