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Part 5
Rashi spends time with Shashank, playing carrom board with him.
Parag to Gopi: I spoke to Jitu about your further studies apart from your Audit. Your CA qualification & your computer software experience with MBA degree will help you a lot. They say women are the better administrator than men. Once you are done with MBA, you will get more office responsibilities. Even Kashish used to come to the office until Shashank was born. She ensures that Shashank gets onto the school bus and still assists Sujal in his business. Then in the afternoon, Shashank comes home by school bus. That time Kashish or any other family member receive him at his stop. We are sure you can manage many things.
At night, the Shah family plan to sleep at the penthouse but Parag & Kokila catch them red-handed.
P & K: Why don't you people sleep here?
S & K: Because they want us to be comfortable because they feel we are more accustomed to big rooms.
Korag: Fine, today, ladies & gents will sleep in separate rooms.
Gopi goes and gets water filled win a copper vessel for Jitu & a holy book for Urmila with the bedsheets in her hands. Ahem sees her and takes the copper vessel and the book.
Gopi: Drinking water from the copper vessel is good for health. My uncle drinks it every night without fail.My aunt does not sleep without reading this book.
Ahem: I will give it to them
Gopi: Thank you.
Ahem: Don't be formal. Are your uncle and aunt not mine? If you say, I think we can go on a date. Bro & Bhabhi will make all the arrangements.
Gopi nods.
Ahem: I have bought a gift for you.
He gives the gift to her and said, "See you tomorrow."
Gopi: See you too.
The next day, Jitu prepares Jalebis for everyone. All of them go on a trekking to see the waterfall. The ladies & the gents go separately. However, Sujal, Ahem, & Jigar go to Kashish, Gopi, & Rashi. All are going in pairs. Kashish sees Jigar & Rashi together on the second instance and decides to talk to Jigar about it. Suddenly it starts raining. Everyone enjoys the rain. Sujal & Kashish enjoy it the most.
Kashish: It has been a long time we are having these moments. Otherwise, you will be engrossed in reading newspapers. Other than that you are the best husband.
Sujal: Even I feel bad that I am not able to spend time with you & Shashank. I read newspapers to update myself. More than that, I need to keep the track of our company in the stock market. I am happy that you are doing multi-tasking job. But we need a private space for ourselves. This is the best time to enjoy the moments.

Credits to Tanu
Ahem & Gopi go near the temple.
Ahem: It is nice to see bro & bhabhi having these moments. Otherwise, they would have their own routine. Did you like the gift?
Gopi: Yes, I liked. The chain is very beautiful.
Ahem: You have not worn it.
Gopi: Can I wear it after marriage? Since Madhupur is a small town, I will not be very comfortable wearing such an expensive jewelry.
Ahem: No problem. I understand.
Both go inside the temple and have their prayers.
Gopi's Prayers in her mind
I have never asked anything for myself & won't ask either. I don't have any grievances except for the fact that I have lost my parents but you have given me a great uncle & aunt who never let me get the feeling that I'm an orphan. All that I want is my family's well-being and the success of my future husband Ahem.
She rings the bell.
Ahem's prayers
I have not prayed to you often except during the morning hours. I don't know what Gopi has asked but whatever she has asked, please give it to her. All that I want is her happiness & well-being.
After they are done with the prayers,
Ahem: I am happy that you spoke your heart. If I give you one more gift will you accept it?
Gopi nods
Ahem puts the flower garland around her neck. The background song is
It starts raining yet again
Haar ko jeet banakar badi sachchai se
Prem ne dil pe woh chahat ka asar dala hai
Aaj inkar ki soorat hi nahi hai koi
Haar hi roka nahin phoolon ki jaimala hai
Both the families play lagori game.
Ho... ho...

Kuchh baatein ho chuki hain
Kuchh baatein abhi hain baaki
Bauchhar ek padi hai
Barsatein abhi hain baaki
Khul ke naachne ko bekal
Man ka mayura hai
Ho.. khul ke naachne ko bekal
Man ka mayura hai
Milan abhi aadha adhura hai
Milan abhi aadha adhura hai
Milan abhi aadha adhoora hai
Milan abhi aadha adhura hai

The girl's side hits the stones with the ball. Ahem takes the ball & holds it.
Sujal: Hit them with the ball, else they will win.
Ahem still does not throw the ball.
The girls' complete in rebuilding the stone pyramid.
Kuchh baatein ho chuki hain
Kuchh baatein abhi hain baaki
Bauchhar ek padi hai
Barsatein abhi hain baaki
Khul ke naachne ko bekal
Man ka mayura hai
Ho.. khul ke naachne ko bekal
Man ka mayura hai
Milan abhi aadha adhura hai
Milan abhi aadha adhura hai
Milan abhi aadha adhoora hai
Milan abhi aadha adhura hai
Sujal hits Ahem with the ball while the girls giggle. Parag & Jitu go to the temple and have dips at the pond.
Parag: I wish Ahem & Gopi visit all the temples here.
Jitu: Yes, it will be great.

Mile honge Radha Krishna yahin kisi ban mein
Prem Madhuri unki basi hai pawan mein
Aur bhi paas aa gaye hum is Divya vatavaran mein
Aur bhi paas aa gaye hum is Divya vatavaran mein
Ek man diya hai, kitne saugatein Abhi hai baaki
Bauchhar ek padi hai, barsatein Abhi hain baaki
Hamein milaane mein sabka sahyog poora hai
Ho.. hamein milaane mein sabka sahyog poora hai
Ahem & Gopi take Shashank with them and come to the temple. They put some money into the hundi. All children are running and playing. Everyone is taking out the shoes. Ahem takes out his shoes & keeps it downstairs. Gopi picks them up & gives it to him so he can wear them.

Milan abhi aadha adhura hai
Milan abhi aadha adhura hai
Milan abhi aadha adhoora hai
Milan abhi aadha adhura hai

Everyone reach the waterfall. SK, Shashank & Gohem get into the waterfall & play with the big ball.

Jharna suhana aisa prem geet gaaye
Aane waale kal ke meethe sapne dikhaye
Yeh ehsas pehli baar dil ko gudgudaaye
Yeh ehsas pehli baar dil ko gudgudaaye
Sab din abhi hain baaki, sab raatein abhi hain baaki
Bauchhar ek padi hai, barsatein abhi hain baaki
Chhed diya purava ne tan ka taanpura hai
Chhed diya purava ne tan ka taanpura hai
Jigar & Rashi also join them.

Milan abhi aadha adhura hai
Milan abhi aadha adhura hai
Milan abhi aadha...
Aadha adhura hai
Gohem & SK play a friendly tug-of-war match. Ahem leaves the rope lightly. SK falls. Everyone laughs
Later, Sujal, Kashish & Shashank outside the temple. Jigar & Rashi also join them.
Ahem takes the selfie of the family photo. Later Shashank sees the mango tree & goes to Parag. He said, "I want to have mangoes. I want to climb the tree if you don't mind."
Parag: I don't mind but your granny will mind. I can allow you to climb but you won't climb on your own till you grow up.
Shashank: Fine.
Ahem & Gopi goes there. They said, "We will take care."
Shashank goes with Ahem & Gopi to the mango tree, taking the bag from Ahem to put the mangoes inside.
Shashank plucks a lot of mangoes & tamarinds and puts them in the bag. He is now coming down.
Ahem: Be careful. He climbs the tree and takes the bag and said, "Gopi, hold this bag while I will come down with Shashank."
Gopi holds the bag.
Ahem and Shashank comes down from the tree safely. All 3 of them come back with the mangoes & the tamarind.
Sujal: We will have these mangoes later. Let it be in the car for now.
They kept the bag inside the car.

Edited by kavsy - 7 years ago
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Part 7
Everyone go home. The next day, Sujal plays football with Shashank. Sujal gets a business call from Manohar.
Sujal over the phone: That's really great news that our meeting is confirmed. We will come to Mumbai tomorrow itself.
He said, "We need to leave by evening today so we can meet the client tomorrow."
Kashish & Ahem become dull.
Gopi & Kashish is cutting vegetables.
Kashish: It looks like we have come yesterday. I want to tell you one thing. The gap between engagement & wedding is very beautiful. Once you get married, it will be in your memories all your life.
Gopi smiles.
Ahem does his packing. He sees Shashank playing with the ball & calls him.
Shashank: How can I help you?
Ahem: Tell your aunt that I want water.
Shashank goes to the kitchen & said, "Aunt, uncle wants water."
Kashish leaves. Gopi gets the water for Ahem at the terrace who said, "I have got one more gift for you."
He gives her an expensive mobile phone & said, "Since we are leaving, I am giving you this handset so we can keep in touch. This is the phone where you can download the apps that you want. If you don't mind, shall we spend some time on the terrace at night?"
Gopi nods.
The rest of them are playing cards.
Shashank: I will sleep with uncle today.
Kashish: Fine, but you should get up early tomorrow.
After the sunset, Gopi meets Ahem at the terrace after serving the Kesar milk to all, including Shashank. Ahem sees Gopi & is happy.
He said, "It seemed to me that you won't come."
Gopi: I wanted to come but all others were talking so I couldn't.
Ahem: Does anyone know that you are here?
Gopi: Chhoti knows but she told everyone that I have slept. She has put pillows inside the bedsheet.
Ahem holds Gopi's hands and said, "I don't know whether I have the right to call you alone here but from the time I saw you, I could not take my eyes off you."
Gopi blushes.
Rashi looks there privately & is happy with their closeness.
Jigar: Why don't we spend time here now?
Rashi: Fine.
Jigar & Rashi watch a movie on his laptop while Ahem & Gopi are on the terrace. Ahem kisses Gopi's knuckles. The background song is
Mujhe Haq Hai

Tujhko Jee Bhar Ke Mein Dekhu
Mujhe Haq Hai
Bas Yuhhi Dekhta Jao
Mujhe Haq Hai

Piyaaa Piyaaa
Piyaaa Piyaaa
Bole Mere Jiyaaa

Tumhe Haq Hai
Tumhe Haq Hai
Tumhe Haq Hai

Ahem kisses her hand and lies on her lap.

Antara

Dhal Rahi Peghal Yeh Raat Dheere Dheere
Badh Rahi Hai Pyaar Ki Baat Dheere Dheere
Chudiyan Gun Guna Ke Kya Kahe Sanjanaa
Yeh Chudiyan Gun Guna Ke Kya Kahe Sanjanaa

Raat Ki Raat Jagau
Mujhe Haq Hai
Chand Poonan Ka Churaaoo
Mujhe Haq Hai

Piyaaa Piyaaa
Piyaaa Piyaaa
Bole Mere Jiyaaa

Tumhe Haq Hai
Tumhe Haq Hai
Tumhe Haq Hai
Ahem: It is amazing that you understand minute things about me. How did you get to know that I have got a cold?
Gopi: When you struggle to inhale I could make out.

Kal Subah Tujhse Mein
Door Chala Jaunga
Ek Pal Ko Bhi Tujhe Bhool Nahi Paunga
Yeh Chehara,Yeh Muskaan
Ankhon Mein Bhar Ke

Yeh Chehara ,Yeh Muskaan
Ankhon Mein Bhar Ke

Mein Teri Yaad Mein Tadpu
Mujhe Haq Hai
Tujhse Milne Ko Mein Tarsuu
Mujhe Haq Hai

Piyaaa Piyaaa
Ahem takes Gopi's pic from his mobile. Gopi rests her head on Ahem's shoulders.
Piyaaa Piyaaa
Bole Mere Jiyaaa

Tumhe Haq Hai
Tumhe Haq Hai
Tumhe Haq Hai

Both hug each other
The next day, everyone gets into the car. Gopi gets water for Ahem. He said, "After 4 months I don't have to call you on the pretext of getting water from you. We will chat on the Internet, WhatsApp & video calling."
Gopi: Be away from ice & cold water for few days. You have just recovered from cold.
Ahem: Sure.
He takes his bags & joins his family.
The Shah family go to Madhupur. Jigar & rashi get their second-year results. They clear the exams & enroll for the final year.
In Modi Industries, Sujal gets the project and decides to handle it but Ahem said, "I want to handle this one. You have not spent time with bhabhi."
Parag, Kokila, & Sujal agree.
Sujal: To handle this project you need to go to Bangkok. This is your first project but I am confident that you will handle it.
Ahem calls Gopi & said, "I am going to Bangkok for 3 months to work on the project but I'm nervous as this is my first project. Will your love for me reduce if I don't succeed?"
Gopi: All the best. I have confidence that you will succeed. I will pray for you.
Ahem: Can I shout?
Gopi: Sure.
Ahem: I LOVE YOU
The flight takes off. Ahem leaves for Bangkok.
Sujal & Kashish meet at the coffee shop.
Kashish: I want to talk to you about Jigar.
Sujal: Yes, even I saw him with Rashi.
Kashish: Why don't we talk to Jigar about it?
Sujal: Yes, I am thinking of meeting them after the college hours. Mom & Dad want us to spend some time together. So they will be receiving Shashank at the stop where he will get down.
Sujal & Kashish meet Jigar & Rashi outside the college after all the lectures. They go to the hotel.
SK: I have seen both of you together at SS. If you guys like each other, we can tell our parents, Hetal Aunt & Chirag uncle.
Jigar: Yes, we love each other.
Rashi: But I don't know how mom will react. She wanted me to marry Ahem Jiju. They don't know about our relationship.
Kashish: I think from your side, Gopi & Jitu uncle can help. I am sure they will understand.
Sujal: Why don't we meet Chirag uncle & Hetal aunt?
After the lunch, all 4 of them go to Jigar's place & meet Herag.
Hetal: I am a mother. So I can make out from his face that he loves Rashi. I don't have any problem as she is my to be DIL's sister. When a boy & a girl get married, the siblings also get the proposal in most of the cases.
Chirag: We will talk to Jitu.

All 6 of them go to Shah house for RaJi marriage proposal.
Edited by kavsy - 7 years ago
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Awesome update sweets
Loved itt soo much...
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Awesome update dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
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so nice of parag to tell gopi that she can work n do higher studies after marr.such a nice family.Kashish complaining that sujal is always busy with newspapers.ha ha.loved their rain moment.but wish u had added thoda sa pyar as bgm.Gohem scene was sweet.Ahem calling gopi 4 date.sweet.Ahem gifted her a chain which she will wear only after marriage.hope u will show that chain scene after marriage.garland scene was so romantic.the short shoe scene was also good.gohem prayer scene was lovely.
adha adura song sequence was well explained.Shashank wants mangoes from the tree n parag's reply was funny n cute.he climbed the tree as usual.good that ahem brought him down.naughty boy shashank.

in the movie there was no date scene.can u plz include gohem date scene?either theatre scene or a restaurant date like arshi had in IPK
Edited by jasminerahul - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ahem gifting phone to Gohem was cute.Ahem telling gopi that from d time he saw her he could'nt take his eyes off her n gopi blushing was romantic.mujhe haq hai song sequence was so romantic.i just loved it.RaJi watching movie together was cute.plz add a long RaJi scene.So ahem is going 2 bangok 4 a long project.though short n simple i liked gohem ph conversation.pic added more charm to the scene.good that SK decided to get Raji's marriage fixed n talked to them regarding it.happy that its fine from jigar's parents' side.waiting 2 know how rashi's parents will react
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29
Character Sketch is very Interesting
like all the pics too
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30
Will read all the chapters hopefully by this weekend

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