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Posted: 4 years ago

End of workout

There was a knock on the door a few minutes later

It was like Smrita suspected these two were upto something

He refused to go take a shower and picked her up and brought her to bed

And just hovered over her staring intensely

She squirmed, pulling out the square pillows and the oblong show pillows from under her

He yanked them off and threw them on the floor pressing down on her

“I detect a tone of derision each time to refer to employers in your argument” he hissed outraged

“Tumhara imagination hai Raanav, I have no reason to mock you”

“I know I am not mistaken” he moved on her, as she gasped

“You hate our employee relations initiative,”

“I don’t even know enough to comment sorry” she put her hand between his arousal and her lower body

He placed himself on her back hand first and inserted himself into her palm

She turned to let go he rolled on her and brought her back

“I was going to come inside, he invited me to sit down and review the issue”

“Of course how could you not” he placed his open mouth on the back of her turned head the curls were damp and watery she heard a sucking sound

She turned to her back and he kissed her, his hard lips devoured her aroused cry

She let her hand be used again

He took his own sweet time, they spent what seemed to her like hours in foreplay

He teeshirt was gone in seconds, as he molded her body to his

The knock came

She groaned on his shoulder

He kissed her fully and left his lips on, uncaring

His phone buzzed

Some vague foggy part of her brain reminded her the knocking was not going to stop

“Tumhe darwaza sunayi nahi de raha?” she sobbed as he let his fingers crawl under her salwar waist band

“No” she said firmly

She rolled on top of him to get him to stop

Her towel had come undone from her hair, he gently pushed all the tendrils away

“You washed your hair?” he demanded in awe

“I thought someone behind me sneezed on my head on the Metro” she whispered

Gently rubbing herself on him

He scrunched it up between his fingers and inhaled the scent and she felt him stir

He pressed her bottom on his lower body, lifting his hips for her

“the Metro has to sto” he warned nipping her ear as she arched

The knock was gone, then the phone began to ring, it vibrated and fell off the bed

He dragged her with him as he went to get it

“yeah?”

“I am not hungry Ma” he was was quite irritated

She spoke breathlessly on the other end as Viveka tried to loosen his grip to slide off the bed

“Fine… yeah… not sure, ask Rakshit” he rubbed his eyes and yawned

And pulled on her hand cracking one of the measly 4 red glass bangles she was wearing

He let go in shock when he heard the crack

“Its OK” she nodded and found her tee shirt

“Yeah, I don’t think that’s required” he yawned

“Are you tired”

“Yes Ma… was trying to take a nap”

“Abhi so ogey you have to eat, Dad’s work friends are here honey”

“I know Ma” she found her glasses and wore them, she knew where they were now, he always hid them between the pillows away from tossing heads as she tried to dodge from his antics

She picked out a journal from her leather tote and curled up to read

He hung up after a 20 minute phone call

And looked at her, she was using a pen and a highlighter reading in intense concentration

“Vi” he began to text

“Hmm?” she looked up at him

“can I get a kiss”

“Nahao jaakar” she ordered with a smile

She realized she was being her Mom

An intense blush swept her face, magically ina week she had found that easy camaraderie with him.

“maybe I will have a good marriage?” she felt a gush of happiness

He made her heart pound, being near him was like being on a drug, sigh!

“Vi” he was texting

“Hmmmmmmmm?”

She slammed the journal and got up walking over briskly

Bent over his head and kissed him for many minutes, he tossed her over his over and then on to the side

“Abhi jao” she whispered holding his face

“I want to take a nap” he begged

“I will go tell her, tum so jao” she whispered caringly

“you will do that for me?” he asked shocked

“Umm.. yeah?” she was confused

Then she realized she was doing things he was not used to

“U can text her too”

“No… tell her” he yawned and held her close as he drifted off to sleep

“Kidhar hai beta?” Satyen demanded as she showed up after tying her hair formally and wearing a bindi and grabbing a shawl

“He was tired he is taking a nap” “Sorry” she apologized to the guest

Smrita was not happy to hear that

“Koi baat nahi aap baithen” one of the older gentlemen invited her to sit

“how is college?” satyen asked gently

“Its good, I wander around hoping someone will hire me” she laughed

“Umm” he nodded

“Jaate kaise ho beta?”

I SAW her walking down Prithviraj Road” Lekha announced as if she had spotted a polar bear

“Haha… I always walk to the Lok Kalyan Marg Metro station” Viveka dug into her food

The guests started talking about how great Delhi’s Metro service was

“where did you go betu” Smrita cooed to lekha

“Oh just WORKOUT Ma” Lekha nodded with a smile

“I got mine just walking o the Metro station” Viveka thought she was cracking a joke MIL and SIL did not laugh

A man showed up in the hallway with a polite smile wearing a white uniform and holding a cap under his arm

“Yeh Rathiji hain, aa jaayiye sir” satyen invited

“sir aap log khaayen”

“Aap pata nahi mil nahi paaye hongey… yeh hamare Raanav ki wife hain”

“Jee jee sir” he nodded

Viveka returned his namaste

“Inka number main text karta hoon aapko, aap inko JNU laana le jaana kar lein? Kyon? Theek hai na?” Satyen nodded

“Bilqul sirjee” Rathiji nodded

“Beta… I will text u his number”

Lekha looked horrified

“Mummma?” she whispered as her FIL had hijacked the man who had served her and assigned her to his younger DIL

“we have many drivers beta” Smrita waved her fork staring at Viveka as she did wondering HOW and when did Viveka do the machinations

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Posted: 4 years ago

Lekha dug her own grave 😆 Agli baar soch ke hi satyen se viveka ke baare mein bolegi 🤣


Raanav and Satyen are SO similar, both men have the same thing on their mind. Yeh baat alag hai ki Satyen ACTS on it while Raanav still struggles to.


Smrita- They say " How we judge others is how we judge ourselves". Maybe on the place of Viveka she would have done that, but someone needa to tell her, thats NOT the modus operandi of Viveka 😃

Edited by aina910 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Nisha can we get one more update pls if possible🤗

Thanks🤗

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I SAW her walking down Prithviraj Road” Lekha announced as if she had spotted a polar bear"


This is hilarious🤣


Reminds me of the polar bear icecream parlor in Bangalore. Smri needs to have some. She is sweating buckets.🤪

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Posted: 4 years ago

Heirs & Heirlooms

She sat up reading her paper, she was behind in her research, severely. IIT Kharagpur had waitlisted her at first, but as time was passing by she realized she might be rejected

She lowered her journal and stared at her hands

The house was still

The lawn appeared like dark green velvet, with lights planted all along the walkway, she occasionally saw a Delhi Police jeep with lights flashing drive by.

This was zip code 100001 the priciest in NCR, must get protection at taxpayer expense she realized

He had woken up and was looking at her through his lashes

Ma was still awake, she texted her, Anu worried if everything was OK

She reassured her that Satyen had literally sat by her and ate a good meal and must be fast asleep now

“He has no underlying ailments Ma, he will bounce back” Viveka promised

“Aaap kyon jage ho?”

“I had to prep for two meetings tomorrow”

“Are u going to Scotland or Germany soon?”

“How did u know?”

“They didn’t make you Director for nothing”

Anu felt a flash of sympathy for her daughters, they were proud smart individuals who were focused and ambitious just like herself . If she had given them just one thing in legacy, it would be her single minded determination

But success seemed to elude the two older ones, for now

Viveka longed for admission and wasn’t getting it, Naina had quit her job in running after a boy

“Diya wants to do MCA in Surathkal or Trichy” she told Ma

Diya and her had talked when she was on the Metro

“NIT se?”

“Hmm”

“She never told us”

“Diya said Papa had signed “so many” forms in October

“Oh wow”

“Par NIT first list was out early December”

“Yeah she didn’t get in first or second, second was day after Harshu’s wedding Dec 16, 3rd list is Dec 29”

I hope she gets it

I do too Ma”

“Aap kyon nahi soye?”

“I am just reading, so I can start working on the article I promised to author with Dr Ansari”

“Kuch de bhi rahe hain tumhe ya tum yoon hi lagi ho”

“Filhaal to yoon hi lagi hoon” she smiled

“Raanav kidhar hain?”

“Hes asleep”

“TUM?”

Ma felt terrible, a week or so after the wedding and her daughter was alone, READING at 1 AM

“Is he nice? Is he a good man?”

“Yeah?”

“Tum raat ko soyi kyon nahi?”

“I am reading… I just told you”

“What you said to Chachi is that still true?”

“Hahahahah” Viveka sent many emojis

“I am fine Ma”

“Dadi ki tarah sound kar rahi hoon shaayad, but I wont mind a baby… GRAND baby”

Akash would scold her in the morning for placing such archaic demands on their daughter

But she wanted Viveka to get pregnant for some reason

If IIT Kharagpur rejected her she wouldn’t mind it as much

“Yeah””Anu nodded to herself at the plan

Viveka laughed out loud

“I am not having a baby Ma, not any time soon, not until my Ph D, Lekha can have the family heir and have all the heirlooms”

“Does she chat with you”

“Yeah sure! “ she thought ( if talking about me like I am some two headed weirdo counts” then yes Ma she is my bestie)

“Kyon?” Anu bristled

“I am kidding” Viveka smiled “she is OK”

She was not going to saddle her Ma with every ego clash or swipe

Raanav rolled over and sat up, went to the rest room, and returned 20 minutes later

“Ma I will text you soon, hes up” she put her phone away

“Are you hungry?” she asked politely

He extended an arm and she walked over and he pulled her on to him and carried her to bed

“2 AM friends?” he was curious

“Ma se baat kar rahi thi” she smiled

He nodded kissing her hungrily

“Khaana nahi khaogey?” she asked worrying

He lifted his head up and looked at her, Viveka was just so real,

Rakshit had told him over the last couple years whenever Lekha stayed over he had a hard time getting Lekha to take turns to do anything. Lekha never pulled her weight and How he ended up cooking at 2 AM or fixing a snack

She was wealthy though… and Mom loved her

Raanav observed Rumi Tandon too usually looked like she had never stepped into a kitchen, just like Smrita Parashar

Satyen cooked frequently and did many chores despite being a successful CEO

He taught his boys to fix cars, iron clothes, even sew buttons among other things

Viveka didn’t expect to be served

“Do u cook?”

“IVE TOLD U” she smiled cuddling him comfortably

“I took a nap after our fight and dreamed we were still fightin” he whispered

Thumbed her swollen bottom lip grinning softly

“ Well Did u have more good arguments?” she asked sincerely

He threw his head back and laughed until his breath was knocked out

“I did… many… I am not telling you right now”

“How was I?” she asked curiously

“Feisty boss lady” he whispered

“Oh good… I wouldn’t want to lose a sleep fight with you”

“My Dad texted me saying I need to watch out what I say in front of u”

He gently undid her hook at the back

“Did u tell him about my Metro ride? Letting him ease it off her body through the tee

“No” he lied smothering her

Edited by Nisha0604 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Okay so Raanav uses Satyen to get his work done, knowing Viveka could refuse him,not Satyen 😆


Hope Anu gets an answer to her question 😳

Wanted to know rakshit thoughts on Viveka.

Since he was the first to know Raanav's in love and the first one to inform Smrita of his proposal to Vii parents 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

Thanks nisha🤗

Viveka going to get phd this time 😃

Or she is going to have a 👶😉🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago

Thank you Nisha.

Wonderful updates.

Absolutely loved it.

Beautiful progression in their relationship.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Thank you for the delightful updates Nisha!

I love that they can fight but are still showing their care and concern to each other❤️

i think, and of course I may be wrong, Raanav is looking for someone to be his and for him to belong to. Viveka gives him that feeling in such a beautiful way. I hope that despite whatever arguments they will have, they remember that feeling of belonging to each other.

Poor Rakshit....yes his mom loves his wife but Lekha sounds pretty immature.


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Posted: 4 years ago

Lekha is the most emptiest of all Nisha's characters. I'm missing naina's tantrums 🤣

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