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Posted: 7 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: beautifulmess

beautiful part yar 😃

oyeee hoyeee

lekin aakhir aise hua kya ki armaan ne riddhima ko khud se dur kr diya 😭🥺

eagerly waiting for next part

continue sooo

thanks for pm 🤗


Thanks dear...
Glad u love and enjoy it...
Dekhte hai kiya huva...
Will try to post soon...
U r most welcome...
Take care :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: lashyyy

as i said n promised here i m see just few min back or ye tym bhi typing ki wajah se lga warna or jaldi ati
sabse pehle a big bear tight hug to you coz i m so so happy to read the story mahn
this is just WOW!!! ⭐️ 👏
sachi me as i started reading it i feel like i m watching a movie or show every single scene every dialouge every part as we proceed from present to flashback then back to present everything is just brilliant
finally after like ages i feel that ur back !! like a boss
concept is wooaaahhh n execution of the concept muahhh just perfect
as i started reading i got curious n excited to read further n further n further
i accept i read all fhe part in one go
frankly i lost interest in reading n if i read by any chance it was just for tympass or friendship as u can feel the change but this story got me hooked back it was that perfect
title justified by you
the concept is as i told wow i seeiously didnt know how to put word in my comment i hope u understand my feelings
but one thing i wanted to say is that welcome back !!! thats ur dhamakedar comeback for me back with a loudest bang
i missed you n ur these type of story talent.
ps : this comment is only for ur brilliancy in ur concept n for ur writting skills story or parts ki baat next comment me ayegi
i hope n plz is story ko aise hi rakhna


Thanks Pal...
Glad to know u love the story till far...
Awww *hugs you too*
Hayye, kiya compliment hai...
Thank you, thank you :*
Hahaha really... I m glad u feel so :D
Ayye hayye, chalo acchi baat hai...
U got so two three parts to read together ;)
Yes, I know many has lost interest in reading...
U rn't in fault, I can really understand...
Heeheheh, yes tumhari comment padke samajh mein aagayi...
Kitni excited ho tum yeh padke...
Heheh totally, I m understanding everything u are trying to tell...
Awww, thats so sweet...
hayye, I m glad u r loving this story so much...
Hehehe accha, seems like I m improving right ;)
ahahaha wow, another comment...
Seems like its my day ;)
Itna accha tareef mili aur comment bhi...
I m trying my best to keep it like this till end...
Kyunki real reason of their separation will be reveal end of their problem...
I mean of AR, as they are going to be in court for Amyra's custody...
Dekhte hai, how far I could keep it ;)
Take care...
Love u so much...
hayye, dil khush kardi tumne :D
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: lashyyy

n here is the comment for the parts
i dont think i need to say more to let u know abt how impressed i m from this story but still i wanted to say abt the parts all the parts till now is beautiful n brilliantly written with still maintaining the curiosity between the readers abt how ar got seprated *wink*

after reading it i feel it the reason behind their sepration is vivek or shyna
guaranteed idk wat happened but they r the one behind it or as armaan is saying actually indicating indirectly that ridhz cheated on him thats y i have a confirmed kind of doubt abt it
sorry dont kill me for revealing it publicly but u know me main aise hi doubt ko bina bole nah reh sakti
hmm ar moments with their daughter was beautifuln hearttouching
specially with ridhz damn ridhz pain of sepration with daughter is shown so beaitiful that i feel it n its hurts make a lump in my throat
then some flashback ar
frankly k didnt expected shyna n armaan entry first n their scenes but mza aya jab armaan ne use bilkul bhi ghaas nah dali very politely ignore her n her indirect proposing n flirting hahaha
ar first meet was different n just adorable it was funny how armaan wanted to clear his image in front of her coz of that brown sugar
then that psni puri scene with their unofficial date
ridhz rejection n his way of making friends with her by eating teekhi panipuri from roadside it was so cute usi waqt i just want to coochi coo his cheeks

then again coming to present ridhz conversatuon with her daughter on phone again emotional kardiya

but phir flashback vivek is so cheap n even ridhz brother idiots loved how armaan propose ridhz so beautifully simple yet so mesmerizing way
but then his way n reason of proposing ridhz for marriage touch my heart he was scared for ridhz thats y it was so sweet of him

their honeymoon scenes armaan being naughty ridhz being shy n strict so adorable n cute really loved those scenes
even armaan special set up on the last day of honeymoon was nice
tgen jaldi jaldi chote chote se leaps hote rehe story me tym to tym was also the nice step of writting

moving further ridhz pregnancy too early nah kuch jyada hi jaldi hogya i didnt expected that but ek baat samajh nah ayi if armaan was rich from the starting y he is joining the second job ???? m confused it means he is also middle class like ridhz ? but in starting u said he is ridhz clear it plz
oh ho my doubt id clear that shyna plays a imp role in ar sepration when armaan accepted to lawyer his relationship with shyna
chudail ar ki sepration ka acha faida utha ke armaan ko phsa liya bht thank god to the case shaadi postpone hogyi
or uper se jaanbujh ke rahul ke through hamesha se armaan ko apni company me job ke offers deti thi she is just cant say the word here hump
i hope ab hearing me kuch miracle hoga coz of their daughter who want both parents wish n hope waisa hi ho
fof now bubye will come back soon after reading fttisy in idk how much tym
luv ya


Ayye ayye captain...
Main toh wait kar rahi ti hehehe...
Hmmm dekhte hai tumhari comment se, tumhe kitni pasand aaya hai till far of this story...
Sahi hai, previous comment padke toh pata chalhi gaya hai...
Lekin u know, tareef sunna bada maza aata hai...
Aur woh bhi apne hardworking ke liye, phir toh dil bohot khush hojate hai...

Heheh sabi yehi bol rahi hai...
lekin main kuch nehi bolungi, kyunki tum sabko tab tak padna hai...
jab tak main reveal nehi karti, woh toh secret hi rahenge right hehe...
Keep guessing darling, kyunki main toh iske baare mein kuch kehne se nehi ;)
Hahaha nehi nehi, don't be sorry..
I m enjoying readers guessing game...
It shows how much interest and excited, my readers are :D

Yup I know, it surely was painful moment for Ridz...
It took times for me to complete that potion...
As u might have realized, these updates aren't long ones like my usual updates...
Sad stuff likhne, tohda mushkil hai so it take a little time to put those emotions in words...
Hehehe woh kyun interest denge usko, he didn't like her much from childhood...
He used to hide from her in childhood :P
Happy to know u enjoy their unofficial date...
Lolz, same here...

I m glad u enjoy every single potion of every single part...
Be it Ridz and her daughter conversation, about Ridz brother and his friends...
Armaan propose and all...
So happy that u enjoy every bit of it...
Hayye, tumhe accha laga...
I m happy u r loving the way story is going on...
With flashbacks in between...

Hahaha aisa tohdina hota hai hamesha late hi ho...
Kabhi kabhi jaldi bhi ho sakte hai...
So I don't think it is a problem ;)
yes he was rich, but his parents are rich...
Lekin woh apne kamai se apne patni aur bacche pe spend karna chahta hai...
Dekhte hai, Shyna ne kya kiya hai jo Armaan ab usse shaadi karne wala hai...
Heehehe villain hai woh, chudail toh hogi na ;)
Dekhte hai miracle hoti hai ya kuch aur...
Keep reading and loving...
Sure sure...
Take care :)
Love u too :*
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Posted: 7 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: T.Peru

Nice updates

Poor amaya
As she didn't get her mother love as
Armaan and Ridhima had been separated
She want both her parents
But they both still love each other
Armaan was angry listening that amaya went to meet Ridhima
Also her parents parents want to have amaya with them
But Bec of some misunderstanding they got separated
Thanks for PM
Update soon


Thanks dear...
Glad u love the update...
and enjoy every bit of it...
keep reading to know what happen between AR that they are living separate...
and what will happen in further parts...
Take care...
Keep reading and loving...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#45


Bepannah Mohabbat
An AR Mini SS
Part 5



Armaan who was leaving a MSG to Riddhima, to inform that he would reach in half an hour look up hearing the voice... Armaan got surprise seeing who it was while the girl stood near the table, she also was surprise as she look towards them...
'Armaan...???' Girl said...
'Shyna...???' Armaan said...

Armaan stood up while Shyna smile seeing him, Rahul also stood up as she was his boss... Seeing already Armaan and Shyna knows each other, Rahul were confused because Shyna never mention anything related to Armaan being her friend...
'Yeh hai woh Rahul...???' Shyna asked getting Rahul attention...
'Yes ma'am...' Rahul said...
'Great, phir toh koi problem nehi hoga... Kyun Armaan...???' Shyna said...
'Tum, I mean u r the boss of this company...???' Armaan asked being unaware that the company belongs to Shyna...
'Yes Armaan, tum toh apne life mein itni busy ho ki tumhe toh pata bhi nehi yeh meri company hai... Anyways maine tumhare certificates dekha hai, u r choosen for the post... Welcome to the company Mr. Mallik...' Shyna said forwarding her hand...
'Thank you Shyna...' Armaan said...
'I hope tumhe koi problem nehi hoga yaha kaam karne mein, I know tum part tiime work karenge but it's not a issue for me or our company...' Shyna said...
'Thanks again, it would be a pleasure to work with you...' Armaan said...
'Chalo abhi mujhe ek meeting ke liye nikalni hai, Rahul please show him around and his work...' Shyna said as she check the mobile being hurry...
'Ok ma'am...' Rahul said...

When Shyna left, Rahul gave a small brief to Armaan what he havs to handle... As Armaan like the work, it wasn't hard for him to understand his work and he was willing to join as soon as possible... Only he didn't know, how much hectic it would be to handle two jobs and how much his life would changed...


FLASHBACK END


FIRST HEARING OF AMYRA'S CUSTODY CASE


'Mr. Mishra, aapko pata hai koan case ladd rahe hai Riddhima ke tarafse...???' Armaan asked as he and Mr. Mishra, Armaan's lawyer stood outside the court...
'Yes Mr. Mallik, bas abhi tohdi der pehle pata chala mujhe...' Mr. Mishra said as he was checking the file...
'Koan ladd raha hai...???' Armaan asked...
'Woh...' Mr. Mishra look towards Armaan but seeing the person who was coming behind him, his word got lost...

Seeing how Mr. Mishra was staring his back, Armaan turn around to get shocked seeing his sight... Armaan couldn't believe his eyes as after years, he was seeing her... Mother of his child, Riddhima Gupta who seems to have grown more beautiful in these past years...

Armaan stood lost in her as she came forwards talking in mobile, she stop before moving further feeling Armaan gaze which gives her heart a warm feeling... Riddhima move her gaze around to see Armaan standing with his lawyer, staring at her...

Riddhima felt her heart racing fast, seeing her love after years but she control her emotions knowing she can't get weak in front of him... It was his decision to kick her out from his life, she was willing to give him explanation but he didn't give her that chance and now if anything matter to her than its her daughter...

Riddhima knows, she can't ignore her feelings for him but she control it knowing it wasn't the time to get weak and show her emotions to him because he hasn't thought how she must have felt when he snatch their daughter away from her...

How much Riddhima try to hate him for kicking out from their life, taking away all her happiness which laids on their daughter, for Amyra, Riddhima sacrificed her dreams as well but in a matter of single second, without giving her a single chance to speak a single word in her defense, Armaan took the decision of their life and end every single relation they share for almost five years...

Both were lost in each other but was brought back by Mr. Mishra who asked Armaan to move in as it was almost time for the hearing to start... Armaan move his gaze breaking their eye-lock, which brings Riddhima also out to reality...

Without giving another gaze to each other, they move inside as the room was empty other than one person who would be noting their hearing so the judge could go through it if needed before taking the decision... As they want the case to be private, no media or any other person were allowed in the hearing...

They took their place and Armaan look towards Riddhima to see no one else with her... Wondering where is her lawyer, Armaan look towards Mr. Mishra to question him but they were interrupt as the judge walk in... To respect him, they stood up and when they were given permission to sit, they sit back...

After sometimes, the judge asked to start the hearing as he go through the previous custody information... As Riddhima wants the custody now which Armaan has, judge ask from Riddhima side to start as why they want the custody to be given for the mother now...
'My lord, main Riddhima Gupta iss case ki lawyer hun aur client bhi... Jo bhi documents hai, maine already present kiya hai... My lord, jaisa aap jaante hai aaj main apne beti ki custody ke liye aayi hun... Meri beti, pichle chaar saal se apne pita ke saath reh raha hai... Lekin ab woh 7 saal ki ho chuki hai toh main chahti hun, woh khud decide kare woh kiske saath rehna chahte hai...' Riddhima said...

Armaan was surprise to know Riddhima is the lawyer as well the client, he never try to know where Riddhima left after he kick her out from their house which they built together as their sweet home... Armaan has successfully ignore and avoid her pleading till he got the custody of Amyra and after that, he didn't know where she vanished until today when she has come back to claim their daughter's custody...

While Armaan was lost, Judge gave permission for his lawyer to question Riddhima as before the case was given to Armaan because Riddhima wasn't financial in good condition to take responsibility of a child... So many questions were to be asked and answer by Riddhima before Judge decide if they should talk to the child or not...
'Thank you Mr. Mishra but let me tell my condition has changed so much in last few years... My lord, I agree that I wasn't capable of taking responsibility of a child four years ago but now, I earn a good amount and also I have a place where I could raise a child where he/she can be safe environment where she/he stay...
If you want, I can tell a little more about my condition... As I have already present the documents, you can see that I m a well known lawyer who earn more than enough amount of money a single person needed... I have a well furniture apartment where a child can live without any difficult and the environment is also safe for the child...' Riddhima said giving some more details about her present life...
'After hearing about Ms. Riddhima Gupta current condition, we can proceed with the case in next date with the present of the child... After hearing the child answer, we will decide who will get the custody... Mr. Mishra, do you have anything else to say...???' Judge asked...
'No my lord, nothing more...' Mr. Mishra said...
'Ms. Gupta...???' Judge asked...
'No my lord...' Riddhima said...
'Ok than, next hearing would be after three days... I will send an order to bring the child to the court to her father as she is staying with him... I would like to tell that please follow the order and do bring the child or else we had to give the custody to her mother if her father didn't follow court order and fine him for not respecting the order given...' Judge said...
'My client will surely follow the order, my lord...' Mr. Mishra said...
'Ok than, the court is adjourn till next hearing...' Judge said before leaving the court...

Mr. Mishra patted Armaan backed as he sit lost thinking now everything is in Amyra's hand... Riddhima who was collecting the papers didn't look once towards Armaan before leaving the court hurriedly because she knows how much hurt Armaan would be to think that in few days, he might lost his daughter if Amyra decide to be with her mother...

Riddhima wished that this never happen but it was Armaan decision to leave her and now he has to take his turn of staying away from their daughter, maybe than he would understand how it feels to be away from the person who you love most...

How much she has suffer being away from her daughter, Riddhima want Armaan to taste the medicine being on her place so he would understand how it feels... If he has act a little sensible than, things wouldn't have gone this further because she never was in fault from the beginning...

Riddhima try her best to prove her innocent but than she didn't have any proof, also Armaan didn't give her a chance to speak so she felt it was no need now when they have no relation left between them... If Riddhima needs anything from Armaan, than it's their daughter...

Riddhima wouldn't have again take the case to the court if Armaan let her meet their daughter but he has so much hatre in his heart for her after what he saw, Riddhima had to take the matter to the court because Armaan wasn't willing to let her see or meet her daughter for once after the day...

So without looking at Armaan, very well knowing his gaze were on her the moment she move to the door to leave, Riddhima hurriedly move out and sit in the car as she had been controlling her tears feeling the pain Armaan must be going through...
'Nehi Riddhima, tum weak nehi ho sakte... Armaan ne itne saal se tumhari parwa nehi kiya, tumhare dard koh mehsus nehi kiya phir tum kyun uske dard ke baare mein soch rahe ho... Nehi Riddhima, ab tumhe Armaan se koi lena dena nehi hai... Tum jo bhi kar rahe ho, sirf aur sirf apne beti ke liye kar rahe ho, apni Amyra ke liye... Bohot saal rehliya woh apne ma ke bina, ab ek pal bhi nehi... Aur tumne bhi apne beti ke bina rehliya, ab Armaan ke baari hai...' Riddhima thought as she closed her eyes...

As Riddhima driver start the journey to take her to her destination for now, Riddhima was taken to those days of her life when she cry for her daughter... Crave to hold and love her child but she didn't get a chance to see one glimpse of her child for four long years which seems centuries to her...


FLASHBACK START


'Armaan, meri baat toh suno... Please Armaan, aisa mat karo... Please Armaan, mujhe meri Amyra se dur mat karo...' Riddhima plead Armaan as he hold her hand and drag her out from their room...
'Nehi Riddhima, ab kuch nehi raha sunne ke liye... Jo dekhna ta maine dekhliya, sunne ke liye kuch bacha hi nehi hai...' Armaan said as he was shaking in anger as his eyes was bloodshot red as tears cover on his face as well...
'Nehi Armaan, jo tumne dekha...' Riddhima was cut by Armaan...

Armaan stop as he pull Riddhima closed to him holding her shoulder, Riddhima hissed closing her eyes because of his tight hold... Tears were covering her face as more fresh tears fall from her closed eyelash, without caring how strong his hold was Armaan just hold her in his grip...
'Jo dekha, na dekha hota toh shayad mujhe vishwaas nehi hota, itni din se tum mere ghar mein, mere absent mein kya kiya kar rahi hai... Chee Riddhima, how could you do this...' Armaan said pushing Riddhima away from him...
'Armaan...' Riddhima call his name being helpless when he wasn't ready to listen her...
'Not another word Riddhima, bas mujhe tum is ghar mein ek pal bhi nehi chahiyeh...' Armaan said again holding her hand...
'Nehi Armaan, aisa mat karo... Amyra mere bina nehi reh paenge, please Armaan... Mujhe meri bacchi se dur mat karo, please...' Riddhima again started to plead as Armaan drag her in the hall...

Amyra who was sleeping, wake up hearing noises... Riddhima saw their three years daughter coming out and look at her parents... Armaan also stop for a second but next moment again he drag Riddhima and push her out from the apartment, closing the door on her face...
'Armaan... Armaan, please darwaza kholo...' Riddhima said banging on the door, as tears fall from her eyes...

Armaan locked the door and move inside taking Amyra in his arms, not seeing her mother Amyra started to cry calling for her mother... Riddhima heard Amyra calling her which breaks her heart to several pieces, she slide near the door banging on it pleading Armaan to open it...
'Please Armaan, aisa mat karo... Mujhe humhare beti se alag mat karo, please Armaan... Mujhe itni badi saza mat do, jo maine kiya nehi... Please Armaan, ek baar meri baat suno...' Riddhima called, crying to let her in...
'Riddhima...' Aahana came hearing noises to see Riddhima crying badly...
'Aahana Di, bolo na Armaan koh darwaza khole... Amyra bohot ro rahi hai, woh meri bina nehi rehpaenge Di... Armaan koh bolo na, mujhe Amyra se alag na kare...' Riddhima said still banging the door...
'Kiya huva hai, Armaan aisa kyun kiya... Armaan, darwaza kholo... Kiya huva hai, dekho Riddhima ki haalat...' Aahana called knocking the door...
'Armaan... Armaan please... Please Armaan kholo...' Riddhima called...
'Riddhima... Riddhima, kiya huva...' Aahana said holding her as she slide in Aahana arms...

Riddhima fainted not being handle the situation, not thinking her life away from the person she loves and their daughter... Aahana hold her before she fall on the ground, being helpless seeing her condition as Riddhima cried so badly, pleading to her husband to let her inside...


A MONTH LATER


'Kuch pata chala, kisne kiya...???' Aahana asked as she sit with Riddhima and Nikki...
'Nehi Di, kuch bhi nehi pata chala...' Nikki said...
'Pata nehi kaha gayab hogaya hai, samajh nehi aa raha kaha dhundun us kamine koh...' Prakash said coming in Riddhima room...
'Bhaiyya, aap kaha kaha dhundenge... Ab toh ek month hogaye hai, aur Riddhima bhi acche se jaanta nehi kuch uske baare mein...' Nikki said looking at Riddhima who was sitting like a lifeless person...
'Riddhima toh kuch bolne ki haalat mein bhi nehi hai ab...' Aahana said looking at Riddhima...
'Sahi keh rahi hai aap Di, kitna bhi koshish karun... Na kuch bolti hai, na kuch karti hai... Bas Amyra ke baare mein sochke, aansu bahati hai...' Nikki said...
'Main us kamine koh dhund ke rahunga, mujhe apne behen ki yeh haalat aur dekha nehi jaate... Main Vivek ke saath baahar jaa raha hun, Nikki tum Riddhima ke saath rehna...' Prakash said...
'Ji bhaiyya...' Nikki said as Prakash left looking towards Riddhima once...

Aahana and Nikki look towards Riddhima who was sitting staring in to nowhere, Nikki got juice for her but she just push it away without taking a single sip... Riddhima has lost so much in a month, she was looking like a dead person now...
'Aise kab tak chalega Riddhima, tumhare rone se Armaan tumhe apne beti se milne nehi denge...' Aahana said being concern for her health...
'Kuch bhi kaho isse Di, yeh nehi sunenge...' Nikki said...
'Sunna padega, tum aise haar nehi maan sakte... Pata nehi Armaan kyun nehi sun raha aur tumhe samajhne ki koshish nehi kar raha... Lekin iska yeh matlab nehi hai tum haar maanonge...' Aahana said...
'Maine bhi isse kitni baar kaha hai Di, isne apne dream tak Amyra ke liye adhura chod diya... Lekin jaisa abhi Armaan iske saath behave kar raha hai, koi deserve nehi karenge itna karne ke baad...' Nikki said...
'Riddhima, abhi Amyra ki custody Armaan koh mila hai... Tum Amyra koh apne life mein waapas chahti hai toh tumhe ladna hoga... Aise tum haar nehi maan sakte, aur uske liye tumhe apne dreams koh complete karna hoga...' Aahana said...
'Pata hai Di, Riddhima koh sponsor bhi mil gayi hai... Kitni acchi baat haina, Riddhima koh ek chance phirse mila apne sapna pura karne ke liye...' Nikki said...
'Haan Nikki, yeh bohot acchi baat hai... Riddhima, hum dono tumhare saath hai... Aur hum jaante hai, tum apne beti ke liye kuch bhi kar sakte hai... Tum galat nehi hai toh jo tumhari hai woh Armaan zyada waqt uske paas nehi rakh sakte... Please Riddhima, Amyra ke liye tumhe khud koh sambhal na hoga...' Aahana said...
'Haan Ridzy, please Amyra ke liye khud koh sambhalo...' Nikki said touching her shoulder...

Riddhima who was listening to them, burst out crying getting the love and support from Aahana and Nikki... Riddhima knows, if Armaan believe her or not, Nikki, Aahana and her brother would surely believe her... If she is alive today, it's because of them...

Riddhima had been living with her brother from a month after the day Armaan kick her out from his life... Riddhima had been to their apartment, to plead to let her see her daughter once but Armaan never let her in these past days...

When Riddhima didn't stop, Armaan took the custody applying in the court which didn't give Riddhima the chance to be anywhere around Amyra because Armaan got the court order which says Riddhima can't meet their daughter...

Also Armaan gave divorce to her which was approved, Riddhima was glad that Armaan didn't reveal the reason but she knows still Armaan didn't believe her and only believe what he saw... Realizing how badly her beautiful world has shattered, Riddhima cried letting every pain in her heart out in front of the people who are concern for her condition...


FLASHBACK END


ARMAAN'S APARTMENT


'Dadda nehi aaya Aunty...???' Amyra asked as she sit watching cartoon...
'Bas aata hi hoga bacchi, aap dinner karlo...' Aahana said as she arrange the table for dinner...
'Nehi, main dadda ke saath khaungi...' Amyra said as she continue watching her favorite cartoon...
'Aapne, apna homework karliya bacchi...' Aahana asked...
'Haan Aunty, kabka...' Amyra said...

Aahana smile seeing how well manner child Amyra was, she felt bad that she has to live without her mother but Aahana is very happy that now Riddhima has come back... In Riddhima absent, Aahana was taking care of Amyra when Armaan goes to work...

Aahana remember how Armaan offer to help them when Riddhima was expecting Amyra, with some complication in Riddhima's pregnancy, Armaan and Aahana took care of them till Riddhima delivery... Aahana felt so bad this little happy family broke apart and the little Amyra was suffering the most because of it...

As Armaan spend his time in work, it was Aahana who sees Amyra crying for her mother... Still a year before, Amyra was too young to realized anything but from a year she has started to realized that her life is incomplete without her mother...

To filled the place, Armaan decide to marry Shyna but Aahana knows Amyra wasn't happy with Armaan decision but Amyra knows nothing can be changed now because Shyna Aunty had been controlling her father life from the day her mother left them...

As Aahana stood watching Amyra who was busy in her cartoon, she remember those days she help Riddhima still Amyra came there life... After that also, Aahana used to be around them helping Riddhima... Riddhima and Armaan was so nice to her that they accept Aahana as their family member...

Aahana was bless to have Armaan and Riddhima in her life because due to them, she was having a better life with her son after her husband death... Armaan gave a place for her and also Riddhima ask Aahana to teach Amyra as Aahana used to give tiution to children's to earn money for income...
'Aunty...' Amyra call as the door bell rang...
'Haan bacchi...' Aahana asked coming out from her trace...
'Darwaze pe koi hai...' Amyra said...

Aahana nodded her head and move to check who it was, as she open Shyna was standing with a not happy face for taking time to open the door... Seeing Aahana, without giving any attention to her Shyna move inside as she check her mobile...
'Mere liye paani laao, Armaan nehi aaya...???' Shyna asked seeing Amyra watching cartoon...
'Ji, abhi nehi aaya...' Aahana said moving to the kitchen to get water for Shyna...

Shyna sit next to Amyra as she was busy in her mobile, Amyra who was lost in cartoon didn't realized that Shyna came... So while watching being excited, she jump on her seat which make she bump to Shyna and her mobile fall from her hand... Hearing the sound, Amyra look towards Shyna and than the floor to see her mobile...
'Sorry Aunty...' Amyra said taking the mobile and giving it to Shyna...

Shyna check her mobile as she was shocked a while ago but hearing Amyra voice, she came out from her shocked state... After checking the mobile, seeing a small scratch on the screen Shyna got angry and hold Amyra arm making Amyra hissed in pain as tears form in her eyes...
'Sorry, todke sorry bolne se yeh repair hojaenge...???' Shyna asked holding tight on Amyra arms...

It was the moment Aahana came from the kitchen, seeing tears in Amyra's eyes Aahana quickly move towards her and push Shyna hand away from Amyra arm... Amyra hugs Aahana, crying softly as Shyna looked shocked towards Aahana for coming between them...
'Bas Shyna, tum bacchi ke saath aise behave nehi kar sakte...' Aahana said...
'Really now, tum ho koan mujhe kehne wali... Naukrani ho toh naukrani ke tarah raho, Armaan ne tumhare liye ehsaan karke tumhe rehne ke liye jhaga aur kama ne ke liye kaam diya hai... Sar pe chadne ki koi zarurat nehi hai, samjhi na...' Shyna said...
'Tum mujhe jo bhi kehna hai woh keh sakte ho, lekin main chup nehi rahungi tum Amyra ke saath aise behave karenge toh...' Aahana said...
'Accha, kiya karenge... Armaan ko bataenge...???' Shyna asked...
'Zarurat pade toh Armaan koh bataungi...' Aahana said...
'Woh toh tumhari baat maannenge nehi, tumhe ghar se nikal denge...' Shyna said...
'Main darta nehi hun Armaan se, jo usse nikalne se main dar jaungi aur chup rahungi...' Aahana said...

Just than Armaan walk in and heard Aahana words, Shyna saw Armaan and act innocent as she lower her head as if she was listening to Aahana while she scold her... Armaan didn't like the fact that Aahana was talking in that tone with Shyna, he was already upset with her for taking Amyra to meet Riddhima without informing him...
'Aahana Di...' Armaan call her getting her attention...
'Armaan...' Aahana was cut by Armaan...
'Nehi, ek aur word nehi... Ab aap jaa sakte hai, kal se kaam pe aane ki zarurat nehi hai...' Armaan said...
'Armaan, meri baat toh suno...' Aahana try to explain but Armaan cut her...
'Maine kaha na, mujhe kuch nehi sunna... Aap jaa sakte hai, thank you so much...' Armaan said pulling Amyra out of Aahana hold...

Aahana felt bad that Armaan didn't give her a chance to explain what happen, Amyra was crying softly while Shyna smirk seeing how Armaan fired Aahana and decide to kick her from their life... Aahana look at Amyra and care her hair feeling bad for her knowing how unfair life was to her...
'Tum bohot galat kar rahe ho Armaan, u will regret it...' Aahana said before leaving...
'Dadda...' Amyra try to speak but Armaan cut her...
'Aap apne kamre mein jao...' Armaan said...
'Lekin Dadda...' Amyra try once again...
'Maine kaha na, aap apne kamre mein jao...' Armaan said a little too loud, making Amyra scared...

Amyra left without uttering another word, Shyna who was looking at the duo changed her expression as she move closed to Armaan... Armaan sit on the couch, without looking towards Shyna as he was feeling disturbed... Shyna knows Armaan was upset about the case and in any chance, he don't want Amyra to leave him...
'Kiya huva Armaan, kiya huva court mein...' Shyna asked...
'Next hearing teen din baad hai, Amyra ke decision pe ab custody ka faisla hoga...' Armaan said...
'Armaan, tumhe aise Amyra se baat nehi karna chahiyeh... Usse pyar se baat karo, uske saath time spend karo... Tum aise uske saath behave karenge toh woh Riddhima ke paas jaanne ka faisla le sakte hai...' Shyna said...
'Nehi, woh mere bina nehi reh sakte... Aur main uske bina nehi rehpaunga Shyna, tum jaante ho na main apne beti se kitna pyar karta hun...' Armaan said...
'Jaanta hun Armaan, issiliyeh toh tumhe samjha raha hun... Amyra ke saath tum aise behave karenge toh woh tumse nafrat karenge, aur wohi toh Riddhima chahti hai Armaan... Tumhari beti, uski paas jaae...' Shyna said...
'Tum kitni acche ho, mere aur Amyra ke baare mein kitna sochte ho...' Armaan said holding her hand...
'Kyunki main tumse bohot pyar karta hun Armaan, I love you a lot aur main jaanti hun tumhara khushi apne beti ke saat hai...' Shyna said...
'Thank you...' Armaan said smiling to her...

Shyna smile too and rest her head on Armaan shoulder, feeling uncomfortable Armaan excuse saying he would go and check on Amyra... Shyna didn't like the fact that Armaan make excuse and left her, but she knows she couldn't do anything till they didn't get married...
'Jitna bhaag na hai bhaag lo Armaan, waapas toh mere paas hi aana hai... Mujhe isse koi fark nehi padta Riddhima koh Amyra ke custody mile, mere liye accha hai kyunki phir hamesha ke liye tum sirf meri hogi...'Shyna said when Armaan went out of her sight, with a smirk on her face...


AMYRA'S ROOM


'Mammi, mujhe bilkul bhi accha nehi lag rahi Shyna Aunty... Lekin aapne kaha, issiliye maine Dadda koh kuch nehi kaha Aunty ke baare mein... Aur ab Dadda koh, Amyra se zyada Shyna Aunty ki fikar hai... Aaj Aahana Aunty koh bhi nikal diya gharse, Shyna Aunty ke wajahse... Aahana Aunty, mujhe bacha rahi ti... Mere liye Shyna Aunty koh suna ya kyunki Shyna Aunty ne mujhe hurt kiya... Lekin Dadda ne ek baar bhi Aahana Aunty ki baat nehi suna...' Amyra said crying holding Riddhima photo...

Amyra was missing her mother a lot today, after Riddhima, Aahana was always there for her but today, Aahana also left her alone... Tears keep falling from her eyes as she laid, holding Riddhima photo closed to her chest... After controlling her crying, again Amyra look at the photo...
'Mammi, jaldi mujhe apne paas le jao... Dadda ab akela nehi hai lekin aapki Amyra akele hogayi... Main jaanti hun aap bhi kitni akele ho meri bina... Ab hum akele nehi rahenge, hum dono saath mein rahenge... Dadda koh bohot miss karunga lekin Dadda akele nehi hoga, Shyna Aunty hogi Dadda ke saath... I love u both, lekin main jaanti hun aap dono saath nehi reh sakte, issiliyeh ab mujhe aapke saath rehna hai Mammi, please mujhe apne paas lejao...' Amyra said kissing Riddhima photo and hugging it closed to her heart again...

Holding the photo as if she was trying to feel her mother love, Amyra slept while crying thinking how her father wasn't ready to listen to her today... Amyra didn't know what happen between her parents but she felt really bad for the first time in her life, being with her father...

Amyra didn't know when sleep took over her eyes, she was emotionally drain that soon she was in deep but uneasy slumber as she hasn't had dinner... By the time Armaan came to check Amyra, she was in deep slumber so without disturbing her, Armaan cover her properly with the comforter and kiss her forehead as he dim the light before leaving the room...

Armaan was too disturb to realized how much broken his daughter was, he even didn't see the dry tear lines on Amyra face... Neither he saw the photo Amyra was holding close to her heart, where her parents belong... Thinking being tired, she left so Armaan didn't felt to disturb her so left his daughter to be in uneasy sleep...


RIDDHIMA'S APARTMENT


Riddhima was feeling uneasy as if Amyra was in trouble, she don't know why but she wasn't able to concentrate on work or neither she could relax and sleep... As they had to wait for another three days before the Judge announce the decision, Riddhima was very disturb for not being able to meet her daughter for another three days...

Riddhima try to read some novel to keep herself relax but it didn't help either, she wanted to know if her daughter was good or not but she didn't understand how she would do that... As she spend an hour like that, she thought to call Aahana knowing she would be with Amyra...

If not now, till Aahana would know about Amyra and unless she didn't hear Amyra a single thing about Amyra, her restless would keep increasing... So deciding to check on Amyra through Aahana, Riddhima dial her number as she desparately waited for Aahana to answer her call...
'Di, aap kaha ho... Amyra tik haina...???' Riddhima asked the moment Aahana answer her call...
'Riddhima...' Aahana just whisper her name...
'Di, aap... Aap ro rahe ho...???' Riddhima asked...
'Nehi, tum is waqt call kyun kiya...???' Aahana asked controlling her voice...
'Pata nehi di, Amyra ki bohot yaad aa rahi hai... Woh tik haina...??? Aap ti na uske paas aaj...???' Riddhima asked...
'Haan Riddhima, woh tik hai...' Aahana said...
'Di... Kuch bhi baat hai toh aap mujhe batao... Kiya huva aapko, aap aise low kyun ho...' Riddhima asked...
'Riddhima, main hamesha chahti ti tum aur Armaan khush rahe... Saath ho ya na ho, aur Amyra bhi... Lekin jaise us bacche ke saath ho raha hai, bilkul bhi accha nehi ho rahi...' Aahana said...
'Di, kiya huva Amyra ke saath...' Riddhima asked...
'Aaj jo bhi huva, uske baad main kabhi nehi chaahungi woh Armaan ke saath rahe... Aur shayad is information se tumhe Amyra ki custody mil sakte hai, lekin please meri naam mat lena tum...' Aahana said...
'Nehi Di, galati se bhi aapke naam nehi aayenge... Kiya huva aaj, aap batao mujhe...' Riddhima said...

Aahana told what happen and how Armaan reacted, Riddhima was shocked to hear this and now she understood why she was feeling so uneasy... Riddhima had tears after hearing her baby girl was abused by the witch in her father life...
'Bas di, aap dukhi mat hona... Aap meri saath dena, phir Armaan kiya... Koi bhi mujhse apni beti se aur dur nehi rakh sakte... Ek galat fehmi ki wajahse already main aur meri bacchi ne bohot saal dur rehliya, ab aur nehi... Main kasam leti hun, main Amyra koh apne paas bohot jaldi laungi...' Riddhima said...
'Haan Riddhima, yehi Amyra ke liye accha hoga... Shyna bilkul accha nehi hai, usse bas Armaan chahiyeh...'Aahana said...
'Mujhe koi fark nehi padta, lekin usne meri beti koh hurt kiya haina... Main usse itna hurt karungi, woh marna pasand karenge... I promise, main apni beti har aansu ka badla lungi Shyna se... Usse Armaan chahiyeh na, ab yeh jaanke Armaan khud usse saara rishta tohd denge... Kyunki mujhe itna barosa hai Armaan pe, woh kissi koh apne beti koh hurt karne nehi denge...' Riddhima said...
'Tum abhi bhi Armaan se mohabbat karte ho na...???' Aahana asked...
'BEPANNAH MOHABBAT karti hun, lekin shayad Armaan mujhe nehi karti Di... Karta toh barosa bhi karti uske mohabbat pe...' Riddhima said...
'Jis din Armaan koh sach pata chale, bohot regret hoga usse...' Aahana said...
'Kash woh din pehle aati...' Riddhima said...

They talk for a while before bidding good bye, Riddhima told Aahana about their next hearing date and Aahana promise to be with her that day... Aahana knows she can't be in the court room but she was willing to be by her side till the judge announce the decision for the case...



Hello Friends and Readers...
Here goes the next part...
Hope u all enjoy it...
Ignore mistakes...
Keep reading and loving...
Do leave Comments and Likes...
Take Care...
Love u All...



With Love,
Rihoohaws...
Edited by RihooHaws - 7 years ago
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Gosh. This Armaan ! Aahana , jisne itne saal Amyra ka itna dhyaan rakha, who is family, usse zyada he trusts this Shyna ! Aisa kyu? Thodi si bhi akal nahi hai kya usse ?
Itna sab ho gaya, ek chance toh de Ridz ko ab. Sirf explain karne. Agar itna pyaar karta hai, can't he trust her even a little ? Uggghhh .

I just hope ki sab sach jaldi saamne aa jaaye! 5 chapters ho gaye yaar . It's only 10 chapters long! Armaan ko sab kab pata chalega ? Jaldi se batado !

Ek toh , Amyra! That scene where she was crying, mujhse toh bardaasht hi nahi hua ! Poor thing is going through so much . Armaan ko dikhta nahi hai kya? Andha ! Aur kuch nahi toh uske liye, ek baar Riddhima se baat toh kar sakta haina ? Useless insaan!

Bas ab next chapter bhi jaldi upload kardo! Please!
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Wow mindblowing part.love the part.thanks for pm
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LOVELY PART DEAR WAITING FOR NEXT 😊
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Originally posted by: DMGThings

Gosh. This Armaan ! Aahana , jisne itne saal Amyra ka itna dhyaan rakha, who is family, usse zyada he trusts this Shyna ! Aisa kyu? Thodi si bhi akal nahi hai kya usse ?

Itna sab ho gaya, ek chance toh de Ridz ko ab. Sirf explain karne. Agar itna pyaar karta hai, can't he trust her even a little ? Uggghhh .

I just hope ki sab sach jaldi saamne aa jaaye! 5 chapters ho gaye yaar . It's only 10 chapters long! Armaan ko sab kab pata chalega ? Jaldi se batado !

Ek toh , Amyra! That scene where she was crying, mujhse toh bardaasht hi nahi hua ! Poor thing is going through so much . Armaan ko dikhta nahi hai kya? Andha ! Aur kuch nahi toh uske liye, ek baar Riddhima se baat toh kar sakta haina ? Useless insaan!

Bas ab next chapter bhi jaldi upload kardo! Please!


Thanks Prags dear...
Happy to see ur comment...
Aise comment milti rahenge toh kaise update na dun ;)
Glad to know u are loving the story...

Armaan toh paagal ho chuka hai...
Ussi din se, jis din usne Ridz koh apne life se nikala :P
Toh aise aadmi se expect bhi kya kiya jaa sakte hai ;)
Dekhte hai, kyun nehi karpaya usse barosa Ridz pe...

Hehehe I know I know, bohot zyada suspense haina...
Koi nehi, just next part or maybe after one more part...
Sab kuch pata chaljaenge...
Armaan koh bhi, aur tum log koh bhi :D

Hayye, even I felt bad while writing...
But maine socha, it was necessary to show that part...
Shuru se bas Armaan aur Ridz ke emotions show kar rahi hun..
Amyra ke toh rehgayi... Ab woh itna bhi choti toh hai nehi, usse feel na ho right :D
Armaan toh andha hai :P haah sahi kaha tumne...
Chalo dekhte hai, yeh useless insaan ab aage kiya karta hai...

Oppps, update toh tohdi der hogayi...
Koi nehi kardungi...
Keep loving and reading...
Take care...
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Originally posted by: NishitaRahman

Wow mindblowing part.love the part.thanks for pm


Thanks Nishi...
Glad u love the part...
U r most welcome...
take care :)

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