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Posted: 4 years ago

Tricky Turf

It was a late lunch on Saturday, since Raanav and his Dad and brother returned Friday night, earlier than expected

Navaratri was beginning Monday so no booze for 10 days, Smrita made a big deal of it growing her grains and such.

Papa had asked his bank employee friends from 4 cities across UP to buy and ship authentic UP ki mithai and had it gift wrapped in a basket by requesting Naina’s best friend to stop by

Naina was not home so she did not know

Anu packed up a couple of really gorgeous silk scarves she had bought to give to family

They arrived before 1 PM for a 2 PM lunch

Satyen was literally near the gate when the guard opened it

Raanav wandered the lawn talking on the phone

He just let his hand holding the phone drop from his ear and paused to stare at Viveka

“Can I call you back?” he muttered and hung up

He greeted the family politely

“Hi!” “How is your voice?”

“Almost have it back” she cleared her throat and pushed up her glasses

“I am happy you could make it” Satyen greeted Anu with joined hands

“sorry we are late”

“Ho jaat hai, Dilli mein I don’t have much expectation”

The invite was at 11, there was no way Akash wanted to rush out and get there for that

Anu missed Smrita at the gate but this Rishta was going to be like that only. Anu felt terrible for Viveka

She did not deserve a cold distant relationship

“waise invite sabka tha, yeh to aapne galat kiya” Satyen paused to accuse

“Diya ki job lagi hai Galleria? Mall mein Hugo Boss store mein, Karuna apni friends ke saath saara din YT fashion videos mein lagi rehtin hai”

“Parents ka kya bahana tha?”

“Bauji ki physical therapy ki appointment hai, Naina lekar jaayegi” Akash visibly cringing at that lie

Naina was locked in her room

“Deepavali par ghar mein koi ceremony karenge everyone should be here” Satyen laughed

“Jee jee”

Anu walked in tentatively

“arey wahin par khari rahengi? Aayiye to?”

The courtyard was decorated with red and white roses all over, in vases pinned to walls… everywhere”

“Mrs nahi nazar aa rahin?” Akash asked sadly

“Oh she is getting ready”

“we are late by TWO hours and she is not ready?” Anu thought

They were feted and pampered from the word go

Raanav sat on the arm rest of Viveka’s chair and showed her oslo pictures

Anu fidgeted nervously hoping to grab a picture

Satyen as if on cue did it himself, Anu did too

Raanav bent down, Viveka looking up, wearing her oversized jhumkas, they did look lovely together

Viveka heard the click and looked up “maaa” she scowled

“Just one.. I don’t have any beta”

“Arey abhi se sharam, abhi to 1000s khichengi beta” Satyen cracked himself up

“Do you want to go take a walk?” Raanav grabbed her hand

“Beta baarish honey waali hai, don’t walk too far” Satyen stared at the lovely moist clouds up in the sky through the glass roof

“We’ll be back” Raanav rolled his eyes

Smrita appeared wearing jeans and a chiffon bouse

Anu and Smrita’s eyes met across the room

For a brief second Smrita appeared flustered

Later she would question herself

Here was this middle class woman clad in a simple saree, and a firm ponytail, with only a trace of lipstick and kohl was sending her reeling for no reason

“Aaj jao bhai” Satyen extended a relieved hand

He was afraid she was going to bail on him

Marriage was tricky turf to be on

“hello” Smrita nodded

And later smiled

Akash and Anu remained seated but did a namaste

When Smrita heard Anu’s voice it was even more unsettling, she had Viveka’s naturally husky soft voice

Smriti will now secretly begin to hate her voice

“Dono walk par gaye hain”

“Who?” Smrita pretended

“the bride and the groom” Anu said with a smile twisting the knife

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Posted: 4 years ago

Finally!

It’s Anu vs Smrita! Bring it on Nisha.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nishaaaa....

Why u stopped there?

Hope we will get one more

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Posted: 4 years ago

Thanks Nisha mam

Awesome update

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Posted: 4 years ago

Very small update and waiting eagerly for next one

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Posted: 4 years ago

Happy vaikunta ekadasi🙏🏻🙏🏻

Merry Christmas to all🎂🎂

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Teacher to S-- ratio

“Great” Smrita nodded a little unpleasantly

“I asked the help to serve just few drinks, inka peyt bhar jaayega to khaayenge nahi” Satyen made small talk

“Great”

“waise main inse naraaz hoon I expressed your disappointment too, they didn’t bring the parents or the kids”

“Oh yes” Smrita nodded “Everyone is busy?”

Akash explained

“Aaur jee aapko, are you still in the running or did u get it?” satyen asked Anu

“Oh I got it” Anu beamed

“AREY WAH… CONGRATS… agli ceremony ab aapke ghar”

“Sure sure”

Satyen proceeded to hog the next half hour asking Anu every little detail about her promotion

Anu spoke confidently and politely

Akash flipped through some glossy over weight coffee table book as Smrita went on her phone

“Inko lekar jaayengi abhi biz trips mein?”

“Ajee kahan, hamey bas European chocolates laa deti hain” Akash teased

“If you get to go to London, ditch the hotel aage se hamara makaan hai Kensington mein” satyen offered

“I usually go to Germany, or Scotland”

“We have” Smrita said haughtily

“Jahan inka ghar NA HO waha jao bhai” Akash teased his wife

“Did u talk about where the wedding can be? Satya?” Smrita began

“Arey they just came yaar,”

“Oh”

“Aap kaha chahti hain?”

“If its not a destination wedding then it should at least be someplace in India, Coorg, Bidar etc” “I am hoping” smriti tried to smile

“Oh? Viveka ko maloom hai?” akash enquired

“Umm I think Raanav must have told her” smriti was confident

Over there… outside walking the shady tree lined boulevard

“So we are going to argue about who called who how many times?” Raanav panicked as Viveka scrolled through her call log

“Nahi dekh lete hain tum keh rahe ho main call nahi karti text nahi karti” she laughed checking

“I wouldn’t mind if your voice stays in this quality” he muttered

She turned to look at him, he glanced down at her lips

“ U like my gravely voice?”

“I do” he nodded as they paused

“ My students hate it”

“What do pimply 20 year olds know about gorgeous women” he laughed

“Excuse me… but I don’t teach high school most are my age or older I suspect” she laughed

“That still doesn’t tell me anything” he taunted

“Do you know AIIMS has 800 seats and 388 thousand students apply each year?” she asked in horror

“No I did not”

“Makes you wonder doesn’t it” she sighed

It did NOT make him wonder but she made him wonder, wonder, imagine and dream. She was something else

“Did u know India had only 17 universities in 1947?” she asked

“Nope” he crossed his arms across his chest

He wore casual drawstring olive green cotton trousers and a dark orange stripe shirt

“The student teacher ratio is 1:25 in India only South Africa is behind us” “I mean there are some others as well SA is 1:32” “Poor teacher education leads to poor student outcomes”

He nodded

“I am boring you?”

“No Viveka” he smiled

“I feel when I start talking about this topic people yawn, I imagined u yawned” she laughed, in a raspy after cold way

“Can u stay over after your parents leave?” he begged

“Kyon?” she asked looking up at him flirtatiously

“I can tell u if u stay”

“I don’t want to read law journals” she chuckled

“Dang it! I had 4 put away to show you”

“I don’t want to see even ONE” she showed her index finger

He grabbed it

“I also had a book of choicest quotes”

“Yours?” she asked shocked

“Of course, I have a team recording my every court appearance and we pick out arguments to showcase” he muttered thru his closed lips

“Tum LAW itna pasand karte ho”

“Law nahi apnea ap ko” he whispered

She blushed when she realized he was pulling her leg

“U totally believed it, do not lie”

I did” she nodded sheepishly

“stay”

“If you show me everything now what will we do after we get married?”

“Oh there will be plenty of other things to do”

“I missed you last night at a book read I went to”

“why?”

“My JNU friends, Bilal and Kumud hosted it, everyone was with their significant other I had no shoulder to lean on”

“Are they a couple?”

“Oh no… no not yet anyway?” “I went with no one”

“Are u sure I am worthy of being seen in those circles?” he laughed under his breath

“I can give you a script, just stay on it” she whispered back

“Is there booze?”

“Like a river” she laughed

“U have to meet my friends”

“Ur mother said u have a 1000”

“she spends too much time on my SM”

“Itne friends hain tumhare?”

“Yeah lets meet one evening next week”

“what do u guys talk about?”

“Umm.. women” he laughed

“NO WAY” she mocked

“Women, how to make more money, and which crazy sport to try next”

“all in that order?”

“and sex” he nodded

“What do u usually say?”

“About women?”

“No about s—” she laughed really curious

She watched him blush

They stood staring at each other

“U drive me crazy Raanav” she said candidly

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Posted: 4 years ago

“Dono walk par gaye hain”

“Who?” Smrita pretended

“the bride and the groom” Anu said with a smile twisting the knife"


Mwah! Mwah!! Air kisses😘

Smri has met her Match!!! This is also a match made in heaven... or may be hell's doom !!!

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Posted: 4 years ago

“Aaj jao bhai” Satyen extended a relieved hand

He was afraid she was going to bail on him

Marriage was tricky turf to be on

“hello” Smrita nodded

And later smiled"


This brought a smile.His turf is not just tricky, the grass on it is expensive and a high maintenance kind🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago

Let them have big wedding

Both viveka and Ranaav deserve it

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