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Posted: 4 years ago

Hello & a goodbye

Smrita stayed back and ordered the newly weds to return home, for being the shy quiet one Rakshit rather enjoyed the limelight at the hospital

Posing multiple times with his bride

“Who pink lehenga mein movie star hai kya koi?”

“Bollywood ki lagti hai shaayad”

“Who beemar pade hain shaayad ooopar yeh dono bete dikhte hain”

“Lal saree mein hai doosri bahu, teacher dikhti hai” Viveka heard that and chuckled

“spot on… full prize for guessing” she smiled to herself

Everything had happened so suddenly she didn’t have time to miss her room or her bookshelves or her stacks of journals and articles piled in the corner

She drew comfort from the fact that they were only 20 kms away and she could take a Metro up to Rohini

Raanav and Rakshit promised to return after changing so Smrita could get some rest

She had been up the whole night making arrangements to host the 50 odd people

Rhea arrived at the Parashar home when they were in the hospital

Stayed for an hour and left to return home to NOIDA, she had two little ones

He had showered and changed after returning from the hospital, and was picking out his clothes to go back again so his Mom could return home

The home was centrally heated, the vent in the walk in closet blowing warm air, was the coziest place for Viveka she curled up in the chair

Wearing a purple bandhini salwar and a orange khadi kurta, bent over her journal article, her legs over the arm rest

When he walked into the closet after the shower he found her there, changed out of her saree and just lounging

“Hiding?” he wondered

“Nahi yaha par heat soothing hai, its so cold and foggy outside” she stared out the window, missing Ma and papa

Feeling a rush of emotion, she bend down resuming her reading

It was a large quiet house, you didn’t even hear footsteps

She wondered what Lekha Tandon was doing now

The helped appeared in the doorway as Viveka sat up straight “Sir Ma’am ne kaha khana khakar jao ap”

“Is Ma’am ne?” he joked softly turning to Viveka

It was rough at home, both boys were married but no sign of Satyen, Smrita was not her usual chirpy nagging self, she was only seen passing through the courtyard as she headed to the hospital or returned from it

It was wedding day and the home was still as a pond.

“Nahi Sir is Ma’am se baat nahi ho paayi” the help was shy

Viveka stood up and said namaste

“Ma’am aap baitho, khaana khaogey”

“Umm.. 7 baje?” she asked shocked

“Sir to jaldi khaate hain, bahar log jaldi khaate hai na”

Raanav buttoned his Vineyard Vines blue twill check shirt, and tucked it into his pants

He was always well turned out she noticed guiltily, stealing glances

He noticed her staring with his side eye

“Main chai pee sakti hoon, main bana sakti hoon”

“Arey nahi Ma’am kitchen mein koi nahi jaata hai” the help told her

“okkkk” Viveka sighed to herself

“Aap school mein sikhaate ho? Jagatji boley” he mumbled laying the plate for Raanav in the bedroom seating area

“Haan… par abhi padh rahi hoon” she couldn’t lie, she wasn’t exactly a Lecturer now

“Bhayya to vaqeel hain” it was the same help from that peanut episode day, and he seemed rather proud about that she thought, amused, he appeared more confident today having a formal connection to Viveka now

“Suna to hai” she chuckled

Raanav heard that

“Aap bhi kha lo jab taq bana loon?” the help offered

“Umm.. main wait kar leti hoon” she nodded sitting down on the comfy mid century whitesofa

“Jee Ma’am”

“Aap bas mujhe Viveka kaho” she she offered

She worked with 10 craftspeople now, she couldn’t bear to hear them address her as Ma’am

There was nothing Ma’am about her

Really…

“Aapka naam kya hai?”

“Mahesh” he said enthusiastically

Raanav sat down to eat after his shave

The help left after serving the first portions

“Did u just sat suna hai?” “For me being a lawyer?” he laughed turning to her his eyes twinkling

“I did” she smiled

“That proud huh?” he mocked

She giggled

“Can I go with you, I am just reading here”

He paused turning serious

Yeah they were not typical newly weds necking each other in bed or over clattering dinner plates

A parent was in the hospital fighting for his life

“Umm.. no, just relax”

“I promise not to bring my mechanical train or legos or spread it all over” she teased

He turned to her again and smiled

They both stared at each other

“I like the henna on your hand” he said as he watched her push her glasses up

She was leaning on the arm rest while her legs were up in crouching position, hugging her folded legs as she watched him eat

“Oh mehendi?”

“Hmm” he nodded

“Ur Mom never got any?” Viveka blurted

“She doesn’t like it” he said quietly

“I even got some on my feet”

She gently pinched the salwar up and he saw it go right up to her ankle

“Nice”

He didn’t touch or feel

She let go gently

“I am not teaching anymore, I can be at the hospital during the day starting tomorrow” she offered quietly

“Want the husband to get on the job huh?” he laughed chewing

“Umm.. nahi… mera matlab, I am I can do it, I have to be at JNU at 3”

“Mom should be home tonight, will check with Rakshit we might take turns, I will get home at 2 and he can be there until 10, then Mamaji or Chachu can visit. I don’t like to be away” he said sighing

“Is your Chachi Bengali”

“Hmm” he nodded

He served himself another roti

“Kalyani is so gorgeous”

“You must have some sort of a deal to praise each other” he laughed

“Oh?” she turned a deep red

He turned to look at her after a few seconds

Her kundan set was gone, so were the matching bangles, she just wore the black beads around her neck and the bracelet. She hadn’t worn the ruby-diamond choker Smrita had handed to her

“I will go see my parents tomorrow in the evening” she said breaking the intense gaze

He turned and began eating

She held her breath

“Its fine right?”

“U must be kidding, it feels like you are asking for permission” he growled

“Umm.. nahi… haan shaayad” she admitted

“You can step out of the closet too….. tomorrow” he taunted, urging her to get out and explore the house.

“You saw me hugging Rhea?” she cracked herself up at the “closet” joke

He turned to her and began to laugh

“That would for sure throw a spanner in the works of my plan to indulge in many lurid erotic acts with you” he said without batting an eyelid losing his smile

She let out a screechy whimper followed by a gasp she was sure

He was undeniably hot, and direct

She lost the staring contest right about the time her chai appeared

“Aapke ghar se jo mithai aayi hai who laaye” Mahesh said

“Oh?” her eyes lit up, as if Mahesh had brought her parents photo

She stared at the plate of besan laddoos Ma Bua and Dadi had cooked up in the Rohini kitchen

There was not much time for anything else

And then the namkeen paarey/matar

She dipped one in her chai and sucked on it, as Mahesh left, he finished up his meal and went in to brush his teeth before heading out

Commenting “This even smells like my home” she chuckled feeling emotional, biting into more namkeen

He was approaching as she set her cup down after the first sip it clattered on the saucer, spilling over

She gulped backing away, the molten sensuality of his gaze, he traced the collar of her khadi kurta as she watched it happen in slow motion. She gasped as she felt the stroke of his thumb across the collar and seam. She smelled toothpaste in his breath, fresh clean and crisp like him

“Nice shirt BTW” she whispered

“thanks” he nodded not pulling her off her crouched position or grabbing her

Just bent over her, the power dynamics between them whipping up a whole new sensuality

Her mouth released a thready moan, as she felt his lips trace her jaw

“I “

Hot, violent sensation tumbled through her body

He pulled himself up.

“Sleep tight” he wished/ exhaled audibly

Walking away

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil

I never wanted a perfect lead. Viveka herself has many flaws I did not mention it.


@bold how so? she wanted to marry cause he proposed and she realized she loves him too. since when asking for equality and informing insecurity is a condition? she wants to love his family and wants the same for hers too. but he dont want to, its all about his feelings and what he wants. now he has another reason, his dad. that was just disrespectful.



i apologize if i came across harsh in my reply. it wont be repeated.

Hey NOT AT ALL😃

I dont mind you questioning. I write from a vantage point of How *I* see every character

How it comes across is all on the readers. As readers you have the absolute privilege to like love or hate anything. I am not a professional writer...... though at this point I have probably written more than most of them combined just in sheer quantity of course🤣


I write for fun, to unwind after life's many stressful chaotic or plain boring days.

I dont take myself too seriously or my characters. This is just an amateur's attempt to bring joy to my 30 or so faithful readers

Please please critique as much as you like. I will probably have no answers or answers that dont even make sense to you whatsoever.

I write based on visions I get about what the characters would do next. I am in no way a professional

Thank you so much for reading and writing❤️

Edited by Nisha0604 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

“Bhayya to vaqeel hain” it was the same help from that peanut episode day, and he seemed rather proud about that she thought, amused, he appeared more confident today having a formal connection to Viveka now


❤️❤️ I feel so drawn to such connections and conversations. These people who make our day so much better should have a presence and that should be heard.

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“You can step out of the closet too….. tomorrow” he taunted, urging her to get out and explore the house.

“You saw me hugging Rhea?” she cracked herself up at the “closet” joke

He turned to her and began to laugh"


This is very funny!! 🤣🤣.

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“I will go see my parents tomorrow in the evening” she said breaking the intense gaze

He turned and began eating

She held her breath

“Its fine right?”

“U must be kidding, it feels like you are asking for permission” he growled

“Umm.. nahi… haan shaayad” she admitted"


The one year marriage rule book's guideline is to take permission to visit her parents ?!! He's right! She's kidding alright !! She would be best served if she takes a leaf out of her mom's book on this. I'm imagining Anubha taking permission before every work trip she makes 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago

Viveka parent in india they didn't attend harsha wedding i think

Thank you nisha for update🤗

We are looking more of viveka and rannav and satyan

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Posted: 4 years ago

The confusion of every new bride in her in-laws place about what to do, what not, what to talk and what not to - you have shown it nicely Nisha.

When one of the nurse said that Viveka looked like a teacher, it made me smile just like Viv did.


Even I am wondering like Viveka, what is Lekha Tandon doing since Rakshit might also be heading to the hospital.


Are the parent Mathurs not going to Thailand for the wedding?

Viveka saying even the food coming from her Maika smelled of her house - we all girls have experienced something similar.

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Posted: 4 years ago

I kinda felt a little sorry for smrita. 50 or 500 people,any wedding of any size is still a lot on her plate. She would have been caught between trying to keep Satyen happy while balancing her own wishes as well not to mention the gnawing worry over her husband's health.

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Posted: 4 years ago

They will be in a limbo until Satyen is doing better. After that we can expect the fireworks.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Both have sharp wit as evidenced by the coming out of the closet talk. They are well matched.

Edited by coderlady - 4 years ago

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