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Posted: 4 years ago

Conditional Offers.

Loved the khincha tani between Viveka and Raanav for the t-shirt Viveka was wearing.

Viveka is trying to explain why she cares about Naina. Raanav told her that he does not care about her sister but wants her(Viv) in bed every night.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Thoughts & Talk

He returned ofcourse in 15 minutes wheeling a hotel hanger rod with a bunch of her clothes

Gentlemanly?

Yes

Arrogant?

HELL YES

“Where did you find them?” she mumbled looking up from her journal

He didn’t tell her

He was still wearing the shirt she had been for three hours

“Has the crew left for the day?” she asked

He nodded checking his phone

“Thanks, I will just change in the bathroom”

“They’ve taped it up”

“Oh?” “Umm”

“I can show you a couple bathrooms you can use”

“Ek second”

She got up wearing the sheet like a toga

She picked out a lovely outfit in parrot green and orange pants

“See u in the atrium in 10” he said leaving her

“Raat ko tumhe kisi aur room mein sona hai?”

“Nope… this is fine” he said firmly

“Umm”

She showed up in the atrium

Satyen was talking to Rajeev,

“Good to see you” he smiled joyously

“I know… its been so long” she accepted the handshake

Raanav was busy chatting with two guys

“Beta, kidhar the aap?”

“I returned from my parents earlier in the afternoon”

“Kamra to band hai aapka?”

“The music production room was open”

“Oh? Really? Raanav ne arrange kiya hoga… par raat ko upar kaafi kamre hain waha so jao”

“Jee”

“Kya hua?”

“Nothing”

“Rajeev give us a minute beta” “You must go eat” “Beta suno” he waved a help

“Jee sir, Bhabhi ke liye aur Rajeev ke liye khana lagao”

“Jee jee sirjee”

Raajev started chatting with another coworker

“Beta batao” Satyen tapped her hand

“I am great, I spent the day tallying the books for the Maurya event, we did better than we thought but not as great as some others”

“Aapne Mr Nahar se baat ki, koi Middle Eastern charity hai who koi NGO se connection karne ki soch rahe hain

They talked about it for an hour

“How is Raanav?”

“Umm.. fine? I guess?” She was taken aback

“Did he go pick you up?”

“Umm.. he came by yesterday kal ghar par koi aaye the”

“u sent him home empty handed”

“Somewhat like that” she nodded with a smile

Satyen looked at raanav who was bendt over some papers trying to understand something one guy was saying

“I am not following sorry”

Satyen sighed… and bent his head

Viveka did not ask or say anything about the falling out

Not her wheelhouse

“Mom kidhar hain?” Viveka asked quietly

She spent a week slumming in Nasik… kidhar gayin hongi?”

“Oh”

“U should go with her”

“Jee”

“I like the fact that you are very careful with your words”

Satyen laughed

“I am honest”

“U need to be with that man over there” Satyen waved at Raanav

Raanav was not looking

“Your honesty and forthrightness will help him. It will erode the negativity and cynicism bit by bit” he sighed

Viveka shifted uneasy

“Rakshit abhi wahin hain?” Viveka dug into the delicious Rajasthani spread

“haan nayi shaadi hui hai”

“Hmm” she didn’t look up from her plate

Satyen realized that the younger couple did not show any public displays of affection, nor frequently took off on private vacations, did not fondle each other in public

It bothered him

But he was too discreet to question

“Aap log kaha ja rahe ho next”

“Umm.. kahin nahi” she smiled shrugging “Kyon?”

She was confused

“You married the same day if I may remind you”

“Hmm” she nodded

“U don’t have to think about everything beta”

“I am unable to go away frequently umm.. D..Dad”

“Jaanta hoon, you cannot be a elite wealthy person that cares for the poor between nail and spa appointments” he laughed

“Is liye meri parlor waali Rohini parents keg har aa jaati hai Sunday ko”

“Aisi baat hai kya?”

She smiled

There was a striking innocence in that mature head Satyen realized

“Dad aapko Naina ke baare mein maloom hai”

“Jaanta hoon beta”

“Is Mom upset?” she asked nervously

“U should not worry about her…. If she notices traffic heavier than usual at 8 AM rush hour it upsets her” he laughed it off

“Umm”

“Naina aura ap alag individuals ho”

“Jee” she nodded

“Just like Nupur ? Mami huin na aapki? Nupur Mami aur Smrita”

“You have my unwavering love and affection AND you will have Smrita’s” he said firmly

“Thank yu”

“Apne husband ko zara aap soch samajhkar affection dein” his eyes twinkled

“Got it” she smiled mischievously

“You might not want to ask me this, but yes we are not on speaking terms”

“Is… is it about me?”

“waqt aane par bata denge aapko, aap khaana khao…. Vacation plan karo, main aapke NGO office chala jaaonga ek hafte” he promised

“raajeev” he called out

“Sir?”

“Block my calendar out for a week when Raanav and Viveka leave for a vacation I will work from Shahpur Jat

“sure sir”

“You have my word beta”

Smrita went upstairs after her spa appointment and ate in their private dining area adjacent to her bedroom

Viveka went to bed as everyone seemed to be working in the atrium

She felt Raanav behind her around 11

He gently turned her and climbed over

“I don’t want to talk Viveka” he said kissing her neck

Long agonizingly delicious foreplay followed by slow burn release interlaced with growls and moans…and an hour later

He held her tight in his arms as he fell asleep on top of her

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Posted: 4 years ago

This was soothing update.

Things will fall in place eventually kinda.

Satyen is indeed a thoughtful and nice man.

He is gifting his son something which Ranaav himself wouldn't have successfully convinced Viveka for. That too when he is upset with his son. He wants this to work more than these two it seems. Viveka, i do want you to open up about this relationship. Stop being skeptical and scared. Give the man a chance. He does love you.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Thoughts and talk

Satyen saw that Raanav and Viveka did not show PDA or go away on a private vacation. He told Viveka to take time off and go away with Raanav. He reassured her that he will take care of her NGO when they are away.

Viveka is still worrying about Naina and asked Satyen if he knew about Naina and are they ie he and Smriti upset about it? Satyen told her not to worry about that but concentrate on her own husband.

Thank you Nisha for the update.

Edited by Eastender - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Yayyyy! Satyen is back!! ♥️


I love how frankly Satyen and Viveka can converse.. also love how he draws her out inspite of her reticence in involving with the family! After Aakash, it is Satyen giving her some priceless advice..

To offer to take care of his DiL's fledgling NGO inspite of the schedule a man like him might have... it shows what priority he gives to his family! 😊

And a sharp negotiator no less, he soothed her concerns so casually all the while helping out the son he's admittedly annoyed with! 👏


But I think even Satyen is too optimistic to think Viveka will ever have Smrita's affection! 😒

Speaking of which, did the aliens abduct Smrita? 😲What's wrong with her? Why is she being so tame on the Naina issue? I can't digest the fact that she's let the Mathurs, Viveka included, off the hook so easy!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hey Nisha, @Bluesky says hello to you and everyone here.

Passing on her regards and good wishes to all folks out here.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Figuring it out

“How can you not talk to your own child”

“Its not ME”

“Phir usnea apse baat karne ko mana kar diya?” Smrita was upset

“I asked him tough questions. Am I not entitled to ask?”

“I didn’t say that Satya”

“Viren is saying Inder hung out with Rakshit and Raanav all the time, yeh harqat usne in dono ki wajah se ki hai”

“How can he say that” Smrita suddenly hated on Viren

“Aap poochho”

“And u decided to shun Raanav?”

“raanav has been giving you encouragement he has been your ally. Pata nahi kab shuru hui yeh baat I don’t know when the grooming began but he is who he is today because of you”

“Rakshit and I go on vacations, Raanav has not been anywhere with me”

“He did not insult or ridicule middle class people sure he might harbor such opinions in private”

“This is not a very mature way to deal with your kids” Smrita paced the balcony

“I AM immature?” Pata nahi kya kaha Raanav ne Naina se in defiance she started hanging out more with Inder went off on trips with him., They have a different set of values”

“Raanav said EXACTLY that to Inder” Smrita was gleeful

“Naina is an adult she should have known better I agree… INDER too… but Raanav has never concealed his scorn for people less wealthy”

“He MARRIED Viveka”

“Haan IS BAAT ka explanation mere paas bhi nahi hai” Satyen was stumped

“ You are willing to blame my son you are not willing to say “Viveka is responsible too”

“Have you interacted with her except for blowing air kisses?” She will not even talk to us if she is not part of this family. That girl is so secure”

“Sab… umm.. umm” Smrita mumbled

“Sab? Kya? Sab aise hi dikhawa karte hain?”

“They both like each other so what?”

“Her sister’s life is messed up and our family had a part to play in it”

“Aap INDER par chillayen Satya, WHY Raanav”

“Because I detect a systemic problem in the way ideas have been planted in his head”

“Then yell at Rakshit also”

“If Lekha Tandon had a sister and if Lekha Tandon was a middle class girl, If Lekha Tandon’s middle class sister had pulled such a stunt breaking her father’s heart I WOULD HAVE”

Satyen sighed

“Kal Akash ji aur main mil rahe hain lunch par, he is a self respecting successful proud man… I don’t want to see him hurting”

“Well he is not groveling” Smrita was flippant

“Aap chahti ho? Viren ke pair padhen?”

“Arey that hirl has told Inder he can f--- off”

“She did good” Satyen nodded

“A girl of class and wealth would never do it”

“You yourself told me Viren dumped three girls before marrying Nupur”

Smrita huffed

“Wealth has nothing to do with character”

“Oh please aap MUJHE samjha rahe ho… the Mathur girls need to know”

“GIRLS?” “Aapne girls kaha?”

“I meant GIRL”

“You don’t like respect or love Viveka” Satyen stared at her in shock

“I am fine with Raanav’s choice

“Lowest bar huh?”

Raanav appeared in the doorway as the help was setting up breakfast in the lounge off the upstairs master bedroom

“Hmmm?”

“I cant go to Singapore next week I need to go back to Law School to validate something for license renewal”

“London ja rahe ho” Smria sprinted… hugging him affectedly and kissing both his cheeks

He had actually grabbed Viveka out of the upstairs shower and planted a bunch of kisses

Her mocha lipstick was smudged on the corner of his lower lip

They had actually not said a WORD to each other since last night

He had shown her the upstairs bathroom this morning and waited outside and ambushed her

They hungered for each other physically. He wondered how long it might be before she dumped him and walked away, he figured he would…

“I am going to totally move into her Rohini apartment and annoy the f--- out of her”

“Or show up at her book reads and kavi sammilan… or whatever at those crowded Munirka and NOIDA terraces, and fight my way through the smoke filled crowd and grab her and walk off”

He had held her face in his hands, water dripping off her hair in the back

“Can I get a good morning kiss?” he muttered, her chin started to quiver and he felt her control breaking

“Its not THAT kind of marriage” she said coolly

“Ah” and he had begun kissing her

He would have been totally OK taking the morning off and bringing her to the bed in that upstairs bedroom locking the door and just flushing the anger he felt for his Dad out of his system by making slow purposeful love

Smart, spunky, intelligent, way more educated than he was, she didn’t give a rip about anything he took pride in

“I am going to book both our tickets” Smrita stepped back assessing her son’s passion stamped face

“I will do a an over night Mum”

“Nahi ek hafta spend karke aayenge, I will ask Sid and Nupur to join us” Smrita clapped like a teen

“If u cannot go this week can you go next week? Or can u go to Norway to meet that installation partner?”

“I don’t know…”

“Figure it out… make a vacation out of it, take three weeks, someone owes me vacation plans”

“Mujhe keh rahe ho aap?” Smrita was gurgling with joy

“No his wife” Satyen barely glanced at his son

“I am not sure she can go” Raanav was butt hurt by his Dad’s coldness

“Figure it out” Satyen let out a brittle laugh

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Posted: 4 years ago

I am glad Satyen is not giving up for Smrita or anyone and has been pushing hard to right the wrong. Smrita is impossible. How can she act like Raanav is 3 year old still? She wants to go with him on vacation when he is married and had barely spent time with his wife. She wants to go..AMAZING! Raanav..what’s wrong with him. On one side he is deeply in love with Vi and on the other he is conflicting his own feelings with actions that are completely driven by his ego and ideaology instilled by his mother..

raanav has to acknowledge Naina’s issue irrespective of how it turned out..based on what Satyen is saying..Viren too feels Raanav and Rakshit is also responsible..not sure what the solution is but he has to support his wife and stand by her feelings to begin with.

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Posted: 4 years ago

What I'm as a readers can figure out from this update is Raanav is desperate to be with viveka even if she dumps him.Viveka its ur turn to realise and verbalize what u feel for him,its high time they start living the life they deserve

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Posted: 4 years ago

“Can I get a good morning kiss?” he muttered, her chin started to quiver and he felt her control breaking

“Its not THAT kind of marriage” she said coolly


Really? What kind of marriage do you think it is Viveka?

Ranaav is at fault for his attitude in general against anyone who isn't ultra rich like him, maybe.

But Viveka are you right in the way you are dealing with this?

Edited by PriteeMisra - 4 years ago

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