Beta Readers #1 Note Pg 3/10/12/15/17 - Page 8

Name of the Fiction: Forced to be Yours

Type of the Fiction (FF/SS/OS): FF

Word Count (approx.): 1100

Reader’s Age Group (U/13+/16+/18+): All

Genre: Romance

Trigger Warnings swear-words

Specify Death-of-a-Character/medical-illness: None

The extent of Trigger warnings mentioned above (Just mention/light/moderate/heavy): light

Hello Writers!

It is with great pleasure that we announce during the month of June, the Fan Fiction Development Team would be taking the initiative to celebrate Pride in all its facets. Stories focusing on LGBTQ+ subject matters will be the top priority for the Beta Readers.

As such, we request you to be patient with us as we will edit your regular works, but it will take us longer.

We also request you to kindly mention if the story you are posting will be a submission for Spread the Love with Pride, so that it a Beta Reader can start to work on it ASAP.

Please note that if you are sending in multiple submissions for Spread the Love with Pride for featuring in the month of June, you need not wait for the requisite seven days to get your next story beta read after a story has been worked on. You can send in your next story once and ONLY when your previous request has been completed, since we cannot afford to wait for seven days. But this applies ONLY for stories with LGBTQ+ subjects and not heterosexual couples or stories that don't meet the criteria to be featured in June.

Also, if your LGBTQ+ story has multiple chapters, send in all the chapters in one PM or under the same title, so that only one beta reader works on them. This way we can ensure that consistency is maintained, and there is no disturbance in the flow of the story.

Apologies for any inconvenience this may have caused.

If you're interested in writing about the LGBTQ+ community and wish to have your story featured in the month of June, then please check out the following link:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/5225707/spread-the-love-with-pride-story-submission-faq-pg-14

Stay safe, take care, and keep writing!

IF-Beta Readers

Name of the Fiction: Nervous Attraction

Type of the Fiction (FF/SS/OS): OS

Word Count (approx.): 797

Reader’s Age Group (U/13+/16+/18+): U

Genre: Trigger Warnings (violence/trauma/molestation/domestic-violence/kidnapping/crimes-against-women/suicide-ideation/self-harm/mental-health-issues/swear-words/abuse/slight-reference-to r*pe/miscarriage/prostitution/drugs/trafficking/gore/others please specify): None

Specify Death-of-a-Character/medical-illness: None

The extent of Trigger warnings mentioned above (Just mention/light/moderate/heavy): Nothing

Send the Chapter

And also I had this query as the requisite period of time to wait before a piece is Beta-ed is 7 days so then, even the submissions for the Pride Month will have to undergo the same process then?😳

Name of the Fiction: A Shark and a goldfish chapter four (edited)

Type of the Fiction (FF/SS/OS): FF

Reader’s Age Group (U/13+/16+/18+): for all age group

Genre: Trigger Warnings (violence/trauma/molestation/domestic-violence/kidnapping/crimes-against-women/suicide-ideation/self-harm/mental-health-issues/swear-words/abuse/slight-reference-to r*pe/miscarriage/prostitution/drugs/trafficking/gore/others please specify): NA

Specify Death-of-a-Character/medical-illness: NA

The extent of Trigger warnings mentioned above (Just mention/light/moderate/heavy): NA

Originally posted by: Amphitrite

Name of the Fiction: Nervous Attraction

Type of the Fiction (FF/SS/OS): OS

Word Count (approx.): 797

Reader’s Age Group (U/13+/16+/18+): U

Genre: Trigger Warnings (violence/trauma/molestation/domestic-violence/kidnapping/crimes-against-women/suicide-ideation/self-harm/mental-health-issues/swear-words/abuse/slight-reference-to r*pe/miscarriage/prostitution/drugs/trafficking/gore/others please specify): None

Specify Death-of-a-Character/medical-illness: None

The extent of Trigger warnings mentioned above (Just mention/light/moderate/heavy): Nothing

Send the Chapter

And also I had this query as the requisite period of time to wait before a piece is Beta-ed is 7 days so then, even the submissions for the Pride Month will have to undergo the same process then?😳

Taking

Name of the Fiction: Crash Landing on you https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/1373

Type of the Fiction (FF/SS/OS): 2 Shots

Word Count (approx.): 2013

Reader’s Age Group (U/13+/16+/18+): 16+

Genre: LGBTQ+ Romance [M/M]

Genre: Trigger Warnings (violence/trauma/molestation/domestic-violence/kidnapping/crimes-against-women/suicide-ideation/self-harm/mental-health-issues/swear-words/abuse/slight-reference-to r*pe/miscarriage/prostitution/drugs/trafficking/gore/others please specify): Clear

Specify Death-of-a-Character/medical-illness: Clear

The extent of Trigger warnings mentioned above (Just mention/light/moderate/heavy): Nothing

Name of the Fiction: Lights Camera Kiss me (Chapter 12)

Type of the Fiction (FF/SS/OS): FF

Reader’s Age Group (U/13+/16+/18+): for all age group

Genre: Trigger Warnings (violence/trauma/molestation/domestic-violence/kidnapping/crimes-against-women/suicide-ideation/self-harm/mental-health-issues/swear-words/abuse/slight-reference-to r*pe/miscarriage/prostitution/drugs/trafficking/gore/others please specify): NA

Specify Death-of-a-Character/medical-illness: NA

The extent of Trigger warnings mentioned above (Just mention/light/moderate/heavy): NA

Originally posted by: Koeli

Name of the Fiction: Crash Landing on you https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/1373

Type of the Fiction (FF/SS/OS): 2 Shots

Word Count (approx.): 2013

Reader’s Age Group (U/13+/16+/18+): 16+

Genre: LGBTQ+ Romance [M/M]

Genre: Trigger Warnings (violence/trauma/molestation/domestic-violence/kidnapping/crimes-against-women/suicide-ideation/self-harm/mental-health-issues/swear-words/abuse/slight-reference-to r*pe/miscarriage/prostitution/drugs/trafficking/gore/others please specify): Clear

Specify Death-of-a-Character/medical-illness: Clear

The extent of Trigger warnings mentioned above (Just mention/light/moderate/heavy): Nothing

Taking

Originally posted by: Serpensortia

Name of the Fiction: Lights Camera Kiss me (Chapter 12)

Type of the Fiction (FF/SS/OS): FF

Reader’s Age Group (U/13+/16+/18+): for all age group

Genre: Trigger Warnings (violence/trauma/molestation/domestic-violence/kidnapping/crimes-against-women/suicide-ideation/self-harm/mental-health-issues/swear-words/abuse/slight-reference-to r*pe/miscarriage/prostitution/drugs/trafficking/gore/others please specify): NA

Specify Death-of-a-Character/medical-illness: NA

The extent of Trigger warnings mentioned above (Just mention/light/moderate/heavy): NA

Taking 😳

Name of the Fiction: You are my Second Chance

Type of the Fiction (FF/SS/OS): Two Shots+Epilogue

Word Count (approx.): 2400

Reader’s Age Group (U/13+/16+/18+): 16+

Genre: Trigger Warnings (violence/trauma/molestation/domestic-violence/kidnapping/crimes-against-women/suicide-ideation/self-harm/mental-health-issues/swear-words/abuse/slight-reference-to r*pe/miscarriage/prostitution/drugs/trafficking/gore/others please specify): Light Swearing; Mentions of Panic Attack, Mentions of Divorce, Mentions of Infidelity, Mentions of Sex.

Specify Death-of-a-Character/medical-illness:None

The extent of Trigger warnings mentioned above (Just mention/light/moderate/heavy): Moderate

I am sending in the whole story because I need an opinion on the full story as a whole and it will be easier fro one person to judge. Please focus on the flow, the reactions and teh emotions of the characters and the overall structure of the story. Thank you in advance.