Such a Beautiful piece.
the topic is a bit daring, and I don't think many writers do it justice, but you did.
Your writing was simple and seamless. The words fluent and in total harmony.
The emotions beyond the words so touching and sincere.
I love the decision Khushi took, to stand for herself for once
I love the fact that Arnav didn't try to force her to stay and for put her needs above his own.
I love the fact that Nani was silently contemplating Anjali's weakness of characters and standing against it and taking Khushi's side for once.
It would've been nice had you decided to write another part or two.. but it doesnt make it as a lone standing OS any less Beautiful. WIth it ending on a hopeful note, we can surely rely on our imagination for a happier ending.
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