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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi guys.i pu the intro so long ago.sorry i didnt update but hw and projects u kno...ill update another part later but hope you like this.

"Kripa, mujhse shaadi karogi?"Angad was in one knee proposing to Kripa in a room full of prople.

Kripa nodded her head vigorously. "yes Angad,Of course.Ya Angad."with a thud,the elbow Kripa had her head perched on slipped from the desk.Looking up she saw the whole class staring at her.Her classmates looked amused…her professor however did not. "oops," she muttered.

" 'Oops' is right Ms.Sharma…did you not get any sleep last night?"

"No sir,"her professor raised an eyebrow at the answer. "I mean yes sir I did,"Kripa quickly said.Actually she was up late last night waiting for a rerun of Angad's concert but she didn't think her teacher would be pleased hearing that.

"Well,would you care to explain to the class which dreamland you were lost in that is more important than my lecture?"

Dreaming about Angad!!!

Outloud she muttured her applogies,"Sorry sir,just dosed off…wont happen again."

"Better not,"and with that the proffesor continued to teach.

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"Will you quit laughing already,"asked a blushing Kripa.

"Sorry,"Prithvi paused for a breath."Its just really funny.Ever since this guy released a song 5 years ago,you've been head over heels for a guy you don't even know."

"Of course I know him.His family and mine are friends remember?"

"You knew him when you guys were,what 5? And then you moved here in London and met a dashing hot guy AKA me."

"Don't flatter yourself too much Prithvi,"but she laughed.Prithvi had been her neighbor and best friend since she was only 11.They had gone through everything and more together.Now they were sitting in Kripa's living room discussing Kripa's little "incident" during class.The door opened and Mishty came in.

"Hi guys,what are you laughing about?"

"Oh nothing di,"Kripa said quickly but not quickly enough.

"She fell asleep during class today dreaming about Angad."Prithvi said.

"Kripa!"exclaimed a shocked Mishty.

"Di,don't worry worry.It was just history class.Besides I live in the present-"

"No actually you live in the future,"interrupted Prithvi. "According to all the writings of "Mrs.Angad Khanna" of course."

Kripa gave him a glare and proceeded."as I was saying,I dnt care what happened millions of years ago."

"Sometimes It seems you don't care about anything important,"Gayetri came in looking exasperated."Seriously Kripa.I don't get it.Look at Mishty.Straight A student,planning to be a doctor!and you don't even know what you're going to do in life.Studies is a no-no for you,marriage is a no-no for you.You're so brilliant…if only exceeded more…"

"Mom,I have my music…besides Im not Mishty,"

"And you shouldn't try to make her be like me mama,"Mishty said. "We're both different in our own way and you should respect that."

"Im getting late for music class,"Kripa left the room with Prithvi.

"Do you want me to drop you off?"he asked.

Kripa shook her head and they both parted of to their own respective places.

Kripa loved her family…she just wished her mother could try to understand her and her dreams.She wished her mother wouldn't compare her to Mishty so much.It seemed whenever someone found out she was Mishty's sister they would always think Kripa was some great scholar on her way to success but their faces would reflect wonder when knowing she wasn't planning to be some doctoe,lawyer,etc but do something in the music business.Kripa loved her sister but wished she could just be Kripa,not Mishty's sister,just Kripa.She wanted to do something for herself,make her name in her own unique way…

And I will,she vowed.

In a few moments,she entered her music school.She began to brighten up.It was a well known hindi music school in London.A private school.Each class consisted of 5-8 people only so they could have as much attention as they needed from the teacher.Only the best could get in and Kripa was one of them.She went in the room and confusedly saw it was packed with kids in other classes.She went and sat next to her friend Tania. "Whats going on?"Tania shrugged. "Apperently there's some kind of big announcement."Kripa was already excited and curious.But she didn't have to suffer long as their teacher

Ms.Juhi came in then. "Good Afternoon class."Ms.Juhi was a middle aged lady,kind of on the chubby side,round face kind ees and a warm smile.

"Good evening maam."they murmured.

"well I have a very important announcement to make…a few weeks ago when we were performing our annual concert,there was a music scout there…they saw our performance and thought it was the best."she paused with a delighted smile. "So this company is going to give a big donation to my small school to make it bigger,theres going to be an award ceremony but the biggest thing will be announced by the company's manager or "scout" himself…he will be here shortly."

The class broke out in excited talking which stopped after a man came in.He introduced himself as Nishant Saxena. "Now I'm a manager of a certain record company in India,and came to give a chance to someone in India to be backup singer for our lead singer."

Kripa felt her eyes go large hearing that.she crossed her fingers. "but,"he continued. "On seeing someones performance here,we decided she will be his co-singer instead.There will be a new album,music video and concert included.Kee in mind that this kind of opportunity doesn't knock on anyones door usually so this is a big deal."

Everyone's eyes were glued to Nishant's face,who seemed to be enjoying the tension. "So,I'm not going to say who the lucky person will be performing with but the lucky person is…Kripa Sharma of course.Congratulations."

All eyes snapped to where Kripa was where she sat dumbfounded not believing what Nishant just said.

-Jess

Edited by maurader4evr - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 part hunz

eagerly awaitn da nxt part 😉
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Thanks Selina...

Kripa ran to the house and into the family room in the back of the house where Mishty was curled up in front of the fireplace reading a novel. "DI!"Kripa launched herself beside Mishty. "You wont believe what just happened!"Kripa proceeded to tell about the evenings happenings.After she finished Mishty looked more excited then Kripa as she hugged her fiercily.That's what Kripa loved so much about their relationship.If one was happy,the ther was ecastic,if one was sad,the other would already be in tears…

"but kripa…you would have to go to India right?" Kripa nodded.

"So…who's going to tell mom?"

"di…would you do me the biggest favor and…"

"ok ok,I'll convince her."

"and I'll tell papa."which was an easy task.

Suryaban,was an ideal father.He would go to ends to keep his family happy.If Gayetri was on the stern side,giving punishments,he was the one sneaking them treats.It was a balance but one thing that was mutual was their concern and care for their kids.

"ouch!"Mishty and Kripa turned around to see a guy rubbing his head as he climbed through a window.

"ummm…Samay,why aren't you using a door?"Mishty asked not sure if she wanted to hear the answer.

"because mom is sitting in the front living room."

"so…?"

"well…see…there was a little…accident…well not accident-a mishap,an incident with the car and the garage door…"

Mishty groaned. "Not again,"

Kripa laughed.This was her brother Samay or "Sam" as he liked to be called,the accident prone.Trouble was his habit.He was their adoptive brother,a fact no one in the family ever mentioned.Samay's dad was an employee and friend of Suryaban's…and when Samay's parents died in a car crash,he was only 10.Kripa's family took him as their own.For Kria then,he was a friend of her own age who lived with her,but in the last 11 years,they became closer than real siblings.

"Di,its not my fault!"

"Oh really?So your car just felt like being friendly with the garage door again did it?"

"maybe…well no,I reversed badly but its not my fault I can't reverse the car well"

Kripa looked at her brother and sister arguing and thinking how much she would miss them.

Later she was lying in her bed,staring at the ceiling.Her room was painted a rich cream color,with a simple furniture and beautiful paintings on the wall.There were pictures of her and her family and friends around the room also.A big bookshelf took over one corner of the room filled with at least 100 books.Kripa loved to read as much as she loved music.An acoustic guitar was on a stand and an electric blue one hanging from the wall.A few stuffed animals in the far corner of her bed.A walk in closet as big as a normal bathroom,there was pictures of Anagd plastered on the wall…the room was esquisivly Kripa.Simple yet elegent and sweet.

Kripa put a hand under her pillow taking a small picture of Anagad in her hand.Im going to be in the same city as you…any possibility we will meet…She remembered Prithvis words… "you've been head over heels for a guy you don't even know." its true,she thought.I don't knw him yet I feel as if I know him better than anyone else…He's so far away from me,yet so close…I know I probably never ever meet him so why am I always making scenarious in my head about him…about us…how is it possible to love someone I don't know to this limit that he's on my mind whatever I do…Kaisa Yeh Pyar Hai…
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She was here…finally…she was in India.After begging and reasoning with her mom,she was finally allowed to go for a shot at making her dreams come true.And now she was at the recording studio,sitting in the car with Nishant.

"So,who's the guy I'm singing with?"

"haven't you asked me this enough times?"he asked irritation ovious.

"Yes,but you don't answer."

"well,you'll meet him in a few minutes."

"ok,"she replied downcast. "But will you at least tell meif he's a really well known singer or newcomer or what?"

"He's decent,"was the short reply.

Kripa turned more downcast.Rules out the possibility that its Angad…no one would call him decent…but im here and im going to sing.Its ok,even if its not with Angad.Its ok.With a smile she saw that they were at the studio already.They got out and went in.

The room where they were going to rehearse was a big room with pictures of famoes composers framed on the wall.All kinds of instruments covering one corner of the room.There were a few couches and chairs facing the big dance space in th middle of the room.Behind that was 2 steps leading to a small stage with microphones set up.And then a door leading to the recording studio.

A restless half an hour later the voice coach,Maddie asked her to sing.

"umm…what should I sing?"she asked.Besides Maddie there were a few dancers and music players,the cheoreographer and Nishant in the room.

Maddie shrugged. "whatever you want to sing.You can use any instruments here or tell us the song's name and someone else will play the music or we'll most likely have a music track."

"oh ok…ummm…I'll use the guitar.The song I have in mind isn't exactly popular or a track.I doubt you'll have the music to it."Kripa replied.Nishant indicated one of the dancers to get a guitar.Kripa sat on the steps and started strumming to the song Kasam Ki Kasam.

Its from the movie Mein Prem Ki Deewani Hoon.Listen to it while reading or you wont get the hang of the moment…or you wont know while im babling about guitars and pianos. red is angad purple is kripa...

Online link-raaga and gayaki
http://www.raaga.com/channels/hindi/movie/H000505.html

http://www.gayaki.com/songs-of-Mein-Prem-Ki-Dewani-Hoon.html

Badongo link
http://www.badongo.com/file/2005897

Kripa was surprised as some of the backup singers started to sing and as some others started plaing some of the other instruments.This was her song,she had written it.She uploaded it on the internet but didn't think it was good enough to be heard and remembered.Nishant motioned her to go sing up in the mike as the others played the music.

Kasam ki kasam hai kasam se
Humko pyaar hai sirf tumse

Angad was in the next room on his laptop when he heard the voice singing his favorite song.He had obsessed with that song ever since he had come across it on the net.It was usually heard blaring from his speakers but this singing sounded too real to be coming from a cd.He got up to see who it was.

Kasam ki kasam hai kasam se
Humko pyaar hai sirf tumse
Ab yeh pyaar na hoga phir humse

Kasam ki kasam hai kasam se
Humko pyaar hai sirf tumse

As he entered the room he saw the most beautiful face he had ever come across…

Log kehte hain paagal hoon main yeh bhi na jaanoon
Dil lutaaya hai maine, ab kisi ki na maanoon

She was in a white churidaar and her hair loose with strands on her face…

Chain de karke maine bechainiyaan yeh li hai
Neendein udaake maine tumse vafaayein ki hai

Her eyes were closed as she sang…her singing seemed straight from her heart

Kasam ki kasam hai kasam se
Jee rahe hain hum tere dam se
Ab yeh pyaar na hoga phir humse
Kasam ki kasam hai kasam se
Humko pyaar hai sirf tumse

He went over and started playing the piano…
Kripa opened her eyes.She couldn't see the person playing the piano as his back was to her.She sat on the steps again and started playing the guitar with him…

He got up and faced her.With a shock she saw it was Angad! She stood up as he walked towards her.Black jeans,with a black t-shirt which showed off his toned body so well.He picked up the mike from beside her and took her hand walking towards the middle of the dance floor,

Kuch ishaaron mein tumne humse jo yeh kaha hai
Ab yakeen aa raha hai, tumko bhi kuch hua hai

His eyes were teasing her…

Kyoon tumko dekhte hain, kya dil mein sochte hai
Toofaan jo uth raha hai, hum usko rokte hain
Kasam ki kasam hai kasam se
Yeh milan hai sanam ka sanam se
Ab yeh pyaar na hoga phir humse

He bought her closer to him and the mike closer the their faces as they sang together.Kripa fond her voice and started singing.

Kasam

Ki kasam

Haan Kasam

Their faces were an inch away...their eyes reflecting so much...

Yeh kasam

Di kasam

Li kasam

Haan kasam

Kasam

Kasam

Kasam

--BOTH--
Kasam ki kasam hai kasam se
Humko pyaar hai sirf tumse
Ab yeh pyaar na hoga phir humse

The song finished but Kripa and Angad stayed in that position lost in each other...

hope you guys liked...

-Jess

Edited by maurader4evr - 18 years ago
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omg continue soon hun!! that was amazinggggg!!
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amazing and nice choice in song.. i love it.
continue soon
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dat was too good n plzzzzz continue soon
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Originally posted by: Numera*

omg continue soon hun!! that was amazinggggg!!

thank you😳

-Jess

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DAT WAS REALLY GOOD CONTINUE SOON
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grt continue i played the song at

the same time and it was so touching

and sweet i could just imagine them

doing that
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dat was excellent amazin tooo gud, n i was listenin to the song while readin it n have to say amazin choice of song it really suited the story!!! Pls do continue soon, i cnt wait to read da nxt part!!!! 👏

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