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Posted: 7 years ago

Will you, wont you...

She leaned on the headboard by him and sighed audibly, the tension visibly leaving her body

He took her hand in his and squeezed

"Avantika... I know it's a big deal he said rubbing his thumb on the back of her hand

"Humney 6 months kaha hai Mrs Garima Sood ko

His heart sank when he heard that. He should have known that already but it hurt nevertheless

"Oh? Um... great then he mumbled

"I really loved my job

"I am sure, your smiling picture on the bank's page was very telling he chuckled

She turned to him

"Yeah I looked at it one morning on my way to work when Bhabhi was teasing me about you I think? he rubbed his eyebrows shyly shutting his eyes

"They took that picture on my birthday, Dad showed up to surprise me that morning, aur Ma ne hamari favorite boutique Roorkee se who kurta bheja hamey she said smiling

"Good day to wear it then huh? he asked

She nodded, "Abhi shaayad Mrs Sood hata dein

"Umm.. "uh... um? he reluctatntly tried to tell her "Not if u go back within 6 months

"We should have talked about this before we got married he said sighing

"I wanted to get here as fast as I could she blurted

He smiled, their eyes met and they ogled each other for a few minutes

"Aur hum soch rahe hain tumne hamari wajah se jaldi ki he whispered

His lips twitched sexy at the end of that line

She blushed "If you want to think that she whispered

"U are going to let me have that false hope? he whispered

"I knew I had to live with you she offered that in consolation

"THANKS!! "Ouch!! That sounds so much better he mocked as he burst out laughing at her sop

"Aapne pata nahi haan kyon kar dee she sighed looking straight in front at the many windows across the room

"Haan hamey der karni chahiye thi nahi? he checked

She pulled her hand away, he gripped it tightly

"Hamey Chandu ki chinta thi... aapko? she dragged

"Umm... I don't know... I thought you looked hot in that picture... he muttered scanning her through half closed eyes, she was sitting up staright

He transferred her hand into his left hand, and felt her bra strap with his right

She squirmed.. and shuddered, laying over his hand to stop him

"Ofcourse I saw you that night... disheveled and outraged he said calmly

"Hum to plan banakar aaye the ki Chandu ko yaha se kidnap kar jaayenge

"Ha he cackled

He rubbed her back with his trapped hand

"And u smell great... so I just said yes!!"

he buried his face in her arm and groaned

She gave in... relaxing, "I don't know what I will do Harit"

"Umm... aap hamari paralegal ban saktin hain" he offered

"U come home sweaty and grimy... no!!" she whispered shaking her head

He chuckled and smothered her

"Aapke liye AC lagwa denge" he hovered over her lips

And paused and stroked her lips possessively

"Tum dilli jaakar hamey yaad karogi? " he asked grimly😭

"Kyon karen yaad? " she asked deeply hurt😭

He began kissing her unwilling to go any further on this topic tonight

Edited by Nisha0604 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Traffic turmoil

He was giving Alka a ride to work that morning , she had a 7 AM shift at Clara Swain

"OMG, KYON CHHEDI AAPNE WHO BAAT? she was horrified

He looked out the window not meeting her eyes

"Rishu bhai humse keh rahe they I should encourage her to open up

"And you asked her to go back to Delhi? Ma ko pata chala to aapki khair nahi Harit Alka was pale

He drove quietly... they waited in traffic... he honked many times as a truck jackknifed in the middle of the road thwarted progress

"Rishu bhayya bhi Alka mumbled sadly

"Bhabhi kabhi na kabhi to karni padti baat na?

"Haan to theek hai, honeymoon... bacha... uske baad career she made excuses weakly

"Lekin aapne aate hi teesre mahiney mein ER mein job kar lee

"U can tell she is not wowed by the life here he said looking straight at the traffic mess

"Ma wahan... Ma kyon hum sab log yeh sochkar baithe hain ki aap dono... umm... Alka struggled to convey their discovery that they suspected total lack of intimacy in that relationship

"How can I ask her to open up and not talk about her career prospects in Bareilly? "Or lack there of? he challenged his Bhabhi

The AC shut down the car heating up fast

"I mean the freaking car airconditioning cannot take the Bareilly heat!! he cursed, punching the keys repeatedly

"Yahan hain na itne saare banks... SBI, UBI, Bank of India Canara Bank

"She did something niche Bhabhi... Credit risk assessment type stuff he mumbled

Alka went quiet she didn't understand any of it. She didn't know how MIL would perceive the news

Even this morning Lakshmi had made a joke about how Avantika's daughter will have a pointy chin and clear flawless skin, and big eyes like Harit

"Chandu ko chhodkar reh lengi? Alka was suddenly chirpy

Harit looked at her and smiled amused, chuckled... and shook his head

"U were silent for so long and now you come up with that argument? look

"Nahi... nahi... Soch lein aap... Kaise reh paayengi who? Alka was adamant

Then going very still again, realizing she hadn't said anything about how she could live without Harit

Yes, Harit was more important

Why did she down play the husband and exaggerate Chandu's importance? Oh how it must have hurt Harit


Alka cringed

Why did she say Chandu?

She squirmed and wiped sweat off her brow, as a bored cop directed them to a side gully, whistling viciously

Edited by Nisha0604 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
isko kehte hair back to back in the true sense of the word.
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Posted: 7 years ago
I was wondering where my partners in crime disappeared Shru
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow
Thank you for back to back updates Nisha.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

I was wondering where my partners in crime disappeared Shru


never too far away nish.

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Posted: 7 years ago
The lawyer missed to make a point. He should have folded her by asking if you thought you wouldn't have anything to live for in Bareilly after six months how come you accuse me of delaying our honeymoon. Boy! He does need a paralegal 😆

I'm surprised the ladies of the house haven't caught on to the couple's coochie coo?!!. Yeah unless the couple admit to each other that their last choice is not a bad choice to live with it's going to be a period of perseverance with their inner turmoil.

Give in guys, both your ego's want to hear it's version of truth with an Hard ass honest declaration of the liking you have for each other
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Posted: 7 years ago
Goodnight people. Good day to folks back home
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Posted: 7 years ago
Oh Nisha ...These updates created turmoil in me. I was almost in tears when these two talked about going back to Delhi. Oh please, this is heartbreaking for them, Alka and everyone here.

Knowing or unknowing they have started developing feeling for one another. It is just painful to think that they haven't consummated their wedding and even more hurtful to think they both aren't thinking this as a long term relationship.

Please weave your magic Nisha and get them together. I feel they are past Chandu now. It's about them. Even though they are thinking that it's about Chandhu.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Oh my, Teeku, are you really considering about going back to Delhi? What about Chandu? Do you really think you both will be ok? And don't you realize you have fallen for the lawyer? I know, I know, it's not enough you have fallen for him, you want to see his need for you as well. Be sensible, Bareilly might not be bad after all when you have the right people around you!

Thank you Nisha for back to back updates! Loving them.

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