arshi ff : being you part 6 updated

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Posted: 8 years ago
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surprise... i started new story..
hello.. readers.. i had this stupid, crazy idea.. so here i am writing that.. hope you enjoy this one...

part 1

Devi maiya is bored... she know she has work to but even god's do get bored right... so she just sat there in one of heaven tree, taking the leaves on her hand before making it to fly away...

just then ilang ( well i don't know whats that means i wrote that as a person that serves, and he is like freind to Devi maiya )

ilang: aree Devi maiya (DM) why are you sitting here...

DM: I Am bored ilang...

ilang: why so and remember you have work to do I Am here to call you for that only...

DM: i don't wanna do that... I Am bored why don't you understand...

just then they heard.. " he Devi maiya "

ilang : Now i don't think so... look like your favorite devote is calling you...

DM: oh! again what happened...

back on earth...

kushi stood in front of Devi maiyas idel.. she is felt angry on that laad govrner... it's all his doing... from the time she started to work he made her life hell...
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" he Devi maiyas... how can you do this to me... " kushi prayed or say complained...

DM: what did i do now... Devi maiya faced to ilang for answer who shook his head with smile on his face...

" why did you put me that hell and that laad govrner, Arnav Singh raizada... the Rakshas Haa what i can't tell you... how can he even scold me... and he gave soo much work today that i wanted smack his face " kushi fisted her hand punching through air to show how she would have punched his jaw..

DM: when did i put you through that your the one who did all things and your blaming me...

but ilang looked at he was with her when she did that...

DM: okay i agree i put her there... don't ask me reason i will tell you after words.. ilang nooded to her before seeing kushi again...

" and you know he let me fall from the cabin... i was hurt" kushi said with sad voice..

ilang glanced at DM for answer asking is it her doing but she shaked her head...

DM: no no don't give me looks that's not me... Arnav was angry..

ilang sighned at her before watching kushi again...

" Devi maiya if i were him i would have shown him... how scary he can get... " before kushi tell more Payal come inside the room...

" kushi let Devi maiya breath why are you troubleing her... come and sleep... i wonder how Devi maiya still here... if i was there in her place i would have run far from you " come Payal little voice followed by chuckle..

"Jiji... kushi winced before turning to DM... you don't listen to my Jiji OK now good night Devi maiya... i will talk to in the morning " saying kushi ran to bed falling asleep with certain chocolate brown eyes in her dreams...

ilang chuckled hearing Payal words... DM raised her eyebrow asking what is the matter...

ilang: it's to funny Payal think like that about kushi disturbing you... but here you always enjoy her complaints..

DM nodded at him, with smile on her face... thinking about kushi...

ilang : Now explain me why you made kushi to meet Arnav again... and poor kushi, Arnav is full of asr with her... he always give troubles her... and don't forget he dropped her from his cabin what if she got really hurt...

DM:i will wait... you Arnav may be ASR to the world but he is still Arnav his inner feelings are more important... he never shows them outside but inside he is soo good you know... he loves kushi from the starting but even he don't realized that one... i wanted them to be together... kushi deserves love and you know Arnav can love her better than than anyone (me: well it come out too cheesy)

and about arnav dropping from cabin... he was shocked to see her in the office... he wanted to forget her.. he don't want accept that kushi affect him.. and when he told her to go out of their kushi argued with him.. he was angry that time... and you know about ASR anger right... anyway kushi doesn't hurt... he knows there are the boxes their she won't be hurt that's why he dropped her...

after listening to DM ilang was stared at her with open mouth he in state of shock...

DM:what.. close your mouth...

ilang:did you just said that Arnav loves kushi... he voice filled with shock...

DM:if you won't believe me you can see yourself...

ilang nooded at before the saw Arnav...
DM made ilang hear Arnav mind thoughs..

Arnav was laying on the bed, tossing and turning not able to sleep... his thoughts full of kushi... making him restless...

" I Am i too hard on kushi today... she is full of energy... she can even fight with.. the ASR no one dared to do that but she is different then other... her eyes they are hazel with hint of green and blue in some places i can look in to them all day" Arnav shaked his head at where his thoughts are heading.. " no i don't need to think about her... I Am not affected by her presence she just a middle class girl... she don't matter to me... but she is kushi" Arnav still having fight with himself...

ilang looked shocked after seeing this thought from Arnav..

DM: see i told you... he just not ready to accept it that's all..

ilang just nodded his head not even believing it's true.. then he saw mischeif smile on DM...

ilang : what are you planning to do now... ilang worried what will DM do now that look Is not really good he knows that...

DM: just watch... saying DM did her work with her eyes shining in Mischeif and satisfaction as her work completed... ilang shocked her doings..

ilang : you just didn't do what i think you did do you?

DM: just smiled at him conforming that his thinking is currectly...


OK guys let me know what you think and it's fiction so I Am using god here and it's not any personal thing...
one last thing hope you enjoy reading this...
i love you guys


Index..

Part 2: click here
Part 3 :click here
Part 4:click here
Part 5:click here
Part 6click here
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ha ha ha.I have a crazy thought about what khushi's devi maidan did...
Let wait and see if I'm correct. Don't want reveal the suspense (if by any mean my guess is correct )
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Posted: 8 years ago
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👏Loved the concept. It's gonna be a good one👏👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome update yar
Totally loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved it..
Very different n interesting
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Posted: 8 years ago
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DM is having fun playing matchmaker.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting start !
Continue soon :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congratulations for d new story dear👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Excellent yar.
U are the best in writing this monologue thing
Fantastic
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very interesting n different concept.
Awesome start.
Loved it.
Devimayya is playing Cupid btw Arshi.
It was fun reading this.
Khushi n her complaints regarding Arnav to her dm will never end n Payal is so true.poor dm
DM know Arnav have feelings for Khushi but will not accept.
She is planning some mischief to bring Arshi together, naughty DM..
Very well written.
Totally enjoyed reading this.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Thanks for the pm dear:)

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