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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

Rocker

+ 18

Posted: 6 years ago

#101

Awesome update Di 👏👏

Loved it so much!

So the mission has finally begun.

They will be testing 100 of the neutron missiles in 25 days. That sounds dangerous but exciting at the same time.

OMG the details of the plan are thorough and well-written.

I really love the references to the test in 1998. Like the satellites, blind spots, underground tests, codes and time limit. Also Dr. Anil with the horrible memory 😆

Oh so something happened between Falaq and Vini, and maybe Anika as well. I can't wait for their story to unfold.

Jannat and Nawaaz also show up. The patriotism is high in this story.

Shaurya's dad was an engineer in the 1998 test. I guess this experience will help them in this mission.

Aww Yog's taunts are so cute. Do bacchiyan 😆

Does Vini like Falaq? Or was there something else there in the past?

Uh-oh, spies have entered the plot-line. Keeping things secret is going to very difficult now.

Why are civilians so innocent? Literally blurted out the cover Yog and team made for this mission. Now this man, David, is going to figure out something is wrong.

At least Anika informed Yog that they will be expecting an unwanted guest.

I'm really sitting at the edge of my chair, waiting to know more of this story. The suspense is killing me now. You've honestly done brilliant job with the details and characters. I salute you for this Di.

Thanks a lot for the PM

Please update the next part soon

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NainaSM

@NainaSM

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#102

Woww so good

Falak and vini ki kya story hai

Anika and yog going good

Everything is fine

Spy is on work

Team members too

Continue soon

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 6 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: Aquabutterfly
Awesome update Di 👏👏
Loved it so much!
So the mission has finally begun.
They will be testing 100 of the neutron missiles in 25 days. That sounds dangerous but exciting at the same time.
OMG the details of the plan are thorough and well-written.
I really love the references to the test in 1998. Like the satellites, blind spots, underground tests, codes and time limit. Also Dr. Anil with the horrible memory 😆
Oh so something happened between Falaq and Vini, and maybe Anika as well. I can't wait for their story to unfold.
Jannat and Nawaaz also show up. The patriotism is high in this story.
Shaurya's dad was an engineer in the 1998 test. I guess this experience will help them in this mission.
Aww Yog's taunts are so cute. Do bacchiyan 😆
Does Vini like Falaq? Or was there something else there in the past?
Uh-oh, spies have entered the plot-line. Keeping things secret is going to very difficult now.
Why are civilians so innocent? Literally blurted out the cover Yog and team made for this mission. Now this man, David, is going to figure out something is wrong.
At least Anika informed Yog that they will be expecting an unwanted guest.
I'm really sitting at the edge of my chair, waiting to know more of this story. The suspense is killing me now. You've honestly done brilliant job with the details and characters. I salute you for this Di.
Thanks a lot for the PM
Please update the next part soon

Thanks dear glad you like it

Yes the mission has begun finally

They will be testing Neutron missile which is 100 times dangerous than a Neucler bomb ... Yup it's exciting

True they had planned all the things very well

As I told you before I had taken reference from 1998 test in modern era.. Dr. Anil is self satisfied so he usually forget things casually

Vini & Falaq have a back story they were in love since college & Anika knows that well about her friends in detail you will see in coming parts

Jannat & Nawaz also joined the team . .. Well yes it is

True dear & let me tell you same trick was applied to cover the shafts in the test of 1998...it will surely be a great help

Yog ke taunts hamesha cute hotel hai . . They are stubborn na

Yes he does ... What exactly happened will come in coming parts

Yes finally spies have entered the ground & are looking for the exact information true it's going to be tough & as it's convert so no one knows about it that's why civilian told them about the team

Yes Anika had got the information & vini & Anika will surely take the charge of this unwanted guest & will teach him good lesson

Glad you are enjoying it to bits dear & comments like this makes all my efforts worthed

More fun coming up

Stay tuned & keep commenting 😊😊

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 6 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: NainaSM
Woww so good
Falak and vini ki kya story hai
Anika and yog going good
Everything is fine
Spy is on work
Team members too
Continue soon

Thanks Naina dear glad you like it

Yes a long back story and it will be out in coming parts

Yes everyone is going good & things have started

Spies & team both are on work

Everything will be fine & there will be more interesting twist

More fun coming up

Stay tuned & keep commenting 😊

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aptl123

@aptl123

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#105

hii dear... such a nice update...

you have described each and every detail about the launch so accurately...

i mean how do you know such small details about launch.. do you have any background information or knowledge about this...

they are so perfect...

and its good like how you have used previous case example in this...

so finally every one got there and figured out their work...

i like how yog is taking care of everyone...

and finally vinayak and falaq met... so they have back story... what happen to them... i am curious and what is going to happen to them now...

awsome update

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 6 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: aptl123
hii dear... such a nice update...
you have described each and every detail about the launch so accurately...
i mean how do you know such small details about launch.. do you have any background information or knowledge about this...
they are so perfect...
and its good like how you have used previous case example in this...
so finally every one got there and figured out their work...
i like how yog is taking care of everyone...
and finally vinayak and falaq met... so they have back story... what happen to them... i am curious and what is going to happen to them now...
awsome update

Thanks Apti dear glad you like it

Dear there are some basics to be followed when you write such stuff

I had checked about 2 3 days on the Neucler test of 1998 & what all protections were taken so I added them here in current scenario

True all team members have taken up their job efficiently

Obviously Yog is in charge of this entire project he has to make sure nothing goes wrong

Vini & Falaq back story will come soon after this mission gets over & you will get your answers soon

More fun coming up

Stay tuned & keep commenting 😊

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Shalvisharma97

@Shalvisharma97

Navigator

Posted: 6 years ago

#107

Awesome update dii

Loved it

Finally eveyone

Alottted with their work

Do bachiya

Lol

So anika and falaq offer prayers

Oh no

That spy

Let's see how these people tackle this problem

Continue soon

Thanks for pm

Sorry for late reply

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#108

awesome update

continue plz

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 6 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: Shalvisharma97
Awesome update dii
Loved it
Finally eveyone
Alottted with their work
Do bachiya
Lol
So anika and falaq offer prayers
Oh no
That spy
Let's see how these people tackle this problem
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
Sorry for late reply

Thanks Shalvi dear glad you like iti

Yup everyone was allotted their work respectively

Yup they both are stubborn as kid 😆

True first day ka kaam acchi tarah se khatm hua

Yes the spy has entered their space

More fun coming up

Stay tuned & keep commenting 😊