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Posted: 5 years ago

Keep the distance


Though I have kept thinking she should move back to her parents as that felt logical logistically and probably the practical thing to do given their financial constraints, yet when she actually made the move back, it felt gutting to read . For a minute I felt a lot of anger towards Tapan . Here was a girl who was making baby steps towards her financial independence and is now back to where she started. Yes it's coming back a full circle for Manik Grover but caught in that tornado is shubhra.

Parul is right. Shubh should go visit Arya , Gagan and her regularly . It's so painful to see Tara consumed in her sense of false pride and empty vanity. This is getting messier and absolutely no one is thinking right. I feel like shaking everyone up.Manik Grover is a defeated man today dying a slow death .

Edited by Errrantnomad - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

What miracle will save Shubhra from this wedding? She is not planning to save herself.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: coderlady

What miracle will save Shubhra from this wedding? She is not planning to save herself.


I would say more than a miracle she needs an electric shock to her brain

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Posted: 5 years ago

Barsega Saawan

She was given a silver key chain with baby feet and bells as charms by Parul as a send of gift

"I never brought anything for you"

"Thats a lie" Parul smiled thru tears

"I will miss Gagan's face"

"Aisi baat mat karo, I know which building your office is in, I will show up to drag you home for dinner every two days" Parul warned

Arya didnt know she was moving

She sat on her lap and played with her new fire truck, Tapan had sent with a friend that was vacationing in Delhi for two weeks

"He keeps sending her stuff"

"I am telling you" Parul shook her head "If he had saved up that money he could have bought a apartment like this"

"he loves her" she hugged Arya

"Midget?" she whispered in Arya's ear as she pushed her silky strands back behind her ear

"I AM NOT middet" Arya was shocked to hear Shubhra say it

"Dekho Maasi... I mean Shubhra aunty bhi tumhe midget keh rahi hain, you should eat your palak and grow tall" Parul fret

"Can I come to yo house?" Arya held Shubhra's cheeks and begged

"Umm.. how about I finish my work and call you?" Shubhra kissed her cheek gently

"My home okk is done... alll done" she claimed

"Jhoothi, spelling list kaun padhega?"

"Maaaa pweeez" she begged

"Shubhra aunty is getting married?"

"To Nitin Mamu?" she asked

Kids expected the same people to get married over and over again

"Nahi ghodi... to a nice Uncle" Parul described

"Tomorrow?" Arya asked now on the floor running her truck across

"No, after 6 months" Shubhra showed with her fingers

Arya mimicked with 3 on one hand and two on other

"this many?"

"Close"

"One more?"

She opened both fists

"This"

"Haha... Shubhra bent Arya's fingers crouching on the floor

"can I come?"

"Yeah I want you to" Shubhra smiled

"Ma?"

"Of course"

"Papa?"

"Yes"

"Nitin Mamaji?"

"Sure"

that was it... Arya was off

Then she returned 10 minutes later

"Can Tapan Mamaji also come?"

"Sure"

"You can come" she screamed joyously into the phone

He had WAed her in her room

Parul lowered her gaze, so did Shubhra

This was weird

They could have been marrying each other

No longer

"I will go now" she got up

"Raat ko khakar" Parul forced her down

"No I still have to pack Shubhra got up nervously

"I am expecting you at least once a week" Parul ordered

They hugged and didnt speak

Held each other quietly

"thanks Parul"

"Silly girl" Parul tapped her cheek

She opened the door and Gagan stood in shock as the door opened on him just in time

They greeted each other and she walked back with no energy

Arya came out screaming a few minutes later and spent the remainder of the evening craving for Shubaaa aunty

Good friendships were rare

everyone was hurting that night

Plus another Kusum Nitin drama was looming Parul was exhausted she went to bed right after dinner and stayed up most of the night

she knew Shubhra would not visit much now

Shubhra made a sandwich did not eat much and slept on the couch

A week at her parents house

Ashutosh came to work to resign she was not shocked or unhappy

She feared what was brewing between Punita and him

As she agonized all morning

Punita sent over notarized documents through her lawyer saying she was not going to pursue any case against Vinod

she jumped up from her chair squealing

Completely unexpeted

Never in a million years she would have expected that move

She was meeting Mr Nautiyal tomorrow to talk about how to proceed

She called Ashutosh frantically to understand what had happened

He didnt answer

she texted him

"Did you convince Punita?" she texted

He never responded

She smiled all the way home that evening, re-reading the document on her phone, each station the Metro stopped at she tried to call Punita and Ashutosh but there was no response

How did it happen

she sat in her balcony after a shower with a glass of her favorite wine, overlooking the dense foliage of trees, the tree trimming guys were finishing up down below, laughing and cracking jokes, winding up their equipment

Radio played Hindi songs...

"Tumhari yaad aa rahi hai aaj maine bhindi aur paneer fry banayi" Parul texted

"I miss you all soooo much I wish I lived next door I would have come running" she texted enthusiastically

"Aa jao na?" Parul begged

"I am home.. I mean parents'... Mehrauli.., showered drinking wine" she took a pic of her wine glass on the balcony rail

"Kyon khush ho, tumhare honey waale hain kya udhar?" Parul teased

"No... no" Shubhra suddenly realized Pawan existed in her life

"Phir?"

"A big crisis solved on its own"

"Arey wah"

"I am so happy"

"Khush raho" Parul wished

That made Shubhra cry for some reason as she stared at the rare clear night sky with a smattering of sparkling stars

The tunes of a song floated up from the radio

Saason ki lay madham chaley, To se kahey

Barsega saawan

Barsega saawan

Do dil aise milenge


Chanda Ko Takoon Raato Mein

Hai Zindagi Tere Haton Mein

Palko Pe Jhil Mil Tare Hai

Aana Bhari Barsato Mein

Sapno Ka Jahan

Hoga Khila Khila

Barsega Saawan, Barsega Saawan

Jhoom Jhoom Ke

Do Dil Aise Milenge

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Posted: 5 years ago

What will she do when she finds out who her guardian angel is. Feel so bad for shubhra it's like she has given up.

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Posted: 5 years ago

A big crisis solved on its own"


Nothing resolves on it own Shubra. There is the grandmaster siting in Chicago and moving the pieces on the board to help you out. Hope you can realize it soon.


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Posted: 5 years ago

Will she find out her guardian angel

Still feel she should stop herself now 🧐

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Posted: 5 years ago

Can Tapan Mamaji also come?"

"Sure"

"You can come" she screamed joyously into the phone

He had WAed her in her room




Nisha - oru mid day update with Tapan reentry please 🥰. Must be over a couple of months since he left for Chicago

Edited by jaschick - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

If Tapan is behind these problems going away, will she figure it out?

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Posted: 5 years ago

Can Tapan do something to make Pawan back off and run in the other direction? But then Shubhra will take it as another rejection. She should be the one rejecting this match.

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