Hawas Ke Pal - An AR Mini SS

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mishrapriya68

@mishrapriya68

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Posted: 6 years ago

#131

Read till Part-7 and really loved the story. You have a really wonderful writing skills. Please PM me the rest of the parts. Thank you in advance.

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Rihoo Haws

@RihooHaws

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Posted: 6 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: mishrapriya68
Read till Part-7 and really loved the story. You have a really wonderful writing skills. Please PM me the rest of the parts. Thank you in advance.

U have excess msg in inbox so not able to send PM...

Clear it so I could PM parts...

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Rihoo Haws

@RihooHaws

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Posted: 6 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: tv05
Awesome story...
Read all parts in one go...
Thanks for pm...
Please pm the last 3 parts...

Thanks dear..

Glad u know u love the story till now...

I have send part 8 and 9, for the last part, leave comment than I will send it in PM...

Take care :)

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Rihoo Haws

@RihooHaws

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Posted: 6 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: geetika314
great part 7, hate that Rajesh and thankfully armaan come on right time and save ridhima, love that ar moment, please pm me part 8

Thanks dear...

Glad u love and enjoy it...

I have send part 8 and 9...

For part 10 (last part), please leave comment on previous parts...

take care and enjoy :D

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Maulik solanki

@maulik1992

Explorer

Posted: 6 years ago

#135

It's awesome, beautiful and perfect story ... Ridhima dar rahi thhi but arman ne usse sambhala Aur usaka mind divert kiya...finally us rakesh ko bhhi usake kiye ki saja milii... Ridhima is initially sock but happy that arman ko mom ne use beti mana... Arman bhhi kadhhi moka nahi sodata.. Ridhima se reward gift magarah he sab problem khatam hone ki wajahase...they spent quality time once again...ohh, one month leap... Wo engaged ho gaye and finally unaki sadi hogi ajj... Ridhima and usaki sister ki conversation bahut emotional thhi... Ridhima apane parents ko miss karahihe... Love AR massage conversations... Arman see ridhima and lost on her beauty...

Finnaly AR ki sadi hogai... And wo ab akele he after all the rituals... arman ne hawas ke pal ka real meaning describe kiya k usake Liya wo pal kya mayine rakhate thhe... Wo ridhima ko paheli najar me pyar kar bethha... Then AR explored each other once again but first time after marriage... Ridhima thanks arman for everything and told arman that use time lagega usaka past bhhulane me... Arman also promise her that wo usake sath rahega har situation me Aur usaki past ki wajase wo unake future pe affect nahi hon dega.. And again both soon in their love land... Love AR moments...if possible epilogue please

Thanks for the whole story... Its show that girls are not assosiated with this kind of business by their own they are trapped or their circumstances make tham to enter in this kind of business... People should come and help tham to free from this kind of exploitation of girls...

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geetika314

@geetika314

Inactive

Posted: 6 years ago

#136

love part 8 and 9, love his surprise for ridhima and also like that armaan mom was sorry for her action, please send me part 10

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JMJM00

@JMJM00

Beginner

Posted: 6 years ago

#137

Nice update.Waiting for the next part.

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Rihoo Haws

@RihooHaws

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Posted: 6 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: geetika314
love part 8 and 9, love his surprise for ridhima and also like that armaan mom was sorry for her action, please send me part 10

Thanks Geetika...

Glad u love and enjoy...

Hope u will enjoy part 10 also...

Keep reading and loving...

Take care :)

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Rihoo Haws

@RihooHaws

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Posted: 6 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: JMCCMJ
Nice update.Waiting for the next part.

Thanks dear...

I have send part 10...

Enjoy...

And Please add my buddy request to get further updates in PM
take care :)

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palak sharma

@lashyyy

Inactive

Posted: 6 years ago

#140

hey di hows u

ok frankly i dont know when i last commented on this story but i readed all the updates so all comments in one but plz ignore n forgive if i lost any part

loved all ar scenes the way Armaan is possessive abt ridhz he fight with his mother

n his dad is so sweet n understanding

his mother is just impossible khud chahe kuch bhi kare sab thik or koi kisi pressure ya koi problem me kare to cheap such double standards

armaan dad is so so so respectable he still try to make her realize her mistake n will forgive her if she want

to apologize

loved the scene where armaan beat the hell out of the person who tried to force ridhz n vivek is so damn scared that moment it was the best scene n one of my favs than armaan

taking ridhz out on dates it was so beautiful n mesmerizing

he even bought her house i loved that scene too

loved how he arrested vivek at the airport n meet n enjoy time with ridhz family but but but its short lived but handled it with ease

problem solved they lived happily ever after but but but i feel like in last 2 part u were in a rush to end it soon

its was all so fast forward y???

anyways watever i loved n enjoyed that wat matter it was a different story u tried something different this tym n it was worth reading enjoyed it do try more

for now bye take care luv you

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