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Posted: 7 years ago
wahhh

ye sid ko akkal kaha se mil gaya?? sacchi me isne koi issue create nhi ki?? I'm still shock .. yr kaise ho gaya???


bt koi nhi hopefully everything is going to be fine now...

This part written by amna I guess.. bt kuch kuch jagah mujhe aap v lage..aise andar se awaj aaya :p
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice story
It's was Sid and Ridhima
But Sid left
Armaan and Ridhima got married
Or say forced married
Armaan touched Ridhima also blame her for everything
First she didn't said him anything
But later she give him good answer
They start love each other and progress in their relationship
Now Sid is back in this life
But it was shock for him to know that Armaan and Ridhima are married
He left to his house and hope he doesn't create any misunderstanding bw them
Thanks for PM
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: NishitaRahman

Wow mindblowing part.love the part.love AR romance.this part is written by amna.eagerly waiting for next part.


Thanks dear..
Glad u love it...
Posting soon...
take care :)
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: DMGThings

Chalo, thank god! Mujhe laga yeh Sid issues create karega lekin woh chup chap nikal liya. Toh achcha hai. I hope aage jaake koi problem na kare yeh. I mean, kahin gusse mein aake Armaan se badla lene, usne Shaina se shaadi karli toh? Na baba na. Aisa nahi hona chahiye. Please!

Aur Armaan. Oyye hoyye. Poora waala Armaan bann gaya hai. Har time Ridzy ko pareshaan karta hai, romance karne ke alawa much soojhta nahi usse. Gosh. Bas, yahi toh chahiye tha! Ab mujhe Armaan achcha lag raha hai. Thank you!



Thanks dear..
Glad u like the part...
U never know hehehe...
Lolz, woh aur Shaina se shaadi...
usse Armaan se kiya badhla milenge :P
haan ab bangaya but pata nehi kabtak right ;)
U r most welcome...
take care :)
Keep loving and reading...

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lashyyy

hello
i m back again
firstly i got the pm part finally n it was hot

ok now coming to sid n ar its stupid actually i found it stupid ridhz behave like she is not comfy infront of sid then y the hell is she standing there infront of him inviting his lustully eyes
isnt she should first go n change ????
watever now moving further so armaan knows y sid left ridhz ...
how
his one desicion is perfect that he let ridhz handle sid reason koi bhi ho but atleast now ridhz handle him jo bhi ye matter indono ka tha or ab agar sid ko ridhima ne sab btaya to hopefully he understand it in a better way n will not came back again which i doubt

then yaar the way their mood suddenly changes in a sec after sid move out is wat can i say not getting a perfect word to use
its its its idk the word
its just the prove that sid doesnt matter in their relationship
n it actually makes theit relationship more strong n bring them closer
part i guess is written by amna not sure


Hello...
Yes I can see that...
Heheh good u enjoy it ;)

Lolz, actually woh toh usko pata hai...
Koi aur hota toh waha se bhaag jaati na ;)

Yup finally he got to know the truth...
Lolz, u keep doubting a lot haan...
Dekhte hai kiya hota hai...
Yeah, now it doesn't matter if Sid is back or not...
Because she is in so much with the guy she is married...
Dekhte hai kisne likha hai...
Keep reading and loving...
Of course guessing as well ;)
take care :D
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ITSABOUT_DMG

huuu

thank god jaisa humne socha tha waisa kuch nahi hua
ridhima ne badi himmat se usko answer kiya
n armaan ko realise hogaya ke ridhima kisike liye usey chodke jaane nahi waali
sid itni jaldi maan gaya???
this is strange
kuch bhi hosakta hai
aagey dekhte hai kya hota hai
ye ff jaldi end horaha hai kya????
parts chote aur fast forward horahe hai
ekdum jaldi jaldi horaha hai sab
anyways this part is written by both of u
upper part amna ne likha lower waala rihoo di ne
toh i think mera guess sahi hoga
ok chalo this is it for now
next part jaldi se chahiye
bye
take care


Heheh hi humey...
Hmmm nehi huva na waisa jaisa tumne socha lolz...
Glad u like the part dear...
Is the parts short...???
Heheh fast issiliyeh becox two are writing it...
We manage always to write the part if the other can't...
Aur itna interest hai, tum log ke saath saath...
Hum dono bhi part ka wait karte hai...
As we don't discuss and tell others what would happen next..
No plan how this story is going on and going to end up ehhe..

Hmm Abhi toh part 11 haina...
We decide it would be of 20 so yes...
Just 8 more parts...
Dekhte hai aage kiya hota hai...
Yeh bhi dekhlenge hum..
take care :)
Keep loving and enjoying...
Guessing too...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Prizi

wahhh

ye sid ko akkal kaha se mil gaya?? sacchi me isne koi issue create nhi ki?? I'm still shock .. yr kaise ho gaya???


bt koi nhi hopefully everything is going to be fine now...

This part written by amna I guess.. bt kuch kuch jagah mujhe aap v lage..aise andar se awaj aaya :p


Thanks Priyuu...
Hahaha ab toh shock se baahar aajao...
Pata nehi... I m shocked too :P

Dekhte hai ur guessing is correct or not...
hahahah accha, phir bhi tumne Amna hi bola na..
Dekhenge hum...
take care :)
Keep loving and enjoying...
Guessing too ;)
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: T.Peru

Nice story

It's was Sid and Ridhima
But Sid left
Armaan and Ridhima got married
Or say forced married
Armaan touched Ridhima also blame her for everything
First she didn't said him anything
But later she give him good answer
They start love each other and progress in their relationship
Now Sid is back in this life
But it was shock for him to know that Armaan and Ridhima are married
He left to his house and hope he doesn't create any misunderstanding bw them
Thanks for PM
Update soon


Thanks dear...
Glad u are liking the story till now...
Hmm dekhte hai ab aage kiya hota hai...
U r most welcome dear...
Keep loving and reading...
take care :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
Dard Na Jaane Koi
An AR FF


Part 12


Sid left from there, to go to the airport. Lost in his thoughts, he never could have imagined that something like that could happen to him. That Riddhima would marry Armaan instead of him. And above all, Armaan accepted Riddhima to be his wife. It was still hard for him to accept that. Of course he pretended in front of them to be happy for them, but in his heart, he knew that he could never accept that.

Right now he was standing in front of the airport and thought, if he should enter or leave Armaan and Riddhima alone forever, or should he go back and separate them, to make Riddhima his again. After all was she his first love and she loved him back. If only he had not received the big opportunity for a Job, he never would have left her on their wedding day. But it was all destinies play.

It was decided, what he wanted to do. He smirked and ripped his ticket back to Pakistan. Then he turned around and sat in a taxi.
S: Nahi Riddhima, itni asani se me tumhe khud se dur nahi hone dunga. Wait and Watch. Tumko mera hone se koi nahi rok sakta.

Meanwhile Riddhima and Armaan were lying in each others arms, after their shower together. Riddhima was lost in her thoughts. Armaan was busy making circles on her waist. He locked over at Riddhima and saw her lost in her own thoughts. He kissed her forehead to get back her attention.
A: kaha khoi hui ho?

Riddhima looked over at him and gave him a smile. Armaan could tell that it was a fake smile.
A: whats the matter Riddhima?
R: Armaan, me Sid ke bare me sooch rahi hu. Jaha tak me usko janti hu, wo itni asahni se give up nahi karega.
A: hmmm, jaha tak me Sid ko janta hu, wo kisi cheez ko pane ki liye kisi bhi had tak jaa sakta hai. Lekin is bar Sid badla hua lag raha tha. Wo khush hai hamare liye. I know ke wo abhi bohot hurt hai, Uska pyaar uske bare bhai ki biwi hai ab. To ofcourse usko bohot takleef hui hogi. Lekin ab to wo wapis Pakistan chala gaya hai na.
R: hmmm wo to theek hai, lekin pata nahi kyu, lekin mera Dil kehta hai, ke koi na koi baat zaroor hai. Mujhe bas ek ajeeb si feeling ho rahi hai.
A: Tum bina wajah ki tension leti ho Riddhima. Me janta hu Sid ko, wo kuch galat nahi karega. Mera Bhai hai wo.
R: hmm Shayad tum theek keh rahe ho.
A: I am always right wifey

He then moved over Riddhima. They both looked into each others eyes. Lost into each others eyes. Armaan was about to kiss her, when suddenly the door bell rang. Armaan cursed in frustration, and Riddhima giggled seeing his face.
A: damn it, bohot hasi aa rahi hai tumhe Mrs. Mallik.
R: Shut up Armaan, go and look ke koun aaya hai.
A: kya hai yaar, ek din bhi me apni biwi ke saath bed pe spent nahi kar sakta.
R: Armaan, bohot badmash ho rahe ho tum. Ab jao...

Armaan left from there, and Riddhima got ready, to welcome the "uninvited guest. Armaan reached down and opened the door, he was literally confused to see Sid standing in front of his door.
A: Sid? Tu yaha? Tu gaya nahi?
S: Kya bhai, ab me aapke pas reh bhi nahi sakta.
A: are pagal, wo baat nahi hai. You know, you are always welcomed here, mera jo kehne ka matlab tha, wo yeh, ke tu to abhi airport ke liye gaya tha na, wapis Pakistan jane ke liye? To phir achanak yaha pe wapis?
S: Bhaijaan, sab kuch yahi pe pucho ge kya? ander ane ko nahi kahoge?
A: come in, bro.

Armaan moved aside, to let Sid in. Sid got in and sat on the couch. In the meantime, Riddhima also got down, fully dressed. She was also confused to see Sid here.
R: Sid tum yaha?
S: hahahha, saach me Riddhima Bhabhi, aap dono ek dusre ke liye hi bane ho. Abhi Bhaijaan ne bhi mujhse yahi pucha tha.
R: ohhh...
A: to ab tu hame batayega, ya phir...
S: areee, batata hu na, thora to sabr kar lo. Me janta hu ke aap apni wife ke saath kuch quality time spend karna chahte ho...
A: Sid...
S: Acha sorry. Actually, me airport ke liye hi nikla tha. Aur waha pe pohnch hi gaya tha, tab mujhe ehsaas hua, ke mene bohot time se, apne Bhaijaan ke saath time spend nahi kiya. Aur ab to aapki Shaadi bhi ho gayi hai, to mene soocha, ke jab me yaha aa hi gaya hu, to aapke saath kuch time hi spend kar lu. Aur wese bhi, mujhme itni himmat nahi hai, ke me Mama Baba ka samna akele karu. Aap mere saath hoge, to hamesha ki tarha mujhe bacha lo ge.
A: lekin meri to abhi koi planning nahi hai Pakistan jane ki.
S: no problem bhaijaan, meri bhi koi planning nahi hai. Jab aap aur Bhabi jayenge, tab me bhi saath chalunga. Tab aap dono bhi Mama Baba ko bata diye ga, ke aap dono ne mujhe maaf kar diya hai.
A: that's a good idea, tum kya kehti ho Riddhima?
R: jee, its good.
S: aacha bohot baate ho gayi. Bhabi, mujhe bohot bhook lag rahi hai. Please kuch khane ko do na.
R: chalo, tum dono dinning area me jake baitho, me abhi kuch banati hu.
With that Armaan and Sid went to dinning area, while Riddhima went to the kitchen, to get make the food.

The time went very good, its been over one 2 weeks since Sid was living by them. Sid had a very good relationship with Armaan and Riddhima, but both of them were unaware of his true intentions.

Armaan and Riddhima were in their room. Armaan was getting ready for work and Riddhima was helping him. All the while, there was a pout on Armaans face.
R: stop pouting Armaan.
A: to aur me kya karu? Tum mujhe ditch kar rahi ho.
R: come on, sirf ek din ki baat hai. Actually, mene aaj ke liye kuch special plan kiya hai. A surprise for you. Isliye me nahi aa sakti. Lekin tum jaldi aana aaj, ek bohot important baat batani hai mene tumhe.
A: aisi kya baat hai Mrs. Mallik?
R: Wo to tabhi pata chalegi, jab tum ghar aaoge. Chalo jao ab.
A: Riddhima, batao na yaar. Me tumhare bina ek pura din office me kaise guzarunga?
R: dont worry Armaan, tum guzaar loge, i know that. chalo ab jao.
A: Riddhima...
R: armaan, go, now...

Riddhima looked at him with an angry face. Armaan instantly took his office bag and left from there, but he instantly came back. He gave Riddhima a kiss on her forehead and then left from there to work. Riddhima blushed.
R: pagal kahi ka. Pagal hai, lekin mera hai. My idiot, my love.

Sid had planned something very evil, and now it was finally time to take his plan in action. He was right now in his room and called the person to fulfill her duty now:
S: Hello, Shaina. Its time. Tum jaanti ho ke tumhe kya karna hai. Make sure that everything goes right.
Sh: Don't worry Sid. Me tumhara kaam pura karungi. Lekin uske balde me jo hum ne discuss kiya tha, mujhe wo milna chahiye.
S: I know, don't worry, ek baar yeh kaam ho jaye, phir tumhe yaha se koi nahi nikal sakta. I will make sure of it.
Sh: great, Mission destroy Armaan and Riddhima begins.

Armaan was in his office. Lost in his work. Lost in his thoughts of Riddhima. He cant believe how lucky he is, to have a girl like Riddhima in his life. She is everything he ever had imagined. He was missing her terribly. He was thinking, what could she probably have planned for him?

In the same moment, the door suddenly opened, and his biggest nightmare came in. Shaina came in. Armaan stood up in anger, which caused his chair to fall down on the floor.
A: WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING HERE?
Sh: Chill Armaan, bas tumhe kuch dena tha.
A: tumahri himmat kaise hui, mere samne bhi ane ki.
Sh: mujhe koi shok nahi hai, tumahri shakal dekhne ka. Bas yeh envelope tumhe dena tha, wo de rahi hu.
A: Me tumhe ek second ko bhi is room me tolerate nahi karunga. Ya to chup chap chali jao, nahi to mujhe security ko bulana padega. And how the hell did you even came in?
Sh: Shut up Armaan, yeh envelope lo, Tumhari so called wife ke kale kartut hai isme.
A: How dare you say anything about Riddhima.
Sh: mujhe kya keh rahe ho? Bohot jald puri duniya dekhegi. Nahi yakeen to khud dekh lo, ke tumhari biwi kaha jake apna muh kala kr rahi hai. Tumhare peeth peecha tumhare ghar me kya kya hota hai.

Shaina opened the envelope and throw the pictures at him. Armaan was literally shocked to see the pictures. His anger knew no boundaries. There was Riddhima, naked. In non other than Sid's arms. All of the pictures where of Sid and Riddhima, naked, in bed. in each others arms. Armaan took one picture in his hand.
A: yeh sab jhoot hai. I don't believe them.
Sh: really now Armaan. Tumhe saach me lagta hai ke koi ladki tumhare saath rehna bhi pasand karegi. Agar tumhe lagta hai ke yeh sab jhoot hai, to jao, ahi apne ghar jake dekho, ke tumhari biwi kya gul khila rahi hai.

Without hearing anymore Armaan left from there. But before leaving the building, he went to his receptionist and to his secretary. He fired both of them, for letting Shaina in his office. Shaina on the other hand, was smiling evilly. She took out her mobile and wrote a msg to Sid.
Sh: Armaan left from here. My part is done. Now its your turn.

Sid on the other hand was in the kitchen, helping Riddhima cooking. As he got the msg, he started with his plan.
S: wese Bhabi, yeh sab. Itna kuch. Koi special baat hai kya?
R: aisi hi kuch samjh lo.
S: mujhe batao na bhabi, please.
R: noope, chalo ab yeh dish jake wah pe rakh do.

Sid took the dish and placed it on the instructed place. then he came back to Riddhima. They both moved to the hall, and Riddhima started to decorate it with flowers and candles.
S: lagta hai ke aapne mujhe abhi tak maaf nahi kiya.
R: huhh...
S: apne mujeh maaf nahi kiya, warna aap apni Khushi ki baat apne dewaar se zaroor share karti.
R: Sid...
S: no its okee, I think I deserved that...
R: nahi Sid, aisi baat nahi hai. Aacha suno...
Sid smirked, knowing that his balckmail worked.
S: sunae...
R: lekin promise karo, ke Armaan ko kuch nahi batao ge, me usko khud yeh baat batana chahti hu.
S: kya baat hai bhabi?
R: actualy, tum Chacha ban ne wale ho.
S: huhh..
R: aree budhuu, Armaan aur me Mama Baba ban ne wale hai. Me pregnant hu.
S: woowww, really, congratulations bhabhi.

Sid moved forward and took Riddhima in a rib-crushing hug. Sid smiled evilly, his plan worked. Riddhima was hugging him back. He really hoped, that Armaan would enter in this exact moment, and that actually happened.

As soon as Armaan entered the house, he saw Riddhima in Sid's arms, again. All the pictures flashed in front of his eyes. He looked around the room. It was decorated with flowers and candles, and there was cooked food on the table. Armaan looked back at Riddhima and Sid. And that was it for him. He felt betrayed, once again. He could feel the anger rising up in him.
A: RIDDHIMA...

Riddhima god scared to heart that loud voice. She came out of the hug, and saw that Armaan was already here.
R: aree Armaan, tum itni jaldi aa gaye...
A: Sid leave, mujeh meri biwi se kuch baate karni hai.
S: theek hai bhaijaan, but please control your anger. Me apne room me hu.
A: nahi, I want you to get out of the house.

Armaan looked with an angry look at Sid, which made clear that no discussing will change anything. So Sid just left the house. After closing the door he smirked and send a msg to Shaina.
S: mission accomplished.

Riddhima was shocked to see Armaan this angry. His eyes were blood red.
R: Armaan...
A: SHUT UP, SHUT UP YOU BITCH.
R: What the hell, Armaan tum hoch me to ho.
A: hosh me to ab aaya hu. main janta tha, ke tum jaisi ladkiya aisi hi hoti hai. Idhar EX wapis aaya nahi, to you were ready to open your legs for him.
R: how dare you Armaan Mallik...
A: dare abhi mene ki hi kaha hai Riddhima.

Riddhima was about to slap him, but Armaan just grabbed her hand and pushed her backwards. Armaan looked around in the room.
A: to mere peeth peeche yeh sab kuch hota hai. Sharam aani chahiye tumhe Riddhima. Mana ke tum Sid se pyaar karti thi, lekin ab to wo tumhara dewaar hai.
R: tum kehna kya chahte ho, saaf saaf kaho Armaan.
A: me yeh kehna chahta hu, ke tum se zyada ghatiya aurat mene duniya me nahi dekhi. Are tum jaisi ladki ko to marr jana chahiye. Nikal jao mere ghar se.
R: Armaan...
A: Khabardar, jo tumne mera naam bhi apne gande muh se nikala to. Me Armaan Mallik apne pure hosh o hawas se, tumhe Riddhima Armaan Mallik ko TALAQ deta hu. Nikal jao mere ghar se Apna muh kahi aur jaake kala karna.

That was it for Riddhima. Everything she wanted to say to Armaan has been died down in her heart. He heart was broken in thousands pieces. As soon as he said the Talaq word, everything changed.
A: 10 mint ka time hai tumahre pas. Jaake apne kapre lo, aur dafa ho jao yaha se.

Without saying anything, Riddhima went to their room and closed the door. She sank on the floor and closed her eyes. letting her tears free.
R: me pregnant hu Armaan, tum baba ban ne wale ho...

Finally she let it out, what she wanted to say to him. But now she wont say it to him. She stood up and got a suitcase out. She packed her dresses, but only those, which were hers. She did not want to take anything from Armaan, nor form is money.

Then she wiped her tears and got out of the room. Armaan was still standing in hall. But Riddhima could see, that he has thrown things around, and the hall looked a mess. As Riddhima passed him she whispered.
R: meri galti kya thi Armaan?
A: tum jaisi s**t ko yeh puchne ka haq bhi nahi hai. Me to Shaina ko bura kehta hai, lekin tum to us se bhi zyada gayi guzri ho Riddhim. Get out of my room. Right now.

With that Riddhima left form there. She closed the door behind her. At the same time, Armaan sank on the floor giving up and letting his tears free.
A: I love you but at the same time I hate you Riddhima.

Riddhima was outside the house now, she looked once at it and the let the words out, which her heart was dying to tell.
R: I love you but at the same time I hate you Armaan

The destiny has planned something for them, but the question is what? Something good or bad? Will Armaan and Riddhima be again two bodies and one souls.

Both of them lived in separation. 2 Years passed in a blink of eye. Riddima moved to Sydney. She gave birth to a very handsome baby boy, whom she named Ahaan.

Armaan on the other hand, cut all the connections. With everyone. With his parents, with his so called brother. Both of them have changed, changed a lot. But one thing had not changed at all. Their Love and Hate for each other, which grew each and every passing second. Lets see what will happen now in their life.



So Here goes the Part...
We know u guys are ready to murder us or planning at least :P
But plz, not before we reveal who wrote it hehe...
Dono koh maarenge toh aage ke parts kaise milenge right...
Ek koh chod dena :P

Ok Jokes apart...
We hope u like it... or hate it hehe...
but still keep commenting and liking...
Take care...
Love u All...


With Love,
Rihoo & Amna...
Edited by RihooHaws - 7 years ago
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Sad update
Sis seperated them
Ridhima belive come true
Poor her Armaan didnt trust her
She left his house
2 years passed
Rishima give birth to armaan baby
But they love and hate each other
Thanks for PM
Update soon

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