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wow wow wow...this was maasssttt...i m hell excited to know whats coming next...do update soon n thanks for pm...😊😊😊
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Finally our captain is on roll..loved this side of him..Naina hamesha ki tube light hai..jaldi samajthi nahin hai..Raj Ko mehnat karni hogi
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Chapter 5

Knowing that she won't react to his comment so easily, Rajveer takes a deep breath out of irritation. Closing his eyes, he tries to calm himself down. Yes, another thing which she will be punished for later on.

Smiling, opening back his eyes, he takes few steps towards her.

"Haan yehi hai wo ithasik Point 1857"

says Rajveer

This drags Naina's attention. Giving him a smile, she runs up to him and stands right next to him.

"Lekin dekho, yahan pe aisa kuch bhi nahi hai jis ke liye hamein itni mehnat karni parhi"

he speaks further

Nodding her head in disappointment at his words, Naina fixes her hair. Looking towards him, she decides to question him further.

"Lekin Bhaiyya ki notebook mein toh is jagah ka zikar baar baar hai. Toh aisi kya khas baat hai is jagah mein?"

she questions further

Naina's question drags Rajveer's attention. Turning towards her, he stares at her for quite a bit of time. Not knowing how to say this, Rajveer again looks ahead. Should he tell her the importance of this place? Or should he leave it on her to guess? Or why not let her wait for the answer for some time.

"Wo tumhe khud pata chal jayega thori dair mein"

utters Rajveer knowing what exactly he is saying

His words causes Naina's heart to skip a beat. Not exactly understanding what he means, Naina turns towards him slightly.

"Mathlab?"

she questions him

Her questions!!! She is technically like a maths question paper. No matter how much you try, she won't be satisfied with an answer.

Ignoring her questions, he gets a hold on to her wrist.

"Come I'll show you something"

says Rajveer

At this, Naina looks towards him while she nods at him with a smile. They walk few steps ahead. With his left hand's index finger, Rajveer points it towards a pillar.

"Ye hai wo wishing pillar"

he says

"Wishing pillar?"

comes Naina's next question

Smiling, Rajveer takes few steps towards the wishing pillar. Turning, he looks back towards Naina.

"Haan wishing pillar. Aisa kaha jata hai ke agar yahan pe koi sachay dil se puri sharadha ke sath mannat mange, ya phir kuch bhi wish kare, wo puri ho jati hai"

explains Rajveer looking towards Naina

A satisfactory smile creeps on Naina's face as she hears this. Her face glows under the beautiful moonlight while a child-like excitement is evident on her face.

"Mein kuch mangna chahongi sir"

says Naina in a whisper

This makes Rajveer's heartbeat to pick up pace. He wonders what exactly she wants to wish for. Is her wish about him? If not, then about who?

"Toh phir dair kis baat ki? Come!"

saying that, Rajveer signals her to sit down on her knees.

Mirroring his actions, Naina kneels down on her knees as she watches him. His hands folded in front of him, his eyes closed. He doesn't look less than an angel.

Kitna Pyaara Hai Yeh Chehra Jis Pe Hum Marte Hain
Yeh Na Jaane Ke Ise Kitna Pyaar Karte Hain

At this moment, Naina feels something very different. She feels as if she has gotten all her answers to why this place is so important.

Darddo Hum Milke Sahenge Iraada Karle
Hum Na Tootenge Kabhi Aao Yeh Vaada Karle
Hum Bikhar Jaane Ke Khayal Se Bhi Darte Hai

As Naina watches him wish, her heart melts and swells with so much love for him.

Yeh Safar Pyaar Ka Hota Hai Bada Hi Mushkil
Gir Ke Jo Sambhle Usi Ko Mile Is Mein Manzil

Right now, she doesn't look at him just as her Rajveer sir, but something much more than that. Something that words cannot even define. His innocence causes Naina to smile with her full heart.

Raah Kaisi Bhi Ho Hum Shok Se Guzarte Hain
Kitna Pyaara Hai Yeh Chehra Jis Pe Hum Marte Hain
Yeh Na Jaane Ke Ise Kitna Pyaar Karte Hain.
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Staring him throughout, Naina folds her hands in front of her as she keeps staring at Rajveer.

"Kash mujhe aapka sath mil jaye hamesha ke liye"

utters Naina still looking at Rajveer

At this moment, Naina doesn't realise what her mouth has just uttered. But Rajveer does! Her voice was loud enough for him to hear. With an increasing heartbeat, Rajveer immediately opens his eyes and looks towards Naina.

A shiver goes down his spine as he discovers her already looking at him. Her eyes clearly conveys her feelings.

But did he hear her words right? Did she really just say that? Now is the perfect time to question her.

"Tumne abhi kya kaha?"

he finally questions her

Her heart skips a beat and her eyes go wide in shock as to what she just said and on top of that, Rajveer heard her clearly. Reality drowns upon her.

Lowering her eyes, she immediately gets up.

"Maine? Nahi...maine kuch bhi nahi kaha"

replies Naina, stammering

In order to escape from this situation, Naina immediately takes few steps away from there. Going towards a nearby bench, with her back towards Rajveer, she sits down. Her heart is racing like a marathon while her face colours has changed completely.

"Mein sir ke baare mein aisa kaise sooch sakti hoon?"

she mumbles to herself

"Kaisa?"

Her eyes opens wide in shock as she hears Rajveer's voice from the back, immediately, she gets up. Turning around, she finds Rajveer standing extremely close to her with his arms crossed over his chest as he is staring in her eyes intensely.

Naina lowers her eyes, yet again.

"Nahi..woo"

she speaks

She couldn't complete her sentence as she feels her dupatta moving away. And before she could understand or do something, her dupatta flies and makes it's way towards Rajveer. Reaching him, her dupatta falls on his face.

Her senses stops working at this moment. She remembers her mother's words.

"Agar tera dupatta udh kar kisi ke uppar gir jaye toh samajh lena ke wo insaan hi tera jeevan sathi hai"

Naina comes out of her thoughts as she finds Rajveer coming towards her, with her dupatta in his hand. With every step he takes towards her, Naina's heartbeat picks up pace. Lowering her eyes, her right hand, unknowingly, moves towards her chest as she tries to cover it up with her hands.

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Chapter 6

Looking at how uncomfortable Naina is feeling, Rajveer immediately lowers his gaze. He will never do anything which will make her uncomfortable. But something Rajveer doesn't understand is, she is not feeling uncomfortable, rather feeling shy. When he is around, she can never be uncomfortable.

In Shyness, Naina immediately turns her back towards Rajveer while her chest is still covered with her palms, her eyes closed out of nervousness and her heartbeat is racing faster than a normal one.

Wanting to give her the dupatta, he looks up to see and takes a sigh of relief when he finds her back turned towards him.

Slowly, he starts taking his steps towards her. As for Naina, as she feels his footsteps coming closer, she immediately opens up her eyes. This time, her heartbeat is way faster than before.

The time he covers reaching her, his hesitation increases by each passing second. He isn't sure if Naina will like what ever he is about to do.

Reaching her, he stands extremely close to her, her back still turned towards him. Lowering his eyes, he extends his hand and slowly, drapes the dupatta over her head. At this, Naina immediately gets a hold of her dupatta.

Both of them stand there for few seconds while a pleasurable silence is between them. Naina immediately takes the dupatta and drapes it around her chest.

Knowing what exactly he is doing, he slowly touches Naina's right shoulder. Getting a hold of it, he slowly turns her around, towards him. Naina doesn't dare to stop or question him which ensures Rajveer that he is doing nothing wrong.

When she is completely turned towards him, Rajveer notices how her eyes are still lowered. Putting his index finger under her chin, he makes her to look at him. They lock eyes immediately.

"Naina, tum theek toh hona?"

he questions her softly

Her heart melts at this. Naina gives him a warm smile. What a true gentleman he is. She knows what exactly he means. Knowing that he has full right on her, he still didn't do anything without her permission.

"Aapke hote hue mujhe kuch nahi ho sakta"

she replies knowing what exactly she is saying

Getting a slight idea of what his feelings are towards her, Naina has decided to not run away from her feelings.

At her answer, Rajveer's face breaks into a smile.

"Did you really mean what you said Naina?

he questions her, wanting to get an honest answer from her.

She knows he is referring to what she has uttered earlier while making a wish. Sure she has decided to let him know about her feelings, but, how can she be so straight up in front of him? There is still a slight hesitation.

With her skipping heartbeat, she lowers her gaze.

"Kya har baat kehna zaroori hai? Kya meri ankhein aapko koi jawab nahi deti?"

she asks him another question

With a slight smile, he takes a step towards her while she stays glued to her spot.

"Tum mujhe apni ankhein parhne kahan deti ho? Baat baat pe toh tum mere samne nazrein jhuka leti ho"

he replies

Well, he is right. At every opportunity, Naina doesn't hesitate to lower her gaze. Sure she has always been bold in KMA, but that was before she started to feel for him. After she apologized to him during the appraisals, this is when she realised what he truly means to her, and this is when she started to be less bold.

Smiling at his true words, she looks up at him.

"Meri nazrein sirf uske samne jhukti hain jis ki mein respect or py"

she utters but stops immediately, realising what she was just about to say. Not that she'll be doing something wrong by confessing her feelings, but how can she say it so easily?

Lowering her gaze, she immediately turns her back towards Rajveer and takes a step forward to leave when he grabs her wrist and refrains her from going.

"Jis ko tum respect or? Or kya Naina?"

he questions her, wanting to get an answer out of her desperately.

Smirking devilishly, Naina tilts her head to her left side and slightly back towards him.

"Communication and Strategy ke master aap hain. Samajh lijiye jo mein kehna chahti hoon"

she replies

Rajveer raises his left eyebrow at her statement while a smirk is prominent on his face.

"Tumhare samne meri sab communication skills fail ho jati hain Naina", he thinks in his head

Still holding her by her wrist, he comes a little closer to her, more like back hugging her. As Naina feels their closeness, she shuts her eyes out of shyness and again, her heartbeat picks up pace.

"Naina, tum aaj bohut khoobsurat lag rahi ho"

he complements her, whispering softly

His warm breath on her ear gives her goosebumps all over her body and she immediately opens up her eyes. In order to control her emotions due to their proximity, she grips her dupatta in between her right hand's palm, leading her bangles to chime.

This makes Rajveer to smile. Oh hell he enjoys the lovely sound of her bangles.

"Kuch kahogi nahi Naina? Thanks bhi nahi?

he questions her

Opening back her eyes, she takes a deep breath before she speaks further

"Apno ko thanks nahi kehti mein"

she replies

And this immediately brings a smile on Rajveer's face. This time, he pulls her closer to him, her back still turned towards him.

"Kon hun mein tumhara Naina?"

he asks her

At this, Naina smiles. Slowly, she succeeds in taking her wrist out of his grip. Immediately, she turns towards him. Looking directly in his eyes, Naina takes a step back.

"Aap mere..."

she utters but stops as she wants to see his reaction. Gosh, he is so desperate to know what he means to her.

"Mein tumhara?"

he questions again as he takes a step closer to her. His eyes are conveying his feelings very well. Oh yes, he wants to know what she feels for him, that too very desperately.

Should she just utter the truth easily? Taking a deep breath, Naina shuts her eyes as she gathers some courage to speak further. Opening back her eyes, she looks in Rajveer's eyes intensely, her facial expressions serious this time. She takes a step closer to him. Lowering her gaze, she takes a hold of his right hand and puts it between her palms. Looking back up, she meets his eyes again.

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Chapter 7

Staring him out with twinkling eyes, Naina smiles a little and she says,

"Aap mere...mere Mentor hain aap"

With that, she quickly leaves his hand and taking this opportunity, she doesn't think twice before escaping.

He is still stuck with her words and is still trying to digest what she has actually said. As he sees Naina laughing at a distance, this is when he realises.

"Mentor? What?"

utters Rajveer staring Naina in disbelief. At his condition, Naina laughs even louder as of making fun of his condition.

"Ji haan Mentor! Kyun maine kuch galat kaha kya?"

questions Naina extremely innocently as she pushes her lips together to control her laugh.

In irritation, Rajveer makes a cute puppy face as he glares at Naina. Getting frustrated at her words, he turns his head the other way.

"Nahi karni mujhe tumse koi baat"

says Rajveer, irritated, more like faking his anger.

At this time, Naina finds him extremely adorable. He looks so cute when he is irritated, that too because of her.

Controlling her laughter, staring him throughout with cute expressions, Naina takes steps closer to him.

"Aray sir aap gussa kyun ho rahe ho?"

she questions him with such a sugar-coated voice that he can't help but look towards her with a smile. But soon, in order to fake his anger, he controls his smile.

"Ye tum mujhse pooch rahi ho? Tumhe kya farak parhta hai? Mein toh tumhara sirf mentor hi hoon na"

states Rajveer, faking to be angry at her. But Naina fails to understand that he is faking it. Her heart skips a beat as she sees his serious face.

"Sir mein sirf mazak kar rahi thi. Please aap gussa mut kijiye"

says Naina lowering her gaze. There is silence for few seconds before Rajveer bursts out into fits of laughter, causing Naina to look up at him with surprised expressions.

"Tum...tum sach mein bohut cute ho Naina"

says Rajveer as he continues laughing.

This causes Naina to get irritated. Ignoring the complement that he has just given to her, she focuses on his earlier words. Did he just make a fool out of her?

She glares at him angrily.

"Aap...aap mazak kar rahe thay?"

she questions him out of anger, more like stating the facts. Her cheeks starts turning red due to her anger and a bit of blush with was because of the complement that he has given her. Of course she heard it perfectly.

And at this moment, Rajveer finds her even more cute. He so wants to feel her red cheeks, but he refrains himself for now.

"Kyun mazak sirf tum hi kar sakti ho?"

he says as he smirks at her

This irks Naina all the more.

"Ab mujhe aapse koi baat nahi karni"

saying that, Naina takes a step forward to leave when Rajveer grabs her by her wrist. This mere touch sends shiver down Naina's spine.

He comes extremely close to her, from the back.

"Acha sorry Naina! But mere sawal ka jawab toh do"

says Rajveer, more like pleading to get an answer out of her desperately.

This makes Naina to smirk devilishly. Turning towards him, her eyes meets his gaze.

"Let's play a game Sir"

suggests Naina as the smile on her face grows even bigger.

Getting confused by her words, Rajveer knits his brows out of confusion. He fails to understand what game Naina is exactly referring towards.

"Game? What game?"

he questions immediately, staring at Naina with confused expressions.

"The concentration game! Agar mein haari toh aap ke har sawal ka jawab dungi. Or agar aap haare toh aap jawab doge"

she answers him, her expressions calm!

This brings a smile on Rajveer's face as he remembers the time he played this game with her and none of them were willing to give up, but at the end, he won. Even that day and now, he had a feeling that Naina gave up so easily on purpose.

"Tum phirse har jaogi Naina"

he replies smiling

Standing across from each other, they keep staring in each other's eyes and hence, now begins the concentration game once again!

"Mein aaj nahi harungi sir! Pehle baat kuch or thi"

she replies staring in his eyes while her expressions turns serious as she utters these words.

teri aankhon ke siwa
duniya mein rakha kya hai
ye uthe subah chale
ye jhuke shaam dhale
mera jeena mera marna
inhi palkon ke tale

As Rajveer listens to her words, his expressions also changes. All the memories of that day comes in front of his eyes as he looks deeply in her eyes. As he remembers her words "I lost" and the way she lowered her gaze, a bit of anger urges through him.

"Kya tum us din jaan ke haari thi?"

comes Rajveer's question to Naina as a bit sternly as his eyes, that are looking in hers, demands for an answer as well.

palkon ki galiyon mein
chehre bahaaron ke haste hue
hain mere khwaabon ke
kya kya nagar in mein baste hue

Naina's heart skips a beat at Rajveer's sudden question. How should she answer him? Maybe she wouldn't have won that day, but she, indeed, gave up too quickly and hence, lost the game.

"Aapko aisa kyun lagta hai?"

questions Naina instead of answering him, giving him a tough competition staring.

in mein mere aane waale
zamaane ki tasveer hai
chaahat ke kaajal se
likhi hui meri taqdeer hai
ho ho.

Not getting an answer irks Rajveer a bit.

"Ye mere sawal ka jawab nahi hai Naina"

he says, frustrated. Sure she is the love of his love, but he never wants to get a credit of anything without winning properly.

"Ye sawal aap mujhse tab pochiyega agar mein haari toh"

replies Naina confidently.

Rajveer doesn't utter any other word after this. He will get an answer from her after he wins.

ye ho kahin in ka saaya
mere dil se jaata nahi
in ke siwa ab to kuchh bhi
nazar mujh ko aata nahi
ye ho kahin in ka saaya
mere dil se jaata nahi

Thirty minutes passes by and these two are still staring in each other's eyes, without blinking. None of their eyes are watery, therefore, none of them are willing to give up.

For Rajveer, he has gotten many answers to his questions just by looking in her eyes, but for him, her words means more. He can very well read the respect and love Naina holds for him.

ye uthe subah chale
ye jhuke shaam dhale
mera jeena mera marna
inhi palkon ke tale

For Naina, the questions Rajveer's eyes demands from her, it sends shivers down her spine. If she loses, she will have no choice than to answer his questions. And for how long can she run away? One day or another, she will have to answer! Love is overflowing in his eyes, that too for her!

teri aankhon ke siwa
duniya mein rakha kya ha

Another fifteen minute passes by and there is no chance of any of them to give up. At this point, Naina get a thought which causes her to immediately lower her gaze.

"I lost again"

she speaks, her voice heavy this time.

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omg...continuous updates...its just super awesome...i m sooo happyyy...thankew so much for updates and pm...thanks alot...the way this story is going is fab...now hell excited to know what rajveer gonna ask and how naina will answer...if possible update soon...😊😊😊
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Chapter 8

As Rajveer hears the same words from Naina, a ray of disappointment spreads on his face. Even today, she lowered her gaze and lost on purpose.

"Tumne phir se kyun kiya aisa Naina?"

he questions her softly. His voice reflects how disappointed he is feeling at this moment. He takes a step closer to Naina

Hearing his words, Naina looks up in his eyes. She knows exactly what he is talking about.

"Us din or aaj, aap mujhe samajh hi nahi paye"

replies Naina, her gaze turning soft by every passing second. Her facial expressions conveys how hurt she is feeling by his question.

This statement of Naina surprises Rajveer all the more.

"Mathlab? Tumhare kehna ka mathlab hai ke tumhare game harne ke peeche koi maksad tha?"

questions Rajveer out of surprise. He has always understood her, then, why not today? Maybe he needs words from her today in order to understand.

"Mein kaise us insaan se jeet jati jo meri zindagi mein bohut mayini rakhta hai? Aap se jeetne se zayada mein aapse harna pasand karungi. Jo khushi mujhe aapse harne mein hogi, woh mujhe jeetne par kabhi nahi hogi"

replies Naina looking intensely in Rajveer's eyes. Her eyes are on the verge of crying and reflects her feelings for him clearly. Her words succeeds in skipping Rajveer's heartbeat.

His eyes turns a bit teary as he hears her words. Any moment, Naina will end up crying, and this is what happens exactly. A lone of tear escapes from her eyes.

And before it could slide down any further, Rajveer reaches her and puts his palm under her chin, leading her tear to fall on his hand.

Staring at that tear for a moment, he closes his palm and then looks towards Naina who is just standing there looking at him surprisingly at his sudden move.

"Or mein kabhi nahi chahunga ke tumhari ankh se ek bhi ansu bahe. Dum ghut ta hai mera tumhe takleef mein dekh kar"

says Rajveer, warning Naina not to cry ever again.

Naina's heart swells with so much love for her Rajveer sir.

"Or aapko takleef de kar mein kabhi khush nahi reh sakti"

replies Naina

Staring at him throughout, she walks towards him. Rajveer notices her movements very carefully. With every step she takes towards him, Rajveer's heartbeat picks up pace.

And in no time, Naina throws herself in Rajveer's arms. This was so unexpected for Rajveer. A smile spreads on his face. He gladly hugs her back with the same intensity. Naina's grip around his shoulders tightens even more, her body language clearly states how she doesn't want to go away from him, ever!

They stay like this for couple of moments before they break their hug, but the truth is, none of them want to go away from each other.

"Naina, mein tumse kuch poochna chahta hoon"

says Rajveer gazing at her intensely

Naina smiles at his words. She will no longer hide her feelings from him.

"Aapke poochne se pehle hi mein apne dil ki baat batana chahti hoon aapko. Wo teen lafz"

replies Naina with an intense look.

A shiver goes down Rajveer's spine as he hears this. As he sees her opening her mouth, he immediately covers it up with his palm.

"Mujhe shayad abhi wo teen lafz sunne ki zaroorat nahi hai. Tumhari ankhein tumhari feelings ab saaf saaf bata rahi hain"

replies Rajveer

This is true, since the time they started playing the concentration game, he could read clearly in her eyes that she feels the same for him, that she loves him more than anything in this world.

They stand in silence for few seconds before Rajveer removes his palm. Naina smiles at his words. Maybe not now, but she will surly say those words whenever he wants her to.

"Toh phir kya poochna chahte hain aap?"

questions Naina

Smiling at her, Rajveer takes her hand between both of his hands.

"Naina, kya tum meri di hui koi cheez accept karogi?"

questions Rajveer, more like asking for her permission to give her something. What a true gentleman he is. Knowing she will accept anything from him without any questions, he still asked for her permission.

"Aapki di hui koi bhi cheez mere liye sab se barh kar hai toh na accept karne ka toh sawal hi nahi uthta"

replies Naina, completely aware of her words.

His heart swells at her answer. Staring her throughout, he leads her towards the bench. He makes her to sit down while he sits right in front of her on his knees.

"Ankhein band karo Naina"

he tells her

Without any questions, Naina shuts her eyes. This shows how much she trusts him. Looking at her with a lovely smile, Rajveer grabs her right foot. With the other hand, he takes out an anklet from his pocket.

Naina's heart skips a beat as she hears the mesmerizing sound of the anklet, but she still doesn't dare to open her eyes and lets him continue.

And in no time, he makes her to wear the beautiful gold anklet.

"Ankhein kholo Naina"

he says softly

With a beautiful smile on her lips, Naina slowly opens up her eyes. Her gaze immediately falls on the anklet on her foot and suddenly, her eyes twinkles. She looks towards Rajveer.

"This is beautiful"

says Naina

She remembers his words few moments back when he asked her if she will do anything for him, and now, she knows this is exactly what he was referring towards. He wanted to give her the payal!

"Not as beautiful as you Naina"

replies Rajveer looking at her with love in his eyes.

Naina blushes at his words. She doesn't thank him for this beautiful gift because in their love, there is no room for any sorry or thanks! However, her eyes conveys how thankful she is to him.

"Ye mere liye is duniya ka sab se khoobsurat gift hai or mein is ke liye aapko thanks nahi bolungi"

says Naina

They share a precious eye-contact. Leaving her foot, Rajveer sits beside her on the bench.

"Or mein chahta bhi nahi ke tum mujhe thanks bolo Naina! Is payal par sirf tumhara haq hai"

replies Rajveer

Looking at him intensely, Naina smiles with so much love.

"Kya mein bhi aapko kuch de sakti hoon?"

questions Naina

"Kuch dene ke liye tumhe meri ijaazat ki zaroorat nahi hai Naina"

he replies immediately

Rajveer's words makes her heart to flutter. Staring him throughout, she extends her right hand towards his face and covers his eyes with her palms, as of telling him to shut his eyes.

Rajveer's heartbeat picks up pace. He closes his eyes and Naina removes her hand. Naina blushes at what she is just about to do. Slowly, she moves her lips closer to his face and soon, her lips comes in a contact with his skin, giving him a soft kiss on his forehead!

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Chapter 9

Rajveer remains his eyes closed as he leans onto her touch and feels her warm and soft lips on his forehead.

Lowering her eyes, Naina shuts her eyes as well while a blush is prominent on both of their cheeks. Naina moves a bit back. They stay like this for few minutes, trying to enjoy the moment. There is silence between them, but it's a pleasurable silence.

They both open their eyes at the same time, smiling. They make their self comfortable while Naina puts her head on Rajveer's shoulder. This definitely is a beautiful night for both of them.

"Naina, kya tum abhi bhi mujhse is jagah ki khasiyaat poochna chahogi?"

questions Rajveer smiling.

"It's lovers point! Right?"

she questions him with a soft voice, more like states the fact.

Rajveer smiles at her words. She has understood the importance of this place perfectly. Smiling, he puts his arm around her shoulder.

"Janti ho Naina, Point 1857 boys cadets ke liye ek bohut hi special jagah thi. Ye wo jagah hai jahan par faculty ki nazroon se door, faculty ke boys cadets apni girlfriends ko le kar aaya karte thay."

he tells her the reason why the cadets would come to this place.

At this, Naina looks up at him. She sits up straight.

"Phir 1857 hi kyun? Kya pyaar ke liye revolt karna zaroori hai?"

she questions him with a smile.

Rajveer stares at Naina with his mouth half open.

"Ohh no...tum bhi dhoka kha gyi haan?"

he says out of surprise but a little smirk is playing on his lips. This makes Naina's heart to skip a beat.

Blushing, she looks at him as she creases her brows at his words. She lets him continue.

Getting up, he walks forward as he continues further.

"Naina, Point 1857 ka karanti se koi lena dena nahi hai Ye sirf ek count hai, ek number hai unh couples ka jo yahan par kabhi aaye thay or yahan par aa ke kuch haseen lamhe sath guzare. Or phir KMA se pass out hone ke baad shaadi ke bandhan mein hamesha ke liye bandh gayye. This is Point 1857"

By the time he finishes, Naina's face glows even more under the beautiful moonlight while a beautiful smile is playing on her lips as she hears him talking about the importance of this place. This should now be called Point 1858, thinks Naina. It's true! Today, they're here and they did spend some beautiful moments together!

Silence takes place between these two as they go in some deep and beautiful thoughts.

Rajveer comes out of his thoughts when he sees Naina blushing. This makes his heart to skip a beat as he realises what she might be thinking.

Suddenly, Rajveer's gaze falls on his watch. He realises that they should now head back to KMA. Sudden disappointment is prominent on his face just by the thought of going back to KMA, but they don't have any choice.

He looks back towards Naina,

"Chalein Naina?"

he says

At this, Naina looks towards him as her smile vanishes. She doesn't want to go back.

"Kitni beautiful jagah haina ye, kitni shaant or sundar. Yahan se jaane ka mann hi nahi karta. Chalna toh parhega"

she says, her voice turns into a whisper by the time she finishes her last few words.

"Kash mein yahan ruk paati"

she continues further. Her voice conveys how she doesn't want to leave from here. Not just alone, she would like to live here with him!

A smile plays on his lips at her words. An idea strikes his mind while he turns his back towards her.

"Hmmm, waise ek idea hai mere paas jisse tumhare jaane ke baad bhi tumhara naam is..is jagah se hamesha ke liye judh jayega"

says Rajveer.

This causes Naina's heartbeat to pick up pace and her eyes twinkles with hope and happiness.

Rajveer looks back towards Naina.

"You wanna try?"

he questions her, looking deeply in her eyes.

With a beautiful smile, Naina nods her head in affirmation.

"Come!"

says Rajveer as he grabs her wrist.

Grabbing her hand, he takes her towards the valley. Reaching there, he lets go off her wrist. Looking at the front, he gets ready to shout!

"NAINA!"

he shouts her name loudly making his voice to echo which leads both Rajveer and Naina to hear his voice back. Naina's name, taken by Rajveer, echoes in the entire place.

Looking at her, he smiles.

"Ab tum zor se chillao"

he demands her to yell his name loudly. She looks at him for few seconds. Diverting her gaze at the front, she looks at the sky.

"RAJVEER!"

she yells loudly with a beautiful smile leading her voice to also echo.

Today, he hears his name without any 'sir' from Naina's mouth for the very first time. This makes him to fall for his own name. His name from her mouth sounds all the more beautiful.

They look towards each other with so much love and affection in their eyes. Looking at the sky, Rajveer cups his mouth as he gets ready to shout her name again.

"NAINA"

Naina follows his actions and shouts his name again.

"RAJVEER!!"

As they both shout each other's names together, their voices echos is the entire valley leading their names to mix together. Without much effort, their names "Rajveer and Naina" becomes "Rajveer-Naina". The whole Point 1857 gets to witness their names becoming one. Not just their names, today, both of them become one!

Looking towards each other, they both smile with their full heart as they get to witness the magic of this place.

"Sir mein kuch or bhi kehna chahti hoon. Mein chahti hoon ke hum dono ka naam is jagah se judh jaye, wo bhi ek sath"

says Naina looking towards Rajveer

Rajveer's heart skips a beat as he realises what exactly she wants to say. He knows she wants to say those three magical words. Maybe this is the right time that they both confess their love.

"Kaho Naina! Ab mein sunna chahta hoon"

he says with such a sugar coated voice that it almost makes her to blush. With her heartbeat racing fast, she gets a hold of his wrist. This doesn't surprise Rajveer at all. They share a very precious eye-contact before Naina and Rajveer look up at the sky again.

"I LOVE YOU RAJVEER" "I lOVE YOU NAINA"

they both shout with their full heart in the valley. This skips the heartbeat of Naina as she didn't know that he would confess as well. They immediately stare in each other's eyes while a beautiful smile is playing on their lips.

Their love confession echoes in the entire valley together and the whole nature gets to witness their souls becoming one. At this point, none of them are saying a single word yet, the entire Point 1857 is shouting their own love confession at them, that they just made!

Holding hands, in silence, they both walk back towards the white wishing pillar. Reaching there, they stand in front of the pillar, staring at each other with a beautiful smile on their faces.

Suddenly, Rajveer's gaze falls on the ground and he finds a black chalk there. As something strikes his mind, he picks up the chalk.

Giving Naina a smile, he stands very close to the wishing pillar. Extending his right hand, he writes something on the while pillar. Naina fails to see what he has written there since his back is covering her view.

Coming near him, she stands by him and as she looks at the writing, her heart skips a beat as she finds "RAINA - Point 1858" written there. She understands the logic behind Point 1858, but fails to understand why he has written "RAINA".

"RAINA?"

she questions him out of confusion as she looks towards him.

Smiling at her innocence, staring her throughout, he grabs her hand. Without breaking the eye-contact, he gets her to touch his upper right shoulder.

"Rajveer ka RA"

he says! Now, he makes her to touch her upper front shoulder with her own hand.

"Naina ka INA"

he continues further!

Now, taking her hand between his palms, gazing at her intensely, Rajveer takes a step closer to Naina!

"Rajveer and Naina, today became RAINA!"

he finally completes his explanation behind RAINA!

As she understands this, her cheeks turns red out of blush. Without waisting another moment, she throws herself in Rajveer's embrace. Knowing she would do something like this, Rajveer was ready to gladly take her in his arms! He hugs her back with the same intensity.

"I love you Naina"

whispers Rajveer in her ear as he hugs her tighter than before. It looks like God is with both of them today as both of their wishes has been granted today itself! Naina wished to be with him while Rajveer wished to fulfill any wish that Naina had!

Slightly breaking the hug, he cups her cheeks. Naina shuts her eyes as she feels his lips on her forehead, giving her a kiss! He showers her with soft kisses all over her face. Something he wished to do since the time he has seen her in the Red Saree that day!

Not knowing if he should continue, he leaves her slowly. Lowering his eyes, he tries to distance himself from her when she grabs his hand.

"Aaj toh apni feelings se mut bhagiye"

says Naina looking in his eyes deeply, pleading for more!

Smiling, he cups her cheeks again as he starts showering her with more kisses. Moving down to her neck, he starts kissing her there as well. Naina moans out of pleasure as this is the first time she is experiencing these kind of feelings! She pulls him closer to her and tilts her head back, giving him more access to her neck, as a sign of begging for more!

Suddenly, unexpected rain starts, leading both of them to smile. Nothing could be better than romancing in rain! As he continues kissing all over her neck, he realises what condition she must be in as she is wearing while clothes.

He stops immediately which makes Naina to look at him out of confusion.

"Kya hua Rajveer?"

she questions him.

Lowering his gaze, he takes a step back. Taking off his jacket, he looks up at her again. Staring her throughout, he covers her with his jacket and immediately, he lowers his eyes again.

"Tumhare kapde.."

he hesitates to say anything further

But by his words and actions, Naina has understood perfectly that due to rain and her white clothes, her body must be visible.

With a smile, she cups his face and makes him to look at her.

"Aapko nazre jhukane ki zaroorat nahi hai Rajveer. Mujhe kisi bhi halat mein dekhne ka pura haq hai aapka"

she says sweetly.

Hearing this, Rajveer smiles with his full heart and cups her cheeks.

"Nahi Naina, mein tumse pyaar karta hoon or mein aisa kuch dekhna nahi chahoonga jis mein tum thori si bhi uncomfortable ho. More than love, I respect you Naina"

he tells her

This swells Naina's heart with so much love!

"Aapke sath mein kabhi uncomfortable ho hi nahi sakti "

she replies immediately

And suddenly, rain becomes heavier than before, leading it to make a loud thundering sound. This sudden sound scares Naina and she immediately hugs Rajveer. This makes Rajveer to smile!

"Aaj ye baarish bhi chahti hai ke tum meri bahoon mein raho"

says Rajveer with a deep and intense voice leading Naina to blush.

"Baarish or mein, dono!"

She replies with a smirk!

In each other's arms, they start to make their way back to KMA. They came here as Rajveer and Naina, but by the magic of this place, they are leaving as RAINA, with nothing but lots of love in their heart for each other!

Naveen's Voiceover -

Aaj mera sapna pura hogaya, meri behan or mera best friend aaj ek hogaye, jo ke mein hamesha se chahta tha!

-_-_-_-_-_-

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Posted: 7 years ago
#20
Perfect end to an incomplete scene of the show.
It could have been more beautiful in this way only if Raj had never decided to quit the show.

He could have come by the end just for one episode to give us a happy ending.

Thanks for making it that beautiful with your writing skills.

Do write more.

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