Fan-Fic Bad Angad Returnz!UPDATING! - Page 11

ouma, please continue. i love your fan-fic cuz its so scary.

Pritvhi:Get in the car,

He pushed her in the car and got in himself, they both drove off......................................................... .......

They soon reached the Bose house, Pritvhi got out of the car, then went round to get Kripa, he grabbed her by the elbow and dragged her into the Bose house, when went into the main sitting room, Mishti, Damini and Angad sat their waiting for ther,

Pritvhi:Yeh loh, Kripa

He pushed her in front of them, Angad and Mishti stood up, Angad walked over to Kripa, stern and sturborn, Mishti was going to open hermouth to say something but Angad made a gesture with his hands,

Angad:Kripa.......

Kripa walked backwards, Angad walked more closer, Kripa kept on walking backwards untill she pushed into Pritvhi, who was standing behind her, she turned around to see a very irritated Pritvhi, he grabbed and pushed her on the sofa, Angad turned around and did the same stern, stuborn walk towards her, he came right at the edge of the sofa when he noticed the two lil kids standing by the stairs, he stopped and took a deep breath then walked away backwards, Mishti realised why, and then in her sarcastic voice says....

Mishti:Kripaaaaaa.... meet my two lil sweet cousins,

Kripa turned around to see two lil cute kids satand there with Mishtis arm around the,

Mishti:Betas, mujhe chumma,

They both kissed her, One lil boy around the age of 6, and One older girl around the age of 8,

Mishti:Yea hai, Sohan, aur yeh, sima,

They looked at Kripa confused then looked back at Mishti, questionally, Mishti smiled,

Mishti:Aha bacho, tum isse Kripa kehkar bolawo,

Simi confused,

Simi:Pay woh toh hummse bori hai,

Mishti:Toh kya huwa, yeh tum dohno ki nokrani hai, samjhe, u tell her what u want her to do,

Sohan:Wow, we have a slave,

Mishti kisses Sohan,

Mishti:Yes a slave!

Simi:Par Kripa ki uapar, bruises hai, aur dehcko her lip is bleading,

Indeed it was, kripa just felt it and realised,

Mishti:Acha, time for you two to got to bed, Kisses, and Byes

They both ran up the stairs to bed........

As soon as they left, Angad grabbed Kripa, and dragged her into their bedroom, where he throw her onto their bed,

Angad:DONT U EVER DO THAT AGAIN,

Kripa looked away, her head turned around, she quietly started sobbing,

Angad got a knife from the fruit bowl in their room grabbed, Kripa hand, and slit it, Kripa screamed, Angad pulled her throwin away the knife on the floor,

Angad:Har bar jab tum ek galliti karoeghi, toh tab main tumme asie daag deta rahonga, samjhi!

He ropped her hand and went and left her crying and holding her hand!..................................................

Me is writing nxt part now, Simi and Sohan make trouble for Kripa,.......................In the end, whoose cousins are they, Pritvhis and Mishtis, blood connection of evil!😆

poor Kripa. someone save har from the evil people. i feel sorry for her. its really good. please continue.

Poor Kripa, please make Angad good, evil Angad is really scary...anywayz love ur story. Plz continue..

tat waz gr8... keep angad evil 4 a bit more episodes in order 4 kripa 2 bcum strong then u can make angad good again(if u wish)

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

tat waz gr8... keep angad evil 4 a bit more episodes in order 4 kripa 2 bcum strong then u can make angad good again(if u wish)

i think ur right she should get her strength to fight against all of them 😊

but plz cont soon

Ouma.. u have a very evil story.. its scarying me... angad and prithvi are soooo mean 😭 But cont soon.. its really intersting, never read a fan fiction like urz 👏

ouma u better end this torute soon its soo sad 😭

but again good job! poor Kripa 😭

He Dropped her hand and went and left her crying and holding her hand!..................................................

Kripa lied on the bed holding her hand and crying,

Kripa:KYUN, KYUN, KYUN?????????????

She managed to make a bandage on her cut with one of her duppatas(scarf), she looked at her self in the mirror excaming every bruise on her body, she looked different, her eyes where alwayz puffy nawadays, and he skin colour became darker, Kripa turned the light off, and tried to sleep, but half of the night she was awake, thinking about all her past memories good ones bad ones,

Kripa woke up next morning, to her delight, Angad was not their,she moved her hair back, got up took a shower ect......................................................... ....

Downstairs, Mishti, Damini, and Saohan nd Simi, were happily enjoying their breakfast,

Sohan:Mujhe aur nahi khaana, plz, Mishtooo,

Mishti:Arre Sohan beta, jaaldhi khawo, main tum hare liya ek present laye hoon,

Sohan:Wow present, mujhe abhi dehckna hai, plz Mishtoo,

Simi:Mujhe bhi, plz................

Mishti:First eat,

Sohan quicly stuffed everything in his mouth, anddrank water, to make it go down, Damini and Mishti laughed,

Sohan:Present????????????

Mishti:Okay, okay, wait,

She went up stairs and came back down with colourful kite,

Soha:Wow kite..............

Mishti:Haan kite, ajj bohut windy hai, so go and fly it,

Simi:Okay come on,

Mishti grabbed their hands,

Mishti: Wait meri ek kaam karoghi,

Sohan:Kya Mishtoo..

Mishti began explaining the plan, at the end Sohan looked amazed and Simi worried,

Simi:Kya hum gallat karenghi,

Mishti smiled, and kissed her,

Mishti:Nahi, tum kisskee Help karoeghi,

Sohan:Toh phir teek hai,come on, Simi

They both left, Mishti stood uo with a evil grin, turned arpund to face her mom,

Damini:Mishti, wah kya idea aya,

Mishti:Uape ki beti hoon, aur kya meh kar sakte hoon dehckon baad meh,

Kripa came downstairs, she looked unhappy,

Damini:Kripa yeh eat karlo, baad meh kitchen mrh, tumhara sab kaam hai,

Kripa sat down on the chair and eat the food, atleast she got food this time,

Damini:Tum chair par nahi betoghi,

Damini, made a gesture wiv her eyes,

Damini:Tum floor par, betoghi,

Kripa gave her a look of discust, and sat down on the floor to eat, Kripa had a hell of alot of jobs todo, wash clothes, clean Kitchen, clean floor, ect.....

She was hanging up the washing when suddenly, Sohan came up behind her and tugged her clothes, Kripa turned around superised,

Kripa:Kya huwa,

Sohan:Mera kite stuck hai, meri liye neeche lah sakte ho, Kripaaaaaaaaa,

Kripa, remembered her fright of heights, but had no choice but to agree, becuase she new, Pritvhi will bash her, if she said no,

Sohan took, Kripa to the roof top,

Sohan:Wahaa,

Kripa looked up indeed it was there,

Sohan:Simi, is getting the ladder,

Kripa nodded and looked up, Simi came with the ladder, she put it directly by the kite and climbed, up, she did not dare to look back the other way, she finally got it,

Kripa:Yaha, yeh dehcko Sohan ji, I hav ur Kite,

But Sohan sneakly moved the ladder across, Kripa set one foot back to step on the laddr, she did the same with the other, not lookeing backward,

AAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGHHHHHH

Kripa fell with a loud clatter from the roof top,

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