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Ayesha_Tabassum

@Ayesha_Tabassum

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Posted: 7 years ago

#71

Thanks to all of you

Part 17/2

After lunch

in virmaan room!

Viraat:(waiting for maanvi)

Maanvi:(comes in Punjabi getup)

Viraat:(tells) looking Achi hai.

Maanvi:(smiles)

Viraat:(ask) Kya naam hai tumhara?

Maanvi:(replies) Maanvi.

Viraat:(tells) step no.1 tum maan ho, mera dost, step no.2 tum girl nahin boy ho boy jaise talk karo.

Maanvi:(talk like a guy)hi mera naam maan hai,main Viraat ka dost hun.

Viraat:(praise her) very good.

Maanvi:(felt nice)

Viraat:(tells) let's go to step no.3

Maanvi:(ask) what is step no.3

Viraat:(replies) tumhe ladko jaise walk Karna hoga.:(walk and show to her) confidently.

Maanvi:(tries to walk like him but fails to walk)

So much time waste of them but Maanvi fail to learn.

Maanvi:(sat down start crying)

Viraat:(comfort her) Maanvi don't cry.

Maanvi:(replies) mujhe nahin hoga Viraat, jab BHI party hogi tum attend karoge.

Vraat:(tells) calm down first:(remove jacket from her top) thodi der garden Main rehte Hain.

Maanvi:(replies) tum hai mujhe nahin aana.

Viraat:(tells) never ever. Main tumhare bina kahin nahin jaunga.

Maanvi:(went)

Viraat:(follow her)

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In garden area!

Maanvi:(sitting)

Viraat:(join her) Maanvi.

Maanvi:(replies) mera decision change Karne ki try mat Karna?

Viraat:(tells) jo ladki apne ghar se yaHan tak asakti hai, snakes se apne love ko protect karsakti hai, woh aise defeat kyun manrahi haan?

Maanvi:(replies) I know Viraat, agar main sab bhulgayi toh.

Viraat:(tells) mujhe belief hai tum kuch nahin bhulogi.:(ask) let's practice about it?

Maanvi:(replies) ok.

Virat:(walk and show to her)

Maanvi:(getup and walk like him)

Viraat:(sat and say) practice karte raho.

Maanvi:(start practice)

Viraat:(admire her)

Maanvi:(enjoy and walk like men)

Viraat:(show double thumbs up)

Maanvi:(comes and hug him)

Viraat:(tells) step no.4

Maanvi:(ask) what's that.

Viraat:(replies) tumhe girls ko apna crazy Karna hai

Maanvi:(getshock)what?

Viraat:(replies) single ladke wahi toh karte Hain.

Maanvi:(understands) yes right.

Viraat:(explain her how to impress girls)

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In hall!

Virmaan spending time.

Viraat:(ask) dinner date Kaise rahega, princess toh kisse k paas pooja main Gaye Hain. Hum alone hai.

Maanvi:(replies) dinner date ka idea acha toh hai, tarace date main problem hui thi, so tumhe dinner date arrange Karna chahiye.

Viraat:(tells) mujhe Indian food nahin.

Maanvi: it's ok. Try and make

Viraat:(tells) main tired hun.

Maanvi:(replies) Abhi theek kardungI.:(went and bring broom)

Viraat:(getscare and stand on sofa)

Maanvi:(comes to him)

Virmaan play catch and hold with eachother and land on sofa.

Viraat was on sofa and Maanvi was over him

Virmaan sat being tired.

Maanvi:(rest on sofastand)

Viraat:(get romantic with her)

Maanvi:(getup and start going with nervousness)

Viraat:(hug her from behind)main jitna paas aata hun tum utna dur kyun jaati ho.

Maanvi:(repeats his worlds) I love to irritate you.

Viraat:(getseparate turn her back) don't copy me. It's Viraat Khurana words no one can use it.

Maanvi:(comes keep hers and his arms) I am Maanvi Viraat khurana. You and your words is mine

Viraat:(wrap hands around her waist) and you are mine.

Maanvi:(smiles)

They spend time.

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In evening at dinning!

Viraat sitting and waiting for Maanvi.

Viraat:sitting arrangement karta hun(set chair for maanvi)

Maanvi:(comes with dishes and serve for him and her and sat with him)

Viraat:(ask) same plate main dinner Karen?

Maanvi: sure.

Viraat:(open her hair) apne hair ko aise rehne Do, fan ki ya scent ki need nahin hogI.

Maanvi:(felt nice to hear her compliment)

Viraat:(ask) shall we eat

Maanvi:(replies)Yes.

Virmaan feed eachother.

Viraat:(tells) dinner is amazing.(tease her) Kahan se order Kiya?

Maanvi:(take revenge) main tumhare jaisi nahin hun. Soup ko order karke khudko credit dun.

Viraat:(tells) just kidding.

Maanvi:(replies) you are April fool.

Viraat:(tells) yahan jo name Dena hai Do, shadi k baad respect Karna. Otherwise get ready to face problem.

Maanvi:(replies) in your dreams.:(tells) me in romantic.

Viraat:(madeface) main unromantic nahin hun ok.

Maanvi:(challenge him) prove karo.

Viraat:(replies) Abhi k liye mujhe dinner Karne do, meri dear wife ne banaya hai, mujhe miss nahin Karna yeh tasty dinner

Maanvi:(replies) sure.

Viraat:(feed her)

Maanvi:(feed him)

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After dinner!

In virmaan room!

Viraat:(brings Maanvi and put her on the bed and cover with bedsheet)

Maanvi:(smiles)

Jab tak tuje pyar se tuje beimteha mein bhar na du play in back

Viraat:(pamper her with his love and romance)

Maanvi:(close her eyes)

Viraat:(ask) tired ho rest Karna hai?

Maanvi:(replies) no,

Viraat:(continue the romance with her)

Maanvi:(again close her eyes)

Viraat:(kiss her on close eyes)

Maanvi:(hug him with shyness)

Viraat:(hug her with smile)

Maanvi:(ask) Viraat, tumne decide Kiya party main Kya wear karo.

Viraat:(replies) woh tumhara work hai. Tum decide karo.

Maanvi: ok.:(ask) tum kya karoge?

Viraat:(replies) main tumse love karunga

Maanvi:(ask) always.

Viraat:(replies) kabhi war karunga kabhi pyar Karunga. Jo BHI karunga tumhare Sath karunga.

Maanvi: tumhara naam Viraat nahin wheel hona chahiye, jab dekho batein ghumate ho.

Viraat:(replies) it's my style, you have tolerate always. Exit door is close of my life.

Maanvi:(tells) why not.

They take rest.

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sandhYA_123

@sandhYA_123

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Posted: 7 years ago

#72

Superb update dear.

Loved it.

It was really mind-blowing and fantastic Update.

Loved each and every part.

Loved manvi came in Punjabi get up but unable to walk like a boy.

Loved how virat encouraged her and taught her tacts.

Loved virman dinner part and manvi preparing dinner for virat.

Loved last part at bedroom and their magical moments.

Now update soon dear.

Take care.

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Ayesha_Tabassum

@Ayesha_Tabassum

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Posted: 7 years ago

#73

Part 18/1

Thanks to all and sorry for late update.

In virmaan room!

After breakfast.

Maanvi:(get ready like she is going to party)

Viraat:(comes and ask) yeh Kya party evening main Hain aur tum Abhi se ready hogayi. Maan nahin banna tumhe?

Maanvi:(getup and lock the door comes close to him) main tumhare Sath waise romantic dance Karna chahti hun jaise hum night party main karte.

Viraat:(hold her by waist) tum chAHo toh romance BHI karsakte.

Maanvi:(change topic) Kaise lagri hun main bataoge nahin?

Viraat:(replies) koi palace ki queen lagrahi ho. Agar aise party main jaogi toh sab tumhe dekhte rehjayenge. Sab bachelors ki line lag jayegi. Meri jealousy anger ki limit nahin hogi.

Maanvi:(ask) Tumhe mujhpe trust nahin hai?

Viraat:(replies) hai.

Maanvi:(suggest him) jealousy aur anger ko break lagao, ek hi baat yaad Rakho, main tumhari hun hamesha tumhari hi rahungi.(with seriousness) jo BHI hamare bich ayega uski band play kardungi

Viraat:(replies) tumhe explain Karne ki need nahin hai, main bas bataraha tumhe dekhne baad Kya HosAKTA hai, aur Kya hoga.

Maanvi:(smiles)

Viraat:(suggest) maanvi, mujhe lagta HuMEin couple jaise jana chahiye

Maanvi:(tells) let me think.

Viraat:(replies) zyada mat socho, pehle se kam mind hai, hum future main Kya-kya Karna hai soch na hai.

Maanvi:(tells) Maine sab sochliya hai, hum shadi baad sari duniya ghumenge, 2 anniversary k baad hum couple se parent banenge

Viraat:(replies) 2 yrs nahin 5 yrs k baad, tabtak tum meri ho aur main tumhara hun..

Maanvi:(tells) it's more awesome idea.

Viraat:(replies) main hi awesome hun toh idea BHI awesome hoga.

They continue their couple dance and romance.

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In kitchen!

Virmaan comes and enjoy ice cream with eachother

Lit bit ice cream was near Maanvi lips.

Viraat notice it and lick it from her lips making her surprise.

Maanvi:(tells) romance k liye hamare room hai.

Viraat:(replies twirling her) romance k liye room ki nahin:(hug her from behind) Life partner important hai.

Maanvi:(smiles) Kahan se aate Hain hai bade bade dilogue.

Viraat:(replies) tumhare love se:(ask) aur kuch.

Maanvi:(replies) thodi si der main bahot kuch bola tumne, leave it.

Viraat:(tells)tumhari baat bahot baar karsakta HUN main.

Maanvi:(replies) you know what mere college main sab mujhe miss express bolte the woh main.

Viraat:(complete her sentence) bahot baat Karti ho isliye.:(ask) right.

Maanvi didn't react being tense of guys

Viraat:(ask) Kya Hua?

Maanvi:(replies) aj ki party ki tension haI, main Funny lagi toh

Viraat:(assures her) don't worry tum as Maanvi jaise Achi lagti hi toh as maan BHI acha Lagoge.

Maanvi (ask) tum mere Sath rahoge?

Viraat:(replies) now don't worry. Agar tum uncomfortable ho toh batado. Hum excuse banadenge.

Maanvi:(tells) I won't worry until you are with me.

Viraat: good chalo ice cream khao. Practice ka time hai

Maanvi: but dressing yeh hogi.

Viraat: ok. Let's eat it.

Maanvi: (smiles and eat with him).

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In garden!

Maanvi practice infront Viraat as maa n.

Viraat:(smiles)

Maanvi:(notice and ask) Kya Hua? Main funny lagri hun?

Viraat:(replies) not at all, improve hogayi ho. Tum jo BHI Karti ho perfect Karti ho.

Maanvi:(tells) thanks.

Viraat:(replies) no thanks only I love you.

Maanvi:(tells) mera mood nahin hai.

Viraat:(replies) hamesha morning to evening aise karke bore nahin hoti ho tum?

Maanvi:(tells) I love to irritate you.

Viraat:(challenge her) agar tumne I love you ka reply nahin Diya toh tumhe alone jaana hoga.

Maanvi:(talk in boy tone) main ladka hun Viraat tumhe reply Kaise desakta hun. Haan agar Viraatni hoti toh reply k sath shadi karta main. Tumhe nahin aana toh theek hai, main Viraatni ko convince karta hun:(get up and start going)

Viraat:(stop her) oh hello, age dekho phir bolo.

Maanvi:(pull his leg) tum Kahan koi college boy ho, Mr. 40.

Viraat:(replies) main 40yrs ka nahin 29yrs ka hun.

Maanvi:(tells) Maine Dekha tha. Tumhare head main white hair shine karte.

Viraat:(getshock and start leaving to check it)

Maanvi:(hug him from behind and laugh) don't worry you are not less then hero.

Viraat:(hold her hands which was wrap around him) and you are not less then heroine.:(turn around)

Maanvi:(ask) Kya gift leke jayen.

Viraat: oh no Maine yeh socha nahin.

Maanvi:(replies) let's go to shop and get something.

Viraat: awesome idea.

They went to take Dadi permision.

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In gift shop!

Virmaan look for something to gift

There was so many thing which can gift on functions.

Viraat:(ask) Maanvi tumhe Kya acha laga gift Karne k liye.

Maanvi:(look around and found couple photoframe point toward from) woh Dikhao.

Shopkeeper take and show it.

Viraat:(tells) it's amazing, boss and unki wife ko acha lagega.:(to shopkeeper) yeh wrap kardijiye.

Balloon burst making Virmaan shock

Shopkeeper:(tells) aap hamare 1000th costumer isliye aapko 50% discount milega har shopping par. Sath main free gift BHI milega.

Virmaan:(replies) wow thanks.:

Viraat:(ask) what say maanvi? Shopping karen

Maanvi:(replies) sure.

Viraat doing same as Maanvi once imagine.

Maanvi:(smiles by remembering it)

Viraat:(ask) kis baat par smile karahi ho?

Maanvi:(tells) pehle promise karo tum mujhpe nahin laugh nahin karoge

Viraat:(replies) don't worry main laugh nahin karunga.

Maanvi:(tells) ek baar main Dadi k sath ayi thi shopping par tab Maine imagine Kiya tum mujhe aise hi decorate karre ho. Lovingly

Viraat:(romantically touch her face) I promise tum jo BHI imagine karogi main woh sach karunga.

Maanvi:(hug him) I love you.

Viraat:(hug her back) I love you 2.

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On the way

Virmaan going by cab

Viraat:(ask) Maanvi, hum outdoor lunch Karen?

Maanvi:(replies) haan but mujhe chef Viraat k dishes try Karna acha lagta hai.

Viraat:(ask) itne time main humdono lunch or dinner date par nahin gaye.

Maanvi:(replies) hum unique couple hai, choice BHI unique hogi.

Viraat:(side hug her) ok.

Maanvi:(replies) good otherwise main by walk chalejati.

Viraat:(joke with her) I think humdono ko rope tie karke aana chahiye. Next time.

Maanvi:(get in action and tells) soch Na BHI mat Aisi band bataungi k tum kabhi nahin bhuloge.

Viraat:(change topic)chodo na, fresh ko enjoy karo. Bahot romantic wheather hai.

Maanvi:(replies) right.

Viraat:(ask) Kya Kya imagine Kiya hai tumne?

Maanvi:(make excuse) tumne mujhe dinosoar gift kya, aur hum daily uspar job k liye jaate Hain.

Viraat:(ask) baby dinosaur pe?

Maanvi:(replies) huge dinosaur pe. Mujhe real main dinosaur par travel Karna hai

Viraat:(getscare) we can ride on elephant or camel and horse to.

Maanvi:(replies) woh common hogaya hai, dinosoar new hoga.

Viraat:(informs) my dear wife, dinosaur excist nahin karte aap. Museum main unke statues hote Hain.

Maanvi: acha.

Viraat:(ask) tumne kabhi helicopter main visit Kiya hai ?

Maanvi:(replies) no.

Viraat:(tells) main one day tumhe lejaunga ok.

Maanvi:(replies) ok

They went.

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sandhYA_123

@sandhYA_123

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#74

Awesome update dear.

Loved it.

It was really superb and mind-blowing update.

Loved each and every part.

Loved virman spending time together. Loved their romantic dance.

Loved manvi acting as maan in front of virat.

Loved both enjoying ice-cream.

Loved virman shopping part and they r choosen as lucky couple and got the chance to get 50 % less in shopping.

Loved manvi told her imaginary part to virat and virat told he will do everything which she imagined.

Now waiting for party as manvi will become maan.

Update soon dear.

Take care.

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Ayesha_Tabassum

@Ayesha_Tabassum

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#75

Thanks to each and every user

Part 18/2

In dadi house!

In virmaan room! After lunch!

Viraat:(ask) eyes open karun.

Maanvi :(place frame on side table) yes sure Mr stubborn

Viraat:(open his eyes and saw photoframe in which Virmaan respective parents pics was fix) wow kya idea hai. Dono parents ek Sath hai

Maanvi:(tells) thanks.

Viraat:(replies) thanks tumhe nahin mujhe kehna chahiye Viraat style main.

Maanvi:(ask)viraat style main thanks Kaise hota hai.

Viraat:(pin her to sidewall and start showering love on her)

Maanvi:(close her eye to enjoy getting his love)

Viraat:(watch her tells) yeh Kya, ab toh Viraat spl dekhna chahti thi aur ab eyes close Karli.

Maanvi:(replies) it's my style.

Viraat:(romance with her)

Maanvi:(tells) ek baat batana toh main bhulgayi.

Viraat:(ask) kaisi baat.

Maanvi:(replies) I love you.

Viraat:(tease her) ok.

Maanvi:(ask) what ok, reply karo.

Viraat:(replies) tumhe mujhe irritate Karne main acha lagta hai, mujhe BHI tumhe irritate Karne main acha lagta hai.

Maanvi:(tells) you know what tumharI band bajana bhi acha lagta hai.:(take pillow and start attacking him)

Viraat:(while saving himself) kaisi wife mili Mujhe, SaBki wifes takecare Karti aur ek tum ho jo meri band bajarahi ho.:(went)

Maanvi:(follow him)

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In garden area!

Virmaan while running and following fall on grass and laugh.

Viraat:(tells) maanvi jab main chota tha, koi film se yeh word I fall in love sunna tha, jab BHI main gira toh main mom ko yeh hi batata tha, I fall in love.

Maanvi:(replies)that so sweet.

Viraat:(ask) party main really Chalen?

Maanvi:(replies) yeh Kaise question hai?

Viraat:(tells) main tumhe dekhe bina nahin rehsakta.

Maanvi:(replies) hum toh Sath hai na party main.

Viraat:(replies) haan but viraat and maan jarahehain, Viraat and Maanvi nahin.(give her idea) tumne apne Sath ek party wear Rakhlo, sab under control raha toh change karke ajao.

Maanvi:(replies) good idea.

Viraat:(ask) mera gift do phir

Maanvi:(replies) hamare room main Haina.

Viraat:(point toward her lips)

Maanvi:(slap his hand slowly) aj KAL bahot romance mode on hai tumhara.

Viraat:(hold her by waist) hum romance nahin karenge toh Kya bhoot romance karenge

Maanvi:(ask)Kis century k ho tum.

Viraat:(reply) tumhari century ka.

Maanvi:(ask) old century k person jaise kyun baat kar re ho.

Viraat:(replies) check kar ra tha tum kitne brave ho

Maanvi:(tells) jo brave nahin hote woh kisi ki bravery check nahin karte.

Viraat:(replies) main brave hun.

Maanvi:(tells) brave and caring. Let's go. Packing Karna hai aur phir party k liye Jana hai.:(went)

Viraat:(replies) haan Maanvi main brave hun, but tumhe khone se darta hun.

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In evening at boss house! Party

Boss and his wife was busy chatting with others.

Viraat:(comes and wish him) congrats boss.

Boss:(replies) thanks Viraat, Maanvi Kahan hai.

Viraat:(replies) usko kuch work tha, but mere Sath mera buddy aya hai.

Both turn around and see

Maanvi:(enters in men avatar) congrats.

Every single girl eyes were on him

Boss:(replies) thanks mr.

Maanvi:(replies) maan Singh, but aap mujhe maan kehsakte ho.

Boss:(replies) nice to meet you, guys you have fun I will come.:(left)

Viraat:(look around found girls attention on maanvi)sab ladkiyan tumhare crazy lagre hain.

Maanvi:(follow his gaze and smiles.

Two girls:(ask) shall we dance.

Virmaan:(agrees and dance with them and looking eachother)

Maanvi:(was feeling jealous by looking Viraat with others)

Viraat:(inmind) look like some1 is jealous.

Girl:(ask to maanvi) tum karte Kya ho.

Maanvi:(to make Viraat hear said) Maine college complete Kiya, guitar play karta hun, badmashon ka band BHI play karta hun

Viraat:(inmind) jeaLous ho aur Maanvi banke entry lo.:(make her more jealous)

Maanvi:(inmind) tumhe toh main chodungi nahin.:(replies) excuse me.

Girl:(agrees)

Maanvi:(went)

Viraat realise later and went to search her.

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In hotel room!

Viraat:(comes and search maanvi)

Maanvi:(start playing his band) how dare you dance with her.

Viraat:(replies) party hai toh dance Karna padega.

Maanvi:(get angry)theek hai, laughing talking ki Kya need thi.

Viraat:(ask) jealousy hui tumhe?

Maanvi:(irritately) tumhe Kya jao aur dance karo.

Viraat:(went to close door)

Maanvi:(inmind) kaisa ladka hai bina manaye chalegaya.

Viraat:(hug her from behind) main apni Maanvi ko miss Karraha tha toh socha usko jealous karke apne paas bulata hun. But meri copy cat ne mujhe apne paas bulaliya.;(remove her cap free her hair)

Maanvi:(ask getting separate) yeh Kya Kiya?

Viraat:(replies)is room main humdono hai aur koi nahin. So let it be.:(ask) shall we dance.

Maanvi:(give her hand)

Viraat:(pull her closer and dance with her) ab zyada maaza araha hai apni Life partner k Sath dance karke.:(ask) what say?

Maanvi:(replies) agree

Viraat:(start romancing)

Maanvi:(tells) koi ajayega.

Viraat:(replies) sab party enjoy kar re Hain aur door lock hai. Hum aur hamara pyar free hai

Maanvi:(ask) agarkoi agaya toh?

Viraat:(replies) aane do batadunga I love Maanvi.

Maanvi:(reply back) I love you 2.;(turn and hug him) Viraat don't make me jealous otherwise kisi la the end hoga. Mera ya kissi aur ka

Viraat:(replies) don't say like that, tum nahin toh main BHI nahin.

Both smiles.

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Back to party.

Virmaan return as Viraat and maan dance with others.

A small girl from first floor comes and walk toward boss with greeting.

Boss sat with her and take card and kiss her.

Everyone claps.

Virmaan:(say her) hello.

Boss make Girl wave hand as hello instead saying.

Virmaan get confuse boss send her toward balloon area.

Boss:(tells) accident Hua. Tab se shock main chup hai khushi

Maanvi:(ask) shall we try to make her talk.

Boss: yes

Viraat:(replies) no main try karunga.

Both debate with eachother

Everyone stare them.

4hrs laters

KhushI :(comes finally tells) kya uncles itne bade hoke bhi fight karte ho:(laugh)

Boss and his wife get emotional with happiness.

Virmaan sing and dance with her

After sometimes others left.

Only boss and his wife and Virmaan was there.

Boss:(tells) thankyou guys, hum tumlog ka favour kabhi nahin bhulenge..

Viraat:(replies) no need. We would like to go back.

Boss: sure.

Virmaan went from there.

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Back to Dadi house!

In virmaan room!

Virmaan resting being tired.

Viraat:(tells) aj toh maaza hi agaya, boss ki party BHI Achi hui aur hamari secret date BHI.

Maanvi:(replies) you are right. Acha Hua k sab theek hai, hamare Sath BHI aur boss ki family k sath BHI.

Viraat:(tells) haan.:(ask) by the way Maine notice Kiya tum Ladkon se serious behave Karri thi.

Maanvi:(get close of him) Viraat, SaBki baat bahot hogayi, leave it apni baat karte Hain, and yes next time becareful. Agar koi ladki k Sath dikhe toh mujhse bura koi nahin hoga.

Viraat:(remind) tumne bola tha apni baat karenge aur tum hi yahan wahan ki baat Karri ho.

Maanvi:(replies) I am just warning you.

Viraat:(assure her) don't worry, main tumhare Siva kissi ko nahin dekhunga.

Maanvi:(felt nice) ok.

Viraat:(praise her)maan k getup main bahot cute lagri thi tum.

Maanvi:(replies)tumne pehle BHI praise Kiya mujhe.

Viraat:(tells) acha, pata nahin kyun main tumhe dekhke sab bhuljata hun.:(get closer)

Maanvi:(replies) you are so filmy.

Viraat:(tells) it's called romantic talk

Maanvi:(getup and got neck sprain)ouch.

Viraat:(getup and ask) Kya Hua?

Maanvi:(tells) neck sprain hai.

Viraat:(ask) main press Karun neck?

Maanvi:(in joke replies) bade ajib ho jab stranger the tab care karte the aur ab love karke kill kar re ho?

Viraat:(smiles) shutup:(massage her with love)

Afterwards both sleeps.

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sandhYA_123

@sandhYA_123

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#76

Lovely update dear.

Loved it.

It was really mind-blowing and fantastic update.

Loved each and every part.

Loved virman romance so much in first part. Virat is not leaving a single chance to romance with manvi.

Loved virman talk at garden and virat telling her about her childhood memory fall in love. It was so sweet.

Loved virman went for party and manvi very well acted as maan.

Loved manvi jealous part and virman romance at room.

Loved how virman made that Girl to speak something and boss admire them.

Loved end part of virman in dadi house really they r adorable couple and their love for each other is awsm.

Now update soon dear.

Take care

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Ayesha_Tabassum

@Ayesha_Tabassum

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#77

Thanks to all.

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Part 19/1

At office!

Virmaan desk!

Virmaan working.

One of the employee comes talk about party and how Viraat tries win boss by his selfish motives

Viraat:(felt angry) mind your on business.

Maanvi:(handles Viraat and told that employ to leave)

Employ went

Viraat:(felt angry) how can he say like that.

Maanvi:(trIes to explain hin) let it be Viraat, tum is mindless ko copy mat karo, tumhare paas usse BHI acha work hai, focus work par karo

Viraat:(replies) he start first.

Maanvi:(suddenly laugh)

Viraat:(ask) Kya Hua?

Maanvi:(replies) KAL ki party main Khushi ne tumhe uncle bola. Bahot suit horaha tha.

Viraat:(reminds) humdono ko uncles bola.

Maanvi:(tells)uncle k Sath ghumungi toh uncle hi bolenge.

Viraat:(ask) you mean main uncle hun.

Maanvi:(replies) gussa toh waisa hai.

Viraat:(tells) I am not stubborn like you.

Maanvi:(replies) ghar chalo, Aisa band bataungi mujhe stupid title dene se pehle sochoge tum.

Viraat:(act to scare) nahin plz, Abhi mere dreams fulfill Karna hai, professional aur personal dreams.

Maanvi:(replies) don't worry mujhe BHI jail nahin jaana tumhe maarke.

Viraat:(act relief) good for us. Let's work now.

Maanvi:(replies) right:(inmind) great, Viraat angry nahin hai.

Viraat:(inmind) agar Maanvi nahin hoti toh pata nahin mera Kya hota.

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In canteen!

Virmaan spending time.

Waiter bring cake and letter and went gift by boss

Viraat:(read whole letter give to maanvi)

Maanvi:(also read whole letter) how nice of him.

Viraat:(offer knife)

Maanvi:(cut cake with viraat)

Virmaan feed eachother

Maanvi: it's tasty.

Viraat:(replies) yeh magic apne love ka hai.

Maanvi:(tells) I think you are right today.

Viraat:(replies) main hamesha right hota hun.:(apply cake cream to her)

Maanvi:(madeface touching cream side) yeh kya hai?

Viraat:(replies) it's our wedding second cermony, ab humlog jab chahe direct shadi karEnge.

Maanvi:(tells) aise nahin hota, pehle engagement hota hai phir pre-wedding functions then shadi.

Viraat:(replies) jitne functions utne distance, Aisa BHI kabhi hota hai Kya? Do love karnewale ko bina mile Rehna pade.

Maanvi:(tells) importance grow hoti hai.

Viraat:(replies) humdono k liye importancy haina apne paas.

Maanvi:(tells) but thoda aur rehna chahiye.

Viraat:(ask) yeh Kaise hoga?

Maanvi:(replies) jab marriege functions hoge toh pata chalega. Abhi k liye:(feed cake) yeh eat karo.

Viraat:(feed her)ok.

Maanvi:(tells) chalo work karte Hain.

Viraat:(replies) ok but pehle boss ko thanks bolenge.

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Back to desk!

Virmaan returning after telling thanks to boss and sat.

Maanvi slip while walking.

Viraat:(protect her) kitna slip hogi slipping queen.

Maanvi:(replies innocently) slipping king ki slipping queen hun toh girungi ki na.

Viraat:(tells) main childhood main girta tha, grow hoke nahin gira.

Manvi:(get straight ask) you didn't fall in love with me?

Viraat:(replies) yes I fall in love.:(make her sat)

Maanvi:(smiles) thankyou so much Viraat.

Viraat:(comes near her and tells)thankyou se better word hai world main, I love u.

Maanvi:(wantedly) I love you 2.:(start working)

Viraat:(act to press her neck )

Maanvi:(turn and see him) plan Kya tumhara?

Viraat:(join her)mera plan hai, tumse shadi Karne ka uske baad a2z work karaunga.

Maanvi:(with smile) acha Kiya plan batake, agar shadi k baad a2z work main tumse na karaun toh mera naam Maanvi nahin.

Viraat:(tells) stop day dreaming ok.

Maanvi:(replies) iska trailer aj ghar jaake dekho.

Viraat:(ask) are you serious.

Maanvi:(replies) yes in this matter.

Viraat:(get dramatic) as you wish, only work no shopping in your favourite mall.

Maanvi:(tells) yeh wrong hai.

Viraat:(replies) wife age increaser hoti hai, uski baat ignore nahin Karna chahiye. So shopping cancel.

Maanvi:(tells) boring husband.

Viraat:(keep hand behind her on chairstand) jo bhi hun tumhara hun, hamesha k liye..

Maanvi:(show tongue)

Viraat:(replies) I will not spare you for this

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In rest room!

Maanvi:(wash her face and hands and apply some makeup)

Someone lock door.

Maanvi:(ask) who is this.

No response.

Maanvi:(to herself) lagta hai kissi ko call aya hoga:(walk near door and open it but failed).

3hrs passed

Maanvi:(get confuse) yeh door kyun open :(tries once again)

But door didn't open.

Maanvi:(take mobile to call Viraat but network was not available) oh no yeh mobile main network BHI nahin hai.:(get worried) Kya Karun Jaane ka time hai:(knock door shouts) koi door open karo

Someone open door for her.

Maanvi:(get relief but her expressions change by looking evil employ).

Evil employ:(ask) are you ok.

Maanvi:(replies) yes:(take purse and start going)

Evil employ:(instigate her) mujhe nahin pata tha Viraat Aisa kuch karega tumhe hone se bura maarke.

Maanvi:(getshock) how do u know all this?

Evil employ:(get stuck) woh actually.

Maanvi:(warn him) first of all don't try to become hero, second thing, couples k talks main interfere mat karo., jisne BHI yeh Kiya hai, uske liye pray karo, Maine band bajaiye toh, hero banne se darega:

Evil employ get scare.

Maanvi:(went after scaring him)

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Back to Virmaan cabin.

Viraat:(working and waiting for maanvi)

Maanvi:(join him)

Viraat:(ask) Kahan thi tum.

Maanvi:(replies normally) fresh hone gayi thi,

Viraat:(ask) any problem., tense lagri ho?

Maanvi:(reveals) main lock hogayi thi.

Viraat:(getworried)pehle kyun nahin bataya.

Maanvi:(felt nice and lies) Viraat I was joking,

Viraat:(warn her) Maanvi tumhe jo Karna hai karo, but plz Aisa mazak mat karo, I can't listen this things about you. I can't see u hurt.

Maanvi:(replies) calm down my dear husband. Tumhe toh pata hai, tumhari wife ko koi BHI problem se pRoblem nahin hoti.

Viraat:(tells) mujhe tumhari problem se pRoblem hai, tumhari happiness se happiness hai.

Maanvi:(get overwhelmed by his love and smiles)

Viraat:(ask) lunch par Chalen? Humdono.

Maanvi:(replies) ok.

Virmaan start working.

Maanvi:(inmind) chahe jo hojaye, hamare relation aur tumhare career ko suffer nahin hone dungi.

Viraat:(ask) Kya sochrahi ho?

Maanvi:(replies) suddenly yeh idea Kaise aya?

Viraat:(tells) bas agaya, lunch date ka return gift dene ready raho.

Maanvi:(ask) what return gift.?

Viraat:(replies) lots of love of my love.

Maanvi:(smiles)

They continues working

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sandhYA_123

@sandhYA_123

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#78

Lovely update dear.

Loved it.

It was really mind-blowing and fantastic update.

Loved each and every part.

Loved virat part at office and manvi intelligence to save the situation.

Loved boss send cake for them at canteen and virman feeding to each other.

Loved virmans cute nok jhok in which also love and care for each other shows.

Omg someone locked manvi but loved how manvi answered to evil man and made him scare.

Last part was awesome too virat planning for lunch and his care for manvi when he comes to know she got locked.

Now update soon dear.

Take care.

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Ayesha_Tabassum

@Ayesha_Tabassum

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#79

Part 19/2

In lunch at restaurant!

Virmaan having lunch!

Maanvi:(tells) kitna tasty hai na?

Viraat:(replies) yes nice, but it's nothing better then your cooked dishes.

Maanvi:(tells) thanks.

Viraat:(replies) just kidding.

Maanvi:(felt angry And tells) be happy k hum resturant main otherwise, tumhari band bajadeti.

Viraat:(ask) mera band kyun Bajaogi, guitar bajao, date par maaza ata hai. (With style)Kya combination Haina. Date and music ka.

Maanvi:(replies irritately) just like you and your stupids jokes.

Viraat:(ask) kya baat hai aj irritate kyun ho?

Maanvi:(makes excuse) simply.

Viraat:(hold her hand) Maanvi, hamara first relation friendship ka hai, isliye humdono matters share karsakte Hain.

Maanvi:(replies) I know Viraat, let's forget everything and enjoy date

Viraat: ok.

Maanvi:(inmind) stupid maanvI, stop behaving as dailysoap heroine.

Viraat:(ask) Kya soChri ho.

Maanvi:(tells) yeh hi tum kitne smart ho, main tumhe house hold work na karaun isliye lunch date plan kardi.

Viraat:(replies) start hogaya tumhara tipicle wife doubting drama.

Maanvi:(tells) I am not doubting you.

Viraat:(replies) prove karo.

Maanvi:(ask) how.

Viraat:(replies) sabke samne mujhse I love you. If u r scare then it's ok.

Maanvi:(just then stand on chair shouts) I love you Viraat.

Viraat:(to stand on chair shouts) I love you 2 maanvi

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In dadI house!

In garden!

Virmaan sitting with eachother.

Maanvi:(tells) viraat mujhe lagta hai k mujhe job stop Karna chahiye. Ab tumhe office ki office ki habit hai.

Viraat:(replies) Maanvi hum log Abhi Abhi nahin mile, so mere Sath tricks mat use karo.

Maanvi:(ask)main kyun trick karungi? Main chahti hun tum work par focus karo, main household par focus karun. Kya tum nahin chahte main hamari family ko help Karun.

Viraat:(get angry and start going) go and get treatment for madness

Maanvi:(getup and stop him) Viraat try to understand.

Viraat:(free her) mujhe kuch nahin samajhna hai

Dadi:(comes) Kya hua?

Viraat: main batata hun princess:(tells her what ever Maanvi was saying)

Maanvi:(ask) aap hi batao ANgel main wrong hun?

Viraat:(replies) tum nahin main right hun.

Both debates

Dadi:(thinks to explain later and went)

Maanvi:(ask) Dadi Kahan gaye.

Viraat:(replies) tumhe kuch kehna waste hai, isliye jaana better laga princess ko.

Maanvi:(tells) mujhe blame mat karo, tumse irritate hoke Gaye Dadi.

Viraat:(replies) mujhse nahin tumse.

Maanvi:(tells) mujhse nahin tumse.

Viraat:(replies) stop copying me

Maanvi:(replies) it's fact.

Viraat:(igore her and went).

Maanvi:(to herself) mujhe ignore karke gaya, how dare he?

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In virmaan room!

Viraat was playing online game on phone

Maanvi:(comes and take phone) how dare you ignore me and come here.

Viraat:(replies) mera phone return karo.

Maanvi:(was full in fighting mood) pehle yeh batao tumhari himat Kaise hui mujhe chodke yahan aane ki.

Viraat:(replies) tum jaisi wife k Sath Aise hona chahiye.

Maanvi:(join him) bina baat k fighting mat karo ok.

Viraat:(replies) kyun tumhi bina baat k decisions lesakti ho?

Maanvi:(inmind) main bina baat k desicion nahin leri, idiot ko Kaise bataun

Viraat:(take phone from her)

Maanvi:(take phone back) Abhi hamari baat khatam nahin hun ok.

Viraat:(stop in between) main faltu logon se baat nahin karta.

Maanvi:(ask) what? Main aur faltu.

Viraat:(tells on her face) haan faltu ho tum

Maanvi start beating Viraat

Both fall on bed.

Romantic song play in background and Virmaan had eye lock.

Virmaan get lost in eachother.

Viraat:(shower love on her tells) plz don't quit job. I can't leave without u

Maanvi:(getup and get angry) day1 se apni baat manwate aye ho tum. Kabhi meri baat nahin maante aise reLation ka kya matlab hai, jahan ek hi person Maanta hai, uska partner nahin.

Viraat:(get angry with her) you are right, aj k baad hamara koi relation nahin. Jo chahe karo

Maanvi:(get sad)

Viraat went from there.

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In evening!

In kitchen!

Virmaan comes to cook.

Maanvi:(ask) do u want anything.

Viraat:(normally) I will manage, you manage your work.

Maanvi:(tells) tum boldo main ready kardungi.

Viraat:(replies) no thanks, I can manage alone.

Maanvi:(tells) I m sorry.

Viraat:(ignores her continue)

Maanvi:(ask) baat nahin karoge?

Viraat:(replies) main stranger se baat nahin karta.

Maanvi:(in challenging way) dekhte Hain tumhare liye important Kya hai, meri baat ya meri life. Main wait karungi tarace par, don't be late otherwise get ready face whatever happen with me.

Viraat:(get worried by her last line)

Maanvi:(inmind) sorry viraat surprise se pehle shock Karna hoga.

Viraat:(inmind) hamesha jokes Karti hai, idiot, simple baat Manne main atitude dikhati.

Maanvi:(ask) ab Kya soChre ho?

Viraat:(replies) tumhe asylum bheJne ki

Maanvi:(tells) in your dreams. Bcoz hum hamesha k liye couple hai, inseparable hai.

Viraat:(replies) hum separated hai ok. Let me work now.

Maanvi:(tells) tumhara yeh dream fulfill nahin hoga.

Viraat:(ask) hogayi bakwas to jao yahan se.

Maanvi:(replies) ok but tarace par aana mat bhulna. Otherwise regret karoge.

Viraat: go.

Maanvi:(went)

Viraat:(to himself) bakwas Karne main no.1 hai.

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In evening after dinner at tarace!

Viraat:(comes late and search Maanvi here and there) I hope Maanvi kuch wrong na karde. But Maanvi Hain kahan. Yeh arrangements kyun hue

Maanvi:(tells from somewhere) agaye tum?

Viraat:(ask) tum ho Kahan bahar aao..

Maanvi:(comes and sing and dance around him)

Viraat:(watching her)

Maanvi while dancing slip.

Viraat:(save her makes her stand) stop it now.

Maanvi:(tells) it's ok bolo.

Viraat;(replies) mere Sath work Karne k liye ready hojao. Baki sab apne aap theek hojayega.

Maanvi:(normally)ok f9 I will not discontinue job.

Viraat:(get happy and hug her).

Maanvi:(hug him back then get separate) chalo return.

Viraat:(wrap his hand around her neck) meri wife ne tarace date arrange ki hai, date enjoy kare bina Kaise jasakte. :(pull her closer)

Manvi:(getspeechless by his act)

Viraat dance with her and then romance with her.

Maanvi:(get lost in his love)

Viraat:(whisper) I love you.

Maanvi:(replies) I love you 2.

Viraat:(pick her and make rest on floor and join her and get romantic)

Maanvi:(felt shy)

Both romance whole night.

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sandhYA_123

@sandhYA_123

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#80

Awesome update dear.

Loved it.

It was really superb and mind-blowing update.

Loved each and every part.

Virmans r so cute both r not leaving any chance to leg pulling. Loved their lunch part.

Manvi told virat that she want to discontinue her job but virat got angry.

Loved their cold war at kitchen.

Loved manvi arrangements at terrace and virman magical and romantic moments.

Now update soon dear.

Take care.

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