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Nisha0604

@Nisha0604

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Posted: 7 years ago

#111

Hey BTW

I think Sosy was somewhat of a closing section/last act when the twins go to college 15+years from the twin tales and Lasya

ID yes, I have to think abt how to steer that story forward

This one was not a long one anyway, his repentance, her realization, the way they in which they acknowledged their need for each other when he went to Ullal to bring her, and then revisited Ullal as her husband were all indications of moving forward as a couple

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VeeIyer

@VeeIyer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: Nisha0604
I just posted the new story
Vani

Sure

Let me think about wrapping up Indradhanush

Thank you for responding Nisha.

its just that the characters of every story you have written make a place in our hearts and minds and though it is great to have more and more protagonists share the space, one is always left wondering if the previous ones have come a full circle ?!

I have been going back to old updates just for a feel good feeling ( !! ) and even then feel a vacuum when I read the antics of our Sosy twins or read about Nihar's traumas.

Now we can add Ashvin and Trisha to that list !!

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VeeIyer

@VeeIyer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: Nisha0604
Hey BTW
I think Sosy was somewhat of a closing section/last act when the twins go to college 15+years from the twin tales and Lasya

ID yes, I have to think abt how to steer that story forward

This one was not a long one anyway, his repentance, her realization, the way they in which they acknowledged their need for each other when he went to Ullal to bring her, and then revisited Ullal as her husband were all indications of moving forward as a couple

Yes...I totally accept that Sosy was coasting along with all loose ends tied up. I will get slaughtered by the die hards for saying that.

ID...in my head I have convinced mysef that Nihar allowing Suvi to get into bed with him in the last chapter, is a fitting end Have beent trying to convince Pritee on the same too !!

In Wave, Ashvin has just quit and cut off the family umbilical cord, so it promises a lot more.

I wish you the very best in whatever you write Nisha and thanks again for listening and responding !!

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Nisha0604

@Nisha0604

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#114

Oh yeah

I agree I could take the story further with Ashvin trying to find a job, his past chasing him in the process. How Mandira admits or accepts Trisha

Sure there is stuff that can be explored

Let me give it some thought

This new idea just occurred to me on the fly and I ran with it

I will think about ID for a day or two and maybe write the next chapter

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VeeIyer

@VeeIyer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: Nisha0604
Oh yeah
I agree I could take the story further with Ashvin trying to find a job, his past chasing him in the process. How Mandira admits or accepts Trisha

Sure there is stuff that can be explored

Let me give it some thought

This new idea just occurred to me on the fly and I ran with it
I will think about ID for a day or two and maybe write the next chapter

Thanks again !!

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Sonal Gupta

@sonalgupta2004

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#116

CHANDAN KA PALNA
NEW STORY
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jaschick

@jaschick

Voyager

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Posted: 7 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: Nisha0604
Oh yeah
I agree I could take the story further with Ashvin trying to find a job, his past chasing him in the process. How Mandira admits or accepts Trisha

Sure there is stuff that can be explored

Let me give it some thought

This new idea just occurred to me on the fly and I ran with it
I will think about ID for a day or two and maybe write the next chapter

Thank you ! It will be great if you can tie the loose ends in "Wave". 😊 This request is not just from me but also one of your admirers who has been reading "Wave" incognito!

Inspired by your Besan Ladoo and moong dhal halwa, she was making different sweets for Diwali as well.

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Nisha0604

@Nisha0604

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#118

To Care.. and not

He was at work before Chirag was that morning, he had tried to wake Trisha but it was her day "off" she claimed

"Off from what?" he leaned over nuzzling

"Only working people can get holiday or what?" she looked at him accusingly

He grinned

"Umm.. no... you are right... you deserve one too"

"I slept after you no?" she pointed

"Yeah... what about that huh?"

"I read so many journals nothing is moving forward" she said glumly

He slid his hands under her arms, she giggled ticklish

"U are warm... and(he sucked her earlobe) and delicious.. like a lava cake" he whispered

"What is lava cake?" he flattened his hand on her shoulder and created a friction as he rubbed on the smooth satiny nightshirt she wore

"Its not silk" she said coyly

"Bummer" he groaned bending down, she craned her neck far far away so she wouldnt encounter those lips

He continued to massage firmly and softly alternating causing a tingling in her chest, his warm touch melting her bones into noodles

"Ashwinnn"

"Trishaaa" he repeated her name

The soft satiny fabric encasing the mounds now sparkling from the tips, like a teepee..

His hand moved down and he was weighing her... warm fingers cupping under her curve as he watched her expression

"My hands were so cold" he grinned

"U just lie and cheat" she said hoarsely

"I never cheat" he kissed her collarbone

"U cheated with Leela no?" she reminded holding him on her form tight, unwilling to let go

"Oh that..." "I was misleading her actually" his body gently shook as he laughed on her skin

She arched as she felt his smooth chin on her now sliding blouse

"thats the way you do it? "You care means... means Leela wins... and Trisha loses" she said shocked

"I was hoping you would fight with me about why you lost" he muttered laughing under his breath, reaching with his thumb to feel her tip

this time a sound escaped her control, a visible shiver as tiny goosebumps formed all over her soft arms, his eyes smoldering with sensuous curiosity.

His tongue finding hers and the conversation ending abruptly, allowing her to pull his glasses off his face.

"Go back to sleep if you want" he said when he pulled away, struggling over his glasses as she fought to hold on to it, letting go when she saw his hand reach inside her satin nightshirt

She flung a pillow at him, bad aim, bad throw it struck a sofa by the window

"Bye Trish" he nodded

"You are here early" Chirag sat down noisily, and sipped his coffee

"I will cut to the chase... I want to transition everything soon... you can talk with Dadu or I can and he can help me find a replacement

Chirag spit his coffee out on to his keyboard

"what the hell mannn" he was upset

"No... I am not kidding... and no I am not trying to jolt you out of slumber"

"Hua kya yaar... you guys all seemed happy last night"

"Well... there is happiness and joy... I would say the latter was missing" Ashvin said banally

"Matlab?"

"Umm... dont worry I bet whoever he appoints will most likely be a guy that invented franchising" he could not hide the cynicism in his tone

"HUA KYA?"

"Umm... nothing... Ive been thinking of doing something else for a while... this time is it" he said "I can address all open issues, all pending apps I can stay on for how ever long Dadu wants me to"

"Aunty ko bataya?"

"I am sure you will text her" Ashvin's clenched jaw indicated his displeasure

"This is shitt mannn"

"Dont curse too soon... he might hand the reins to you" Ashvin said pleasantly

"Tu chhod dega to I mean Cuisine Craft is the only way to get his blessings boss"

"I agree and disagree I guess... He will give it away if he wants to, and ... umm... I am at a point now... where I am beyond caring" bitterness tinging his voice a bit

"U want it or not"

"I never really wanted it... I was playing along with Ma..." he lowered his gaze

"This is big yaar... shittt" Chirag looked at his phone

"I know you are itching to text her... you can... thats it man... I will see you at Noon for the monthly revenue roundup"

Chirag staggered...

"watch it dude"

"Oz and your friends agree?"

"Nobody knows"

"What about Trisha?"

Ashvin HATED the sound of his wife's name coming from Chirag

"Lets talk in a bit" he cut him off

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Sonal Gupta

@sonalgupta2004

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#119

Oh wooow
His anger don't seems to slow down
But I think he should...
He is possessive of Trisha.. I can understand but he is taking that possessiveness way too far by enving everyone who even takes her name
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