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Aadha ishq aadha hai aadha ho jayega... There is half love, and the other half will happen...Part 1

This TS is inspired by the malayalam movie Arike which itself was inspired by Sunil Gangopadhyay's Bengali work.Though I got the idea from this movie my TS is entirely different.


An IT company..all were busy with their work.One boy and one girl were exchanging romantic glances with each other.They were Uday Veer and Purvi.Their colleague Manyata noticed it with a sweet smile.
She went near them.
Manyata:All are busy working.But you both are romancing.
Uday Purvi blushed.
Purvi:Today is Valentine's day..lovers day.So we can romance.Right?
Manyata smiled.
Uday:But because of the busy schedule no time for romance.Hoping to romance at the Valentine's party at night.
Uday Purvi were blushing.

Purvi:Bu the way Manyata..are you not coming for the Valentine's party?
Manyata:No...I am not interested.
Manyata walked off.

Manyata was having snacks in the canteen.She was dull.Uday went near her.
Uday:Manyata...
Manya:UdayVeer...
Uday:We all are working together since last 3 years.We became best friends too.But you never told me why you always avoid Valentine's party.
Manya:It's just that I am not interested.I don't believe in love.
Uday:Why you don't believe in love?Tell me the reason.
Manyata was silent.


Uday:Actually in the first meeting itself I had felt that something was bothering you.But i never asked you about it thinking that it will hurt you.But now since we are thick friends I feel that I should talk to you about it.Don't suppress your pain.Open your heart and burst out all unwanted memories.
If you don't share it with me i will think that you don't consider me as your friend.
Manyata became upset.

"I was a simple small town girl.I was madly in love with Akash.I loved and trusted him more than anyone else in the world.Our love blossomed.

But suddenly he started distancing himself from me.I could'nt bear it.Suddenly with a shock I came to know that his marriage is fixed.I decided to confront him".

Flash back...

Manyata asked Akash crying:Akash..is it true that your marriage is fixed?
Akash:Yes Manyata.I am going to marry.
Manyata was shocked:How can you do this to me Akash?We are in love,
Akash:You love me.But I never loved you.
Manyata was shocked:What?
Akash:You were just time pass for me.We should be practical in life.Loving you and marrying you will never benefit me.But marrying a rich girl will benefit me.That's what I am doing now.Leave my life and never come after me.

Akash left leaving Manyata in a depressing state.She was shattered.
She cried:How could Akash do this to me?


Present...

Manyata was in tears.
Uday felt sad.He wiped her tears.

Manya:Since then I don't believe in love.I admire only one couple in this world.That's you and Purvi.I don't think any other couple are in deep love like you both.
Uday:Yes we both love each other madly.But Manyata...all I can say is don't waste your life by crying over that cheater.Just because he cheated you it does'nt mean that all men are cheaters.There may be a time you will believe in love.So come for the Valentine's party.
Manya:But...
Uday:No excuse.You have to come.What if you will meet the love of your life at Valentine's party?
Manya:I am sure that i will never fall in love.But i will come for the party as you forced me.
Uday:That's nice.

Purvi was picking up a gown to wear for the party.
Suddenly her mother Urmila came:Purvi...
Purvi:Mom..I have to go for the Valentine's party with Uday.So I have no time to talk to you.
Urmila:Purvi...stop hanging out with that Uday Veer.I told you many times.
Purvi:But I told you that I love him.
Urmila:Stop loving him.Because we are fixing your marriage with a top Business Tycoon named Arjun.
Purvi was shocked:What nonsense!No way.I don't want to marry Arjun.
Urm:It's your luck that a rich man came to marry you.He saw your dance at the Town Hall and fell for you.Don't leave him.If you marry him you can live like a Princess.
Purvi:I don't want to live like a Princess.
Urmila was angry:You...!
Her father Parag came:Purvi...Arjun is here to see you.
Purvi was stunned:Why is he here?He has already seen me.Right?Then why again he is coming here to see me?
Parag:It's an official visit beta.Atleast come and meet Arjun.Otherwise it will be like insulting those innocent people.

Purvi:Ok..I will come.
Parag Urmila were relieved.
Purvi:But I can't marry him.
Parag:Ok..I will make them understand it afterwards.
Purvi:Sure dad?
Parag:Yes.
Urmila got irritated.
Urmila:Wear a saree and go.
Purvi:No way.I will go in this attire.Jeans and top.
Urmila:Oh no..so embarrassing.

Purvi:If you don't want me to go near Arjun in jeans top I will not go and meet him.
Urm:Oh this girl is completely spoilt.
Purvi smirked:I am your daughter.So I am spoilt.
Urmila was embarrassed.Parag felt like laughing.
Purvi went to meet Arjun.Arjun was lost in her beauty.
Arjun:Hi Purvi...I have seen you at the dance show.You were fabulous.
Purvi:Thanks.
Arjun:That time itself I decided that I will marry only you as I fell in love with you at first sight.

Purvi became uncomfortable:Please don't be adamant about marrying me.Because it's just not possible.
Arjun was confused:Why?
Purvi:Because I love someone else.
Arjun was shocked.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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brilliant starting
I feel really bad for manyata 🥺
that bloody aakash just time pass with her & left her for rich girl so disgusting 😡
uday is so right manyata shouldn't waste her time for that moron 👏
frankly speaking I don't like that purvi girl reel & real life 👎🏼
its look like now uday is going to get heart break as purvi parents want her to marry arjun
who is rich guy & like her
continue plz
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting start dear
Liked it!!
Manyata was adoring veer and purvi's endurance for each other. On confrontation Manyata shared to her sad love story with veer. Veer asked her to move on in life and not to sulk over Akash. On other hand Arjun fell in love with purvi and asked her hand for marriage. Purvi directly confronted Arjun and said she loves someone else.
Thanks for the pm !
Looking forward to the next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing start loved it can't wait for next part thank you for pm.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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congrats on the new TS! thanks 4 da pm! superb update! well written
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congrats for the new story. Uday-Purvi scenes are romantic. The conversation between manyata and uday was touching. Manyata does not want to love again because she was betrayed. Hope she finds her true love. Shocking that Purvi's marriage is fixed with Arjun. Loved Purvi telling it openly to him saying that she loves Arjun. You have put SNS casts as Purvi's parents in this FF. Nice to see the change.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congratulations for new story 👏
Interesting start
Continue soon plz
Thanks for pm
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Awesome update dear
Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome Chapter

Aakash left Manyata for a richer girl that was awful
and it seems Purvi will also get married to a rich guy
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Amazing start.
Loved it.
Very well written.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Thanks for d pm:)

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