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Posted: 20 years ago
#71

oh no! will angad die??😭😭

poor angad...

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Posted: 20 years ago
#72
this is awesome i jst read the stories from the bginin plez continue fast
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Posted: 20 years ago
#73
u shuldn't kill us then no1 will read ur fan-fic so think bout it!!!!! lol!! nice stry and keep it ^!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#74
u guys are sooooooooooo funny... well u have to read my next part to find out... but until then read the next part of my fan fic Nafrat Main Pyaar.....

The next part for Ek Rishta will be up in abt 30-40 mins! 😛
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Posted: 20 years ago
#75


OK PLEASE RE-READ THIS PART U WILL UNDERSTAND


ok next part...

Kripa trips over something.. she looks over to see Angad laying there drapped in blood... Kripa screams loudly... She picks up angad's head and tries to wake him up but he dosent... she starts crying even harder... she is about to call the police when all.. she sees angad's hand moving...

K: Angad... Angad.. tum teek ho naa

A: Kripa.. thank god tum aa gyi...

K: DOnt worry tumhe kuch bhi nahie hoga... Someone help...

right then all the lights turn on and a crowd of please come up screaming

EVERYONE: HAPPY BIRTHDAY KRIPA!!!!!!!!!!

Kripa is confused... she looks down at angad who is laughing.. he takes the blood stains off his face and is laughing like crazy...

Kripa runs away in the ladies bathroom crying... Everyone is still giggling when angad runs behind her...

He knock on the door..
A: Kripa... Kripa..

K: Angad go away...

A: Dekho kripa aagar tum bahar nahi aai tho main aandar aa raha hoo

K: Tho aajao

A: Kripa main sach main aa raha ho

K: I dont care... angad just walks in angry..

A: Gosh Kripa.. hum sab tho maazak kar rahatha...

K: Angad (still crying) yeh bhi koi maazak hota hai.. tumne tho meri jaan nichal di thi, aagar tumhe saach main kuch hojata tho... gosh anagd yeh bhi koi maazak hai... please aaj ka baad tum mujhe aapni shakal maat dekahana... now leave...

A: Kripa... please... Kripa i am sorry... But kripa dosent listen and just walks away...

Kripa walks out smiling... and angad behind her sad...

Everyone wishes kripa and they cut the cake... Angad tries his best to talk to her but kripa dosent listen...

Sudennly all the lights go back down... Kripa is really freaked put and starts looking for angad...

Right then someone speaks on the mike... Kripa looks over its Angad...

A: Ajj is din main appni bauth hi pyarri dost sa kuch kehna chata hao... I AM SORRY KRIPA! Kripa looks over to him tears in her eyes... she turns back to leave when she hears the piano playing and then angad says....

A: Kripa this is for u! he starts singing

Angad: sun zara, soniye sun zara
sun zara, soniye sun zara
sun zara, soniye sun zara
sun zara, soniye sun zara
aaj khamoshiyon se aa rahi hai sadaa
dhadkane hai deewani dil bhi kuch kahe raha hai
sun zara, soniye sun zara sun zara soniye sun zara
aaj khamoshiyon se aa rahi hai sadaa
dhadkane hai deewani dil bhi kuch kahe raha hai
beete lamhon ke saaye to
bas yahin tham gaye hain
yaad mujhe aaye teri baatein
palkon ki surkh chaadar pe
ashq bhi jam gaye hain
teri aankhon se na hat thi aankhein
bebasi ka hai alam kya karoon main bataa
dhadkane hai deewani dil bhi kuch kahe raha hai
sun zara, soniye sun zara sun zara, soniye sun zara
aaj khamoshiyon se aa rahi hai sadaa
dhadkane hai deewani
dil bhi kuch kahe raha hai
sun zara, soniye sun zara sun zara, soniye sun zara
choom ke apne honthon se tere ghum ko churaa loon laake tujhe de doon, khushiyan saari
apne har beqraari ko seene mein hi chuupa loon meri chaatein jaayen, tujhpe waari
sehmi sehmi labon mein gul gayi hai dua dhadkane hain deewani dil bhi kuch kahe raha hai
sun zara, soniye sun zara sun zara, soniye sun zara
aaj khamoshiyon se aa rahi hai sadaa
dhadkane hain deewani dil bhi kuch kahe raha hai sun zara, soniye sun zara - 4


Edited by armaans4ever - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#76
ok now i know this part sucked....
neha9 thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#77
hey guys i need a list of really nice yet kinda old romantic songs and the movies name PLEASE!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#78
neha, wat happen to the part where Kripa finds Angad covered in blood. weren't you continuing that. maybe I am just mixing up things 😕
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Posted: 20 years ago
#79
In Kripa's car, angad is driving while Kripa is thinking to her self.

K: Mujhe aat kat kisi na bhi itna aacha surprise nahie diya. aur angad jisko main bas abhi mili ho usna mujhe itna pyaarya gift diya... aur Prithvi usko tho kabhi mera b-day jaan nahie retha.. haar saal mujhe jaad delana partha hai...

Anagd looks over to kripa who is deep in thought. he snaps his fingures in front of her face: Kripa? Kya hua

K: Kuch nahie... Angad..

A: Ya..

K: Thanks for such a wonderful gift

A: Kaun sa..

K: Vo surprise...

A: Kaun sa.. party ya gana...

K: Well mujhe doono surprises bauth aacha laga....

A: Ok lakin kaun sa saayda aacha laga

K: Tumahara gaana...

A: Kyun...

K: Kya matlab Kyun?

A: I mean, mera gaana main aaisi baat kya thi...

K: Angad baat gaana main nahie thi... tumahari aawaz main thi... tumahare mujhe manana ka azdaaz main thi... I was really touched...

A: So tumhe gaana aacha nahie laga...

K: Maina aaisa tho nahie kaha...

A: Tho tumne yhe bhi to nahie kha ka tumha gaana aacha laga...

K: Ok baba... Ganaa, tumahara awaaz, andaz, yeh party, aur tum sab mujhe bauth aacha laga...
Angad laughs.... and looks at kripa..they just look at each other. sudennly we see a huge truck coming their way..
K: Anagdddddddddddd
Anagd looks ahead and looses balance.... his car hits a tree and kripa falls out, angad quickly gets out of the car and sees kripa rolling down the hill.. he follows her and finally reached..

A: Kripa.... Kripa... please utho... Anagd is really confused, he dosent know what to do.. he his about to pick kripa up in his arms when Kripa starts laughing...

A: Tum maazak kar rahi thi..

K: Haan aagar tum kar sakta ho tho main bhi...

A: Ok shut up kripa.. yeh bhi koi maazak hai... tumne tho meeri jaan hi nichal di thi.. jao main tumse baat nahie kartha...

K: Oh oh angad... naaraz baad main ho jana pelha meri help karo... mujhse utha nahie jaara....

A: Mujhe tumahari help nahie karni...

K: Fine.. she stands up, her feet starts to stumble, and she starts to fall again... but before she reaches the floor angad grabs her...

K: Laughs... thanks..

A: Angery, Ur welcome...

K: Ab chala...

A: Kisa tum chal nahie sakthi, tum wapis kaisa jao gi...

K: Tum mujhe uthalo...

A: Haha u are soo funny, what the hell kripa...

K: What...

A: Saamana dekho... we rolled down a hill.. that must have been fun.. lakin tumahe main aapni goodi main wapis uupar nahie le ka jasak tha...

K: Oh!

I will post the next part soon i have to go see KYPH

i hope u liked this part
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Posted: 20 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: happe

neha, wat happen to the part where Kripa finds Angad covered in blood.
weren't you continuing that. maybe I am just mixing up things 😕



oh no! i didnt post that part! i will explane later! soRRY

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