Fan-Fic Bad Angad Returnz!UPDATING! - Page 28

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Posted: 20 years ago
Im going to continue soon!!!
But if any1 else wants to continue, then feel free to! 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
Recap: Kripa has got an abortian done. and now angad has gone to meet aliyah.

At aliyah's house.

ALiyah: bhai aap yahan!

Angad: Aliyah tum nahi janti, woh kripa ne kya kiya, woh apne aap ko samajti kya hai??.....jee chahta hai ke....

And then he slams his fist on the wall.

Aliyah: Bhai!!!! Bas !!!...ab mein Kripa ke bare mein bura ek bhi shabd nahi sunugi...

Angad: TUm meri behen ho ya uski???

Aliyah: Nahi bhai, ab meri bari hai khene ki aur apki suneki!! Jis insaan se apne sabse zyada chaha, usi insaan ko tumne itna dard diya ke koibi apna dushman ko bhi nahi dete!!

Angad: Tumhe nahi bata ke kripa ne kya kya kiya hai meri saath!!!

Aliyah: Ha, Mujhe pata hai ke kripa ne kya tumare saath kiya hai!! Aur woh hai ke, usne kuch bhi nahi kiya!!

(I forgot what exactly the misunderstanding was so I will just make it up 😆 😆 )

Aliyah: yeh sab naina aunty, Damini aunty , mishty aur anita, kartick ka plan tha.

Angad: Aliyah!!! ( he is about to slap her, But he stops)

Aliyah: MUjhe pata tha ke aap mera Vishwas nahi karoge isliye mein saboot layi ho.

The saboot was this tape that aliyah recorded of Anita!

After listening to it angad is shocked and has tears flowing from his eyes.

Angad: (to himself) Yeh maine kya kiya, mere apnehi mera nahi socha???
Aur maine kitni bari galti ki. Ab main kya moo dihkaoga kripa se.

Without saying anything to Aliyah, he left the house and was driving toward hoome.

In the car!

Angad:(to himself) yeh maine kya kiya, Itni bari sazza apni kripa ko di, Maine kitna use hurt kiya, mein apne aap ko khabhie nahi maaf karsakoga!!

While he was driving he was only thinking about kripa and only kripa.

A small boy was crossing the road and angad did not see the red light, and everyone was horning and all of a sudden...........

As you can see i am not very gd at cliff hangers! 😆 😆
I will try to continue later in the day.
But anyone can continue if they want to!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
I hope u guys liked it!!! 😊 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
Abortion?? 😭 😭
Not the knid of twist I expected......But heck....
It was good.... One suggestion.....Make Angad repent for what he has done
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Posted: 20 years ago
Everyone was horning and all of a sudden angad realised that it was a red light and a boy was crossing so he turned his steering wheel and hit the tree!

His half body flung out of the car. Everyone gathered round the scene of accident.

A nice guy called the hospital

G: hello, yaha rockstar angad khanna ka accident hogaya hai, aap plz jaldi ayaga.

The ambulances arrived and they took angad on a stretcher to the hospital. He was covered in blood.

Back at home.
Kripa was looking out the window when the telephone rang.
Ring ring rrrring

Kripa: hello

Lady: kya main Angad khanna ki biwi, kripa khanna se baat karsakti hu.

First kripa was shocked being called angads wife but then she realised that she was actually married ti him.

Kripa: ji main bolrahi hu.

Lady: main hospital se bolrahi hu ke aapke pati, matlab angad khanna ka accident hogaya hai. Aur hame jald se jald koi inka rishtedar chayi blood le liya.

Kripa shocked: Kya??? Aa…aap…aap konse hospital se bolrahe hai???

Lady: Mumbai rathod hospital ( I made that up lol)

Kripa droped the phone and got her bag and rushed out of the house with tears. As soon as she was about to leave the house ……( who does she live with, is it damini and mishti??)

As soon as she was about to leave the house, prithvi, damini and mishti arrived back from wherever they went!

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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: swordfishh

Abortion?? 😭 😭
Not the knid of twist I expected......But heck....
It was good.... One suggestion.....Make Angad repent for what he has done

Sorry swordfish, i didnt like the whole idea of kripa having a baby so i did the abortion!

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Posted: 20 years ago
Ok here goes the next part

Prithvi = p

Holds kripa's hands

P: kaha jarahi ho hai???

K: Plz prithvi aaj mujhe janna do angad hospital mein hai, uska accident hogaya hai!!
Mishti: bhai uska believe mat kariya who to ek bahana hai ghar se bhag jane ke liya.

Kripa is now crying.

K:please mera vishwas kariye.

Damini: prithvi use kamre mein bandh kardo, bahot hogaya hain uska.

P: theek hain mom.

He pulls kripa and takes her to her room and lockes her in there.

Kripa bangs on the door

K: Please meri baat suno, mujhe janedo angad hospital mein hai.

She collapses on the floor and cries.
Kripa: mere saath aisa kyun ho raha hai, mein angad ke bare mein itna kyun soch rahi hoon, use marna hai to mein kyun usi nahi marne nahi deti, nahi mein asa nahi karsakti, after all who mera pati hain, aur main apna farz nibhawe mein koi kasar nahi chorogi.

She looks out the window . She thinks and thinks.

Kripa to herself: Soch kripa soch, kuch bhi hojaye tumhe hospital pochna hai warna tum vidhwa hojaogi.

You see angad is in a very complicated state.

Kripa spots a ladder in just beneath her window ( now where did that come from, don't ask me!!)


She carefully climbed down it and ran outside. Towards the road.

Kripa: rickshaw, rickshaw , kya aap mujhe Mumbai rathod hospital lejayege.

Driver: ji memsab

Kripa quickly sat in.

K: jaldi bhaiya , jalidi

She reached the hospital and went towards the receptionist

K: Angad kaunse room mein hain??

R: !4 D

K: thank you.

She ran into the corridor where the doctor was waiting.

Kripa: doctor aap yahan khare khare kya karahe hain, aap plz mere angad ko bachalijiye!!! Please!!!

Doctor: Hum humari poori koshish karege lekin hume phele unke koi bhi rishtedar ka khoon chaiye operation ke liye kyunki Mr Khanna ne bahot khoon lose already kariya hain.

Kripa: to doctor aap mera lelijiya, mein unki…..biwi hoon, aap plz jaldi kariye.

Kripa gives a lot of blood for the operation and she is very weak now.

K: doctor plz aap jail kariye.

Kripa sits down on the chair and spots a small madir, and she runs to it.

K: Bhaghwan plz aaj mere angad ko bachalo plz usko bachalo. Bhalehi usni mujhe kitne bhi dookh diye hoge, uski jaan bachalo!!

After a while the doctor came out.

K: doctor kya huwa angad ko, who theek to hain na!!

D: ermm….Mrs khanna, abhi to hum kuch nahi kehsakte, agar unko hosh aye to hi phir chance hoge ke who bachjaye, lekin abhibhi who khatre se bhar nahi aye hain.




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Posted: 20 years ago
please guys tell me what u thought about it, i' am starting to think that no1 likes it 😭 😭
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Posted: 20 years ago
awesome parts continue soon !!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
hey i love ur fanfic plz cont soon.

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