Busted- AK 'And you are?' Pg 8 - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
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nxt part later today...sorry for the long wait 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wonderful part muqu. can't wait for the next part! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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please post soon....!😳
Edited by kripa_angad=luv - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i'll post this weekend i got sick and i hav finals tmrrw and friday
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Heyyyy r u better??? Wen r u gunna continue this ff!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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this friday hun...i had alot of work
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ohh awesome, cant wait for you to continue 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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"Okay these are the suspects" Ted said, laying three photos in front of me. it was 7:10 and I was sitting in the conference room.
"Kripa have u even looked at the Pics?" ted asked seeing me staring and thinking to myself.
"Sorry" I said and picked up the first one, it depicted a handsome guy with light brown hair and a roundish face, with a genial smile
"Josh has a record" ted began, "he's from Brooklyn and he's got 2 arrests under his belt. "
I looked at Josh's sweet face he hardly looked like the criminal type!
"And he has hacked all of Hereford's Computer Files."
"Oh wow"
I moved to the next pic,
"That would be Pritivi, Big man on Campus, Mr. all star Football Captain and the captain of the Karate Team."
"Oh so in short the Mr. I'm So cool, popular Guy rite?" I said
I looked at his pic and instantly disliked him, he was very handsome, but his smile was a smirk as if he was saying, I'm so cool, I'm so rich I could buy u and ur family"
Ted continued…" but get this he's a suspect b/c he's at Hereford on a full Scholarship."
"What! But how does that make him a suspect?"
"Because he has a palm pilot…iPod…laptop…Designer clothes" ted explained
"So where is he getting the money from?"
"That's exactly why he's a suspect!" ted said.
I grabbed the last pic, I guy in the pic, he had dark shaggy hair, and a bit of stubble. Even if he was rough around the edges, I thought he was totally HOT! I always liked the Bad-Boy type. His green eyes were intense.
"Who's this guy?"
"Angad Khanna, in my opinion he's ur Number 1, he just hangs out with the rough crowd, and is always looking over his shoulder, he just has the quality you know."
"Wait No arrests"


Ok 10 comments! and i'll cont tmrrow

~Muqu

i know it was a crappy part...if i get time i'll cont tonight!

~Muqu
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey that was great. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ugh omg how rude.. u cant just say that ur a criminal cuz u look like one!!!! rudey pants(not u the officer 😆 😉 )

it was a good SHORT part.. id like a longer one, plzz.. but since ur bzy i get it.. its hard to update isnt it..

do continue ur other fanfics too..
cont sooon

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