Arshi OS: Why does it have to be me?

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

katj

@katj

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Wow so heartfelt story. Awesome OS

Quote

DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: tokyo
is it possible for you to make into may a small SS.

Unfortunately no, I just had this in mind. However, if you liked reading this, I am writing a small story Called Bin Tere...

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=5012732

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Sarita

@sarita_barun

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#33

You have a beautiful way with words 😭 👏

Quote

J P

@TwilightStar_JP

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#34

A track that should have genuinely been on the show! Lovely write up! You've penned it down so well! Kudos man.

Cheers

Quote

Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#35

Wow.. wonderful shot.. loved this strong Khushi..

Quote

sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#36

Emotional and beautiful one shot.

Quote

Shilpa

@HerFiction

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#37

Felt sad and the emotions are conveyed very well

Quote

Nitya

@nik1310

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#38

Wonderfully written OS,Khushi's words in the end, brilliant. The ending too was good.👍🏼

Quote

Zayneb

@Zayneb.S

Beginner

Posted: 6 years ago

#39

Such a Beautiful piece.

the topic is a bit daring, and I don't think many writers do it justice, but you did.

Your writing was simple and seamless. The words fluent and in total harmony.

The emotions beyond the words so touching and sincere.

I love the decision Khushi took, to stand for herself for once
I love the fact that Arnav didn't try to force her to stay and for put her needs above his own.

I love the fact that Nani was silently contemplating Anjali's weakness of characters and standing against it and taking Khushi's side for once.
It would've been nice had you decided to write another part or two.. but it doesnt make it as a lone standing OS any less Beautiful. WIth it ending on a hopeful note, we can surely rely on our imagination for a happier ending.

Quote

Full Moon

@Mimima

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#40

Wonderful OS. .. heart wrenching..😭

Quote

1 2 3 4 5

Arshi

Arshi OS: Why does it have to be me? - Page 4

Related Topics

Explore Topics