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Posted: 7 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: angelsaranya

Nice start ramya dear...emotional update...oh my poor roli, she suffered a lot...eagerly waiting for the next update dear...please continue soon..


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Posted: 7 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

I feel very sad for roli.her parents are frustrated with their forced marriage so they are always into quarelling.I understand.but why are they cruel to their own daughter?how can a mother be like this to her own daughter ?is roli their real daughter?is roli missing Sid ?roli needs Sid to cheer her up.very emotional start.I like diff stories.keep writing


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Posted: 7 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: RoshniMenon88

Good start Ramya. I remember, during my initial writing days, I had written a similar piece wherein Roli is broken by her parents fights. But you had gone deep in it n I'm feeling bad for poor Roli who's suffering between her parents. it's true, people who get married without their interest live their life just for the sake of others n once they've a kid n all, the fight deepens so much that they can't stay together at all. who gets trapped in the bargain is poor kids like Roli who don't know what to do with it. But what surprises me is Meena's attitude, she can't be so cruel to her own daughter for god's sake! n who's Roli remembering, looks like its none other than Sid. But did he leave her as well. it's quite intriguing, so update soon


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Posted: 7 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: sarahrosid

So emotional update baby. Poor roli suffered a lot because of her parents. I thinking about her hero only nice. Don't stop dear. Waiting for nxt


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Posted: 7 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: riswanarichu

Nice start dear. Poor roli it was an emotional update . waiting for the next one ...


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Posted: 7 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: ayeshakapoor

Nice start Jerry...& Emotional update...I am feeling bad for Roli...She suffered alot because of her parents...Eagerly waiting for next update.


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Posted: 7 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Vampire2468

Superbbb start...Feeling bad for Roli 😒Poor she suffering so much 😒Is he Sid about whom she is talking?Eagerly waiting for the next part


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Posted: 7 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: ayeshasif

Very emotional update plz update soon can't wait for the next


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anniesiddiqui

Nice start Ramya...emotional update...Feeling bad for Roli...Poor she suffering so much...now waiting for next update.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part-2:
Flashback:
5 years back..Roli was in her 9th standard...it was her summer holidays...
roli's position is the same at that time too...
however her relation with her parents may be...but every relative of roli loves her soo much..
they all think that..roli is soo cute adorable happy going girl...but none knows about roli's life...she doesnt ever open up to anyone...
and above all...roli loves her cousin sister vaishnavi a lot...for namesake she is her cousin sister...but she is more than blood relation...she is her world..she is her evreything...
vaishnavi and roli loves each other soo much...that everyone loves to see their bonding...it looks soo unique to everyone...
in summer holidays...roli's mother meena gets a call from her sister...(vaishu's mother)
vaishu's mother said that there is a family function..soo they all have to attend it..she says a particular time to reach the function..
the function is in a big function hall..and the function's reason is roli's doll vaishnavi...it's her birthday...
roli was soo happyy...she really wanted to attend the party and spend some good time with her sister..as she sees a hell in her home..
luckily...meena says okay to roli to come along with her...
roli was soo excited..she completes all her works in the home early..and gets ready...
they reach the function hall..as the function is in the evening..the hall all the lights decorations was looking soo adorable...
roli smiles seeing everything...
and then she finds her sister vaishu on the stage standing on the stage...waiting for roli to come...
they both see each other...a broad smile crepts on her each other's faces..
they immediately hugs each other tightly...
roli:happy birthday jaanuu...!!!!
vaishu:thank u soo much didi...!!!
roli:my doll is looking soo beautiful today...
vaishu:that means..daily i am not looking good?
roli smiles listening it..
roli:noo baby..ur soo gorgeous today than daily...
vaishu smiles and again hugs her sister...
roli:chalo..lets cut the cake...
vaishu:noo didi..let everyone come..my father's sister and her children are coming too...let them come..will start...
roli:okay...
meanwhile roli and vaishu in no time starts blabbering with each other about everything...they share each and everything...but roli didnt tell about her parents..because she doesnt want to hurt her sister...
and then everyone gathers on the stage for the cake cutting...vaishu's father's family too comes..
roli's mausa (vaishu's father) and his sister (radhika) and her two sons..has arrived for the function..
soo..soon the function started...
vaishu cut the cake and 1st feeds her parents and and then to her elder brother gautam..and then to roli..
roli eats the cake and feeds the cake to vaishu also..and tten she gives her birthday gift to vaishu..
roli:u can open it..
Vaishu excitingly opens the gift and finds a heart shape pendant with a golden chain..
everyone were soo surprised seeing it..
vaishu was soo happy...she immediately hugs roli tightly..
vaishu:thank u soo much didi..love u...!!!
roli:love u too...and no thanks sweety..
she says by smilingly...
and then she sees someone coming and standing on the other side of vaishu..
roli just sees around normally and then she sees someone and there her life started to change..her heart skips a beat seeing him..
he is in a green and black formal shirt and a blue jean...setting his hair..looking absolutely like a greek god..
yes..its siddhant bharadwaj..a 18 year old guy...who just completed his 12th...
and came for his little sister's birthday...
that was the 1st time..roli saw him..and felt some strange tickling sensation in her body..
his smile his care towards everyone..made roli to adore to him to the core..
sid:happy birthday my doll..
he wished her kissing on her hairs..
vaishu:thank u bhaiya...
she said smiling...
that was the 1st time roli listened to his voice..and that has sent a chill to her spine making her come out of her thoughts...
though siddhant was engaged with his family..roli's looks was always around him for the whole day...
she kept staring at him now and then..but siddhant...he is not looking at any girl in the party...he is always with his mother and with his brother prem bharadwaj..
that means he is a mumma's boy...roli can say it...
roli goes to vaishu and asks..
roli:vaishu..who is that guy?
she points her finger towards sid..
vaishu smiles and says..
vaishu:he is my cousin brother didi...he is soo good...
roli:ohh...
she is feeling soo heavenly seeing him...
she is soo happy by seeing him...
she is feeling soo different seeing him...
after some time..
all the children are playing at one side..while siddhant and his brother are sitting and talking in the opposite side...
then roli's younger cousin brother a 5 years kid came to her...
his name is mikky...roli loves him soo much..as he is the youngest in their children gang...
mikky:roli didi..ice cream..
he points towards ice cream..
roli:chalo..we will get it...
she smiles and gets up from the chair...mikky started running fast holding roli's hand...making roli also to run along with him..
just then siddhant and prem were also going for ice cream..
roli saw this..and she saw this too that roli is behind sid..and she is soo close to him that if mikky drags her little more surely roli is going to fall on siddhant...which is going to look completely embarassing...
she dont know what to do..neither mikky is slow nor siddhant is walking fast..
siddhant doesnt know anything about the happenings..
soon mikky as roli thought dragged her little more..and she is about to fall..no other option..then sid goes to other side of the hall..
roli:shit..!!!just missed...!!!
she controls herself from falling down..
mikky:didi..ice cream..
roli:haa baby..ruko..i was about to fall now..dont walk fast..the floor is soo smooth..
she gives ice cream to mikky...
mikky takes it happily and smiles..he kisses his sister...
roli feels happy...
roli too kisses him..
they enjoyed a lot...specially roli..she felt soo special..
at the end of the function..when its time for her to leave..
she hugged vaishu mikky...and kissed them..and said bye..
her eyes were searching for someone..to come before her for one last time..
then she saw siddhant coming out of the function hall..
she smiled and felt relieved...
she said bye to everyone and went home..
though she doesnt want to go home everytime she comes to vaishu..as her home is a hell of torture...but this she went with a smile with a lot of memories of his...
after going home..for her goodness none talked with her..as everyone are tired...they all went to sleep immediately...
roli changed her dress and fell on the bed...
she closed her eyes to remember him..
his perfect face his perfect personality...his attitude..and most importantly his smile and his voice..made her blush a lot...
she opened her eyes..
roli to herself:why am i feeling like this??i never saw any guy in my life..but this guy surely did some magic on me..and u dont even know his name..and ur drooling over him..roli..this is soo wrong...but what feeling is this?is this attraction or..
she felt something else..but she brushed away her thoughts..
roli to herself again:roli..dont think too much..nothing like that will happen..anyways u cant see him again in ur life..
this made her feel little bad...but she felt its okay...
she closed her eyes and slept with his memories..
she thought that she will never ever see siddhant again in her life..
but no destiny has some other plan for roli and siddhant...
to be continued...

Though her parents didnt give her a bit of happiness in her life..siddhant with his 1st look itself gave her a lot of happiness..may be thats true love..
hope u all love the update...give ur valuable comments...
Thank u..!!!
Ramya...

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