VirMaan:ff: kabhi war...kabhi pyaar! Part 63/1

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Part 1
At delhi rail way station
Inside train girl was enjoying view of outside.
Just then a boy arrive start arraging luggauge
Girl:(get disturb and ask getting up) kis idiot ki himat hui maanvi patel ko disturb Karne ki?
Boy:(while working)tum toh aise intro karri ho jaise mahalon ki rani ho. BTW I am not idiot. I am viraat khurana.::(turn toward her)
Girl look him
Yes it was our virman who met first time.
Viraat:(inmind) dikhne main beautiful hai. But hai miss fighter.
Maanvi:(inmind)dekhne main handsome hai. But hai Mr disturbince.:(comes in reality) hey you Aisa Kya dekhre ho? Pehle beautiful ladki nahin dekhi hai Kya?
Viraat:(tells) dekhi Haina tumse zyada beautiful aur better hai woh ladkiyan.
Maanvi:(laugh and tells) jhoot Bolne main top Kiya hoga. Bandar
Viraat:(tells) Bandar hoga Tera husband
Maanvi: bandariya hogi teri wife.
Viraat:(observe around) tum ghar se bhag ayi ho.
Maanvi: main tumhari tarah nahin hun.
Viraat: main nahin bhaga
Train's starts.
Maanvi lose her balance
Virat:(save her)
Virman share eyebook.
Kabhi war...kabhi pyar ... play in background
Maanvi come in reality
Viraat:(tells) thankyou. Bolsakti ho
Maanvi:(sat and show atitude) in your dreams.
Viraat:(make face.inmind) Kya thankless ladki hai.
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At some station train stop.
Everyone went for eating And personal work
Virman purChase somethings.
A old lady fall sick.
No one see but virman went and take care of her.
Old lady:(bless them)khush raho.uparwala Tum log ki jodi hamesha banai rakhe. Shadi hogayi
Viraat: thankyou Dadi. Hum ek dusre ko nahin Jaante.
Maanvi: right hai. Hum ek train main jare hain but hain alag.
Old lady:(tells) main jab Tum log jitni thI. Tumhare Dadu se mili thi. Hum mile bahot war Kiya aur pyar KAB Hua pata hi nahin Chala.
Viraat: aaplog bahot pyar karte the hunge.
Maanvi: :(whisper)viraat
Old lady: koi baat nahin beti. Humlog aj bhi:( kabhi war...kabhi pyar) sapno main karte hain. Mere exprise.
Virman: experience.
Old lady: haan experience se batarahi hun.
Viraat:(tells) but Dadi yeh bahot pareshan karti hai mujhe.
Maanvi:nahi Dadi yeh pareshan Karta hai mujhe. I can't tolerate him
Viraat: me 2
Old lady: aj bhale ekdusre k sath nahin rehsakte ho. Ek din ayega.jab tum dono ek dusre k bina nahin reh Paoge.ek aur Bade ghalat nahin hote:(smiles)
Virman:(inmind) main aur yeh saath kabhi nahin.
Old lady:(ask) Kya sochre ho?
Viraat: kuch nahin.
Maanvi: chalen Dadi
Virman went back to train with Dadi.
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Inside of train
Virman sitting.
Maanvi::(inmind) main aur woh bandar couple never.
Viraat:(inmind) main aur woh bandariya couple never.:(look her)
Maanvi:(look him) aise Kya dekhre ho?
Viraat:(tells) yehi k Dadi ne aisa Kya Dekha jo humein couple SAMJHA.
Maanvi: yeh hi toh Kahan main itni beautiful. Kahan tum Maha fool.
Viraat:(show eyes) hey you. Main fool Nahin hun.
Maanvi: hota hai Sabko apne aap se missunderstanding
Viraat:(tells) it's truth.
Maanvi:(ask) tum delhi Kyun Jarahe ho?
Viraat:(tells) main apne dam pe work Karna chahta hun. Isliye dad ka business apni fiancee ko chodke delhi jaraha hun. In short last chance challenge Kiya hai dad ne. Tum kyun jarahi ho.
Maanvi:(tells) main BHI kisi ki fiance hun. But main shadi se pehle khulke enjoy Karna chahti hun. Isliye Delhi jarahi hun. My parents send me.
Viraat:(ask) Kya hai tumhare Bandar ka naam.
(Dear readers note: I will use offscreen name of virat maanvi realife name in future for one time I wI'll bring them . As it's virman story. I will not include any other character.)
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Maanvi:he is kushal tandon. Much better then you.:(ask)tumhari fiancee ka name Kya hai?
Viraat:(with smile)she is nia sharma much bautiful then you.
Maanvi:(tells) don't copy me.
Viraat:(tells) it's truth.
Maanvi:(madeface) then good. NaHin toh abhi tumhe train se phekdeti.
Viraat: lady finger ki behen ho tum aur mere jaise strong insaan ko kya phekogi.
Maanvi:(tells) main kuch BHI karsakti hun.
Viraat: good joke. Ek kam karo Delhi chodo Mumbai return jao. Laughter program main participate karo.
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They reach delhi!
In cab they sat together.
Driver:(ask) aap bura na mane toh puchun?
Viraat: pehle yeh batao yahan ghar miljata haina.
Driver: Milta haina. Ek dadi hai. Bilkul akele hai. Aaplog chahe toh wahan rehsakte ho. Free main.
Viraat: par humlog husband nahin hai chalega na.
Maanvi: boliye driver Bhaiya.
Driver: nahin chalega.
Virman:(getshock) oh no.
Driver: ek kam karsakte Hain.
Virman:(ask) Kya?
Driver: aaplog drama karo. Mr Mrs hone ka.
Viraat: yeh sahi hoga.
Maanvi: no hum aisa nahin karenge. Hamari Dadi ki jaise hai woh. Hum Kaise jhoot bolenge.
Viraat: thode time ki baat hai. We will get job. Phir shift karenge.
Maanvi: baat shifting ki nahin feelings ki hai.
Viraat: oh Lord tumhara Kya Karun?
Maanvi: kuch mat karo feeling ko hurt karne liye mujhe yeh expect mat karo.
Driver: aaplog kuch mat bolo. Main sambhalunga.
Viraat: theek hai.
Maanvi:(glare at him)
Viraat:(keep her hand on her hand) trust me.
Maanvi:(look her their hands together)
Viraat:(left her hand)
Kabhi...kabhi...kabhi vaar...kabhi...kabhi...kabhi pyar.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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First of all dear many many congratulations dear.
Related to ur story what I will say it seems less.
Starting was just mind-blowing have no words.
Lovely starting at train. Wow our virmans meetone was just awsm.
Loved their attitude so much.
Loved the cute nok jhok going between them.
Wow both have financee names Kushal and nia. Loved the name.
Loved virman helped old lady and that lady blessed them as couple.
Loved how she told them her story with dadu.
Loved virman falling part and their background song.
Really loved now they r going to stay together so more fun will be there.
Now update soon dear next part.
So update soon.
Tc.
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Thank you friends previous comments
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Same day
At Dadi's house
Driver and virman enters.
Driver: aaplog rukiye Main Dadi ko leke aata hun.:(went).
Maanvi:(turn to go with bags)
Viraat:(ask) Kahan jaari ho?
Maanvi:(tells) mujhe nahin Karna tumhari wife ka drama.
Viraat:(become serious.tells) theek hai. Sach batado. Zyada se zyada Kya hoga. Hamari insult hamare parents ki teaching ki insult. Aur hamare family ko pata chalega. Uske baad koi belief nahin karega.
Maanvi:(start going)
Viraat talks rings in maanvi mind and she join him
Viraat:(ask) Kya hua?
Maanvi: hum kuch nahin batayenge. But hum Dadi se sorry kahenge.
Viraat: ok. Miss sadu.
Maanvi:(tells) main nahin tum sadu.
Virmaan:(glare eachother)
Dadi:(arrives with driver) bachcho tum log
Virmaan:(together) Dadi aap yahan.
Driver: aaplog Jaante ho Ek dusre no?
Dadi: yehi bache the jisne mujhe sambhala tha. Station pe.
Virmaan:(tells) Dadi sorry.
Dadi: kyun?
Viraat: hamari pehle baat nahin hui. Otherwise aaplog akele nahin chodte
Dadi: koi baat nahin. Jao rest karlo.
Virmaan went.
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In guestroom!
Virmaan enters and scan the room.
Viraat:(rest on bed) my dear wife tum shift Karo hamare luggage. main rest leta hun.
Maanvi:(take and throw bag near him) apna kaam khud karo.
Viraat:(tells) wife bani ho toh husband k kam BHI bhi karlo. Duty hai tumhari.
Maanvi:(answer back) duty my foot. Apne kaam khud karo.
Viraat:(suddenly)I am sorry.
Maanvi:(ask)really. Then it's ok be careful from now. Apna kam khud Karlo.
Viraat:(tells)sorry isliye nahin bola Maine. Main bhulgaya tha tum human nahin scary devil ho. Kam Kaise karogi hum insano ko k tarah.
Maanvi:(take pillow start coming. laugh like a devil)aj toh tum gaye
Viraat:(getshock get up start running)
Maanvi:(follow him)
Viraat:(while running say) rukja bhootni
Maanvi;( while following tells with scary style) yeh bhootni rukegi nahin jaan se maregi aur aise hi khajayegi
Viraat:(tells) mere marne se pehle. Tumhare jail jane se pehle. Hamare fiance's se baat karle.
Maanvi: haan. Aur family se BHI.
Viraat: haan.
They first chat with respective parents and then fiance's.
Virman face eachother.
Maanvi: bina awaz k baat Kaise ki.?
Viraat: chatting.
Maanvi: kitna copy karte ho. Lagta school and college main aise hi karte the. Top BHI aise Kiya hoga
Viraat: Maine top kiya hai. Right way se. But lagta hai tum wrong way se top Karti ho isliye jaanti ho.
Both fights with eachother.
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At dining
Dadi and virman eating.
Dadi:(tells) Maine tumlog jhagte hue sunna. Kya Hua?
Virmaan:(start laughing)
Dadi:(get confuse)kya hua
Virmaan:(in union) Dadi hum aise hi hai. Kabhi war...kabhi pyar.
Dadi: acha. Tumlog ka jhagda kyun Hua? Station par.
Maanvi:(makes story) viraat maan nahin raha tha mujhe apne sath lejane k liye. Aap hi batao Dadi. koi wife apne husband ko kaise chodsakti hai. But viraat ko meri feelings ki importance nahin rahi. Isliye Maine sochliya ajse hum strangers hain
Viraat:(tells) Dadi. Aap is dramaqueen ki baaton seriously mat lo. Aap samajhsakte meri problem.
Maanvi:(start crying drama)dekhilijiye Dadi. Kya value hai meri.
Viraat:(tells) drama queen ko drama queen nahin bolun toh Kya bolun?
Dadi:(tells) Khao na bachchon.
Virmaan:(agreed and take plates start to eat)
Dadi:Viraat Maanvi rokjao.
Virmaan:(get confuse)
Dadi:(tells) ek plate se aur ek dusre k hath se Khao.
Virmaan:(getshock look eachother.inmind) Kahan phasgaya?/phasgayi?
Dadi: (ask) kya hua? Shuru karo.
Virmaan:(give fake smile and hesitately feed eachother bite fingers)
Dadi: (praise them)bahot achche.
Virman:(gave fake smile)
Dadi: gharwalon se baat huI?
Virmaan: yes dadi
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In guest room!
Virman:(arrives lock door)
Viraat:(ask) mere fingers kyun khayi tumne?
Maanvi: kyun bakwas ki tumne Dadi k samne.? Uski punishment hai
Viraat:(taunt her) how rude you are. Maine tumhari goodness dikhayi. Aur tumne meri ungliyan khayi.
Maanvi:(tells) tumne bhi revenge liya na?
Viraat:(reminds) but start tumne kiya?
Thunderbolt sounds noise they heard
Maanvi:(getscare and hug him)
Viraat:(get some idea and play rain sol song in mobile and take her hand and dance with her)
Maanvi:(get surprise by him, bcoz she thought he will make fun of her but he did unexpected thing with her)
Viraat:(tells) mujhe barish k time dance Karna acha lagta hai. Tum main koi interest nahin hai
Maanvi:(tells)mujhe BHI nahin hai. Dadi k ghar main Hain isliye safe ho tum. Otherwise tumhe maarke CHUTNEY banati aur phekdetI.
Viraat:(stop dancing.ask) tum goons family se ho Kya? Jab dekho jab qussa hoti ho? Meri jaan k piche padti ho?
Maanvi:(tells) tumhara face hi aisa hai. Jo mujhe goons jaise ideas aate Hain.
Viraat:(suggest) eye test karwalo. Sab acha dikhega. Jaisa main hoon waise dikhunga.
Maanvi:(tells) I think you should stay in asylum.
Viraat:(ask) main kyun rahun tumhare ghar main?
Maanvi:(point finger at him) mera ghar asylum nahin hai ok.
Viraat:(tells) then tum asylum se bhagi hogi. Bechari drama Kiya hoga. Adobt ho gayi
Maanvi: main nahin tum bhage ho. Bechare banne ka drama Kiya hoga?
Viraat:(tells) dilogue chori mat karo mera.
Maanvi: Maine dilogue chori nahin Kiya.
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In at company
In cabin
Viraat:(take permission) may I come in?
Boss: yes come in.
Viraat:(comes and Introduce) i am viraat.
Boss:(ask to know his surname) viraat what.
Viraat:(tells) actually sir I want to make my own identity. Without any sirname
Boss: nice. :(take his file and read it)
Viraat:(worries)
Boss:(told him) you have been selected Mr viraat:(smiles)
Viraat:(gethappy) thankyou so much sir:(ask) kabse join Karna hai?
Boss: from Tommorow.
Viraat:(tells) thankyou sir:(went)
After his exit Maanvi :(comes ask) may I come in?
Boss:(look her up to down in bad way)
Maanvi:(ask) may I come in?
Boss:(tells) yes. Have a seat
Maanvi:(Give her)
Boss:(tells)when you are here? What's need of this. Give oral interview.
Maanvi:(start giving her interview)
Boss eyes was fix on her in bad way
Maanvi:(didnt notice and tells) sir mujhe job milgaye.
Boss:(tells) yes from now you are my pa. U can join tomorrow
Maanvi:(get happy)
Both shake hands. But boss was not leaving her hand.maanvi felt strange
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At night in guest room
After dinner
Virmaan laying on bed with pillow wall between.
Maanvi:(wish for next day)
Viraat:(also wish for next day then say) good night
Maanvi: (was lost so didnt respond to her)
Viraat:(click fingers)
Maanvi:(ask) Kya Hua? Kahani sunne ki adat hai? Then go home tell your mother.
Viraat:(tells) mujhe story ki habit nahin hai? But lagta hai tumhe irritate hone ki illness hai. On the way fight ki. Dinner k time koi baat nahin ki. Aur ab na good night wish Kiya.
Maanvi:(tells) goodnight wish good people ko karte Hain. Tum jaise Weird ko weird good night wish Karna chahiye.
Viraat:(tells) weird toh tum ho Orange ho. Jo kabhi ek jaisa nahin hota. Kabhi sweet toh kabhi sour.
Maanvi:(smiles) main Kya hun Kya nahin mujhe pata hai ok. U don't decide
Viraat:(tells) tum ho hi Aisi?
Maanvi:(ask) by the way boss Kaise lage tumhe?
Viraat:(tells)achche hai.:(ask) tumhe Kaise lage?
Maanvi:(tells) ache Hain par:(get quite)
Viraat:(ask) par Kya?
Maanvi:(tells) kuch nahin?
Viraat:(ask) bolo BHI. Meri mom key to hai. Koi baat hai toh bata Dena chahiye. Otherwise problem hoti hai.
Maanvi: hum toh strangers Hain. Good night.(sleeps)
Viraat:(inmind) bahot ajib ladki hai. Khud kuch nahin boltI. Mujhe Bolne nahin diya isne:(smiles and rest).






Edited by Ayesha_Tabassum - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks for comment here is the new part

Part 2
In Dadi house!
In guestroom!
After wishing Dadi. Virman get busy in chatting greeting respective parents and friends.
Maanvi:(was wearing beautiful pink and purple shade Saree & simple jewelry gift by Dadi)
Viraat:(was wearing same color kurta pyjama)
Virman was looking like real made4eachother couple.
Maanvi's:( mobile rings she recieve) hello who is this?
Boss: it's me Maanvi your boss. Happy Diwali?
Maanvi:(tells) thankyou and same to u.
Boss: welcome and thanks.:(ask) Maanvi tumhari family yahan nahin Hai na. So tum mere ghar kyun nahin aati.? Puri office team Arahi hai.
Maanvi:(tells) thankyou sir sorry sir. Main ek dadi k yahan shift hui hun. I want celebrate Diwali with her.
Boss:(get dissapoint) ok fine no problem.
Viraat:(ask her) kaun hai Maanvi?
Maanvi: hamare boss hai virat
Viraat:(take phone say) hi boss happy Diwali.
But phonecall was already ended.
Viraat:(give phone) Maanvi not fair. Apne phone se baat nahi karani thi toh batadi. Disconnected call kyun diya mujhe
Maanvi:(get confuse) no viraat. Boss line par the.
Viraat:(ask) toh main jhoot bolra hun.
Maanvi:(tells) main BHI jhoot nahin bolri ok.
Viraat:(ask) then Kya boss mere student hai main koi scary teacher jo darke behosh hogaye.
Maanvi:(tells) idiot aj Diwali hai. Koi wish karne aye hoga boss ko.
Viraat: I think you are right.
Maanvi:(tells) Thank God mana toh sahi.
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At some ngo!
Trio comes to distribute gifts to kids.
Kids:(tells) thankyou Dadi/didi/uncle.
Maanvi:(laugh hearing uncle)
Viraat:(madeface) Bacha party Bhaiya bolo. Uncle nahin. Chahe toh didi ko aunty bolo
Maanvi:(tells) oh hello apnI bakwas band karo. Rocket k sath tumhe jaladungi tumhe.
Viraat:(ask) oh hello Kya lakdI hun jo jalaogi.
Maanvi: lakdi nahin cactus ho tum.
Viraat:(tells) khudka title mujhe na do.:(sing and tease her)
Kids join him and dance force Maanvi to dance along then.
Maanvi:(unwilling dance with them)
Virman enjoying with kids.
Dadi:(saw through window )
Maanvi:(slip during dance)
Viraat:(safe her like before)
Virmaan:(share eyelock)
Some romantic song play in background
Kids turn other side..
Maanvi mobiles rings and they comes in reality.
Viraat:(tells) talk tumhare kushal ka call hai.
Maanvi: kushal nahin boss:(receive call) hello boss.
Boss: Maanvi can u come. Important meeting hai. Preparetion kardo.
Maanvi:(tells)sure sir. Viraat. Dadi ko bata Dena main Jaldi aungi:(went)
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At boss house!
In study room
Boss spreads file and waiting for Maanvi.
Maanvi:(arrives)
Boss saw her look to down get shock to see sindur and mangalsutra on Maanvi.
Maanvi:(greet him) hello sir.
Boss:(tells) hello. Tumhari shadi KAB hui?
Maanvi:(tells) it's long story.:(ask) bataiye kya kam tha.
Boss:(tells) mujhe Canada k client ki file nahin milri. Can u help me.
Maanvi:(smiles) sure:(checking files to find file)
Boss:(inmind) Kaise pata Karun Maanvi se.?:(ask) Maanvi hum friends bansakte hai. Waise BHI Sath hi Rehna hai toh jana important hai.
Maanvi:(get confuse)meaning
Boss:(tells) I mean tum meri personal assistant ho main boss hun. Strangers rahenge toh bore ho jaiga.
Maanvi: sir we don't know eachother. How can we friends.
Boss:(seriously) main tumhe is na se tumhari job trouble main HosAKti hai.. I hate no.
Maanvi:(get worried)
Boss:(change tone) but kyunki aj Diwali hai. Tum mere ghar ayi ho. Isliye tumhe punish nahin karunga.
Maanvi:(get relief.inmind)Maanvi.boss kitne fun loving hai. Tu bekar main tension leri thi.:(smiles)
Boss:(ask) Kahan khogayi?
Maanvi: nothing sir. File find karke jaati hun
Boss: ok: (tells) I will be back:(went)
Maanvi searching files
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In Dadi house!
In guest room!
Viraat is busy playing games in mobile.
Maanvi:(arrives and sat on bed show gifts)
Viraat:(ask) tum toh work se gayi thi. Then yeh gift?
Maanvi:(tells) boss surprise Karna chahre the mujhe. He became my friend but I didn't agreed. But as friend gift kare..
Viraat: nice.
Maanvi:(ask) tumne Dadi se Kya kaha?
Viraat:(tells) yeh hi ki tum mujhse upset hoke chalegayi.
Maanvi:(get angry with him) Kya need thi Dadi ko trouble karne ki.
Viraat:(tells) agar main aisa nahin Kehta. Toh dadi mujhe tumhe call karne ko KehtI. Aur agar main tumhe call karta. Mujhe tumhari nonsense sehna padta. Isliye kaha?
Maanvi: unbelievable.
Viraat:(take chocolates from gifts feed her) happy Diwali.
Maanvi:(while eating ask) Diwali k din kisi aur k gift se kaun leke deta hai. chocolate kaun deta.?
Viraat:(tells)mujhe mat teach karo. Mujhse learn karo. Meri Achi-Achi habits.
Maanvi:(tells) anyways. Mujhe boss k liye acha nahin laga. Sab kuch hai Family nahin aur Diwali par alone hai.
Viraat: Maanvi. Distance doesn't matter In any Relationships.
Maanvi:(ask) Kahan se learn Kiya.
Viraat: mere parents ko dekhke pata chala
Maanvi:(tells) nice lovestory of them.
Viraat:(tells) thanks.
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At dining area!
Virman making sweets balls on dadi saying.
Maanvi:(laugh and ask) aise sweets kaun banata hai.?
Viraat:(tells) mujhe aise hi aata hai.
Maanvi:(tells) then learn Karlo. Tumhari wife hasegi tumpe.
Viraat:(tells) hasne do. Tum focus karo. Tumhara husband divorce kardega. Aise laughing karogi toh.
Maanvi: he is not like that. Maybe you are wife will divorce you.
Viraat:(tells) woh tum nahin hai. Jo apne love chodke chale jaye.
Maanvi:(tells) main chodke nahin ayi. Tum chodke aye apne love ko.
Viraat:(correct her) Maine jo BHI Kiya usse proud feel karane Kiya. Tumhari tarah ghumne nahin aya. (Without realising)Tumpe burden nahin bana:(realise what he say) I am sorry
Maanvi:(felt bad went from their)
Viraat:(start following her)
Dadi:(arrives) Maanvi theek toh hai?
Viraat:(tells) Maine hurt kardiya Maanvi. Bina soChe.
Dadi:(explains) viraat. Tumdono apne family se dur ho. Tumdono ko ekdusre ki himat banke Rehna chahiye. Aise nahin Karna chahiye,
Viraat:(like her explaination) I promise Dadi. Main aapki yeh baat kabhi nahin bhulunga. Apne pyar se par k sath rahunga. Aj BHI aur KAL aur hamesha?
Dadi:(felt nice) ab jao Jake Manalo Maanvi ko.
Viraat:(tells) uska anger danger hai.
Dadi:(tells) bahot Achi hai Maanvi. Aur tum bhi. Uski pasand k phool do Maaf karegi.
Viraat:(inmind) Maanvi k favourite flowers ka naam toh main nahin jaanta. Manaun Kaise?
To be continue.



Edited by Ayesha_Tabassum - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks friends here is the next part

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Same day
In guest room!
Maanvi blabbering against Viraat.
Viraat:(saw her through door. Inmind) timebomb shuru hogaya viraat. Kabhi bhi blast HosAKTA hai. Kya Karun Kya karun:(get idea And went)
MaanvI still blabbering.
Viraat:(throw mesage rocket near her)
Maanvi:(take rocket) kisne throw Kiya hoga?
Viraat:(inmind) check toh karo buddhu.
Maanvi:(throw it in bin.sat thinking)
Viraat:(again throw msg rocket near her)
Maanvi:(again take rocket and throw it)
Viraat:(inmind) oh lord. Kya ladki hai.:(comes and close door)
Maanvi:(told him) Abhi main angry hun chalejao. Otherwise tumhare Sath kuch kardungI.
Viraat:(joke with her)but tum kushal se love Karti thi na. Mujhse shadi Karne ka Kaise sochsakti ho?
Maanvi:(ask)are you mad(tells):main kushal se love Karti thi NahI. Love karti hun. Got it. Tum soch na BHI mat.
Viraat:(hold ears start sit up saying) sorry.
After hundred sit up.
Maanvi:(melt down and say with atitude) it's ok.
Viraat:(sat down told) thanks.
Maanvi:(warn him) next time se careful Rehna. NaHin toh mujhse bura koi nahin hoga.
Viraat:(nod in agreement)tum jaise bolo waise hoga. ab toh hum friend bansakte hai na? I promise aj jo Hua waise nahin hoga.
Maanvi:(tells) yes.
Viraat:(tells) let's go and meet dadi. Maine unintentionally bata ya.
Maanvi: what then chalo:(take his hand and went)
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In dadi' s room!
Dadi was watching some religious channel on TV.
Maanvi:(comes still holding viraat hand) sorry Dadi. Aapko hamare taraf se tension ho gayi.
Viraat: I promise aise nahin hoga.
Dadi:(ask) mere marne k baad BHI tum log aise hi Milke Rehna.
Maanvi:(hug her normally) don't say like that.kuch nahin hoga aapko.
Dadi: meri umar toh dekho.
Viraat:(jokes)aap toh sweet 16 ho. Jo dekhe woh sab dekhte rehjaye. Mujhe nahin pata main join kaise karunga. aapse dur jaake.
Maanvi-dadi:(watch him with seriousness)
Viraat:(ask)aapdono aise kyun dekhre ho?
Maanvi-Dadi:(laugh on him)
Viraat:(to laugh)
Dadi:(tells) tum dono aise hi khush raho.:(ask) choti Maanvi choote viraat k ko lane k baremain socha?
Virman:(start coughing with shock)
Dadi:(ask) Kya Hua?
Maanvi:(tells) Dadi. Humne decide Kiya hai. Jabtak viraat settle nahin hota hum isbaremain nahin sochenge.
Viraat:(tells) Maanvi theek bolrahi hai.
Dadi:(tells) bahot samajhdar ho.
Maanvi:(ask) Dadi aapko problem toh nAHIN Haina mere kaam karne se.
Dadi: nahin beta, bas ek baat yaad Rakho. Kisi par wishwas mat Karna Jaldi. Viraat apni Maanvi ka dhyan rakhna.
Virmaan: ok dadI.
Dadi:(smiles)
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In guestroom!
Virmaan returns.
Maanvi:(ask) tumne socha. Dadi k baremain.
Viraat:(tells)orphanage k kids asakte Hain. Dadi aur kids dono ko change milega.
Maanvi:(get happy) yeh best idea hai viraat.
Viraat:(tells) double thanks. Waise aj tumne humein bachaliya.
Maanvi:(smiles) welcome. Double thanks kyun?
Viraat:(tells) friendshup k liye BHI.
Maanvi:(tells)mera Diwali gift hai tumhare liye.
Viraat: thankyou so much.
Maanvi: welcome.
Viraat:(tells) jab friendship ho gayi. Main woh baat Boldun. Jo main Bol na chahta hun.
Maanvi:(getconfuse) aisa Kya Bol na hai jo bina friendship nahin bolsakte ho.
Viraat:(tells) tum bahot Achi lagri ho traditional wear main. Bina friendship k Bol na wrong hota na.
Maanvi:(tells)thankyou. you are right.
Viraat:(ask) acha batao Diwali main Kya acha lagta hai?
Maanvi:(tells) dress up hona. Different sweets and snacks eat Karna.
Viraat:(ask) crackerrs main Kya pasand Hain.?
Maanvi:(tells about crackers) ek secret hai.
Viraat:(ask)Kya?
Maanvi:(tells) chodo Jaane do.
Viraat:(tells) main samajhgaya. Tum 99% sherni ho aur 1% afraidini.
Maanvi:(getshock) tumhe Kaise pata
Viraat:(tells) jiske paas dil hota woh darta hai.:(tells) aap yeh mat Kehna dil nahin hai.
Maanvi:(smiles)
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Outdoor at night!
Diwali celebration begin.
Everyone playing with crackers
Viraat helps maanvi in bursting cracker.
Maanvi:(is afraid)mujhse nahin hoga.
Viraat:(assures her) don't be afraid I m with you. Kuch nahin hoga. You just enjoy
Maanvi:(agrees and enjoy with crackers)
Viraat:(without her realise left her to enjoy)
Dadi:(sign him to come)
Viraat:(join) yes beautiful Dadi.
Dadi:(ask) tum uske sath kyun nahin rahe.
Viraat:(tells) main Maanvi ko bina dar k enjoy Karna sikharaha hun. Jab hum Sath nahin rahenge tab k liye.
Dadi:(ask) aise kyun Bolre ho viraat?
Viraat:(tells) mujhe kisi aur se pyar hai Dadi?
Dadi:(getshock)Kya? Kaun hai woh?
Viraat:(point toward dadi) aap hai woh.
Dadi:(smiles) buddhu ho.
Viraat: jo BHI hun aapka hun.
Dadi:(tells) main tumhare dadu ki hun.
Viraat:(tells) Dadu bolre the meri princess abse tumhari hai.
Dadi:(playfully slap him) badmash.
Maanvi:(tells) Dadi isko toh rocket k sath jalana chahiye.
Viraat:(tells) mere aur princess kI life main interfere mat karo Maanvi.
Maanvi:(tells) princess k liye prince hota hai. Jo tum nahin ho.
Virman dance with others
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In virman room!
After dinner!
Virman sat.
Viraat:(tells) sorry Maanvi Maine tumhari help nahin ki.
Maanvi:(tells) it's ok. Tumhe pata hai. Mom dad BHI mujhe aise hi crackers k sath chodte the. So that I burn to learn it without fear.
Viraat:(smiles) that's nice.
Maanvi: tumne acha Kiya dadI ko company dekar.
Viraat:(tells) but gadbad ho gayi thi.
Maanvi:(ask) Kaisi gadbad?
Viraat:(tells) Maine Dadi ko bayadiya tha hun Sath nahin rehnewale.
Maanvi:(glare at him)
Viraat:(tells)but I handle it. Tumne suna hai na.
Maanvi: be careful next time.
Viraat: okay I will be careful.
Crackers bursting outside.
Maanvi:(get scare and hug him)
Viraat:(just smile on her innocence)
Maanvi:(get separate) sorry
Viraat:(tells) it's ok:(take cotton and give her) yeh lagao. Relief milega.
Maanvi:(take and tells) thank you Viraat.
Viraat: welcome and good night:(rest on bed)
Maanvi:(also takes rest)



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Next day at office
In boss cabin.
Maanvi: sir(enters and observe cabin and notice two office table with same office items)
Boss:(look her And greet her) Good morning.
Maanvi:(tells) good morning.
Boss:(ask) how is the arrangements.
Maanvi:(praise it) it's amazing:(ask) may I ask for whom
Boss:(ask her) table k paas naam hai dekhlo.
Maanvi:(went to the table saw her name) sir what's need of this?
Boss:(tells) it's needed.if In case you need anyone help i can help u being with u Maanvi. By this you may learn so many things. So plz work from here.
Maanvi:(tells) sorry sir and yes sir:(ask) Kya work Karna hai mujhe?
Boss:(told) write a later to Mr gupta.
Maanvi:(start writing)
Boss start telling what to write and also observing her beauty in between
Maanvi:(complete later and give him)
Boss:(tells) thanks:(ask) tum pehle kyun nahin bataya tum viraat Sath rehte ho.
Maanvi:(tells) mujhe yeh sab imporant nahin laga tha sorry.
Boss:(smiles) it's ok.:(ask) tumhare husband ka naam Kya hai.
Maanvi:(make excuse) hamare family main husband ka name nahin lete sir.
Boss:(tells) it's ok.:(tells) but meeting karana. Ok.
Maanvi:(makes excuse) he is not here sir
Boss: let's work now.
Maanvi: sure sir.:(inmind) batadun Kya. Hum kuch days k liye couple drama Karre Hain.
Boss:(inmind) KAB friends banenge hum.
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In group table
Everyone is working.
Viraat:(inmind) Maanvi bahar kyun nahin ayi.
Manager was passing from their.
Viraat:(stop him) manager. Maanvi ne kuch ghalti hai ?jo Maanvi ko rok kar rakh hai.
Manager:(tells) miss Maanvi. boss ki PA Haina. Unka sitting arrangements boss k cabin main hain:(went)
Viraat:(praise) wow. That's nice
One boy:(told)buddy. It's not nice. Main 8 saal se yahan hun. Bahot girls ko PA Banti haan baad main job quit Karne main majboor hoti hain
Viraat:(ask) Kya reason HosAKTA hai.? Jo girls chaleGaye wohlog ne bataya hoga?
One boy:(told) aur Kya hoga?ache dikhnewale Ladkiyon ka advantage lete Hain.
Viraat:(get worried then realise) but Maanvi toh married hai. No worries
One boy:(tells) hum Jaante Hain aur samajhte Hain. Kuch log ko bas ladki Dikhti hai.
Viraat:(inmind) mujhe Maanvi ko batana chahiye. Main apni friend ko problem nahin hone desakta. But Maanvi ne belief nahin Kiya toh?
Another boy: Kya Hua dost.
Viraat: nahin kuch nahin:(inmind) I will do anything to save Maanvi. But Karun toh Karun Kya?
His heart: baat karlo friend hai manjayegi.
His mind: agar usse laga tum uski job se jealous ho.
His heart: Maanvi bahot ache dil ki hai.
His mind: as u wish? Jab friendship break hogi toh Rona mat.
His heart: friendship rakhne k liye nahin. Nibhane k liye hoti hai.
Viraat:(tells) right.
Office member: Kya sochre ho.
Viraat: nothing.
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Back to boss cabin!
Maanvi is working on her table.
Boss is watching her.
Someone knock..
Boss: come in.
Door open and viraat enter.
Viraat: sorry boss. Meri wife ka first day hai toh wish karne aya tha.
Maanvi:(getshock)
Boss:(tells) but Maanvi ne bola uska husband yahan nahin rehta.
Viraat:(join her and side hug her.smiles and tells) sir. Har couple main hota hai. humdono main BHI hota.(looking her) Kabhi pyar...(looking boss)kabhi war!
Boss gave fake smile
Maanvi:(ask) viraat Kya hogaya tumhe? Yeh sab bakwas kyun Karre ho? Yeh sach nahin hai
Viraat:(make excuse) yeh bakwas nahin sach hai. Jisse na hum badalsakte aur na hamari bich ka war. Samjhi mera pyar?
Maanvi:(controlling his anger)
Boss:(ask) war kyun hui?
Viraat:(start telling )baat yeh hai. Main chahta tha. Apna career banana. But meri wife chahti thi mere Sath nibhana. But Maine kardiya na. Aur yeh bangaya. Hamari war ka Bahana. Isliye Maanvi ne Chaha apne liye kaam Karna. Mujhe dur rehkar tadpana.
Boss and Maanvi gave fake smile to eachother.
Viraat:(indirectly tells) koi bich main aye toh janta hun uski chutni bana. Sorry and bye:(went)
Maanvi: sorry sir.
Boss:(tells) you dont sorry. If u want any help call me.
Maanvi: yes sir. Thanks.
Boss:(tells) I am waiting to hear friends from u. Not thanks
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In break time! At canteen.
Viraat having sandwich and coffee.
Maanvi:(comes)
Viraat:(sign with coffee and sandwich).
Maanvi:(nod in know) yeh sab Kya Karre the.
Viraat:(tells) break time hai. Coffee and sandwich enjoy karra hun.
Maanvi: main cabin incident ki baat Karri thi.
Viraat:(tells) Maine jo Kiya sahi Kiya? Tum bas meri haan main haan aur na main na karo.
Maanvi:(tells) but kyun Karun?
Viraat:(ask) pehle k jaise agree nahin karsakti.
Maanvi:(join him) but viraat boss bahot ache Hain understanding hai.
Viraat:(tells) ache hunge but apne nahin hai. Jo baat hamare nishal ko pata nahin hai. Woh third person ko kyun batayen?
Maanvi: but viraat. Boss mujhe friend Manne lage Hain.
Viraat:(ask) aur tum?
Maanvi: main nahin jaanti boss ko friendship Kaise Karun?
Viraat: good. New city hai. Humdono ko careful Rehna hoga ,sply tumhe careful Rehna hoga.
Maanvi:(smiles) ok viraat. But plz agey se aisa mat Karna. Tumhe career ko problem Hosakti hai.
Viraat:(tells) friend k liye kuch BHI kuch BHI HosAKTA hun Main
Maanvi:(smiles)
Viraat:(ask) boss k sath kam karne main comfortable hona?
Maanvi:(tells) haan.
Viraat: ok.
Maanvi: acha main jaati hun. Learn Karti hun:(went)
Viraat:(inmind) I hope Maanvi aur boss dur rahen.
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Back to cabin!
Boss:(feeling angry on viraat)
Maanvi:(arrives) sorry sir.
Boss:(tells) I don't want sorry... I am waiting to become your friend.
Maanvi:(inmind) Kya Karun lord. Viraat ki advice aur ek taraf sir ki friendship.:(getsad)
Boss:(tells) don't be worried, Maine paas aise hi kaha hai. (Emotionally black mail her) Kuch din k liye alone rahunga. Let's work.
Maanvi:(sat on her chair and tries to switch on desktop but get failed) boss laptop is not working.
Boss:(join her and ask while helping) jab viraat mujhe sach bataraha tha. Tum usse Kyun rokrahi thi?
Maanvi:(makes excuse) viraat straight baat nahin karta. Confuse karta hai. Isliye rokdiya.:(smiles)
Boss: oh ok.(tells) yeh dekho. Agaya desktop.:(start explaining work) yeh file past years ki hai.
Maanvi:(hearing him)
Boss: yeh project. 3yrs yeh project Hua tha. 4yrs pehle yeh project Hua tha.
Maanvi: oh ok. First project KAB Hua that sir
Boss: 8saal pehle.
Maanvi: yeh company apki hai yeh apke father ki.
Boss: meri.
Maanvi: bahot tough raha hoga na.
Boss: yes but I am lucky mere Sath badi team hai.
Maanvi:(smiles)
Boss: anyways.yeh work samajh agaya na?.
Maanvi: yes.
Boss: good.
Maanvi:(continue working)
Boss:(inmind) yeh Kya nayi problem hai
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In lunch break in canteen.
Virmaan eating with eachother.
Viraat:(ask) boss se kuch kaha toh nahin.
Maanvi: kabhi problem hai toh boss ko batane k liye.
Viraat:(inmind) Mr problem Kya problem theek karega?
Maanvi:(ask) what happened?
Viraat:(tells) I am glad k tumne meri baat mAnli Hain.
Maanvi:(tells) but plz next time se adVance main batado. Pata hai mujhe bahot qussa aya tha tum par.
Viraat:(tells)it's ok right hai tumhara. My friend
Maanvi:(tells) ek aur baat. Tumhari nia bahot lucky hai. Jiske paas tum ho.
Viraat:(tells) lucky toh kushal BHI hai tum usse samajhti ho.
Maanvi:(laugh and tells) tumne phir mujhe copy Kiya.
Viraat:(tells) friendshup main sorry thankyou nahin hota isliye.
Maanvi:(laugh and tells) you are so funny. But nice same time.
Viraat:(joke) janta hun but proud nahin Kiya?
Maanvi:(nod in disbelief)
Viraat:(ask) Kya Hua?
Maanvi: you are strange
His phone.
Viraat:(recieve) hello. What? KAB Kaise? Hum aate Hain?(end call) Maanvi. We have to go?
Maanvi:(ask) kyun Kya hua
Viraat: emergency hai.



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Part 3/2
Same day
At Dadi house!
In Dadi room!
Doctor doing doctor checkup
Driver was with Dadi.
Virmaan:(arrives)
Viraat:(ask) sudden Kya Hua?
Doctor:(tells) humein dadi hospitalize karke test karke pata Karna hoga.
Dadi: doctor main theek hun. Hospital kyun.
Viraat:(tells) princess don't worry. Test karake ajayenge. Sath hi Sath hamari outing BHI hojaigi.
Maanvi:viraat is right.
Viraat:(tells) doctor. Aap arrangements kijiye. Hum ready hai. Fees ki tension mat lijiye Dadi ko best treatment dijiye.
Doctor: okay.:(tells) Dadi aapka grandson bahot acha hai:(went)
Dadi:(got emotional)
Maanvi:(notice) Kya Hua Dadi?
Dadi: mujhe Khushi Hua aur bura BHI lagra hai.
Viraat:(ask) Khushi kis baat ki ?princess aur dukh kis baat ka?
Dadi: tum log ka pehla din tha. Phir BHI tum log aye ho. Dukh is baat ka k tum log kam nahin karpaye?
Viraat: (makeexcuse) princess hamare job se zyada important hai. Rahi baat job ki humlog super fast work finish karte Hain. Isliye jab chahe asakte Hain jasakte hain. Tension mat lo aur haste khelte rahi.
Maanvi: he is right. Aap bas ready raho.
Dadi: zarorat nahin hai main theek hun.
Viraat: princess tension nahin lo. Beauty kam hojaigi.
Dadi:(smiles)
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In virman room!
Maanvi:(call her boss)
Boss: hi Maanvi.
Maanvi: hi boss. Emergency agayi hai. Main viraat leave Lena chahte hain.
Boss:(ask) what happened?
Maanvi:(sadly) hum jahan rehte Hain. Dadi unwell hai. Unko admit Karna hai.
Boss: oh I see. Don't worry Maanvi.
Maanvi: thankyou.
Boss:(tells) welcome. By the way kis hospital
Maanvi: city hospital.
Boss: ok..
Viraat:(comes their)
Maanvi: sorry but thankyou sir.
Boss: it's ok.
Maanvi: take care
Viraat:(get angry as boss is not trustable person snatch phone keep it )
Maanvi:(ask) yeh Kya way hai viraat?
Viraat:(with angry) kya need to boss ko call Karne ki?
Maanvi:(tells) leave k liye call Kiya Maine.
Viraat:(hold her by arms with anger) mera wait nahin karsakti thI. Main BHI wahan kaam karta hun
Maanvi:(felt pain) viraat you are hurting me.
Viraat:(left her)sorry, but don't dare to call boss from now. (Warn her)Otherwise mujhse bura koi nahin
Maanvi:(tells) be in your limits. We are couples.Yeh meri life hai. Main jaise chahungi waise karungi:(went)
Viraat:(felt bad,inmind) Maanvi. I know hum couples nahin hai. Tum meri friend thi. Isliye tumhe alert kar raha tha. But I think I did wrong as u don't understand me till now:(went)
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At city hospital
Virmaan sitting and waiting for dadi who went for test.
Maanvi:(remembering their confrontation)
Viraat:(aswell remembering their confrontation)
Maanvi:(decide to talk turn to Viraat side) Viraat
Viraat:(look her seriously)
Boss:(comes) hello Maanvi hello Viraat.
Viraat:(normally) hello sir. Aap yahan Kaise?
Boss: Maanvi be bataya tha. Toh main agaya.
Viraat:(tells) thankyou sir. Ek advice thi.
Boss: bolo.
Viraat:(tells to stop him from coming) employees ki itni care Achi nahin hai. Otherwise employee spoil hojate Hain. Aur company ko alone sambhalna padjata hai. Maanvi k liye
Maanvi:(thought he is talking about her) thankyou for coming boss aap jaiye. Main theek hun don't worry.
Boss: ok.:(start going)
Maanvi:(gave shock viraat by excepting boss friendship) bye buddy.
Viraat:(getshock)
Boss:(felt nice as he was successful to win maanvi) Kya kaha tumne.
Maanvi:(walk to him) buddy. Kyunke aap kuch log jaise nahin ho. Bahot ache ho. Friendship karne main aur support karne main ache ho.
Boss:(smiles and went)
Viraat:(get angry with her)
Maanvi:(ignore him).
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In hospital room!
Dadi is resting but later wakeup
Maanvi:(is siting)
Viraat:(comes their and text her) boss ko kyun bola pay karne k liye?
Maanvi:(replies) Maine nahin bola pay karne k liye. Boss ne khud se Kiya hoga. Don't start here.
Viraat:(text her) tum force Karri ho mujhe aisa karne k liye.
Maanvi:(text and ask) why are you against boss?
Viraat:(replies) haMari baat ho gayi thi is baremain. Mujhe repeat nahin Karna.
Dadi:(inmind) yeh log baat kyun nahin kar re?
Maanvi:(text him) tumne Dekha na. hamari friendship se pehle buddy Milne aye hai.
Viraat:(replies) tumhara kushal BHI busiNess man hoga RIGHT. Kya woh kissi employee se jaata hai. Splly ladki ke.
Maanvi::(text him) yeh sab chodo. Buddy ko sorry bolo. Job problem main ajaigi.
Viraat:(replies) I don't care of this. I wish tumhe yeh sabke liye regret na kar na pade.
Maanvi:(text him and tells) stupidity tumne ki hai. Maine nahin. Tumhe regret hoga.mujhe nahin.
Viraat:(replies) main right hun tum nahin. Ek baar hamari friendship k liye meri baat Manalo.
Maanvi:(text him) tumne kuch aur bola hota toh maanleti. But buddy k samne jo tumne mujhe kaha uske baad. Regret horaha hamari friendship k liye.
Viraat:(remembers and replies) Maanvi Maine woh sab ek reason se bola tha tumhare liye nahin thi woh baat
Maanvi:(text him) Kya reason hai?
Viraat:(replies) ab main nahin bolunga. Bcoz tumhe samajhna nahin hai.
Maanvi:(text him) then theek hai tum mat batao reason. Bas meri life main interfere mat karo
Viraat:(replies) ok f9 I will not interfere.
Maanvi:(ignore him)
Viraat also ignore her
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In midnight outside of hospital room
Maanvi:(comes and answer) hello sir.
Boss:ab toh friendship ho gayi na buddy bolao. Mujhe.
Maanvi:(normally) buddy. Thanks for your help. I promise I will return it very soon.
Boss:(tells) I don't want money I want something else.
Maanvi:(ask)what buddy?
Boss:(tells with wrong intention) wait for right time
Maanvi:(tells) ok.
Boss:(ask) tumhare aur viraat k bich sab theek hai na?
Maanvi: haan buddy sab theek hai.
Boss:(ask) viraat serious kyun tha?
Maanvi:(tells) sir mujhe viraat k baremain koi baat nahin karni. I mean buddy.plz
Boss: it's ok. Maanvi but remember one thing. Ab tum mujhse sab share karsakti. Happiness sadness and everything.
Maanvi: yes buddy. Actually main Dadi k liye tense hun. Itne time se suffer hore the aur humein pata nahin Chala. Aap Jaante hai. Dadi mujhe aur viraat ko bahot chahte Hain. Apne Grandchildrens k jaise. Dadi yeh BHI nahin Jaante k humdono nahin hai pa:(stops remembering viraat words)
Boss:(ask) Kya bolri thi
Maanvi:(tells) let it be sir. Main tension main kuch BHI Bolti hun.
Boss:(ask) are u sure? Ya koi Aisi baat hai jo tum mujhe Abhi nahin batana chahti. Bcoz of i m your new friend.
Maanvi:(tells) yeh time right nahin hai.
Boss:(tells)wah meri baat copy karti ho.
Maanvi:(by mistake tells) aisa nahin hai Viraat.
Boss:(tells) main buddy hun Viraat nahin.
After chatting maanvi went in.
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Inside
Dadi is sleeping
Maanvi enters and saw viraat sleeping on sofa without covering so Maanvi put shawl on him.
Viraat in sleep holding Maanvi hand.
Maanvi:(inmind) oh god. Ab Kya karun?:(get idea and try to free her hand)
Viraat:(talk in sleep) nia I wish tum yahan hoti. Mujhe samajhti. Stupid Maanvi k jaise nahin Karti.
Maanvi:(inmind) unbelievable, main yahan look after Karri hun, yeh hai ki meri complain karta hai.
Viraat:(talk in sleep) ladki hi ladki se deal karsakti hai. Isliye Maanvi ko samajhao. Careful rahe.
Maanvi:(got emotional and her tears fall on him bcoz of his care)
Viraat:(wake up and getshock. In slow tone) tum yahan Kya Karri ho? Aur emotional kyun ho?
Maanvi:(, in slow tone) I am sorry viraat, Kya hum sab bhulke friends nahin hoSakta. I don't want to lose a selfless friend like you.
Viraat:(sat down and make her sat with him, inslowtone) hum frends hai isliye tumhe alert Karraha tha main, I don't want you to have problem
Maanvi:(ask in slow tone ) viraat, but real reason Kya hai?
Viraat:(tells in slowtone) Maine films main Dekha hai. Boss looks good outside but they are not good inside. So I am not able to trust them.
Maanvi:(tells in slowtone) but woh imaginary hota Hai na.
Viraat:(tells in slowtone) real life par based hota hai.:(make her rest, tells) let's talk tomorrw
Maanvi:(ask in slowtone) tum Kahan jaoge?
Viraat:(take other bed sheet place it on floor and rest on in it)
Maanvi:(smiles)
Viraat:(inmind) mujhe prove find karna hoga.
Maanvi:(inmind) how sweet you are.
Viraat:(inmind) I hope jab tak prove na sab theek rahe.
They sleeps separately



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Part 4/1
At city hospital!
Virmaan waiting for dadi operation
Maanvi:(is crying with fear)
Viraat:(notice it and consoles her) Maanvi don't worry sab theek hojaiga.ok
Maanvi:(ask) are you sure?
Viraat:(tells) haan of course. Princess will be f9.:(ask) boss ne bola? Money kitne din main return kar na hai?
Maanvi:(to him) viraat actually(inmind) Viraat ko meri aur boss ki baaton k baremain bataungi toh Viraat hyper hojaiga, job danger main ayegi Viraat ki. So better hai main nahin bataun.
Viraat:(ask) Kya Hua?
Maanvi:(make excuse, indirectly tells) time nahin mila. Puchne k liye. Sorry
Viraat:(tells) time nahin mila I understand:(ask) sorry kyun?
Maanvi:(tells) KAL two times fight hui thi na hamarI.
Viraat:(smiles and tells) patchup hogaya na chodo bhuljao. Just becareful.
Maanvi:(tells) tipicle parents ki acting chodo. Sab hasenge.
Viraat:(tells) future main samjhaunga nahin bachon ko. Ghar main lock karunga. Koi demands nahin manunga: (normally) tum friend ho isliye bachgayi ho
Maanvi:(smiles) mujhe NahI lagta uncle waise hunge jaise tum banna chahte ho?
Viraat:(normally) woh jaise Hain waise nahin banana mujhe.
Maanvi:(ask) aise Kyun?
Viraat:(tells with sadness) tumhare uncle ko lagta hai main khud se kuch nahin bansakta.
Maanvi:(getsurprises) but tumne toh kaha tha. Uncle aunty tumse love karte hain
Viraat:(tells) tum jaanti ho na. Hum Kaise mile the. Hamare Sath Kya Hua? Abhi Abhi friendship hui hamari, Sath main shocking truth pata laga.
Maanvi:(get confuse) Kya shocking truth?
Viraat:(makes excuse) Dadi ki health problem..:(went)
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After some hrs of surgery in patient room!
Dadi:(get conscious)
Nurse went.
Doctor comes start her checkup.
Virman:(comes their)
Doctor: everything is f9.
Dadi:(ask) ghar jasakti hun main?
Doctor: haan but KAL
Virman: ok
Doctor went.
ViRman hug Dadi and get emotional.
Dadi:(consoles them) main theek hun Viraat Maanvi.
Virman:(control themself and get up) hum Jaante Hain
Dadi:(ask) kyun rorahe ho?
Viraat:(joke with her) Maanvi ne rona sikhaya hai, mujhe nahin aata rona.
Maanvi:(tells) don't start now. Otherwise main tumhe hospital shift karke Dadi k sath ghar main rahungi.
Dadi:(ask) bachon tum log ki ladaI hui kya KAL jo tum log baat nahin kar re the.
Viraat:(tells) princess hum nahin chahte the aapko disturb ho isliye msg kar re the.
Maanvi: haan di.
Dadi:(ask) mere operation k liye paise Kaise mile.
Viraat: princess. Do not fear when viraat Is here.
Maanvi:(tells) yahan style mat dikha doctor se Milke aao.
Viraat:(tell) tum jao main rahunga apni princess k paas
Maanvi:(tells) ok:(went)
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Outside of hospital room!
Maanvi was going to meet doctor.
Her phone rings.
Maanvi:(answer the call happily) hello buddy.
Boss: hello. Kya baat hai. Bahot khush ho?
Maanvi: Dadi theek hogaye Hain. Thanks for your help. Sorry I am discontinuing our friendship. And I will try to return money
Boss:(getshock) but kyun Maanvi. KAL hi toh friendship hui hamari.
Maanvi:(tells) I know sir. But we are professional.
Boss:(ask) Viraat rokra hai tumhe.
Maanvi: no sir. He is good
Boss:(tries to win her trust by making her against ) Maine Dekha woh kaisa hai tumhare Sath. Aise main apni friend ko main nahin chodunga. :(ask) Kya tum apne friend ko chodti. Heartless insaan k liye, (normally) jaise woh behave karta hai, office main karega toh nikaal dunga.
Maanvi:(tells)pehli baat, viraat heartless nahin hai, dusri baat main friendship nahin break Karti. Main nahin chahti world hamein wrong samjhe.
Boss:(assure her) don't worry Maanvi. Aisa kuch nahin hoga. I am with you. Don't end your friendship with me. (Sadly)I dont have anyone whom I can call friend.
Maanvi:(melt by him) ok sorry. And plz don't do anything with viraat, rude hai but bahot acha hai Viraat.
Boss:(for her sake) ok sorry tumhare viraat ko kuch nahin bolunga.
Maanvi:(inmind) Kaise bolun, main aur viraat Kya hai?
Boss:(ask) are you there?
Maanvi: yes buddy:(ask) money return nahin Karun toh Kya Karun buddy
Boss:(ask) wait and watch. And plz keep it secret. Don't tell even viraat.
Maanvi: yes buddy. I have to talk Doctor.
Boss: ok.
Maanvi went to talk doctors.
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Back to hospital room!
Viraat and Dadi talking.
Maanvi:(returns and watch viraat.inmind) sorry Viraat, Maine boss se friendship break nahin ki. I am not able to hurt him
Viraat:(turn and saw her) bahot late ho gayi.
Maanvi: doctor k paas aur BHI patient the. Isliye late hogaya hai.
Viraat:(ask) doctor ne Kya kaha?
Maanvi: nothing much. One month k liye liquid diet Lena hai Dadi ko.
Viraat:(jokes) Dadi hi kyun. Tum BHI diet karo. Atleast mere muscle theek rahenge
Maanvi:(tells) tumhe toh ghar jake dekhungi.(felt dizzy as she didn't eat and stumble)
Viraat:(safe her and feed her water)
Maanvi:(look him)
Viraat:(aswell)
Romantic song play in background
After some hrs they realise their position,get separate.
Dadi:(ask) kyun rukgaye, ache lagre the
Virman act to be shy.
Dadi:(ask) tum log ne kuch khaya?
Virman: yes.princess/ Dadi.
Driver:(comes to meet dadi)
Dadi: phir se Khao. Maanvi tum bhI, nahin toh ghar Rehna padega.
Virmaan:(went from their)
Dadi: bahot ache bache Hain. Kash woh BHI Aisa hota.
Driver: janedijiye Dadi, jo nahin hoSakta uske liye soch na acha nahin hai.
Dadi:(smiles) jaanti hun
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In canteen!
Virman eating with eachother.
Viraat:(ask) Kya baat hai? Lost lagri ho?
Maanvi:(makes excuse)tired hun.
Viraat:(ask) hospital main ek room Lun? Tumhare liye.
Maanvi: no need. Eat karungi toh alright hojaungi.
Viraat:(smiles)are you sure?
Maanvi: you know what? You surprise me again. Tumhara Dadi k liye love deke acha laga?
Viraat:(tells) I loved my dadi so much, jab woh chalegaya upar, toh hamesha unse milne ki wish karta tha.:(normally) but jab yeh Dadi se Mila toh. Laga woh Dadi milgaye. Aur Jabse dadi k baremain pata Chala. Acha nahin laga
Maanvi:(with smiles) aur tumse Dadi ko chodke jana NahI Hua:(smiles)
Viraat:(smiles in agreement)
Maanvi: you are so caring.
Viraat:(tells) caring toh tum BHI ho. But emotionally weak ho. So be strong with others.
Maanvi:(inmind) kahin viraat ko pata toh nahin chalgaya.
Viraat:(wave his hands infront of her. By calling her name) maanvi
Maanvi:(comeback from thoughts) haan.
Viraat:(ask) Kahan khogayi?
Maanvi:(indirectly ask) tumhari Nia se baat hui? Jab main doctor se milne gayi.
Viraat:(tells) main princess k sath tha.
Maanvi:(tells) Thank god?
Viraat:(ask) kyun Thank god?
Maanvi:(tells) kuch nahin let's eat now.
They eat food.
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Back to hospital room!
Dadi and driver talking.
Virman:(returns) princess/Dadi.
Dadi:(tells) acha Hua tum log agaye.
Viraat:(jokingly tells) kya baat hai princess. Waiting and all.
Dadi: tum log ne theek se khaya?
Viraat: of course princess.
Dadi: tum log hamare ghar jao na bachon. Aram karo.
Viraat: hum jayenge but princess k sath.
Maanvi:(tells) haan. Humlog ko aise acha lagra hai. Jaise picnic k liye aye Hain. Waisa maaza aara raha hai.
Viraat: I agree, mujhe toh aapke Sath matlab apni princess k sath Rehna hai. Aap jahan main wahan.(sing song tum jahan main wahan)
Maanvi:(getsurprise to hear his singing)
Dadi:(told) bahot acha gaate ho..
Viraat:(tells) thankyou princess
Dadi: Maanvi tumne bataya nahin viraat Gaata BHI hai.
Maanvi:(makes excuse) Dadi Maine hi teach Kiya viraat ko. Nahin toh itna bura gaata tha k. Sabke kaan dard karte the.
Viraat:(getshock by her excuse) elders k samne jhoot bolta hai koi?
Maanvi: haan aur woh tum ho.
Viraat:(tells)tumhe toh main ghar main dekhunga.
Maanvi:(tells) tumhari eyes phone hai? Jo network nahin Milta. Yahan? Isliye ghar par dekhna hai.
Viraat: haha haha funny joke.
Maanvi:(tells) sabse funny tum ho?
They tease eachother.
Dadi smiles on them.































































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Posted: 7 years ago
#10
Fantastic updates dear.
Loved it.
It was really mind-blowing and superb update.
Loved each and every part.
Read all parts in one go that much I liked this story.
Loved the chemistry of virman so much.
Loved virman staying together with princess dadi.
It is so sweet and their cute fights I loved the most.
Loved Diwali celebration so much.
Wow both virmans got job in same company but boss is devil as he has bad eye on manvi.
Loved virmans become friends and virat comes to know about boss intention.
Loved virat care for manvi.
Story is turning very interesting.
Waiting for next part.
Take care dear.

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