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Posted: 20 years ago
#51

HURRY
UR 20 MIN> are almost up!!!

jokes but really hurry

Goldi2

Edited by goldi2 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#52
ok here is the fan fiction....

Kripa is cooking while angad is sitting in the kitchen reading one of Kripa's book form her collection...

K: angad...

A: Haan

K: Jab tak khana bantha hai tab tha hum Truth ka saath cont kara..

A: Sure... ek mint... angad finishes the page marks it and says tho tum kya kha rahi thi...

K: Main yhe kha rhi thi ki u want to cont with Truth...

A: Sure...

K: Ok tho maina tumse poocha tha ki what is ur idea of a dream date?

A: Ok well... my idea of a dream date would be... he stops

K: Would be...

A: Um... me and my loved one on the terrace alone.. no one there... a candle nite dinner.. soft music playing... away from all the rushes of the city... koi aaisa kaga jha pe baas shanti hoo aur main aur my love...

K: Ohhhh how sweet... aur isi ka saath hi hamara dinner ready hai...

A: Great... smells awesome...

K: Bas ek mint main table phe khaana laga dati hoo...

A: Aur tab tak main aapna haath dokaa aata hoo...

K: Aur if u dont mind please mera room sa car ki chabiya bhi laana they are on the bed..

A: Ok lakin tumahara room hai kaha...

K: right up the staris the first room..

A: Ok...

Kripa smiles and cont laying the table...
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Angad enters Kripa's room and turns the light on he is really aawed by what he sees... the room in spick and span.. pictures of Kripa all around the room.. really cute once... most of then she is wearing a causual cloths.. and then there is one in which she is wearing a Black saari..i very shiny... when golden embroydrie (spelling) on it... she is wearing huge jumkaas and nothing on her neck... she has one hand in her hair with loads of black and gold churriyan in both hands... he keeps looking at the picture as if he has seen a pari fall right from the sky... so beautyful yet natural... angad just cant take his eyes off of the picture he takes his cell out and takes a picture of the picture right then Kripa calls...

K: Anagd... kha hoo tum..

A: i'm comming..

K: Ok jaldi karo nahie tho channa thanda ho jaaya gaa...

Angad comes running down... putting the cell back in his pocket..

They eat and talk... until kripa asks angad a compleatly out in air question..

K: Angad would u like to get arranged married or love...

and puts his spoon down and looks at kripa...

A: Sweetheart what do u think..

K: I dont know... i mean u not soooo bad looking..

A: Thanks kripa.. but why do u ask...

K: Bas aaisa hi..

A: Well iska jawab main usdin do gaa jab mujhe pyaar hoga...

K: Angad... aagar tumhe pyaar hona hai tho tum araange marrage kaisa karo gaa...

A: Ya good question.... but mind u.. u said AAGAR PYAAR HONA HAI... i mean aagar... IF...

K: Come on angad u know that u will fall in love everyone does...

A: Everyone...

K: Yes everone.. and they both go back to eating until angad asks kripa the same question....

Ok iwill cont later!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#53

that was really good and definatly worth waintg for aorund 30 mins.

GOLDI2

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Posted: 20 years ago
#54

that was again very very good

please continue........................

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Posted: 20 years ago
#55
EXCELLENT!!! 👏pllzzz continue👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
#56
nice but plz con.!! SOON!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#57
Ok here is the next part

Angad asks Kripa the same question....

K: Love... u know i find this whole arrange marrage thing stange... i mean ek ladka aata hai... everyone tells u to dress up nicely... talk sweet.... walk nice bla bla bla...
angad just laughs... WHAT ANGAD.. i mean ladko ko bauth easy lagta hai unko sirf questions poochna hai bas.. na unko chaiy pelani parthi naa hi... and another laugh and finally they finish eating...

A: Kripa ek kaam kartha hai...

K: Kya

A: Hum pretend kartha hai ki main ek ladka hoo...

K: Angad????

A: Oh shut up Kripa i mean main tumhe deekh na aaya ho aur.... bas main chatha ho ki main coffee pieo nah ki chaiy...

K: Angad plese NO

A; Oh come on Kripa naa hi tumhe koi Ladka dekna aaya hai aur naa hi main kabhi kasi ladki ko dekhna gya hoo

K: Angad please.. kripa gets up to leave but angad grabs her hand...

A: PLEASE... has makes his puppy eyes and kripa is melted...

K: Fine...

A: Ok ab tum jaldi sa change kar ka aao

K: What...

A: What what tum aapna hona wala pati sa jeans main milo gi... go wear a saari...

K: Angad tumha tho drama director hoona chaiya tha...

A: I know!

K: Ruko main abhi aati ho Aapna pati parmeshwar ka liya sari oen ka aati hoo

A: Thats like my good wife...

A few minutes later kripa comes down wearing the same outfit as in the picture in her room.. everything is the same but to angad she is looking even more beautiful... she she approches angad he wispers BEAUTIFUL!

K: Kya?

A: Ur beautiful... kripa just blushes...

K: ok ab ghoorna band karo aur aapna drama shru kara...

They both sit down....

A: Tho aapka naam kya hai...

K: Shyly.. Ji Kripa.. aur aapka

A: Angad... tho aap ka shuuk kya hai...

K: Ji mujhe paitning karna ka sauk hai...

A: What kripa tumne mujhe pelha nahie bataya...

K: Angad hum yha rehersal kar raha hai...

A: Ok sorry tumahari kabhar main abhi lati hoo...

Angad back to Angad the dulha...

A: Oh wow aapko painting pasand hai...

K: Ji

A: Tho please mujhe deekni hai... aap mujhe dekhaiy gii naa

K: Ji nahie..

Naina: Kripa beta bad manners tumhe aapna hona wala dulha ko aaisa mana nahie chaiya tha....

K: Mom aap... vo hum tho baas you he...

N: Its ok beta..

K: Oh mom this is Angad... Mishty ka fiancee ka bahi...

N: Oh Hi beta...

A: Namasta Aunty....

N: Ok Kripa ab jaka Angad ko aapni saari paintings dekaho...

K: Ya mom

A: Bhi waa... beti ho tho aaisi... They all laugh... Kripa takes anagd show him the painting while naina goes to change into her nite suit...
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A: Kripa tumahari room main tho koi bhi painting nahie thi

K: I have a seprate room for my paintings...

A: Ohhh kripa opens a rooms door angad walks in the room is full of candels on the tables and paitings everywhere...

A: Wow.. this is like heavan...

K: Anagd tum bhi naa.. anyways are we back to Kripa and Angad the friends...

A: Laughs YES!

K: Thanks god.. mummy ko dekh ka main tho dar hi gyi thi mujhe laga ki vo gussa kara gi...

Angad is still scanning the paintings...

K: Kaisi lagi..

A: they are beautiful!

K: Tum bhi tho paining kartha hoo...

A; Ya lakin atni acchi nahie...

rite then naina walks in again..

N: Kripa...

K: Ji Mom

N: Kaal...

K: I know mom.. please i dont want anything

N: Are u sure...

K: 100%

N: Ok!

K: Aur mom main abhi kuch deer main angad ko ghar chor ka wapis aa rahi hoo..

N: Ok beta..

A: Bye Aunty

N: Bye beta...

and kripa drops angad home....
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K: Ok angad bye!

A: Ek minute

K: Kya..

A: Ghari sa bhar nichlo

K: Ufff angad kya hai...

A: Ek picture!

K: Angad no!

A: Please

K: no angad...

A: Ok fine! Bye...

K: Bye!



Preview: Kripa finds out Angad has met with a majoy accident
goldi2 thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#58

that was awsome!!!!!!!!!

i really enjoyed for a sec. i htought this was a scene fomr hum tum when they bothe prtennd but know the painting part and her changing into a sari was totally differnet plus there was noo argument bout the kids and dog lol

but really that was great

GOLDI2

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Posted: 20 years ago
#59

thanks

it was very very good

continue please......................................

cheen2005 thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#60
oooo looks like its her birthday tom. very cute part.
plss continue.
luv cheen

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