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Posted: 7 years ago
May be when she starts getting a hang of this place and their routines, she will put her resume out. Chandan should be starting school as well. Vaidya is so right... concerned thinking she well could have been not married if he hadn't known facts.

Life and it's curveballs. Think of it this way . She was happy go lucky kind in Delhi with chandan and her bimonthly visits to roorkee. She missed a summon and Yeh saali zindagi ne utakhe patakdi with a dhop in a Bareilly haveli 😊 She has to rebuild now.

Like Himani says we hold on to Matlab it's all for the good' 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
Harit sensed his mother's despair but just squeezed her shoulder
He is not insensitive. But he chooses who to express his emotions. He needs to see her devotion to Chandan, then come to realization of why she didn't want to leave him at all and then make a u-turn about his impression of her.

When she lifted her head, he stood right there looking at her.
She placed a hand across her tee's opening.
"Yeh to so gaye she told him
"Thanks he nodded and turned and walked away.

It took hera few minutes to put Chandan to sleep. I'm pretty sure he has spent many sleepless night trying to kajol the kid with his mom. I'm pretty sure he looked at her in that amazement and then thanked her.
We are not yet at romantic phase but a small admiration.
Edited by jaschick - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Errantnomad

"Faith is the substance of things hoped for, the evidence of things not seen

A dear friend of mine often quotes this from the Bible . I kinda like this quote . Faith and Facts and the vaidya made me pronto connect to this. Lovely title that captured the mood of the update in a nutshell.

Chalo Harit was tuned to his mothers predicament and gave her a reassuring squeeze. Whether he came to her room to check on chandan or her or to occupy the room is anyone's guess. A penny for his thought???

She as well doesn't think twice about placing a support for chandan on the bed so that he doesn't fall. She thinks her husband wouldn't be interiested . And he ?... well...

This guy if he talks a lot must be talking in the court room. At home , it's evidence of things not seen
😆 . Or he's a changed guy now who can show that side of his only to people he's close to.


Wow nice quote on Faith, Kalpana. At this point , she is definitely not expecting him to sleep next to him. He was a little interested in her during engagement. He should be the one to logically make the next step. Let's see

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Posted: 7 years ago
instrumental music on his office speakers He opened the door and grabbed the kid Chandan whimpered and collapsed on Harit's arms... Harit kissed him holding him tight


This ❤️

Hadn't expected him to cajole the kid and the way he did made me fall for him.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Avantika was dispassionate at the end of it all.
She is not interested. She thinks he is not interested in her.
He is not interested in her and noticed the disinterest of her in him.

This cyclical tone should change and hopefully Harit can make the amends
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Posted: 7 years ago

Here but not..

Mooh dikhayi came and went, Harit was polite respectful, charming and engaging with all the ladies in the neighborhood. The women that did repeated nazar utaaros and smeared many kaala teekas on both.

Ofcourse many were curious as to why the Vaidyas suddenly had a grandkid and why the girl that was caring for that grandkid is now a DIL

People gossip everywhere, be it Boston or Berlin or Bareilly. The Vaidyas had nothing to hide so they were honest and upfront in explaining to people about why Chandan was so attached to her

Some spoke loud enough at the mooh dikhayi event to hurt Lakshmi. Tact and diplomacy are forgotten when you think you are smelling something foul. Even if it happens to be a basket of flowers covered in in a rank wet jute wrap.

They told Avantika about how the 4 boys played cricket in the compound and how Harit would always be tricked into going outside the gate to fetch the ball

She was told how noble and big hearted he is to be "wasting his phoren education on poor people

Suman and Alka praised her when their turn came telling everyone how she had passionately put herself towards the cause of raising the little boy. How she is actually as innocent as she looks "though she is very educated and worked in Delhi for years

"Wahan to sab chalta hai, humne suna hai, shaadi bhi nahi karte saath hee rehte hain a woman covered her mouth with her pallu as she giggled into it,

"Dilli mein ladkiyan nikkar mein ghoomti hain, hamare mausa ka ladka wahi computer ki naukri karey hai, uske ghar kea as pass ladkiyan nikkar mein ghoome hai

Avantika lowered her gaze self consciously. It could have been herself they were gabbing about.

The second night there was no doubt Chandan was going to sleep in her room

Everyone eyed each other, about the giant elephant in the room

The newlyweds were not intimate. The whole house new about it. But they couldn't do a thing.

He watched TV downstairs in the big waiting room like hall with the 62 inch TV, hung out with his brothers, took calls from Dhruv, Vibhu and Shyam, speaking nicely telling them all

Avantika is adjusting to life in Bareilly and he will absolutely visit Roorkee when things slow down at work with the Pandey case

His brothers exchanged a look when he hung up, wondering if they should kick him out someway to get him to go up.

But they decided otherwise.

The next morning the younger women lingered over their tea and kicked up a deliberate conversation about the Vaidya men

Lowering their tone to a whisper as Lakshmi passed by

"Babuji ne aaj taq nahi suna, inka tum Alka giggled

"Rishu ke mooh se galti se nikal chuka hai ek dor baar, Babuji naraaz hue Suman was blushing

"In logon ko hosh nahi hai the women agreed

Avantika was unperturbed.

Finally the women had to reach out and jolt her

"Aapko tum kahe kya Harit abhi taq? they giggled and shushed each other as Lakshmi walked by

"Umm.. nahi Teeku smiled calmly

"Abhi taq nahi? Alka was shocked at first but quickly composed herself "yahan to shaadi ki raat... yaane ke subah bidai ke baad "Alka yaar tum Alka giggled after speaking loudly

Avantika looked at the women surprised

They were obviously enjoying healthy intimate life. Her husband didn't even know she existed she thought

They shared that bathroom, but that's about it

This morning when she was giving Chandan a bath the left faucet was for hot water and right for cold, and a lever in the center switched sideways turned on the shower

She didn't know that until she was fully soaked

He had forgotten to set it at a 90 degree angle, it was at 45 and it started the cold water shower on her and Chandu

She had squealed running out of the bathroom towards her room, the bathroom having two doors, one going to his bedroom and the other to hers

He had appeared in her room

"I couldn't... I mean... paani shower se kaise nikal gaya? she questioned as she grabbed a towel

"Hum shaayad usko turn off karna bhool gaye. Garam paani barsa aap par? he had asked

"Nahi it was cold she told him, quickly wrapping her towel around her body

"Aap hamesha check kar lein, hum kabhi winters mein bhi thande paani mein naha lete hain he smiled cheerfully and walked away.

She was glad he did because she wasn't too thrilled about standing there with wet clothes arguing over why he was negligent

"Jab aapka soney ka mann ho na, don't use the headache option, kyon ki Ma ke paas koi desi dawa hai for headaches Alka cracked herself up and winked and laughed hysterically "Harit who la denge Ma se aur bus chhuthhi Alka snapped her fingers

"Inko abhi time lagega Suman. Yeh khud hi ab sar ke dard ka bahana nahi karengi, ek do saal to kam se kam Suman nodded knowingly

"Haan hum logon ko bas ab lagta hai SO JAAYEN. Bistar par sar padte hi hamey to neend aa jaati hai, yeh neeche TV dekhkar aate hain aur yaad se hamey utha dete hain she spoke in despair

The afternoon went in trying to help Chandan work out his tantrumy behavior. Garima and Gauri returned from school and he tore Garima's math notebook the page on which there was home work

The entire family realized Chandan was acting out. They were too afraid to be stern because they assumed Teeku would be hurt by it. Teeku was seeing a distinct change in him, he was actually beginning to enjoy the power he had over people when he threw tantrums

He was young but he was smart.

Visitors arrived daily, mornings went in pooja of some form, the bhabhis patiently helped her drape sarees.

She saw him little after the shower incident. Chandan had been particularly onnery that afternoon. She had called her mother and Meeta Bhabhi both could not speak much

She waited until 6... 7... 8... 9

No sign of Harit

The ladies rarely went down in the evenings

Sita Ram did not like it much

They went out to eat and shop etc, but never in the official quarters

At 9:17 Avantika got up from the alphabet mat and picked up her phone from the window

"Maasi don't gooo Chandan cried

"Hum ek second mein aate hain Chandu she sat down again

A little exasperation creeped into her voice as spoke to him the next 15 minutes

Gauri and Garima did their homework in a corner

Dinner was being prepared, the bhabhis had banned her entry into the kitchen until her "official cooking day

She got up again as she noticed Chandan was pushing his little Hot Wheels car towards Gauri and Garima and not paying attention to her

She went down the stairs.. and into the office quarters

The men sat there watching TV

Her eyes met Harit's

He was there... she finally got to see him after 3 days

He let his eyes rove over her, she was wearing a Jamdhani suit in onion color, her hair was tied in a French braid, her eyes big with surprise

his brothers were still watching TV turned to the side

He was home she told herself. Just not upstairs

She went up feeling something strange

She must have been on step 5 or 6

"Avantika? she heard his voice

"Umm she paused and turned trying not to be flustered

"Koi kaam tha? he asked

"Nahi... she shook her head mortified and continued to climb up

Edited by Nisha0604 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Ahhh ... Finally, she is missing him being around.
She atleast wants to see him.

Here but not ... sweet turn in the story is here but not !

Lovely Nisha !

He atleast connects that she came to see him for something! Hmmm ... the something is him !
Edited by jaschick - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
The bhabhis had gotten under her skin in a roundabout sort of way you know. The whole house knew there was nothing in that marriage but being the tactful lot they are, they are gently nudging her to think about intimacy
Plus Chandan is being supremely clingy and difficult. Its giving her a outlet to escape from that kid for a bit

With no job, her time is pretty much spent at home only
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Posted: 7 years ago
Pretty neat from the ladies!!ammo!!! It was like as if a grinding stone was moved!!
Pavam... so sweet of her... teeku makes the move... First time... from chandan to Harit.

He got her flustered...there's always a first 😳 . Now if he is sharp, he better go up!!!! Not bad, in that one min she was there, he did manage to give her a overhaul.
😳 .

Beautifully done Nisha. ... 6, 7, 8, 9 and 9:15 ... she has had enough. Wow ... !!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

The bhabhis had gotten under her skin in a roundabout sort of way you know. The whole house knew there was nothing in that marriage but being the tactful lot they are, they are gently nudging her to think about intimacy

Plus Chandan is being supremely clingy and difficult. Its giving her a outlet to escape from that kid for a bit

With no job, her time is pretty much spent at home only



The men sat watching tv and not being able to force their younger brother and look at these ladies... 😆

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