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Posted: 18 years ago
nice ff..just read ur whole ff..its very very interesting... 😉

Please continue soon..
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Posted: 18 years ago
finally u continued!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow must say i am pleasently surprised. Didnt expect so many comments in fact i havent cont. for so long that i would have been satisfied with two...lol. Well i guess now ill have to continue sooner, maybe tommorow. I don't think i am doing anything significant tommorow anyways. Well thanks for the comments guys the next part for both my FF's will be coming soon, maybe even tommorow. 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
i just read the whole ff! i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i seriously love all ur ff and i guess i am going to became a huge fan of yours! plz cont soon! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey just read ur recent update.....arghhh..u've left us habging...GOD...now u'd better continue soon!!
munizaaa thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
Ok the next part is comming up...it will be longer this time 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

Ok here is the next part its a bit later then i said it would be, but its longer so i hope you guys forgive me.

Part 8

The drag ride ended as soon as it had started, in about no time at all Kripa found herself being pinned to a wall of what appeared as a dark deserted alley.

In an attempted to straighten her, the perpetrator momentarily took his hand off her mouth. Kripa seized this opportunity and yelled on top of her voice, "HEL—"except the sound was soon muffled, Kripa unable to breath struggled under his hold.

The person realizing this loosened his hold on her, and whispered in her ears, "Will you shut up...Unless you want to be killed, then go ahead yell on top of your lungs. Nothing will happen to me but you will probably be hacked to a million pieces as soon as they spot you." And then the guy let go of her, but she was unable to move. Hearing the sound of his voice had made Kripa realize 3 different things, each equally contributing in tripling her shock. Number one: Her suspicions had been confirmed, and she would indeed be killed…one day. Number two: she had been dragged to this dark alley by a savior and not a culprit. And Number three: this voice was of none other then ANGAD KHANNA himself.

She pulled away from his strong hold on her arm looking at him with only a million or two questions in her eyes. He smiled gently, this time stopping her heart all together, "you know you look even more irresistibly beautiful in a dark deserted alley."

Kripa ignored that—even though it made her heart flutter inside her chest—she had much more pressing issues to deal with, "Who are you? Why am I hear? and give me a reason not to kick you and attempt to run away" she asked. Angad was taken aback by the direct question, no one before would have dared ask him this question, and with so much authority.

"Because I am much too strong for you and would most likely win." he then sighed, "I guess I am going to have to tell you the truth"

Kripa narrowed her eyes in disbelief, "You better, I don't exactly enjoy being dragged to a deserted alley by a stranger—claiming to be my savior—which coincidentally happens to be the one I slapped only a few days previously." He smiled at that, involuntarily touching his cheek.

"That was very brave of you, you know."

She groaned, "More like stupid, I haven't been able to sleep in peace thereafter, afraid to be woken up by an assassin."

"It's not me you should be worried about…" He trailed off lost in his own thoughts.

"Who then?" Kripa said sharply enough to bring him back to reality.

"Not here, would you mind going on a drive with me?" he offered hesitantly.

"I guess for me that would be the safest option...which if you think about it is kind of scary."

"Kind of?" Angad said mockingly.

"Well I have to give you credit for saving my life" She said slightly cheered by the thought.

Angad let Kripa lead the way out of the alley; he was surprised she remembered the way, what with having been half dragged there. But he stayed close to her. Even though he was sure no one would never attack her while she was with him.

He opened the door for her, swiftly looking around at the deserted street to make sure that they were not being pursued. And then he drove, and this scared Kripa more then all the other events of this evening put together. He was not satisfied simply with driving 10 or 30 miles over the speed limit, his car sped like a bullet through the streets, as he blatantly ignored all stop sign. It wasn't the cops that worried Kripa, b/c that would almost be a blessing; it was his aggressive nature that scared her. Should she really have believed him? Or was she committing the biggest mistake that might end up costing her life? Wouldn't it be better for her to just open the door and jump out of the car? But his manic driving scared her too much, so apparently she had no choice now but to hope that he was one of the good guys. So she clamped her mouth shut and gripped the seat hard hoping to safely make it…where ever it might be.

Well... I dont know what to say, but i really have no idea where this FF is going. According to what i have written so far there is always something holding A&K back, a reason that the long for each other yet they cant be together. But in this FF i have apparently decided to take on another track, there will be many lovey dovey scenes b/w the two. And the conflict will pull them together closer then ever before. I dont know i just hope i can pull it off. Another thing is that i know this FF has been very boring thus far...well it has been to me, thats why i havent been continuing as much. But now that i will have to rely soley on this FF to use my crazy ideas on, after Badly Arraged, i decided it was time to turn on the heat.😉 I am sure you guys wont mind... So that was my summary of this FF... Hope i didn't bore you guys too terribly.

Edited by munizaaa - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
no it did not bore me! BTW i really loved this ff and it hasn't been boring please please please cnt. soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Boring!!
r u kidding me..its absolutely so interesting..i like ur ff..plz continue soon..!!

and yaa make it more lovey dovey...tht will just be a bonus 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part!! it wasnt boring at all!! i loveee it!! and dont worry, you can pull it off, i know itt 100%!! 😉 😳 continue soon, cant wait to know the truth!! 👏

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