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Posted: 7 years ago
Of course the kings men also would have an equally bloated ego
they could not digest that a small boy had beat them at their plan
Interesting theories about Moora identity
but her blood line does not matter ; her nature only matters
she was a great queen and a generous mother
she was a mother Avantika could never be
just comparing how Sujan and Avantika were treated
we can understand the difference between Moora and Avantika
Chandra was born to be a king and rule his people
Acharya knew very well how obsessed Nand was with Nandini
thanks for the age clarification - it was very helpful

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Posted: 7 years ago
any one in Moora's place when she saw Avantika
would have fainted or reacted a lot more violently
she was still in control of the situation and handled it well
oh so he had lied to Nandini on the swayamvar about Chandra
as I said he is obsessed with Nandini
I am so happy Nandini went with her instinct that day
the wheels of fortune had started changing from that day
the first sign of her detachment from Nand began
a sweet mistake I would say when she pointed her room
a mistake that made CN come closer that day
I love this lovers tiff and I want more of such situations
he misunderstood the reason of her rejection so he was angry
but now he knows her a lot better and understands her too
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Posted: 7 years ago
Indeed a princess rescuing a prince is very uncommon
they had shown a few of such instances in Jodha Akbar
once when Jodha carried Akbar on a horse back in the jungle
after a tiger had attacked and wounded him severely
it was partly her fault as she had thought he would hunt innocent animals
so he had taken out all the bullets from his gun
and when the tiger had come he had saved her from it
and fought the tiger with his sword as much as he could
there too she had tied Akbar to her body and rode the horse
Chandra will get many occasions to save Nandini
Ok so rakshas vivah was only the couples consent
miya biwi razi to kya karega kazi type

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Posted: 7 years ago
yes all the others had realized it by her actions
Poor Chandra - he was poisoned and wounded
and yet the poor guy was slapped in that state
mothers are really very intuitive
I understand 15 years is a long gap
so he would take time to open up to her
I think this type of flash back will surprise any one
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Posted: 7 years ago
wow so Nalini is parcelled to Parvatak ?
thank you Di I love you for this
there she can play her games of 50 shades of lust
Parvatak will happily indulge her the whole week
I wonder who will surprise whom there
and err who will dominate whom
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Posted: 7 years ago
I was replying to all you comments
now the back log is cleared
I have my assignment now
will give my detailed comments soon
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: 2filmy

I gave the idea of the twin escape plan ? how ?
I still will say the credit is your as you are the creator

Your comments with your own analogies gives me more ideas. Rather expansion or probably refinement to my ideas...

Like I was toying with the idea of Chandra's sibling, and I was very sure in my mind about 2nd child dying [Moora and Avantika each losing their child]. I was also toying with the idea of a pair for all girls. But I already had many characters in the story - i dint want to introduce one more character, just to bring in the romance element... The CN Show had a sister for Chandra who was a cry baby; complaining kinda woman... So I didnt want Chandra to adopt a sister just for that sake of not having a similarity to the Show... And then came Your comment asking something about his brother... and bang... my whole problem got sorted out...
Similarly, i remember you asking about whispered rumours long back and I was explaining you of all secret passages and emergency plans as escape routes for the royalties... and I already had Panna as my inspiration and Moora's impostor for escape plan in mind. So I made twin escape plans for both in the story.


what a heaven and hell difference between Moora and Avantika
she was a mother Avantika could never be
just comparing how Sujan and Avantika were treated
we can understand the difference between Moora and Avantika

I was trying to draw a parallel between Nandini and Avantika. But you drew a parallel between Moora and Avantika !! Wow.

If you compare Komala, Sujan, Nandini and Chandr as foster children - that talks a lot about their upbringing, their relationship that they have with their mother and the bond that they share...
Komala was born to Avantika but practically raised by Nandini. She treated Nandini more like a friend and confidante. She respects Nandini as a sister and mother both.
Sujan was born to the impostor but raised by Moora. He treated Moora like his own mother. He remains loyal to her like Ram was to Kaikeyi [when he was asked to step back from his responsibilities as soon as Chandra took charge as Leader against Nand]. He thinks Moora and Chandra are his own.
Nandini was raised by Avantika. She grew up scared of her Maasi. Avantika made it extremely clear that she is never gonna give motherly love to Nandini. She grew up to be two-faced in the society - treated like a daughter in front of the public and a lonely caged bird inside the family.
Chandra was born to Moora but was practically raised by TWO MEN - the dance master and the Acharya. But he got love from the Nurse, Dance Master, Acharya, everyone who came in touch with him. He did not experience motherly love and the attachment that sons would have with their mothers - probably why he was not able to express himself freely to Moora like the way he did with Acharya. But he still turned out to be a gentleman.

If we compare Avantika and Moora in the Mother position :-
Moora had the heart to treat another child as her own. Fate took care of her own child Dev through the dance master and Acharya.
Avantika could not treat Nandini as her own child. Fate took away all her children through Nand and the war (again arising because of Nand's atrocity).


Fate decided to play hide and seek with Nand
so he never found out Dev and Moora
Nand is a master player so he covers all loop holes
but still there was a small gap in his tight hold
and Moora and Dev survived for that

In the story of Hiranyakashipu, he asked boons so so specific and was granted too. He thought he had won even Brahma with his brilliant request which had immunity from everything. But Narasimha found out a loophole for that too !
Everything that is born in this world has to perish sometime. Nand would have his downfall too. However much he covers his loopholes, they will emerge like dead bodies floating in water.


Acharya knew very well how obsessed Nand was with Nandini
oh so he had lied to Nandini on the swayamvar about Chandra
as I said he is obsessed with Nandini

Wait for the upcoming chapters. You will know how horribly obsessed he is.
And wait for the background of Acharya too ! 😉


I am so happy Nandini went with her instinct that day
the wheels of fortune had started changing from that day
the first sign of her detachment from Nand began

So true ! You got the crux of the story you had asked me long back 😛 Nand believes that she is his lady luck. And the wheels of fortune stopped favouring Nand the day she said "I am his... He is my...". She became "his" and "he" became "hers". The incomplete sentence taken to conclusion...




Edited by FrankPunch - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: 2filmy

wow so Nalini is parcelled to Parvatak ?

thank you Di I love you for this
there she can play her games of 50 shades of lust
Parvatak will happily indulge her the whole week

I wonder who will surprise whom there
and err who will dominate whom



@BOLD

Priya 🤣
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Posted: 7 years ago
Fantastic chapters Sangeetha😊
I can't believe nand,avantika,Nalini and dhurdhra are trying to separate chandra and nandhini for their own reasons😡
Edited by Nonie12345 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Fantastic chapters Sangeetha😊

I can't believe nand,avantika,Nalini and dhurdhra are trying to separate chandra and nandhini for their own reasons😡


Thank you Nonie
You analysed the characters perfectly ...
All 4 characters want their selfish needs to be fulfilled. Nand wants the throne, Avantika wants her daughter Nalini to live a good and decent life . Nalini wants Chandra only for xxx and luxurious life. Durdhara wants Chandra all for herself.

Here, i see a similarity in Nalini and Durdhara characters. Both wants to covet something that does not belong to them ... They are not willing to sacrifice themselves to achieve it. They are willing to snatch it from the other person whom it rightfully belongs. ..

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