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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow. Too many shakeups. Super Nisha

Eloping Naina and Inder - something was simmering and brewing in the back burner. But this was too sudden for Mathurs. But could the Mathurs have done better and addressed it differently? Were they distracted by Viveka’’s announcement and didn’t address Naina’s issue?


Vindictive Dadi - She was a bickering mother-in-law. But she stooped too low. The lady who talks about honor of the house, encouraging grandkid to run away is a very very cheap shot to get back at your DIL.

Warring Viveka Mathur n Raanav Parashar - Couple fights begin now. Over prenup, over MIL, over how to react to in-laws issue (being nonchalant is unacceptable 😂), formal behavior to irritate the other, egotistical actions .... welcome to couplehood


Aching Anu and heartbroken Akash - Caught between work, family, daughters, in-laws and in-laws politics, I so feel for Anu. Poor lady. While she is trying to figure out her daughters MIL, her own MIL pulls the rug from under her feet. Slash’s situation is worse - mother, wife and daughter (s) pulling him in different directions.

Questioning Parashars - Will be interesting to see how Parashars will react and how Smitha will twist and turn everything. More importantly, i want to see how Raanav is going to go about this tiptoeing (especially because of his baggage he carries about middle class girls)

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Posted: 4 years ago

My dear Nisha and Sosy-ians,


A very happy and a healthy New Year. Let’s hope 2021 will bring some normality to life.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Combinations

Akash gave a sound drubbing to Dadi after he returned from work, Dadi realized it was Viveka who had snitched and told Viveka off in turn

Dadi demanded to be dropped off at Savi Bua’s “immediately” promising to never return

Akash just shrugged it off and went to his room

Dadi did the drama of bullying Dadu to call a cab. Dadu ate dinner expressed sympathy at Naina’s action and just went to bed

Savi Bua called to “ask what happened”

Akash told her off as well and requested her to focus on harshu’s wedding planning

She called Dadi and whined about how “Bhai is so mean”

The second and third gen Mathurs did not sleep much Monday night, Waiting to hear from Naina

Hoping for phone call

Viveka called Inder, he did not answer

She texted him instead

“I am sorry Inder but this was not the right approach, my parents are worried sick, Naina told no one at home about her plans, if you were encouraging her to do this, you owe my parents an apology. I am sorry about being so direct but my parents don’t deserve this” Viveka howled in her bathroom as she texted those lines

“I hope you will read my text and have her call us and please call my parents apologize! Thank you”

When there was no news next morning until everyone left for work, Viveka asked Dadi if she wanted a ride to Bua’s

Dadi said she didn’t want to go

Why would she

All the drama was brewing here. There was nothing except the occasional visit from samdhi Asthana over there.

“Viveka?” Raanav asked gruffly as she drove to work

“Haan” she said quietly without any perfunctory greeting

“I got a hold of Inder” he said quietly

She wept openly

“Viveka?”

“Hmm… umm… hmm” she sniffled “Thanks Is Naina with him or is this all a hoax?” she whispered

“Are you driving?”

“Jee”

“Pull over we can talk”

“IS SHE OKKKKKKK?” Viveka howled

“She is Viveka…. She IS… goddamn it” he was pissed

“Why should I pull over?”

“So you can TALK u fool”

She pulled over and wept and wiped off her tears

“they left for Dubai this morning”

“she has her passport?” Viveka was stunned

He didn’t answer

“Paasport tha?”

“I thought that was a rhetorical Q” he mumbled

“Tumhe pata tha?”

“I didn’t know she had her passport nope” he said confidently

“Kya karti hai yeh”

He didn’t answer

“Do your parents know?” she asked cringing

“Umm.. they do”

“Oh?” “Um” she whimpered softly

She didn’t even want to imagine what Smrita must be saying

So shameful

“Oh why Naina”

She wanted to run after her and bring her home, and slap her across the face she felt violent for the first time in her life

“Umm” she cleared her throat trying to control her tears

“Vive”

“Raanav do u talk to Inder everyday?” she asked swallowing the boulder in her throat

“Not everyday” he said

“When did you discover they were heading to Dubai?”

“Are you interrogating me?” he was astounded

“Hes your cousin right?” she was furious

“You think I encouraged them to elope?”

“Oh no, you just made sure it never happened, Naina is a fool to believe what she believes”

“what do you mean Viveka?”

“You had a low opinion of her hooking up with Inder Raanav, I can jog your memory if you want, remember Jaipur?” she shut her eyes and let hot tears flow

“You can blame me all you want for this fiasco but I had nothing to do with it” he was not happy

“Its nobody’s fault” she said calmly wiping hot tears, and dabbing her face with tissues and wearing her glasses again trying to focus

Took many deep breaths

“I am trying to help you” he said quietly

“I appreciate that, if I haven’t thanked you yet, here it comes… “Thanks” she said as she choked on her words

“You need to separate yourself from Naina”

“Chhod doon chinta Naina ki? Yeh keh rahe ho?” she asked softly

“You can spin it anyway you want but you are not Naina” he said flatly

“Are you uncomfortable with my worry raanav?” she asked quietly leaning on her seat calming down significantly

“No” he dodged it

“I am not going to put words in your mouth, but I sense this whole Naina issue is not not your favorite”

“For the same reason its not, for YOU” he said cleverly

“Naina meri behen hai, Inder tumhara cousin hai”

“So I should worry less?” he cackled

“Naina left home umm.. due to some instigation or I should say encouragement, right?” she quickly corrected herself

“You are contradicting yourself Viveka, you initially accused me of not wanting them to be together, now I detect an accusation, “

“I didn’t accuse you of encouraging her” she laughed unfunny “Just Inder of doing it”

“Look I don’t know what Inder’s plans were, I spoke to him I promised you I would let you know, hence the call”

“I appreciate it, thank you, I better head to work” she said quietly

“If You want to willfully drive a wedge between us using Inder you can do it Viveka”

“Main NAHI kar rahi hoon Raanav tumhe aisa lag raha hai” she pleaded

“That is not the truth, sorry”

“I hear an undertone of disgust from you when we talk about Naina, kaho main galat hoon” she challenged

“I don’t require you to like Inder, just like you should not require me to like Naina (in order to progress this courtship)” he spoke succinctly like a lawyer cutting a deal

“Wahin galat ho aap” she said sadly suddenly seeing

“Uh.. umm” he tried to come up with an answer

“I don’t expect my husband to hate her. I don’t expect him to support or encourage her but I don’t expect revulsion Raanav” “naina bewaqoof hai, par evil nahi hai” she said firmly

He just breathed

“Well this whole thing might be for some good I guess” she said calmly

“Vive..”

“Tumhe Naina ko jhelne ki zaroorat nahi, na hi meri taraf se detective ka kaam karne ki. I will wait for her to call home”

“Is that IT?” he was pissed

“I am driving to work” she said softly merging with traffic

“Its either your way or the freeway?”

“Naina is my sister Raanav, we are like twins, at some point we went around fooling people that we were twins” she chuckled sadly “You are expecting me to be selfish and shun her”

(“Oh how could you suddenly turn so secretive “9” that’s what Veev used to call her when little, Viveka wailed silently)

“she still seems to be good at fooling people as an adult” Raanav thought but didn’t say it

Instead he said “Naina is utterly selfish I mean”

It stung her like anything

Viveka wanted to agree badly but her love for her sis took precedence, how close they were and how much like twins they were,

“That’s a horrible thing to say Raanav” she said in a biting voice “I am sorry” she hung up speechless

Viveka hung up the call and drove to work

He used the opportunity to offload his true feelings about Naina, if he cant do it now when would he right?

Oh wow!! Wow!! everything was so messed up now!

The writing was on the wall all along, Rhea and Neha, Harshu and Piyush, her own parents no one was willing to say anything to her when she accepted Raanav’s proposal. Viveka wanted them to say to her what she struggled to say to herself. She was weak and drunk in love.

Smrita would make mince meat out of Naina not to mention pulverize Viveka for marrying Raanav

How could her nephew and son both be destroyed by the same middle class floozies all from the same family?

Outrageous!!

She didn’t know how she was going to tell Ma and Papa where Naina was

What it meant , how will it play out? What happens if she returns home crying again in a month?

Naina = Unmarried and twice heartbroken, or pregnant and twice heartbroken

Viveka = Unmarried, not pregnant and heartbroken

What would they say to her? Poor Papa…. And Ma? Dadi would dance on her grave

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Posted: 4 years ago

Poor Viveka and her parents. 😭

She is going to try and walk back the relationship with Raanaav, maybe even call off the engagement? 😕

Naina and Inder’s elopement really threw a wrench in Viveka’s life. Did they get married? Or did they just runaway together? What a bunch of a$$h$)&).

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: aina910

naina isn't a saint..i know that..i even once said she was a selfish B when she asked Viveka to reject raanav's proposal..

My whole issue is with anu and akash as parents and how parents love their perfect child more than flawed one...after all that's the easy thing to do right..and that's what A&A are doing..and yesterday also anu was like "kya beti paayi hai maine" it was extremely annoying for me..

They were so busy with viveka and raanav's marriage..they just forgot that naina just had a breakup..they didn't show an ounce of empathy..


Rajjijosyula sorry no parent like Akash and Anu deserve this. They maybe biased and may have err a bit but Naina showed no maturity for introducing Inder the proper way, did not have a sit to talk down with her parents, had the GUTS to tell Viveka to reject an alliance because she had been rejected, told Akash about the virginity thing and had been having mood swings and has been totally disrespectful of Viveka, Akash and anu feelings.


Sorry but NAINA had been only thinking about herself. All this time Viveka is having to put up with NAINA behaviour. Viveka is being called gold digger mainly due to NAINA behaviour by her future MIL, I really hope karma hits Naina where it hurts the most.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Ranaav, loves Viveka, went after her. He clearly is not over with his opinion of middleclass in general. However, holds Viveka on entirely different pedestal and has always (if not always most of the time) made effort to reach out to Viveka and be with her (only one occasion he was wrong when he left her with dadaji when she was sick).

Viveka, seems to be wanting that he changes overnight. That does not happen girl. You ought to know he is same man who spoke down to you at Jaipur. He Loves/respects you hence spares you now.

She is accusing him for Naina’s actions. That’s not done. He might have a low opinion of her but hasn’t instigated her to act in a manner that would hurt Viveka or her parents.

Viveka is unreasonable one here. You want him to understand your viewpoint, say so directly. Don’t allege him unnecessarily for actions of someone else. I somehow feel she should walk away now if she is going to question him this way every time. Neither will be happy. And Smrita has nothing to do with their unhappiness here. Smrita is important but if their own equation is not strong, nothing will help. It appears she is looking for every reason to break up.

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Posted: 4 years ago

“Its either your way or the freeway?”


Raanav did speak his mind a bit this time. He is holding back on being frank with Viveka as well. He should be. Or else he will regret later, if he doesn't change his attitude for Viveka's sake.


Nisha, I guess this how real life works. the complications are easy to address when they are not your own. Great. This conflict here is real. Anu and Akash want to be ideal parent but then I don't think there would be any parent who might not have had their own follies.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Struggles of parenthood and siblings. No matter how selfish your siblings are you don’t like hearing it from others. Specially your would be husband. Also being elder siblings, you always worry more. Rannav hasn’t changed his stance about middle class and specially Niana.

Let’s hope that Viveka is able to think through and her relationship with Raanav from Naina and everything around her. I feel like Viveka is very much infatuated with Raanav but not in love as she thinks vs Raanav has truly fallen in love with her for who she is. 😌

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Posted: 4 years ago

Gosh! Naina in Dubai!!! Why does it feel so bad as if I have been personally attacked !!😭

Edited by Errrantnomad - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow ladies, the comments and reviews have been awesome to read!!👏👍🏼

It's true ....that isn't it easy for the parents to love the nearly perfect child more than the flawed one ?!!

And vani had asked then is it nurture or nature when it comes to children and parenting ? No straight answer to that... each to their own I guess.


Also Raanav has no part instigating Naina and Inder, but the problem with him is he keeps his cards close to his chest revealing it only when he's being forced to. Relationships work with a certain bit of transparency. Viveka is not wrong In demanding it. Yes it feels like Raanav loves Viveka unconditionally more but it's easy to do that or be more confident of their love working because he's not the one who's getting uprooted. She's deciding walking in to a lion's den. Once you are in, its do or die, until then it's should I or should in not.

Edited by Errrantnomad - 4 years ago

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