Aadha ishq aadha hai aadha ho jayega ManVeer ArVi Alternative end pg6 - Page 4

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Posted: 7 years ago
#31
Amazing update.
Loved it.
Very beautifully written..

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Posted: 7 years ago
#32
Nice update dear
Liked it!!
Purvi opened up about her marriage with Arjun to Uday and said they never meant to be. Purvi gave her nod to marry Arjun. Though Arjun was sad but was happy that purvi choose him and he was ready to wait for his love to be reciprocated. With time Uday realised his feelings for Manyata and was ready to wait for Manyata's yes. Finally both the couple tied knot and were cherishing their love with their perfect soulmate.
Nice ending dear


My favorite character is Arjun. Inspite of knowing that purvi loves someone else he was ready to wait for her till eternity.
Favorite couple : Veer and purvi.
Favorite scene: purvi confronting Veer about her marriage proposal with Arjun was emotional.
:))
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Posted: 7 years ago
#33
Felt bad for Uday when Purvi told him about moving on with Arjun but glad that Manyata stood for him and Uday moved on with her. Arvi scenes post wedding is romantic. My fav char is Manyata and fav couple are uday and manyata.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#34
Thanku very much.Can u plz tell y u liked Veer Purvi the most as a couple?

Originally posted by: anu5

Nice update dear

Liked it!!
Purvi opened up about her marriage with Arjun to Uday and said they never meant to be. Purvi gave her nod to marry Arjun. Though Arjun was sad but was happy that purvi choose him and he was ready to wait for his love to be reciprocated. With time Uday realised his feelings for Manyata and was ready to wait for Manyata's yes. Finally both the couple tied knot and were cherishing their love with their perfect soulmate.
Nice ending dear


My favorite character is Arjun. Inspite of knowing that purvi loves someone else he was ready to wait for her till eternity.
Favorite couple : Veer and purvi.
Favorite scene: purvi confronting Veer about her marriage proposal with Arjun was emotional.
:))

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Posted: 7 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Thanku very much.Can u plz tell y u liked Veer Purvi the most as a couple?

Manyata who had backstory about her love life was inspired by Veer and purvi's love for each other. Their love story and love had been inspiration for others but couldn't end up together as soulmate. I felt they should have been together !! ( Just my prespective).
:))
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36
Don't worry.UdayVeer Purvi would end up together.As Mansi requested I have already written an alternative ending for this story with Uday Purvi as the end couple.Since you too like them I will dedicate the 2nd ending to you too.

Originally posted by: anu5

Manyata who had backstory about her love life was inspired by Veer and purvi's love for each other. Their love story and love had been inspiration for others but couldn't end up together as soulmate. I felt they should have been together !! ( Just my prespective).
:))

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Posted: 7 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Don't worry.UdayVeer Purvi would end up together.As Mansi requested I have already written an alternative ending for this story with Uday Purvi as the end couple.Since you too like them I will dedicate the 2nd ending to you too.

Thanks!!
Glad u came up with alternative ending as well. Looking forward.
😊


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Posted: 7 years ago
#38
Both couples happy, so all is well.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39

Aadha ishq aadha hai aadha ho jayega... There is half love, and the other half will happen...Part 3(2nd version)

This is the alternate version of Part3.I dedicate this part to Mansi and anu5 as they want Uday Purvi union.


Uday's lips shivered:You agreed to marry Arjun?



Purvi became upset:I had to agree Uday.The circumstance made me accept Arjun's proposal.I am not a strong girl to go against my parents to marry you Uday.
Uday's eyes became wet:Is our love that weak Purvi?
Purvi's eyes became teary:May be.
Manyata who was standing behind them got shocked hearing it.
She yelled at Purvi:How easily you forgot UdayVeer seeing a rich man?I thought you both are the most loving couple in the world...in fact the only romantic couple in the world.But no...everyone drifts away from love for money.

Purvi shed tears:Please don't curse me Uday.

Uday wept:No Purvi.I wish you all the best.
Purvi:Thank you.I wish you get the best girl in this world.
Uday smiled tearfully.
Purvi:This may be our last meeting.I came here to give my resignation letter.
Uday Manyata were shocked.
Purvi bid a tearful good bye.
Uday burst into tears:Now onwards I can never see Purvi.She has gone away from my life.
Manyata tried to wipe his tears.He embraced her crying.Manyata was stunned.Slowly she embraced him back to console him.

Purvi met Arjun.
Arjun:Why did you call me?
Purvi:You told me that if I want to be with you I can always come to you.
Arjun:Yes.
Purvi:Did you really mean it?
Arjun:Yes.I really meant it.Because I will always love you.
Purvi:Then I have come to you Arjun.I am ready to marry you.
Arjun could'nt believe it:Purvi...you are serious?
Purvi:Yes..I am very serious.
Arjun:I am so happy that my dream is coming true.
Suddenly he became dull.
Arjun:But you said you love someone else.
Purvi:Yes.But I broke up with him.

Arjun:Why?
Purvi:Because I realized that we were never meant for each other.I think you are the one who is made by God for me.
Arjun became very happy.
Purvi:But please don't expect too much Arjun.I still don't love you.But I will try my level best.
Arjun became upset.
Arj:It's ok Purvi.I understand that you need time to forget your previous relationship.Though it is half love in our relationship I am sure that one day the other half will happen.My love will surely make you love me one day.I have full faith in my love.
Purvi did not know what to say.

Namkin Si Baat Hain
Har Nayi Si Baat Mein
Teri Khusboo Chal Rahi
Hai Jo Mere Saath Mein

Arjun Purvi's wedding day...


Purvi was very gloomy.


Arjun's face was veiled.
The wedding took place.Purvi was depressed.
Suddenly they all saw Arjun among the guests with a shock.
Urmila:Arjun...you are there?Then who married Purvi?
Purvi stared at the bride groom.He unveiled his face.
It was UdayVeer.
Purvi could'nt believe her eyes:Uday!
Uday holds her hand.
Uday:Yes..Your Uday.We united Purvi.
They shared a happy teary eye lock.
Urmila could'nt bear it.
Parag:How did bride groom swapping happen?
Suddenly Manyata came before them:I will say.Seeing UdayVeer upset about his separation from Purvi as a friend I could'nt bear his pain.So I decided to talk to Arjun about UdayVeer and Purvi.


Flashback:

Manyata met Arjun.
Manyata:Hi I am Manyata.Purvi's friend..
Arjun:Hi...
Manyata smiled:Hi
Actually I came here as Purvi's well wisher.
Arjun,i want to tell an important matter about Purvi.That's why I came here to meet you.
Arjun:What is that?
Manyata:Purvi loves a guy named UdayVeer.He is my friend too.
Arjun:But Purvi said they broke up as they realized that they don't suit each other..
Manyata:So you knew about it?Purvi had told you everything?
Arjun:Yes.
Many:But they did'nt break up because they felt that they are not meant for each other.I am sure that Purvi did'nt want to break up with UdayVeer.Till you came to see her she was very happy with Udayveer.But the next day she broke up with Uday.I was very angry with her.But her teary eyes haunted me.Then I realized that Purvi was sacrificing her love for her parents.
Arjun was stunned:What?She sacrificed her love?
Manyata:Yes.Arjun...please don't marry Purvi.She will never be happy with you as her heart is full of UdayVeer.If you really love her please unite her with UdayVeer.Only then she will be happy in her life and only you can make her happy.
Arjun's heart was pierced.But he controlled his tears.
Arjun:I am sorry.I never knew all this.If I knew it I would never have agreed to marry Purvi.

I want to meet udayVeer.
Many:Ok.

Manyata took Arjun to Uday.
Arjun:I am Arjun.Purvi's fianc.
Uday's face became dull:Purvi's fiance?
Arj:Don't be angry with me.I am just her fianc..not her husband.Amd I assure you that I won't snatch yoir Purvi from you.I won't marry her.
Uday was stunned.
Arj:I promise that I will unite you and Purvi.
Uday was surprised.Manyata smiled.
Uday:Thank you so much.You are great.

Arjun Manyata met each other again secretly.
Arjun:If I refuse to marry Purvi now it won't be easy for Purvi to go back to Uday.People may even say that it's because I left her that she went back to Uday.It should'nt happen.
Manyata thought:Arjun is such a nice man who does'nt want anyone to insult Purvi whom he loves.
Arjun:So let Uday marry Purvi on the wedding mandap.
Manyata was shocked:What?What do you mean?
Arjun:Bride groom swapping.
Manyata was stunned.

Present...

Arjun:As we planned Uday took my place on the mandap and married Purvi.
Urmila shouted:You cheater!You played with our emotions.And Uday also fooled us.
Arjun:I did'nt cheat anyone.Whatever I did was to make love win.I am proud that my activity united the love birds Uday and Purvi.
Manyata:And why are you blaming Uday too aunty?Uday just loves your daughter unconditionally.Actually you should feel bad for separating your daughter from the person she loves.
Urmila became upset.
Parag:Urmi..please accept Purvi and Uday.After all Purvi's happiness matters the most.
Purvi wept:Mom..
Urmila lost her control and hugged Purvi crying.
Uday:Uncle...aunty..won't you bless us?
Parag Urmila blessed Uday Purvi.
Purvi to Arjun:I have no words to thank you Arjun.I am really grateful to you for giving me my jewel Uday.
Arjun:Don't thank me Purvi.I did it as lovers have to unite.
Purvi to Manyata:You are our true friend.
Uday:Yes.No one would get such a nice friend like you Manyata.
Manyata smiled.
Arjun Manyata:Happy married life.
Uday Purvi smiled.


Purvi wore a beautiful saree at night.Uday was lost in her beauty.
He pinned her against the wall passionately:You are so beautiful Purvi.I want to suck your beauty.
Purvi blushed:I am yours Uday.Only yours.
They both looked at each other sensually.

Halka Halka Rang Beete Kal Ka
Gehra Gehra Kal Ho Jayega
Ho Jayega

They drowned in passionate romance.

Aadha Ishq Aadha Hai
Aadha Ho Jayega
Kadmo Se Milo Ka
Vada Ho Jayega

Manav to Arjun:I feel proud of you my son.You did a great thing.
Arjun smiled.
Archana:But who will be my bahu beta?

Manyata comes into Arjun's mind.

Flash back...

Arjun Manyata met each other.
Arjun:Finally we succeeding in uniting Uday and Purvi and also convincing Parag uncle and Urmila aunty to accept Uday.
Manyata:Thanks Arjun for uniting them.They both really love each other.They both had really scattered into pieces.Really you did a great thing by uniting them.
Arjun:Thanks to you also Manyata for supporting me to unite them.
Manyata smiled.
Arjun:I am leaving for America next week and I am taking my parents too with me.
Manyata is shocked.She becomes upset.
Manyata:But why?
Arjun:I have decided to extend my business to America too.
Manyata:Can't you avoid leaving india?
Arjun:But what is the need of staying here?
Manyata stammered:What if someone in India needs you?
Arjun:But who wants me here?
Manyata was sweating.
Manya:Me.
Arjun was stunned.

Aadha Ishq Aadha Hai
Aadha Ho Jayega
Kadmo Se Milo Ka
Vada Ho Jayega


Manya:I don't know why...but I don't want you to leave India.I don't want to lose a friend like you.
Please don't go.
Arjun:I have to go Manyata for my business.
Manyata becomes upset.
Arjun:But that does'nt mean that our friendship ends here.Ours will be eternal friendship.I will visit you very often.Because I too love being with you.You have become my dearest friend in a few days.
Manyata was very happy.


Beshumar Raatein
Behisab Baatein

They shared a sweet eye lock.


Pass Aate Aate Gum Ho Jati Hai

Present...
Arjun smiled:I am not sure who will be your daughter in law mom.It's yet not clear.
Archana:Arjun,why can't that girl be Manyata?
Arjun had a naughty smile on his face:Maybe.she understands me lot.
Archana smiled:Arjun..why don't you admit that you have already met your soulmate and that is Manyata.
Arjun blushed.
Manav:Archana..see our son is shy.
They both smiled while Arjun was shy.



After a year...
Arjun came back from America to visit Manyata.
Manyata waited at the airport to receive him.
Seeing Manyata Arjun ran towards her.Manyata's face too blossomed seeing Arjun.
Arjun embraced her.She was shy.
Arj:As I promised I came to visit you.
Manya smiled:I can't tell you how happy I am seeing you.
Arjun smiled:I will go home and freshen up.Let us go on a date.
Manyata smiled:Sure.


Manyata wore a beautiful dress to go for the date with Arjun.Arjun was lost in her beauty.
Arjun looked at her deeply:You look so beautiful Manyata.
Seeing the way he looked at her she became shy.

Fika Fika Pal Betein Kal Ka
Behka Behka Kal Ho Jayega


Arjun took her to a flowery garden.When they entered flower petals fell over them.


Ho Jayega
Aadha Ishq Aadha Hai
Aadha Ho Jayega
Kadmo Se Milo Ka
Vada Ho Jayega

Manyata:Wow!You made this arrangement?
Arjun:Yes.
She smiled:It's awesome.
He gave her roses.She smiled.
Arjun:Manyata...Being in a beautiful friendship with you I don't know how and when I fell for you.Before going to US itself I was attracted to you unknowingly.But I did'nt understand that it was really love.When I was in US I missed you terribly and then I realized that I have fallen in love with you.

Manyata became very happy.

Aadha Ishq Aadha Hai
Aadha Ho Jayega
Kadmo Se Milo Ka
Vada Ho Jayega

Adha Ishq...
Manya::Same here Arjun.I don't know how I fell for you.When you decided to go to US I felt the pain of losing you.But I did'nt know that it was love.Infact I never thought that I will ever be able to fall in love again after getting betrayed in my previous relationship.When you were in US B every moment I felt like seeing you.But now I know that I too love you.

Arjun was very happy.

Intezzaar Sa Hai
Imtehaan Sa Hai
Itminaan Sa Hai
Kya Hai Na Jane


Arj:Manyata...will you marry me?
Manyata nodded blushing:Yes.Please make me yours Arjun.

Itraa Rahi Hai
Itna Hui Hai
Itraa Rahi Hai
Kaise Na Jane


Arjun Manyata got into a sweet embrace.

Chalka Chalka
Pal Beete Kal Ka
Tehra Tehra Kal Ho Jayega
Ho Jayega


Arjun Manyata got married.

Aadha Ishq Aadha Hai
Aadha Ho Jayega
Kadmo Se Milo Ka
Vada Ho Jayega
Purvi:I can't believe that Arjun and Manyata are a couple now.
Uday:Yes..never expected it.
Purvi:But we are very happy for both of you.
Uday-Purvi:Happy married life.
Arjun Manyata smiled.


Manyata waited for Arjun on the bed.He came closer to her and opened her hair.They looked at each other sensually.

Aadha Ishq Aadha Hai
Aadha Ho Jayega

Arjun moved towards her lips with his.She blushed.


Slowly she closed her eyes.

Kadmo Se Milo Ka
Vada Ho Jayega

Adha Ishq(BAND BAAJA BAARAAT).


Arjun Manyata and Uday Purvi showered love upon each other every moment and lived happily.

The End





Edited by jasminerahul - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#40
Loved this version more dear !!
Liked it!!
Manyata bring true friend helped Uday and purvi to find their true love . Arjun to helped her in reuniting very and purvi by swapping groom. Though purvi's mother was unhappy with turn of events she blessed her daughter and SIL vowing to purvi's happiness. Meantime Arjun to found his soulmate in Manyata after his return from US arjun proposed Manyata. Both the couple found their true soulmate and were cherishing their love with their respective soulmate.
Nice pics dear !!
Thanks for the coming up with alternate ending dear
:))

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