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sonu4ever thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#91
Lovely part Davia , loved it! 👏 👏
Please do continue ! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#92
vaha kya birthday tha 😳 😳 😳
very romantic 😳 😳 😳 dancing in the rain, a home made chocolate cake,yummy what else can guy ask for
naughty naughty jai 😆 😆 😆
please write soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thnks for reply and patience...

n.Jai smiles and says u look soo good in this .and laughs again she was mad at him.she ask him to give her her dress.he says do u really need it. She was mr.walia.and was to hit him with pillow.he was like ok ok I will give.he then opened the cubbord and took a jeans pant and a sleeve less t-shirt and asked her to wear.she said she won't as she has not won such dresses before. "mein ye nahin pehnunki.aur is t-shirt mein (taking from him) kya lika hai dekhiye,it is not nice.(it was written hot babes)"jai laughed and said why u wont wear it for me also.ok u r not interested in fulfilling my birthday wish from u.u said few min before in bed that u will give me what I want as it was my birthday and now ur refusing it.not fair bani.i am asking u to wear in front of not in front of others.she says I am feeling shy .he asks what there to feel shy.he says he wanted to see in that.he also says "arre mein tum hain bikni todi na pehnai keliye kaeh raha hoon,I am asking to wear jeans that's all.'his phone starts to ring .he picks it up and before oning he says if want to make me happy wear it otherwise don't and said he his waiting for her in dinning table and left.it was puskar's call he was in in the hall .he answered the call .puskar"happy birthday sir.kaise chal raha hai aapki aur bani ki honeymoon?"he said"thnkx ,abb tak accha hai.aur tummahara kya haal hai?"he said fine and he heard somebody calling him so he finished the call. When jai turned ,he opened the mouth on seeing bani wearing the dress.bani was uncomfortable and jai was in surprise.he then went to bani and said u look sexy bani.she was like what? He said u always make my day bani.u look so beautiful in this dress.she asked kya mein change karon.he sain nahi,itni jaldi kya hai.sone se phele mein change karoonki tumhari dress ko.not now.she was like mazzak mat kijiye mein janthi hoon ,aur mein ismein ,I amnot feeling good ,muje change karni chahiye. He said nahin. Bani pls ek pic to click karlye saath saath aur is kapde mein .i know u brought camera..bani was like "aapko kaise pata? He said he saw camera in her cubbord while hiding her dresses. She said wo actually ,meine socha ki jab mein yahan se chali javoon to mein aapne bacche ko aapki tasveer dikhavoonki.aur yaad karloongi aapko…. .she was looking ground.he then pulled her and said 'my dear darling wife ,u know what ,u r a stupid women ,how could even think that I will leave soo soon.? Come we shall click our photo aur phir mein sab ko dekha hoonki… ,aur kahoonki ki meri bani kitni sweet lag rahi hai is kapde mein." She asked sab ko?massi kya soche ki????nahin mein change karne jaa rahi hoon."massi kuch nahi soche ki balki kush ho jayegi ye soch kar ki unki munna unki bahu ko kitna pyar karta hai..aur tumho ki jab dekho change karne ki bath kar rahi ho. Come we shall click photo.he pulled her and said tumhe meri kasam bani .she had to obey him.they clicked photo.(I know no one will click their photo but automatic laga diya un logon ne)they finished half roll and keft remaining for more days.then they were having their dinner.bani has prepared for them.all jai fav dishes were cooked. They ate in the same plate feeding each other.he even pulled bani on his lap. Then after finishing it they both cleaned together..she asked him that she wants chocolates.he then went to the fridge and gave it to her..before giving he said he wants a kiss from her.she first said no but later agreed .she kissed him in his cheeks.and pulled the chocolate from him and ran away to living room and startes to eat..he came from back and hughed her. And started to kiss her shoulders. She said in enjoying the chocolate without realizing "jai chodo na ,muje chocolate kane do." He was surprised and asked her "ab tumne muje kya kaha?" she said kuch nahi wo actually meri moo se galti se nigal gaya and said I am sorry.he said no ur not.u can call me by my name I don't mind.she said no I will not call in front of everybody.he said ok call me in our privacy.she felt shy.and he continued his work

He picked her up and went to the bedroom.rest in ur imagination..nextday morning jai placed his hands next to him ,did not find bani and got up .he picked his clothes and covered himself in his robe and went in search of bani.she was in kitchen .preparing breakfast..on seeing jai she asked him"aap ud gaye.taiyar hojaie nasta ready hai.he then went to get ready.he came back and saw the table was waithing for him. Asual both had breakfast in same plate feeding each other.inbetween jai kissed bani's belly.she was standing.he then asked what shall we do today?she replied she has work.he asked what work?she replied she has to wash the clothes ,dry it ,cook lunch for them ,clean the rooms.he said if u want to work ,I will help u.she was like aap?? He said yes me.they then washed the clothes .jai was helping her and troubling her too by kissing her. Then they hanged the clothes.they also made lunch together.few min later .both came and sat in the sofa in the living room for relaxing

preview;keep guessing.


davia
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Posted: 18 years ago
#94
Awesome part.
Bani is jeans and t-shirt...loved it....Jai taking pictures.
Jai help her in house chores...interesting...love to see JWalia helping or should I say troubling his wife in house chores.
loved it.
👏 👏 👏
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#95
dude that was awesome!
aww jai carried her home!
and bani made him a cake
perfect for each other
please continue soon
sonu4ever thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#96

Lovely part Davia ! They are so cute ! 😊

Thank God u update this fanfic after a long time ! Keep going on the fab work ! 👏
Please continue soon ! 😉

Edited by sonu4ever - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#97
dat was grttt 👏 😊 👏
aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwww cute couple 😳
cont soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#98
awwwwww so cute
cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#99
👏 keep it going this is good yaar
davia389 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
this is the longest part.so enjoy.... and don't forget to post ur comments....

n. Jai started the conversation asking her what is ur fav sweet other than me.she says hiting him muje rasu gulla bahut pasand hai.she then kissed him in his cheeks and said man kiya is liye. And hu gged him.he then says mera man bhi bahut kuch karne keliye khe raha hai and moves towards her.she understood him and said no ,he did not obey her but just came over and they ended up making love in the sofa.next scene,jai was buttoning his shirt and with a smile .and when he turned to bani she was crying in the sofa.on seeing it jai went near her asking what happen "tum ro kyun rahi ho? Bani pls tell me what happen did I hurt u?' she replied "why did u rape me?"he was shocked. "bani but everything happen with ur wish .i din't force u." she replied "no u forced me ,u only brought me here to do all these.not to take care me,I know now that u don't love me but u only want to sleep with me whether I am willing or not.u only love ur baby in my whomb not me.u wanted to take revenge that why ur doing this to me.i know" and wept. Jai was like no "bani I love u more than anything.how can u say or think about such kind of thinks.if u want ,I wont touch u any more but pls don't say that I forced u or I want to…. Etc.. .tell me what I should do to prove my love for u..then she replied "I will believe u if u agree for a condition.he asked what was the condition.she replied " after we leave from here u should pretend in front of everyone that u still hate me and u don't know the truth for seven days after we leave from here.and u should not tell what happen here to anyone.u will not ask me to wear any western dress .if I hang the clothes ,u shd pick it up after it get dried.and u shd take care of me and only me.because I am ur pregnant wife.jai was like yes whatever u say.then remaining afterwards.promise me now.he says promise.

She then smiled and said now shall we go to have lunch.i am feeling hungry.he was like what?she smiled to him and again said "jai kana kane chalein ,muje bhook lagi hai.and gave him a cute smile."he asked tum mere sath natak kar rahi thi she replied haan .muje apni bath manane keliye kiya after all I am ur wife.nono u darling ,dear wife haina jai… and smiled broader.he was shocked.abb mein samja tumein,jai u promised me.ok if u want to do then continue I don't mind but our child is feeling hungry and shall we continue remaining in the night as the couch is not really enough.we shd change this one and get sofa cum bed… .he was shocked to see a bani like this.he was seeing her with a open mouth.she hen said chalein and pulled himm towards the table.he asked her to tum natak kar rahi thi.she replied haan aur nahi to kya,aap ko manana it ni aasan todi na hain isliye.dekha aap mujse ktini darthe hai.he asked mein aur tumse never.she asked really????????with a smile playing in her lips.and pulled him towards the dinning table to have lunch.he says while eating actually muje wo wali bani bohut pasand thi.she asks kounsi wali?wow,wahi jo meri daad ko chup chap sunleteti aur mujse darthi thi wahi .y know why she never makes dramas like u did.she was soo innocent ready to fight for her sisters and etc.. ,she replies muje bhi wow wala jai pasand tha jo muje daratha .lekin mein aapse nahi darthi. Re says oh really .she says haan… haan massi ka munna..and giggles.he oh… to mein massi ka munnakyun hoon … she sayss haan jo massi sai itne darthe hain. Lagtha tha ki aise jaise aap apni massi ko dekkar aise darte the ki kahi unhein saacchi na pata chal jaye.she says muje saab yaad hai.haan muje bhi ye yaad hai ki bani was jealous. Jealous aur mein no .yes u were jealous,I saw that in ur eyes.no I was not jealous ,why should I be jealous for who and what for…??????? Stop pretending I know.u came to check me that night when roshini asked me to stay with her.i saw u.she replies no I came to take water .lieing bani..

U came to see me bani accept it.then she started to cry.jai on seeing it s\tarted saying "its ok bani its ok,I wont ask u anything and hugged her.on hugging bani slowly smiled and thought "jai ji mein aapko aacchi tarah janti hoon.yes I was jealous and later fell inlove with u.but I won't say it.yes u were right I came to se u.i know u can't see my tears.i love it when u console me.tum sirf mere ho .i can't see u with some one else."then jai carried her to the bed and gave her medicines.he says "dekho bani I am sory if I have hurted u.i was just …….. pls don't be angry.pls smile now.plsss…. then she slowly smiled .then he kissed her and made her to sleep.he also slept for a while and got up soon.bani was sleeping.he then saw her,the tummy was shown and her blanket were below it. He then went near it and placed kisses on her tummy and started speaking to the babies.,he ask how r u my baby?i know u will be happy now as when u come out u will be with ur mom and dad together.u r the one who brought ur mom and dad together. Meanwhile bani was awake and was pretending to sleep but was hearing him.don't trouble ur mumma in side a lot.she is sweet. I don't know u r a boy or a girl? but u will lucky to have a mom like bani.she will love a lot.and kissed again.and got up and went to kitchen to prepare tea.ani touched the place where he kissed and smiled..

Few min later she came outside to see him cleaning the things.she got an idea .she went and took the camera and clicked him without knowing to him.he then went out to take the dried clothes.she clicked that also.when he came back and placed the clothes.he just smiled as there was a lot although only two of them were present.he smiled remembering the incidents.bani came out saying shall we go to garden and sit in the wing for while with her coffee cups in her hands.he ssaid yes and both went to the garden and sat in the swing.he asked bani I hope I don't trouble u and our child by doing… u know what I mean.she says "nahi actually i missed u a lot.pls don't leave me."he says how can I leave u,ur my life." And kisses her in her cheecks.she then asks him "do u like kissing me.u keep kissing me always that why."he says "I don't know how I gotted tempted to kiss u and have u,whenever I saw u it make me to get more tempted everytime." That all because of u goody type.and look so good when u feel shy and when u get angry u look so tempted and drag me towards u.to mein kya karoon.oh really.he haan.tum jaanthi ho mein aapne aap ko kaise control kiya mein hi jaanta hoon. Oh really jai. Joot .arre mein sach kehra hoon.she was playing with his shirt button and he was playing with her hair.aapko pata hai hamri yahan third day hain.pata nahin aapke saath waqt kaise itni jaldi bitgaya. Ghar jane ke baad aap muje miss jarror karenkei haina?why only me why not u.because I wiil be busy with baby.u have to pretend as u still hate me infront of everyone.in front of everyone right? She says haan.ok .he replied. Then he says bani u know when u look at me smiling ,u look like like she was smiling and looking towards him look like what jai?look like a sweet sweet small small "?dolphin dolphin??????? Haan bani muje dolphin bahut pasand.he started to laugh and he got up and she was chasing him both were going around the swing. .and she atrlast acted like chaakkar ara hai and when he came to her,she started to beat him ,and he atlast picked her up in his arms carried her inside.then few min later.jai was sleeping in the bed.then he heard noise of laugh.when he went out ,he saw bani seeing cartoon network and laughing.and was talking to baby saying dekho tom ko,jerry ko and etc… he was enjoying the scenarieess .how she is enjoying seeing cartoon network.

He then comes and keeps his head on bani's lap sleeping in sofa.saying muje bhi apna talk mein shamil kijiye my wife and child.she laugh and caress his hair saying app kab ute?abhi jab aap apne baton mein busy the.and he kisses her tummy making her blush more..and time passes as they chat for and have fun that too seing cartoon and jai asking what she can understand and saying nothing is soo funny but having cvute little love fights..he disturbing her by kissing her here and there saying he want her to see him not the cartoon.then they decided to have dinner.bani asked him to stay out of it.she in order have little fun tied his hands by asking him in a smiley matter and tied it with her one of her duppaatta.and he was shouthing for her to come and opened .she then aked him to sit and see tv and switch n the tv and played some cartoon and went inside .he was like not knowing to how to untie and was irritated.and more he sat there in a frowning face seeing that cartoon.he then dreamt how it will be when the baby will be with them…the open eyes dreams was like this.. he making his kid watch the cartoon and he slowly signaling bani next to the kid to come after him and when she come he starts to kiss her she then says to stop as what will the kid think of them if they see them like this.tthen he hears"momuumy"that was not his kid but the duck in the cartoon…he came out of his dreamworld and laugh for this.then suddenly he felt that the duppatta was in state of untieing and he did so.then he got a plan .he make it tie again and went to bani saying pls remove this bani…she says ooonoooooooooooo and he then removes and tied it on her and him together .she then says wat all this and started to shout at him.he then thinks mood swings… he ask her for one kiss so that he can leave… .she then aout to kiss him the cheeks he turns and get kissed in lips… .

Preview:jig hearing and thinking there is a another women in jai's life..
Promo: bani and jai in jai's hotel for their one more suhaag raat…

davia

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