Yours Forever..(AK) PG95 **NEW Update** - Page 11

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Posted: 18 years ago

[quote=angullgrl91]hey. i just caught up 2 ur fan fic. i luv da story so far. its totally awesome. cont soon. cant wait 2 c wats so special about the door opening. oh well- i guess ill find out in da nex part. [/quote]

thnx...glad u liked it...heres the nxt prt


PART 10:

Nisha opened the door and greeted him wid a smile. They went inside and sat on the sofa w8ing 4 kripa. Nisha asked Angad if he wanted nething and went to kitchen to get him a glass of water. Meanwhile kripa called out nisha's name but seeing her busy Angad made his way to kripa's room.

She was standing in front of her mirror struggling wid zip of her top. Angad grinned and approached her. He zipped her dress tenderly. . kripa turned to thank Nisha as she thought it to be her, but to her shock she saw Angad standing instead of Nisha. She spoke up angrily;

"What the h*** r u doing in my room"

"Actually I came to take back my clothes" Angad stammered.

Kripa handed him the bag that contained his clothes…she had washed and ironed them. Nisha entered the room hearing the noises…it was then Angad noticed that both the gals were all dressed up. He asked them if they were going' newhere and Nisha told that they were going for shopping. It's the best opportunity to spend sum time wid Nisha, Angad thought and so he offered them a ride. Nisha agreed to it immediately while kripa merely nodded. They went to the car and Angad offered Nisha to sit with him in the front while kripa sat at the back. Angad was adjusting his seat-belt wen his eyes fell on the rear-view mirror reflecting kripa's eyes.

Her eyes were beautiful, no doubt abt that, they were an odd and beautiful combo of green and brown…they were so deep and the way her long eyelashes…Angad came out of his trance as Nisha nudged him 2 start driving…he kept glancing at the mirror during whole ride, unknowingly…

Angad stopped his car in front of a huge showroom and all 3 stepped inside.

It was 17th set of dress that Nisha has got opened but she doesn't seem to like nething till now…Angad was fed up by now.

That was it…he cudn't stand this ne longer, he will do wat he likes the most…bug kripa. He glanced around only to find kripa missing…

Duh... wat hel* of a clever girl to leave him alone to deal wid this shopping maniac.

He slipped out to find her.

Kripa glanced at her watch, there were still 25 min that Nisha finishes wid her shopping…she always took at least 45 min to buy one thing. She had already bought herself two books and now she was wandering in leather's dept.

She suddenly spotted an over-coat cum jacket…classy she thought as she took it out from its hanger. It was little dark brown wid a hint of peach and long deep neck line was made of soft false fur and a broad belt to go wid it. She tried it on in front of mirror…it indeed looked nice. She saw the price tag…6000bucks! She kept it back at its place and went out of the dept. wid a smile unaware of the eyes watching her.

They finally ended their shopping each one carrying a bag. Well, they have planned or rather Angad has planned to drop kripa first and then Nisha. Kripa didn't like the idea a bit…nor was she comfortable with Angad and Nisha chatting there hearts out esp. wen it became flirtatious…actually she hated it, although it wasn't first time that Nisha was getting friendly wid a guy. Kripa leaped out on arrival of her home and went to her building. Angad sitting in their in the car 4 sum time and then excused himself from Nisha and ran after kripa.

kripa had just stepped in her home, closed the door and turned to go inside…wen she heard the bell rang. She opened the door only to find Angad standing there, panting. He quickly handed her a bag and said "this is 4 u" in one breath and ran away b4 she can say anything or open it.

Kripa, confused, opened the bag only 2 find the same over coat inside, all wrapped up. She smiled with joy not bcoz she was gifted her fav over coat bu tbcoz it was Angad who has gifted it to her…

So that was it. I tried 2 make a little long. …nxt part is complete a-k.

As 4 it, DO COMMENT…


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Posted: 18 years ago
im the first to commnt that was GREAT. seriously. is he mega rich to afford a coat that pricey? anyway how nice was that.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww dat was soooooooooooooooooo sweet!!!! He gave her da coat she liked awwwwwwww!!!! Pls do cont soon, cnt wait for da nxt part!!! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
please cont soon! it was really good and now i can not wait to read more! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwww, CUTE part!!!!!!!!! 😳 😳 it was AWESUM!!!!!! 👏 👏 continue soon!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
cute part...dying to know wut happened in kripa's past that is makin her this way...continue sonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
WOW! 6000 bucks. dats crazy. i would immediately fall in luv w/ anyone who bought a $6000 worth gift- unless ofcourse that persone was super freaky and like stalking me. but still 6000! 😲
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Posted: 18 years ago
[quote=yasmin20589]im the first to commnt that was GREAT. seriously. is he mega rich to afford a coat that pricey? anyway how nice was that. [/quote]

thnx dear 😳 ...yeah he is mega rich...in one of the prts it was mentioned that he was one of the richest in town..i think u missed that one

[quote=IndianCutie13]great part[/quote]
thnx 😳

[quote=nehagupta_9]Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww dat was soooooooooooooooooo sweet!!!! He gave her da coat she liked awwwwwwww!!!! Pls do cont soon, cnt wait for da nxt part!!! 😳
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thnx a lot neha😳 ...ya...angad is a sweetheart 😳 ...i will try to.

[quote=prem-mukti#1] please cont soon! it was really good and now i can not wait to read more! 😆
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thnx a lot dear...can i know ur name!

[quote=proud_2_b_mysel]grt part[/quote]
thnx 😳

[quote=berkeleygirl818]awwwww, CUTE part!!!!!!!!! 😳 😳 it was AWESUM!!!!!! 👏 👏 continue soon!!!!! 😃 [/quote]
thnx a lot...glad u liked it!!!!!! 😃

[quote=armaghan0]cute and adoreable 😛 [/quote]
thank you 😛

[quote=candyprincess]great part[/quote]
thanks 😳

[quote=prem-mukti#1]cont soon!
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awwwww...dnt worry...i will post a long prt nxt time...if not soon

[quote=dhabi_84] cute part...dying to know wut happened in kripa's past that is makin her this way...continue sonn [/quote]

thnx a lot...that wud be revealed afta sum prts 😊

[quote= angullgrl91]WOW! 6000 bucks. dats crazy. i would immediately fall in luv w/ anyone who bought a $6000 worth gift- unless ofcourse that persone was super freaky and like stalking me. but still 6000! [/quote]

yeah dear...even i wud fell in luv wid such a sweet guy...ya its too costly but remember our kripa is priceless...nething 4 her 😳






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Posted: 18 years ago
next prt will be up on 8th feb(my bday) most probably...so i decided to give o sort of sneak a peak of the nxt prt since nxt prt is really imp. here it goes

angad caught hold of kripa's wrist and pulled her towads him "i want to say somrthing to u kripa and i wont leave u till i am done wid wat i want to say"

kripa stared in her eyes and said " i know wat u want to say angad"

wat does angad want to tell kripa...and does kripa actually know it???????
stay tuned to find out!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Awesome promo... cnt wait for da nxt part!!!!

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