SKR FF 3:"Hum Sath Sath Hain.!" A modern time story.Updated @ page 144 - Page 11

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hii you have not given double damaka of this week please give it today know

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Ananyams201004

Hii you have not given double damaka of this week please give it today know

I have just started with the next part.

If it gets complete then surely will post it till night...

Otherwise subah subah hi... Stay tuned ❣️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hey dear ...as usual a sizzling update....wah....kithna romance...🤤. . Abb ram💓 ...... Bechari siya muh kolkae kuch bol nahi paayi ...😂🤭....my god...and other couples were too cute...haaaaaannnn....oogling on your hubbies manvi and urmi....and shruthi ka shy Wala scene masth tha...🤭...abb waiting for the next update.... continue soon darling 😘... love you a ton...Jai siya ram..💓💓💓

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Originally posted by: Srinivasan.R

Hey dear ...as usual a sizzling update....wah....kithna romance...🤤. . Abb ram💓 ...... Bechari siya muh kolkae kuch bol nahi paayi ...😂🤭....my god...and other couples were too cute...haaaaaannnn....oogling on your hubbies manvi and urmi....and shruthi ka shy Wala scene masth tha...🤭...abb waiting for the next update.... continue soon darling 😘... love you a ton...Jai siya ram..💓💓💓

Thanks a ton Hema...

Stay tuned for tomorrow's update ❣️

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Super Monday is back, with super update 😍🤩

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No Suvarna, no Indrajeet and no "Anna" scenes...😁😁

So have a peaceful and romantic read..... 😍😍😍😍

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*****

Kranti takes a plate of her apple slices and placed it on the table in front, settling herself down on the couch of the living area, having her phone in her left hand. She had just finished her work of giving medicine to Dashrath and now after her husband has gone to rest, she got a time to rest herself. Kranti rests her back on the backrest of the couch, opening their family WhatsApp group, to check the pictures and videos of Lonavala, which was put by Lakshman, Shatrughan and Shruti. There were about 50 to 60 pictures with 5 to 8 short videos and boomarangs, of their bus journey only..!

KRANTI- yeh bacche.!

Kranti lightly shook her head sideways having a million volt smile on her face, witnessing the eight models in her family. She started looking at the pictures one by one, some with the singles clicks, some with the couple clicks- ofcourse not that romantic poses for their ongoing banter, and others of the scenery and group selfies.

SUMITRA- didi..

Kranti's concentration went to her left side as Sumitra calls her. She took a seat beside her elder sister watching her smiling face.

KRANTI- pictures check kiye.?

Asked Kranti showing her the phone's screen while Sumitra nods her head in yes. Both the ladies gave a light laugh and again got busy looking at the pictures, Kranti for the first time and Sumitra for the nth time.

SUMITRA- ladkiyan kitni pyari lag rahi hai na.?

Questioned Sumitra looking at one of the photo of four girls together- Siya and Manvi sitting on a bench and Shruti and Urmila wrapping their arms from their back respectively.

KRANTI- haa.. hot..!

Sumitra's mouth fell open in surprise while Kranti winks at her. She smile ear to ear looking at her phone and swipes to other similar clicks while Sumitra said.

SUMITRA- dekhiye to, pictures me bhi phula hua muh dikh raha hai charon ka..

Kranti chuckled looking at the picture which Sumitra was talking about, the group selfie where the girls didn't showed their natural happy smile, standing closer to their husbands.

KRANTI- after all.. they are my bahus. Kuch mere gunn hone chahiye na..

Sumitra nods her head in a big yes while Kranti swipes to another photo having the four boys now, her four handsome sons.

KRANTI- dekho to.. kitne acche lag rahe hai mere bete..

Kranti literally went "aww" looking at the picture, four of them standing beside each other, their glares ON, hands in the pocket, smiling at the camera.

KRANTI- they can give a tough competition to the bollywood actors.? Hai na.?

Kranti exaggerated her sentence making Sumitra to look surprised first and then she started laughing at her.

KRANTI- areh seriously.. dekho na.. Ram aur Shahrukh me bas age ka farak hai. Baki sab, dimple se lekar smile tak.. sab same hai..

Sumitra kept on laughing at her while Kranti points towards other pictures.

KRANTI- and see.. Bharat, Lakshman aur Shatrughan.. Shahid, Ranbir aur Varun ko piche chod de.. itne handsome hai..

Sumitra placed her hand on her heart, laughing out loud for the inner mother "over praising" her sons.

SUMITRA- didi.? Jyada hogaya.. infact bohot jyada hogaya..

Kranti pouts at her and continued looking at the pictures with a smile.

SUMITRA- thank god bhaisahab ne nahi suna.. warna wo kehte beton ko main lead and unke papa ko main villian. Aapne unhe ek baar Amrish Puri kaha tha, if you remember..

Kranti giggle and nods in yes, as she remembered one of their husband wife banter when she had tagged him the "khadus" Amrish Puri, ofcourse of the movie. Kranti again let her concentration on her cellphone for which Sumitra kept on watching her.

SUMITRA- khush hai na aap.?

Sumitra's words made Kranti to look at her again. Her eyes twinkle, her lips streched at its full giving a wide smile and her expressions said satisfied.!

KRANTI- bohut khush..

Sumitra waited for her to continue further as she knows Kranti is going to say something.

KRANTI- jald hi.. hamare ghar me dher sari khushiyan aane wali hai Sumitra.. our Ram and Siya are planning for their future..

Said Kranti looking at the next picture of Ram and Siya, a candid one, both looking at each other with a smile and Manvi clicked the picture immediately.

KRANTI- aur fir.. Bharat Manvi, Lakshman Urmila, Shatrughan Shruti.. inn sabke chota choti iss pure ghar me bhag daud karenge..

Sumitra chuckled hearing her excitement, Kranti's eyes actually told that, the excitement for her grandchildren.

KRANTI- hum dono dadi kehlayengi Sumitra...

Said Kranti getting amused and then both the sisters laughed together feeling happy.

SUMITRA- apko dadi kahenge. I don't suit for the word dadi..

Sumitra said in an attitude for which Kranti made a face looking at her, original "sisters banter" going on. After a moment Kranti stops and smile looking straight, dreaming a beautiful future.

KRANTI- duniya me sabhi khushiyan apni jagah hai.. but.. apne baccho ke baccho ke sath khelne ki khushi.. wo alag hi hai..

Sumitra nods her head in agreement while Kranti gets a light tear in the corner of her left eye. She immediately wipes it away while Sumitra said.

SUMITRA- thank you didi.. for sharing this family with me..

Kranti immediately turns to look at her getting startled with Sumitra's sudden words. Sumitra too, having a light tears, managed to smile in her emotions.

SUMITRA- ye sab to aapka hai.. that you've shared with me.. aapke bete.. aapki bahuyen.. and now the grandchildren..

Kranti scrunched her eyebrows and lightly pats Sumitra's right lap with her left hand.

KRANTI- chup.. what thank you ? Aren't these your kids too.?

Kranti scolded her for a moment while Sumitra bows her head down smiling at her words.

KRANTI- mujhse jyada to.. Bharat, Lakshman aur Shatrughan tumhare goad me khele hai..

Sumitra immediately motioned her eyes to look at her.

SUMITRA- ha.. aapko Ram se fursat milti tab na..

Said Sumitra in a teasing tone while Kranti pressed her lips looking at her cellphone again.

KRANTI- pehele Ram ke piche piche bhagti thi.. and now.. it will be Ram's kids..

Kranti said looking at the picture again. At the next moment she immediately placed her right hand on her head and closed her eyes.

KRANTI- hey bhagwan.. nazar na lage..

She prayed for a moment for her kids while Sumitra shook her head in disbelief, wiping her left over tears.

SUMITRA- come on didi.. kya nazar and all..?

Kranti turns to look at her having a pinch of "motherly" concern on her face.

KRANTI- nahi Sumitra.. ye bacche ghum kar wapis aaye na.. to har ek ki nazar utarenge.. kala dhaga bandh denge.. ghar me nimbu mirchi baandh denge.. aur mirchi rayi ka jhokh bhi kar lenge..

Sumitra widens her eyes and lightly pats her hand on her forehead hearing her elder sister's superstitious words.

SUMITRA- bas didi.. stop with these things now..

Kranti pouts at her ignorance and then again turns to look at her cellphone.

KRANTI- hamara parivaar hai hi nazar lagne layak..

Said Kranti with a pinch of complain plus proudness in her voice. She got a smile on her face again and continued looking at the pictures, showing the phone's screen to Sumitra too...

*****

Lonavala, the town of beautiful green mountains, is no less than the heaven on the earth. One of its mountain is Tiger's leap near Khandala, which is a linkage to get the best views of the forest, the greenery, and the frothing cascades. The shape of this aspect relates a leaping tiger and its steep hill collect the waterfalls as a stream which is apt for water adventures. Though this place give a terrific view of the waterfall in the monsoon, but this season too augments the beauty of the place.

SHATRUGHAN- I don't know why, but I am getting this song in my mind again and again..

Said Shatrughan, dressed in his white color round neck t-shirt with maroon linings and dark black tapered pants, looking at the others. The eight of them were moving towards the echo point on the top, one of the tourist point having the same characteristics as its name suggests.

MANVI- which song.?

Asked Manvi, dressed in navy blue top with printed navy blue shrug and her white parallel pants.

LAKSHMAN- I know the answer..

Lakshman interrupts, raising his hand to answer the song. Lakshman opted for plain yellow color Chinese collar t-shirt and grey color pants. Shatrughan looks at him for his guess and Lakshman started singing the song.

LAKSHMAN- yeh kaha... Aagaye hum... Yun hi saath saath chalte...

Lakshman forwards his hand to hold Urmila's left hand who was walking beside him, dressed in her pink and white stripped basic jumpsuit, of short sleeves.

LAKSHMAN- teri bahon me hai janam... Mere....

Urmila immediately gave a look at him and Lakshman stopped his song, leaving it incomplete.

URMILA- shhooh...

Urmila shrugged his hand off her for which Lakshman pouts at her. Shruti shook her head sideways denying with Lakshman.

SHRUTI- no bhai.. your biscuit can't think of this song..

Lakshman laughed at her words and Shatrughan pouts in disappointment. Shruti, who has opted for plain blue and violet mixed jumpsuit, straps shoulder, gave a look at Shatrughan.

SHATRUGHAN- wow.. kitna ache se janti ho tum mujhe baby..

Shruti gave him a sarcastic smile.

BHARAT- then what song.? Badhe chalo, badhe chalo.? Hato nahi daro nahi, something something, badhe chalo.?

Bharat, in his printed rust color informal shirt and white pants, says few lines of a poem not exactly remembering it's words.

LAKSHMAN- that's not a song.. it's a poem..

Lakshman immediately corrects his elder brother, looking at the road where they are walking on.

MANVI- yes ofcourse.. aapko to iss atmosphere me bhi poems rhymes ye sab yaad ayega..

Manvi shook her head again tagging Bharat as "unromantic" while others chuckled at her words.

MANVI- thank god you didn't said, sarfaroshi ki tamanah wali lines..

Lakshman, Urmila and Shruti started laughing harder while Bharat scrunched his eyebrows looking at Manvi.

SHATRUGHAN- you all have spoiled my song by assuming atrangi answers..

Complaints Shatrughan giving an interruption to their assumption games, for which others rolls their eyes in disbelief.

SHRUTI- batana hai to batao.. bhav mat khao..

Shruti scolded him immediately and Shatrughan scrunched his eyebrows in disappointment. He runs towards Siya holding her with the shoulders. Siya, dressed in peach and black color lined sleeveless, front cut long top and her navy blue jeans.

SHATRUGHAN- aaye.. tadang dang dang dang... Kya bolti tu..?

Shatrughan started his song including the music into it, giving a wink at his bhabhi for which Siya chuckled at him as in Rani chuckled looking at Amir. Ram immediately stops in between looking at Shatrughan in surprise, openly flirting his wife. He has opted his dark grey round neck, full sleeve t-shirt, his sleeves rolled till half arms and his black pants.

RAM- why you always get my wife to flirt with.?

Questioned Ram in a pout for which the others laughs at them.

SHATRUGHAN- ainvayee.!!

Shatrughan turns to look at Siya, continuing his back walk holding her shoulder and Siya placed her hands on his arms to direct his back walk.

SIYA- aye.. kya me bolu.?

She continued his song, singing the next line when Lakshman runs towards them, taking her hand in his hold.

LAKSHMAN- sun...

SIYA- suna...

LAKSHMAN- aati kya Khandala..??

They kept on completing the song lyrics when they reached their destination at the echo point.

SHATRUGHAN- bachpan me, we used to rhyme it as- haathi ka anda la, instead of aati kya Khandala..

Shatrughan and Lakshman laughed and high-fived each other remembering their childhood song lyrics.

BHARAT- bhabhi continue..

Bharat asked her to continue the song.

SIYA- kya karu..?? Aake me Khandala..?

Siya continued singing, folding her hands while Shatrughan actioned Ram to take the charge. He put his one hand in his pocket and by other, caresses his back of the neck, singing for his wife.

RAM- ghumenge... Firenge.. nachenge.. gayenge... Aish karenge.... Aur kya...?

Ram smirks at her while Siya's eyes grew wide a bit, understanding the meaning of his smirk.

SHRUTI- jiju try the machis wala sequence too..

Shruti suggested Ram to enact the very much famous machis scene from this particular song. Ram immediately shook his head in no, getting frightened.

BHARAT- acha.. song me Khandala word hai isliye ye song yaad aaya..? How dumb of you shatru..!!

Bharat shook his head in disbelief while Shatrughan gave a grin at him for his "not related" song selection at that time.

URMILA- finally..

Urmila exclaimed as they look at the beautiful scenery, though the sun was already up in this summer season, but summer is not same in Lonavala. The echo point, where few tourists were busy shouting few names, few couples shouting "I love you" and other things, it doesn't echoes the voice as exactly nowadays.

LAKSHMAN- bhaiya.. try shouting "Siya"..

Lakshman suggested Ram who grins looking at his side where Siya was standing.

SIYA- let it be.. dusri koi Siya bhagi daudi chali aayi, to inki to chandi hojani hai..

Said Siya having a pinch of jealousy in her tone, but showing her frowned expression. And the others clapped their hands amongst each other in a high-five laughing at them, not with their partners obviously.

RAM- dusri koi Siya bhagi daudi chali bhi aayi, to me thodi na mere paas aane dunga..

Said Ram wrapping his hand over her shoulder while Siya didn't said anything to him.

SHATRUGHAN- wahi na bhabhi.. thodi na bhaiya yaha Shahrukh Khan pose me, haath failaye khade rahenge..

Shatrughan actioned the SRK trademark pose himself for which Ram gave a pat on his back of the head.

URMILA- majal hai didi, ki koi jiju ke aas paas bhi bhatke..??

Ram gave an obvious expressions at Urmila's words while Siya glare at her for supporting Ram and not her. She shrugged his hand off from her shoulders when Bharat continued.

BHARAT- but why people are shouting "I love you".?

Questioned Bharat looking at the "lovy dovy" couples shouting few sentences "I love you Ankita", "I love you Karan", "I miss you Pooja", etc etc. Manvi uplifts her one eyebrow and answered him.

MANVI- they are very much in love..

Bharat immediately looks at her in confusion while this time Lakshman supports his brother.

LAKSHMAN- shouting "I love you" is love.?

Asked Lakshman to the three girls, accept his Siya bhabhi, while the girls nods at him in yes. He placed his hands on his waist and questioned them.

LAKSHMAN- Fir to hum "I am sorry" chillaye.? Will that be a maafi for us husbands.?

Manvi turned to look at her sisters as she got a valid point in Lakshman's words. Shatrughan gave a big pat on his shoulder.

SHATRUGHAN- bahuut badhiya bhaiya. Bahuut tagda sawal puche ho..

He acted in a "bihar" accent while the girls went baffled not exactly wanting to give the answers.

SIYA- jaise kitne bhi baar "I love you" bolne par, pyar tab tak nahi dikhta jab tak jataya na jaye.. waise hi.. kitne hi baar "I am sorry" bolo, mafi tab tak dikhayi nahi deti, jab tak jatayi na jaye..

Siya gave a very much long and valid explaination for Lakshman's question, directly indicating towards Ram. The boys uplifts their head lightly in a slow nod, understanding her each and every word.

RAM- aur.. mafi kaise jatayi jaye so that it will get dikhayi to you people.?

Asked Ram looking at her face while she turns to face him again.

SIYA- wo bhi hum bataye.? To fir aap karenge kya.? Bas jo biwi bole wo karenge.?

Asked Siya folding her hands while Ram gave a obvious nod at her. She shook her head in disbelief.

SIYA- such a zoru ka ghulam you are..

Ram pouts at her sentence while others burst into laughter hearing their unseen funny fights.

SHRUTI- you are killing in your this avatar dii..

Said Shruti between her laugh, praising Siya while Ram smile looking at his wife.

RAM- she always kills in every avatar..

Ram winks at her while her facial expressions changes suddenly, going shy now for which others hooted in a melody teasing them.

LAKSHMAN- but valid point ha bhabhi..

Lakshman said, after a moment, gaining everyone's attention towards him.

LAKSHMAN- mafi to earn ki jati hai. Agreed.. but when.. we are trying to earn.. then why this shhuhh, don't touch, stay away, and all things..?

Asked Lakshman looking at Urmila, repeating her words for him, who now scrunched her eyebrows at his question.

URMILA- you have to play fair.. you can't do that what you are doing...

Said Urmila in a complain while Lakshman smirks at her.

LAKSHMAN- what I am doing.?

Urmila looks at others who were staring them, waiting for her answer while Lakshman kept on looking at her with a mischievous smile.

SHRUTI- uffo.. bol do didi..we all know what you are saying.. waise bhi ye sabhi bhai ek jaise hai..

Shatrughan's jaw dropped hearing her while Urmila hides her eyes from Lakshman.

MANVI- correct.. sab milkar mafi earn kar rahe hai.. planners.. well planned planners you four are...

Said Manvi nodding her head looking at Bharat who took a deep breath looking at his brothers in his "innocent expression".

RAM- well.. let's continue this discussion later..

Ram interrupts them, as he turns to look at the paragliding point where there was already a little bit of crowd.

RAM- let's not stop here.. we have to move towards the paragliding point..

Said Ram to others who was now busy resting themselves, few standing placing their hands on their waist, few taking the support of each other.

BHARAT- ha bhaiya.. Urmila show the tickets..

Said Bharat forwarding his hand towards her, asking for her cellphone.

URMILA- ask this udti patang. Mera phone inke paas hai..

Bharat turns to face Lakshman who has already put his hand in his pocket to give Urmila's cellphone. Everyone started moving towards the point, where few tourists were buying their tickets, few were waiting for their chance, few looking up in the air at their family and friends and few assisting people busy in their work.

RAM- excuse me.. here are our tickets..

Ram forwards the cellphone's screen at one of the green jacket person, assisting everything there.

MAN- this side sir..

The man showed them the direction, from where they have to collect their safety jackets, flying suits and helmets. Paragliding is an adventure sport that involves flying paragliders which are lightweight, free-flying, foot-launched glider aircraft without any firm primary structure. The kids got ready with their safety equipments ON, and then the instructors took them towards each flying paragliders.

MAN- jyada sporting nahi hai. It's just for the adventure..

The man said a line, which he always says to the people who were about to board in to the gliders. The sentence only says that, don't worry it's not going to fly much high, so don't get afraid, relax, enjoy and chill.!

Shruti very much excitedly took the front portion while Shatrughan stood at her behind. He slides his hands on her waist giving her a light tickle.

SHRUTI- what are you doing.?

Questioned Shruti tilting her face to look at him.

SHATRUGHAN- what.? I have to hold you. What if something happens to me.?

Shruti scrunched her eyebrows and immediately gave a pat on his hand.

SHRUTI- don't use those words.. stupid..

Shatrughan smile at her care and keeps his chin on her left side of the shoulder.

SHATRUGHAN- first time with you.. but obviously not the last time..

Said Shatrughan in a whisper, saying about paragliding ride, for which Shruti smile at him lightly.

SHATRUGHAN- listen... I love you..

He again whispered near her ear while Shruti turns her face to look straight, only smiling lightly at his words.

Lakshman got comfortable on their paraglider and turns to look at Urmila who was standing with the instructor.

LAKSHMAN- aao..

Lakshman forwards his hand to her asking her to get on.

URMILA- me piche...

Said Urmila in a demand while Lakshman nods at her in disbelief. She moves towards his back and the instructor properly made her comfortable.

LAKSHMAN- now you have to hold me.. no option left for you Mila..!

Lakshman tilt his face to look at her and gave her a wink while Urmila tried not to smile at his words. She wraps her arms around him from back while Lakshman takes a hold of her palm giving a soft kiss on her hand.

URMILA- Oye...

Urmila hits his chest scolding him while Lakshman giggles at her.

LAKSHMAN- acha suno to..

Lakshman again tilted his face backwards while Urmila looks straight at him.

LAKSHMAN- I love you..

Urmila smile at his words and hides herself behind him while Lakshman turns to look straight.

Bharat got comfortable on his position that is on the front side while Manvi occupies the behind position.

MANVI- are you sure you are not afraid.?

Asked Manvi for which Bharat gave a confused look at her.

BHARAT- why would I be afraid.?

Bharat cross question her for which Manvi looks startled.

MANVI- you are not afraid of paragliding.?

Asked Manvi again questioning him for his question, for which Bharat shook his head in a big no.

BHARAT- me bas.. aap se hi darta hu.. aur kisi bhi chiz se nahi...

Manvi's mouth fell open and she immediately hits his back with her palm for which Bharat giggles at her. After Manvi got comfortable on her position, Bharat turns his head half ways to have a look at her.

MANVI- what ?

Asked Manvi looking at his face which wanted to say something.

BHARAT- yahi.. that.. I love you..

Manvi immediately smile at his words. He turns to look in front again while she rests her head on his back, smiling ear to ear.

Ram forwards his right hand towards Siya and actioned her with his left hand to be in his front.

RAM- I will be at the back seat.. as always..

Said Ram in a joke for which Siya pouts at him. She takes her position and looks at the other paragliders moving in the air. She immediately joins her hand to pray.

SIYA- Ram Ram Ram Ram Ram...

Ram's eyes grew wide with a smile hearing her prayers.

RAM- areh.? Me to piche hi hu.. mera nam jap rahi hai aap.?

Siya opens her eyes and turns to look at him.

SIYA- not you.. bhagwan Ram..

Said Siya pointing her index finger upwards in the sky for which Ram uplifts his one eyebrow.

RAM- bhagwan and pati.? Not the same thing.? Pati parmeshwar types..?

Siya rolls her eyes for his words and looks in front still looking lightly afraid. Ram reads her expressions and keeps his hand on her waist lightly.

SIYA- zor se pakdiye..

Said Siya for which Ram scrunched his eyebrows, looking at her face.

SIYA- I said hold me tight.. mujhe halka sa.. darr lag raha hai..

Siya confessed with her puppy face expressions while Ram giggles at her. He tightens his grip on her, caging her properly in his hold and gave a light kiss on her right cheek.

RAM- don't get afraid.. me hu na..

Siya tilts her face to look at his eyes which were already staring her.

RAM- I love you..

Siya didn't breaks the eyelock and both of them kept on staring each other with a light smile on their face. The four paragliders finally started taking off from the ground with a proper care of the instructors, not moving very high, as they don't allow to go on a huge height now. The paragliders in the air, looked beautiful, with the pinch of their love moving with them, in the air...

*****

After their romantic and soothing paragliding ride, the next destination they were moving towards is Rajmachi fort. It was almost evening, clock showing fifteen past four, the sun moving towards to set down in the west direction. Their bus stops at the parking lot of the fort, a ground for vehicles. Rajmachi fort brings forth some of the greatest architectural ideas belonged to the old centuries and the faultless serenity protecting the fort well. It is one of the most visited historical forts, perched on a rugged hill lying in the Sahyadri Mountain, fully covered by mist, silvery waterfalls, lush green forests dropping the raindrops down every second in the monsoon and appreciably green meadow on all sides. Though the fort is best for trekking, but due to its OFF time at six in the evening, the kids decided to just roam around the beautiful mountain, looking at the scenery.

MANVI- oh gosh.. this person photobombed us Urmi..

Said Manvi sounding irritated, as she shows one of the picture of her with Urmila which they took after their paragliding. Urmila peeed to look into the cellphone, while drinking the water from the bisleri bottle, a random man has interrupted their beautiful selfie from back.

URMILA- can't upload now..

Said Urmila nodding her head lightly while Manvi too agreed to her. They were sitting at a corner of a hill top, doing their random talks, mostly tired because of the day.

SHATRUGHAN- upload se yaad aya.. why did you upload that pic Shruti.?

Shatrughan questioned turning his head towards Shruti who was sitting at a 45 degree of him, beside Bharat.

SHRUTI- which photo.? Mene bohot sari ki hai, tell me exactly which one..

Asked Shruti further, uplifting her one eyebrow.

SHATRUGHAN- the one at Karjat, where I am laughing like a donkey.. look at my face, kitna ajeeb lag raha hai..

Shatrughan complaints for which Shruti smirks looking at the other side.

SHRUTI- badla kehte hai use..

Said Shruti while others giggles at them.

LAKSHMAN- shhuu both of you..

Lakshman had his eyes closed, resting his head on Siya's lap, asking ShruGhan to not fight.

BHARAT- ghar se phone aaya tha kya.?

Asked Bharat looking at everyone when Ram nods his head in agreement.

RAM- afternoon me choti maa ka aaya tha.. let's do a video call at night..

Ram suggested for which everyone nods at him in agreement getting happy. Siya's eyes falls on a distance at a small "chai tapri", with few people sitting on the bench having their tea and chips.

SIYA- chai pini hai.?

Asked Siya turning towards everyone, who motioned their eyes to her first and then at the tea stall.

URMILA- mujhe pini hai..

SHATRUGHAN- me too...

Urmila and Shatrughan readily got agreed while Lakshman too opens his eyes, getting up from Siya's lap.

LAKSHMAN- me three...

Everyone got up from their place, dusting their clothes and started moving towards the tea stall.

RAM- bhaiya sabko chai dena..

Said Ram in a loud, looking at the seller who nods at him in agreement, sitting on the tin bench, while others too settle themselves down.

BHARAT- oye Shatrughan.. go and bring some packets of chips and biscuits..

Bharat ordered him, pointing towards the chips shelf at the corner of the stall having various Lay's, Kurkures, Diamonds, etc etc.

SHATRUGHAN- areh bhaiya..? Abhi to betha hu me..

Said Shatrughan making a face, feeling lazy to get up from the bench and move towards two metres distance.

MANVI- jao na.. take her with you..

Said Manvi giving a pat on Shruti's back for which she shook her head in no.

SHRUTI- me nahi.. send him.. alone..

Said Shruti looking at Shatrughan who unwillingly got up from his place.

SHATRUGHAN- it feels like I am a "chotu" or a "ramu kaka" of our family..

Complains Shatrughan as his siblings always orders him to do everything, while others laughs at his joke.

LAKSHMAN- aate hue chai bhi le aana..

Lakshman said a loud, giving another order to Shatrughan who has already moved towards the stall.

SHATRUGHAN- ji malik.!

Shatrughan acted doing a salutation to Lakshman.

SIYA- nautanki..

Siya lightly shook her head, smiling at Shatrughan. After a moment he returns, having a steel plate carrying eight number of small paper glasses of tea in his one hand and other hand having a strip of five Lay's packets and three Kurkure packets with two krack-jack biscuit packets.

URMILA- why you bought krack-jack.? Mujhe hide-and-seek chahiye..

Urmila said in a demand looking at Shatrughan, who has now handed the plate of tea glasses to Siya.

SHATRUGHAN- nahi hai unke paas bhabs.. have this only..

Shatrughan passed the biscuit to her and distributes the chips packets to everyone.

RAM- areh.. ye to Siya ka favourite flavour hai..

Exclaimed Ram showing her the masala munch flavoured Kurkure.

SIYA- hmm.. I am not sharing it with you.. bhool jayiye..

Said Siya, taking the packet from him while Ram laughs at her kiddish act.

LAKSHMAN- oye hoye.. jannat..

Lakshman closed his eyes for a moment, as he took a sip of the hot and strong tea, feeling relaxed in the calming weather. The FM radio at the tea stall was also giving an immense feel to them as it started tuning beautiful "mausam" and "barish" 70s bollywood songs.

"Kasa kay Pune.? (How's going Pune.?) Bhai aajkal to garmi ke mausam me barish hone lagi hai, har jagah haryali chhane lagi hai, mausam shayrana aur rumana hone laga hai..."

The RJ was going on with her dialogues, defining about the weather in the city, while everyone went silent now, listening to the FM.

"To agar aap hai apne "mmhhmm aahaann" matlab ke apne partner ke saath, to hamare paas hai aapke liye ek bohot hi romantic sa gana, jo sunke aap bol uthenge- yeh mausam ka jadoo hai mitwa..!!.."

The RJ sings one of the line of a song making everyone to smile listening at her.

"To suniye hamare "kaka" ko, aur manayiye apni roothi hui "Sharmila ji", yani ki biwi ko..."

The boys immediately looks at their partners, as in the RJ has been following the on-goings of their lives and has exactly stated their situation in her dialogues. After a moment, the beautiful Rajesh Khanna song started playing and the tea seller turned the knob of the volume to its full...

Hey hey.... Hey hey ....

Ahaa... Hmm hmm....


The girls turns to look at their husbands, leaving their tea in between, who were already staring them now.

Hmm hmm... Ahaa...

Ahaa haa... Haaa....

Ahaaa... Hmm hmm...


Ram and Siya stood near the excitedly flowing water fall, having a calm smile on their face, looking at the white in color water hiting the rock.

Koraa Kaagaz Thaa Ye Man Meraa...

Mera.... Mera...


He turns to face Siya completely while she kept on looking at the waterfall, blinking her eyes lightly, both of them capturing the beauty infront of them in their eyes, Ram capturing Siya and Siya capturing the falling water.

Likh Liyaa Naam Is Pe Teraa...

Teraa... Tera....


Bharat and Manvi started taking rounds near the water fall, Bharat having his hands folded while Manvi having her hands at her back, both looking at the green ground.

Koraa Kaagaz Thaa Ye Man Meraa

Likh Liyaa Naam Is Pe Teraa...


She turns her eyes towards him slowly, watching his smiling face and a smile crept on her lips too, watching Bharat.

Sunaa Aagan Thaa Jivan Meraa

Bas Gayaa Pyaar iss Pe Teraa...


Lakshman settle down on a rock, putting his feet into the cold water. He turns to look at Urmila and forwards his hand for her to hold. She placed her hand on his hand and settled down beside him, similarly putting her feet into the water.

Tut Naa Jaaye Sapane Mai Darataa Hun

Nis Din Sapano Me Dekhaa Karataa Hun...


Shruti throws the stone in the water and it started dancing in a trajectory making her to jump in excitement while Shatrughan watches her from her back, folding his hands having a smile on his face.

Tut Naa Jaaye Sapane Mai Darataa Hun

Nis Din Sapano Me Dekhaa Karataa Hun...


Siya turns to look at Ram after a while and found him already staring at her. Their eyes met, his brown ones with her big deep ones, and they again gets flown into each other.

Nainaa Kajaraare

Matavaare Ye Ishaare...


Bharat and Manvi turns to take another round when Bharat stops himself in between. Manvi turns to look at him in confusion while Bharat smile at her nodding in "nothing".

Khaali Darapan Thaa Ye Man Meraa

Rach Gayaa Rup Is Me Teraa...


Lakshman motioned his face to look at Urmila, who was staring at the setting sun giving a beautiful color of orange plus yellow in the environment. She felt his gaze on her and immediately turns to look at him.

Koraa Kaagaz Thaa Ye Man Meraa

Likh Liyaa Naam Is Pe Teraa...


Shatrughan stood beside Shruti and takes the pebble from her hold while she looks at him. He throws the pebble like her, in the water and smile happily as the pebble dances while Shruti kept on staring him lovingly.

Chain Gavaayaa Maine Nindiyaa Gavaai

Saari Saari Raat Jaagu Dun Mai Duhaai...


Ram took a step near Siya, decreasing the distance between them while Siya's breath automatically slips, making her to turn at other side. Ram slowly slipped his hand in her, holding it tightly while Siya smile at his gesture, still looking straight.

Chain Gavaayaa Maine Nindiyaa Gavaai

Saari Saari Raat Jaagu Dun Mai Duhaai...


Bharat moves towards Manvi and takes her left hand in his hold, staring her with a smile while Manvi blinks her eyes for a moment watching his actions towards her.

Kahun Kyaa Mai Aage

Nehaa Laage Ji Naa Laage...


Lakshman moves closer to Urmila while she automatically motioned her eyelids down, biting her lower lip. Lakshman tucks her hair behind her right ear which was disturbing his sight on her.

Koi Dushaman Thaa Ye Man Meraa

Ban Gayaa Mit Jaa Ke Teraa...


Shatrughan turns to look at Shruti and moves closer to her while Shruti took a step back heaving a deep sigh, playing her fingers with each other.

Koraa Kaagaz Thaa Ye Man Meraa

Likh Liyaa Naam Is Pe Teraa...


Manvi moves a step closer to Bharat while he wraps his right hand around her shoulders, pulling her lightly towards him.

Baago Me Phulo Ke Khilane Se Pahale...


Manvi found him smiling at her while she could not resist her more to revert a smile at him, and she did by staring right into his eyes.

Tere Mere Naino Ke Milane Se Pahale...


Lakshman slides his one hand on Urmila's waist from back, pulling her towards him to erase the distance between them.

Haaa... Baago Me Phulo Ke Khilane Se Pahale...


Urmila took a deep breath with his gentle touch on her body. She blinks her eyes for a moment and slowly rests her head on his shoulder.

Tere Mere Naino Ke Milane Se Pahale...


Shatrughan holds Shruti's both hands and wraps them on his right arm, asking her to hold him with his pleading eyes.

Kahaan thi Ye Baate...


She immediately followed his request, not wanting to deny him, melting in his requesting eyes.

Mulaakaate...


Shatrughan smile at her and Shruti moves a bit closer to him having a shy smile on her face, staring his both the emotion full eyes.

Aisi Raate...


Ram takes Siya's hands near his lips and give a loud kiss on the back of her both the hands, after which he looks at her face.

Tutaa Taaraa Thaa Ye Man Meraa...


Siya closed her eyes, totally feeling his touch on her skin, having a satisfied smile crept on her lips.

Ban Gayaa Chaad Hoke Teraa...


Ram pulls her closer to him with a light jerk and Siya opens her eyes looking at him.

Koraa Kaagaz Thaa Ye Man Meraa...


She rests her head on his chest, placing her hand near his heart while Ram wraps her with his arms, both of them having a sweet smile on their face.

Likh Liyaa Naam Is Pe... Teraa...


The darkness in the sky was about to take a rise, as the sun was almost bidding adieu. The couples silently went into their bus, no talking, no jokes, no teasing, just the beautiful silence of the beautiful time they spent together.

Aahaa...

Ha ha haaa...

Hoo...

Ohooo..!!!

*****

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No, I am not getting emotional, nor I am crying 🥺🥺

It's just the soothing feeling of the love which has made all of us to flow in their beautiful journey ❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Do drop your precious comments 🤗

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Song: "Kora Kagaz Tha Yeh Mann Mera" Aradhana (1969 movie)

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Posted: 4 years ago

Okkk ... So right now my heart is full of a very different emotion at this particular moment after reading such a pure, soothing and serene love of the couples and I can't pinpoint the exact emotion which I am having... But whatever it is its soothing and heartwarming feeling❤️❤️❤️....

So , starting from the beginning....

Like any other mother, Kranti too find his kids handsome but when she said that Girls are looking Hot... My eyes popped out of the socket...like really Kranti used that particular word😉😉..and kya comparison kiya h Kranti ne apne beto ka bilkul sahi heroes ko choose kiya h ... Kranti abhi apne grandchildren ke baare m soch soch kr itni khush ho rhi h to....... well Sumitra is right , like of these eight , she is going to be friend of her grandchildren too...well really nazar utarne ki bahut zyada zaroorat hai especially Ram Siya ki kyunki Ram par ek bahut buri nazar already padd chuki h😕😕😕... But haan neembu mirchi ki jagah Lakshman Shatrughan ko bandh dein Ram ke saath vaise hi har nazar ko ukhad denge😂😂..

Waah waah kya baat hai ek to Lakshman itna acha song gaa raha tha usme bhi usko Urmila ne shoo kr ke bhaga diya 😂😂... Bharat seriously iss trip ko bahut hi yaadgaar banana chahta h tabhi to pal m romantic baatein kr rha tha aur ab agle pal hi veer tum bade chalo as if he is on for a mission 😂😂.. Awww Bechara Ram uski Siya ke saath usko chodd baki sab flirt krte hain🤣🤣...aur kya explanation ki lines chali h dono taraf se ...

Haaye itni Romantic paragliding ho to log bina daare hazar baar krenge 😝😝🤭🤭... Well Paragliding ka to apna hi mazedaar experience hota hai aur yahan to inn ladko ne usse kuch zyadaaaaa hi memorable banna diya🤭🤭...

Seriously Shatrughan apne aap ko chotu bola🤣🤣.. vese chote hone ka sabse bada nuksaan h ye har kaam karna padta h😭.. but I swear Shatrughan se bada dramebaaz koi na hai..

Bhai aaj to vo line sach hogai ki jab bhi tumne kisi cheez ko paane ki siddhat se koshish ki h to poori kayamat ne tumhe vo dilane ke saazish ki h... Tabhi to Rj ne bhi kya sahi time kya sahi bola h...

And on the moments of the couples I remember one very good poem..

In your arms,

I'm in my safe haven.

With you holding me tight,

I have no other craving.


All I need

is that one look

that says you're always there,

just like in a fairy tale book.


Your eyes talk to me

as the world stands still.

My once empty heart

now with love does fill.


Your eyes tell me

that you'll love me every day.

No matter what may come,

you'll be there to stay.


I tell you everything

and never with a lie:

all my worldly secrets

and everything that once made me cry.


Everything in my past,

with you I can forget it all.

I know I can trust you

to catch me if I fall.


If only I could explain

how much love I have for you.

Then maybe, just maybe,

you'd feel it too...


Well all together it was superb......

Eagerly waiting for the next part 🥺🥺🥺🥺

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Posted: 4 years ago

I have become Kranti today! Kisi ke nazar na laag jaye inn couples ko!

This update is mixture of cuteness and calmness. Also loved the fun conversation among the eight. Kranti and Sumitra sequence- that sisterly bond was a good start for the update truely. Guessing on Shatrughan's song was so funny, especially apna Bharat bhaiya ka guess LOL! Manvi's exclamanation on it could be 'sarfaroshi ki tamnna' 🤣 Ram and Siya ka SKR wala scene banter is ❤️

Loved the paragliding sequence. Loved how Shruti stopped Shatrughan saying "ashubh" things, loved Lakshman's kiss on Urmila's palm, loved Bharat surprising Manvi telling that he is not scared of anything (except her 🤪), loved Siya and Ram's 'Ram Ram' scene! The sequences brought smile as well as filled with cuteness.

Then the fort scene, the afternoon and setting sun, with the song... it was really soothing, calm, and emotional. We can say the sequence was serene! Good job on adding the radio thing in this scene 👏

Kitne cute updates ke sath aati hein app haar roz! Will wait for next. Thank you for pm! 💜

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Posted: 4 years ago

Yes, I am not crying, I am just having tears of happiness in my eyes, with a bit of fearness that inko sachme nazar lagne wali he. Kranti and Sumitra's scene was so so beautiful. The excitement in Kranti's voice for her grandchildren, the happiness to witness all eight of her kids very much in love, the fear of kisiki nazar lag jayegi. So emotional, so beautiful.

Then these eight, I want this family that's it. I don't know I am ready to be a chotu or ramu kaka too but I want this family. The three brothers flirting siya is always cute and Ram getting jealous omg so cute. Khandala me aye aur ye song na gaye aisa kaise hoga. Husband vs wife ka banter was super cute. And then the paragliding, me has padi when you said ki itna sporting nahi hota, like literally wo instructors aise hi bolte he, it was so real. Let me tell other readers ki Saumya ne waise ka waise scene likha he jaisa waha hota he. Aur charo ka I love you se to ladkiyan aur bhi pighal gayi.

Rajmachi pe koi song na ho aisa thodi hoga. Aur kya song choose kiya he. Chai tapri and radio wala scene bhi is so real. Fighting for chips and biscuits was too sweet. Yar I am in love with this track. Let's give a big round of applause to Saumya guys. She is doing a great job.

Love,

Sammy

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Posted: 4 years ago
romantic update tha .... kranti apne baccho ki kitni tarrif karti hai ... sumitra aur kranti ke bonding bahot acchi hai cute sisters ❤❤ kya maja kiya hai in logo ne lonavala .... e kya bolti tu ❤❤ hathi ka anda la 😂😂 ram ki he wife mili thi tumhe shatrughan ha ..... bharat to sirf manvi se darta hai baki sub se kaha darta hai .. ye lakshman to romantic king ban chuka hai hamesha mila ke sath flirt he karta hai ... shatrughan aur shruti bhi cute hai lovy dovy couple ... ram ram ram ram siya ne bhagwan ka nam liya but uske pati parmeshwar ko laga ki unka nam liya wow 😂😂 chotu and ramu bichara shatrughan servant bana diya ... waise jo biscuit urmila ka favorite wo muze bhi pasnd hai same choice ... bapre song kitna romantic tha o my god ... scene bhui romantic the ab aage story padhe ka wait nahi ho raha .. Update soon 💗💗❤❤
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Posted: 4 years ago

Loved it dear Saumya

Awesome and beautiful part🤗🤗

Lo je Kranti was over excited after seeing the pictures of trip of lonavla 😁

Hmm 🙄🙄 I loved how Sumitra & Kranti were behaving like typical mother👩

Coming to Trip it is getting more & more interesting & romantic too ☺

I loved the paragliding scene where all the 4 couples were close & Siya ka ram ram Ratna & then Ram ka pati parmeshwar wala comment was too cute 🤭🤭

Last cherry on the cake was kora kagaz tha ye mann mera 🤗🤗🤗 it was beautiful with sweet mausam & romantic Aimbence

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon😊

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