AR OS and Drabble gallery#2: *The Curse - NOTE UPDATED- 16.06.'20 - Page 5

Hello backkkkk!

See when you update jaldi jaldi to how much I love you...Hehe! Good girl keep doing this okay!

Chalo ab part Pe chalte hai...Can I jsut say WOWW!!!

Like legit that’s the part for me! So so good...The way Armaan is around her na Matlab I can’t get over it...So is it legal for someone who is cursed to even be so amaze ? Matlab better than humans *hides face*

The part when he says “I won’t hurt you Ridhima...” his tone, his words and his body language were so perfectly described ki matakb Kya bolu! It was definitely a 10/10 point for me’

Then of course the confession!!! Hayee Matlab you’re killing it Haan girl...Itna Acha kon likhta hai!!!! And most importantly he finally said I love you (no this better not be a dream okay, warna you know how angry I’ll get)!

So now that you have successfully gotten me hooked to this genre it is your moral obligation to update soon...okay ?

Great I am waiting!!!

Alsooo of course the gifs...Haye they To have my heart!!!

Okay no go write and update soon!!!!

Originally posted by: NishitaRahman

wow mindblowing part.part ki liye bohot sukriya.accha hoya armaan ridzy ke bat kiya.aise ridzy ko ignore karke usse door jake kus nahi hoga.ridzy ne armaan ko pucha wo use kyu bolraye hai.armaan ridzy ko safe dekhna chati hai.wo nahi chata ridzy use door jaye .wow armaan ne confess kardiya wo ridzy se pyar karta hai.love AR hot romance.love AR full of moment.totally love the part.dekhte hai armaan ka confession sunke ridzy kya bolta hai.beautiful outstanding story.pls post the next part asap.eagerly waiting for next part.thanks a lot for the pm part😍😘❤️

Thanks for the lovely comment. Yes I am glad too that finally I had some AR good moments to write in the part hehe. Stay tuned to know the rest, hope I can keep y'all hooked.

Until then take care, stay safe!

Originally posted by: pridarshi9

Read Part 3B. OMG OMG.... Really good, the way Armaan tries to have control over self and how Ridhima wants more, very nice...Eagerly waiting for the next update soon..... 👍

Keep continuing to write and make us all happy

Thanks dear, glad you liked it. And thank you for the comment.

Take care, stay safe!

Originally posted by: stardustsoul

Perfectly and beautifully written

Itna kuch ek hi part hai ☺️ Armaan ki story usne kaha nahi but ye Riddhima ko bhi ab clear hai ki Armaan wolf hai lekin wo aisa kaisa ho gaya ye pata nahi chala .... Armaan ko save krne k liye uss wolf ne Armaan ko bite kiya kya ...pata nahi lekin ab aage story aur bhi interesting hogi .... Armaan k piche kon pada hai aur wo kyu Armaan ko marne chahte hai .... Armaan ka confession sirf Riddhima k liye hi shocking nahi tha sabhi k liye tha lekin chalo confess to kiya .... eagerly waiting for next part dear....

Please update soooon🤗

I know right, so much I have in one part see, but nobody appreciates that , all they have is complaints complaints complaints!😂

Well well but I can't answer your doubts about the wolf bite or what for now, cuz for that you'll have have to keep reading the story further. Also somehow everybody has conveniently ignored the last part- the "D R E A M" part , I see.... 😂 But well but gonna say much about that either.

Chalo anyway, thanks for the comment and now see you soon ( hopefully 🤣, whether I wrote the next part for whatever that is). Until then take care, stay safe!

Originally posted by: TaniDMGlover

Hello backkkkk!

See when you update jaldi jaldi to how much I love you...Hehe! Good girl keep doing this okay!

Chalo ab part Pe chalte hai...Can I jsut say WOWW!!!

Like legit that’s the part for me! So so good...The way Armaan is around her na Matlab I can’t get over it...So is it legal for someone who is cursed to even be so amaze ? Matlab better than humans *hides face*

The part when he says “I won’t hurt you Ridhima...” his tone, his words and his body language were so perfectly described ki matakb Kya bolu! It was definitely a 10/10 point for me’

Then of course the confession!!! Hayee Matlab you’re killing it Haan girl...Itna Acha kon likhta hai!!!! And most importantly he finally said I love you (no this better not be a dream okay, warna you know how angry I’ll get)!

So now that you have successfully gotten me hooked to this genre it is your moral obligation to update soon...okay ?

Great I am waiting!!!

Alsooo of course the gifs...Haye they To have my heart!!!

Okay no go write and update soon!!!!

I always update jaldi jaldi only ok ( after the part is done 💁🏻‍♀️) Well if the cursed person is a certain Mr. Armaan Mallik, then yes it's possible! Lol

Chalo somebody did read the dream part properly, glad about that! But well obviously not gonna reply- confirm or deny that definitely.😁

Well ab story and writing ka toh pata Nahi but getting you hooked is definitely a big achievement for sure, aur vo BHI into another genre. Ab toh mujhe party hi Karni Chahiye By God 😂 Yes yes, the GIFs have my heart too, so same pinch.

Thanks for the comment and all the honest reviews babe. See you with the next part, until then take care, stay safe!

Originally posted by: ITSABOUT_DMG

Woeeeewwwwweeeeeee

I mean can this part gets any better??

It was sooooooo beautiful all the confessions, confusions, curiosity, every damn thing was penned perfectly

Finally we saw some cute n hot moments of AR

Much to the relief

The gifs u added helped me alottt to imagine them...as a couple

But u ended on very crucial part yaar di

I can't wait to read the reaction of. Ridhima in the next part

Will she confess back or not??

Ohhh am curious now

Please update sooniishhhhh

All of the AR moments made me miss my husband💟💟

Update

Update

Update

Pleaseeeeeee

Chaho toh abhi likh ke dedo

Pleaseeeeeee

Thanks for the lovely comment, and yes I am glad too about finally getting to write some AR moments for this story Varna sab kaafi serious l, suspense aur depressing hota ja Raha tha. Aww so sweet, though why are you missing your husband, isn't he supposed to be with you only all thanks to the lockdown hehe.

Yes I'll try to update soon for sure, but can't guarantee anything. Have being a bit busy again lately. So well update asap, until then take care, stay safe!

Originally posted by: Jenniholics

Hey can't u add me nd give me update also...I have already tell uh in my previous comment I like this story nd waiting for the next part...still u didn't add me😢why??..only bcoz I haven't comment on the previous part or bcoz i have given view on ur story😥i'm very disappointed😢i have joined Indian forms only bcoz of ur stories only infact u urself send friend request.. mere kehne pr bcoz I don't know how to add u in buddy list bt I was very eagerly nd very much wanted to read ur stories💖bt tmne vhi vajah cheen li😥

Originally posted by: arima_mallik

IMPORTANT NOTE: DO NOT SKIP!!

Hello everyone, first of all, thank you everyone for this warm welcome on this new thread. Though now..... I am here with some serious note this time and it's majorly about "The Curse" as of now. Now I know not all of you are a fan of this genre, or a lot of you have started reading it for the first time or just newly maybe. And I don't have any complaints, it's all your choice. It's okay if you aren't interested in it at all or wish to skip this SS all together. Again *your choice, so no objection. But if so, I had just one request that please do inform me. I am not saying you guys have to love everything that's put up, but if you do not wish to read this story I had like to know that.

NO! That doesn't mean I'll stop writing it, it just means that I'll lessen my efforts and only forward the updates regarding it to the selective people.

Now coming to the next topic, yes I know most of you are more attached to AALM and want me to update soon, which I'll whenever is possible. But you guys keep messaging me asking me to write either of the stories, but then when I update this you guys are upset that I should have instead updated AALM. Well I had just like to tell uall that this is a supernatural story, and even if any other genre, it really depends on a person's mood. But especially with something as fictional and completely with no reference to hold, when something hits your brain suddenly you jot it down, so rarely when I feel like writing I immediately write it and post it up. So I just expect an equally excited response, that is ONLY IF, you guys really did like it in the first place.

Now I know you guys must be thinking why all this suddenly, well that's because the responses overall have being dropped on IF as everyone knows, but especially with this SS m really not happy about the overall response. So now I have decided 2 things.

1) The part B is ready, but I am waiting for your response to this Note, observing which I'll decide when to post it and what's next. ( So you guys better respond S O O N )

2) I am not a "likes"-monger, but I'm gonna ask you guys to LIKE this post with a thought put into it, MEANING, only the people who wish to read "THE CURSE" SS, need to like it. That will automatically give me the PM list for the story. Only the people who like this post will henceforth be sent any updates regarding this SS. So the people who are not interested may just ignore this post, will just make it easier for me.

The deadline for this will be till Monday evening. Though I'll be sending PMs for this one last time to everyone for this SS, to let everyone know about this Note. But do let your other IF friends know too, so they can respond (if they read this SS in the first place)

The reason being, sending across so many PMs and not even getting a 20% response sucks. I don't want to be rude, but I wanted to put it the way it is.

P.S: I know a lot of suspense is going on, but I just have one suggestion; is good to guess, infact I love when you guys keep guessing things that only means how involved you are in the story. But please, do not stop or review the story on the basis of your assumptions,That he's probably a werewolf or etc etc and this is what's gonna happen next. 😂 Give me a chance, let me do the thinking part. 🤣 You guys just read and chill. I'll unveil things soon. And either ways it's an SS not an ff, so you all will know things sooner comparatively.

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Ab aisa hai sweetheart, I don't have any dushman here neither am I here to take and badla from anyone based on comment basis lol..... 😂 but darling you have probably not read the previous note properly. As you may have seen I have forwarded the part based on the likes list- which was also supposed to be in my PM list for "The Curse" irrespective of they are in my friends/buddy list or not, haven't really gotten time to check people's comments thereafter until yesterday. Also just an update, I had also posted the PM list again to make things clear in case you have missed it! 💁🏻‍♀️

And any other time I have always forwarded the part to whoever asks, but for now I had asked and put up that lengthy note (as you can read above, quoted right below your comment) for a reason. So even if people find it unnecessarily strict or rude, that's just how it's gonna be henceforth for this SS. Also I know I have sent it across to some other people as well who aren't in the PM list, but that is only because I know they haven't being able to react to the post for whatever reasons, but I know have being following my story and are interested in the story.

So I just don't want to bend the rules for any case for this story hereafter since I am personally sending them across instead of posting it on the thread. So if you too need to read the parts for this story, please do-

READ THE NOTE CAREFULLY AND FOLLOW THE INSTRUCTIONS.

That's all.....and I'll send across the part immediately. Thanks! Take care, stay safe!

Originally posted by: arima_mallik

Thanks for the lovely comment, and yes I am glad too about finally getting to write some AR moments for this story Varna sab kaafi serious l, suspense aur depressing hota ja Raha tha. Aww so sweet, though why are you missing your husband, isn't he supposed to be with you only all thanks to the lockdown hehe.

Yes I'll try to update soon for sure, but can't guarantee anything. Have being a bit busy again lately. So well update asap, until then take care, stay safe!

Haan I want AR romance now

Jo bhi ho woh bhediya kuch bhi

Romance chalu karo jaldi se please

Update bhi dena hai aapko yaar jaldi se

Oh my husband??

Actually am at my mums house

Isliye I miss him though he visits whenever he gets time but still aise ffs padne lagjaun toh bass yaad hi aajati hai saiyya ki aur kya😆

Chalo bhai jaldi se update hojaye

I like the note u given...now can I get the part🙆

PartB is awsom yr... now I'm sure he is a werewolf ar how he turn into it is also a mystery... n there small moment r so NYC n last arman confession let's see how ridhima reacts on it... n truth jaanne k baad kya krti h arman k sath... it's real going very intresting...

Waiting for next part update soon