RoSid FS: Honeymoon Diaries upd pg 19 (completed) - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Another beautiful story really its awesome ur narration is super... And that train scene reminded me aviman's Switzerland trip it was cute... Now I'm waiting fr mature content 😉 ... Plss update soon...
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wow wonderful update loved both parts thank you for pm.
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Thanks for the lovely response for this work...well..There is something I have discovered as i wrote this one- that it actually should be larger than TS...it's the story of a couple who had gone through an arranged marriage... So a honeymoon is not just about their romance, but also the time when they get comfortable with each other, attaining the freedom to express themselves and move closer in their relationship..So what I plan to do is to exactly portray that rather than showing a normal, cheesy, romantic honeymoon which was the first raw idea I formulated...So this one would be a FS now..Hope you will love and support it... And yes, this update isn't that big and romantic as I'm tired after being back from college, will provide a bigger one tomorrow...




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Roli is literally left mouth opened as she finds Sid in his bath towel, his well chiseled torso revealed to her. She blinks her eyes like crazy, feelings so nervous that her palms starts being sweaty. It is for the first time she is ever seeing a guy like this, keeping away the movies and dailies. She quickly looks down in shy and uneasiness as her cheeks turn rosy. Sid smirks slightly very well understanding his wife's vulnerable state. He couldn't stop himself from wishing to peck her rosy face all over, but suppresses his desire and moves to her. Roli feels her legs going wobbly as the distance between her and him kept reducing. She quickly turns against him and tightly locks her palms in a state of anxiety and anticipation.




A while later. "Roli...' Roli hears him calling her but dares not to turn to him. All these experiences after marriage are really novel and bizarre for her; though there is an unknown excitement brimming deep inside her heart. "Roli...' she hears him again. "Hmmm...' she coos nervously, still not brave enough to turn towards him. "Roli...I'm done with my changing...you can turn...' she hears him saying. Though little anxiously, she turns towards him, her head still down. Sid couldn't stop himself from smiling seeing her innocent face sealed with tons of nervousness. But not so interested to make the poor soul more restless, he smiles and sits up on the bed. Roli slowly raises her head to look up at him and is instantly relieved to see him fully dressed up. "Sit Roli...' says Sid showing her the bed beside him. Roli smiles nervously and sits by him, her palms still wet with sweat. Sid admires her cute expressions for a while and slowly moves to the other side of the bed to lie down. "Lie down Roli...you look so tired...' he says to her. Roli nods with a mile and slowly settles on the bed little far from Sid. Sid looks at her, enjoying her pure and untouched beauty. As Roli is quite oblivious of his thoughts, he slowly keeps his palm over hers kept on the bed. Roli is alerted by his touch and looks in to his eyes as he envelops her palm with his. "Do I look so creepy Roli?' he questions surprising her. She nods a quick no when he tightens his hold on her palm. "Then why you look so scared when I'm around?' questions Siddhant still looking at her lovingly. "No...It's not that...I'm just...' Roli struggles to get the right words to express her feelings as Siddhant's piercing eyes and his warm touch distracts her. "Nervous?' questions Siddhant to help her come out with it. Roli nods in positive downing her eyes. "Why Roli? I would say you won't have to be...I'm your husband yaar, and you can be as free with me as you're with a close friend...I swear, I don't have the habit of eating up people...' he says with a chuckle. Roli Roli smiles at his joke, making Sid's heart to skip a beat. Oh god, how gorgeous is her smile, he thinks as he gets a little closer to her on the bed. Roli doesn't notice it as she's so lost in his eyes which are so captivating and deep. "can I ask you something Siddhantji?' Roli asks, ready to share with him a question which she wanted to ask him since they are engaged. "no you can't...' Sid states surprising Roli. "you'll have to get special permission from the president of India to ask something to your husband..C'mon Roli, why these formalities between us?' he questions "Woh...I mean..I wanted to ask you...Do you like me?' she asks growing fidgety with edginess. Sid is definitely moved by her question and just moves closer to her. Roli is surprised and restless by seeing him so proximal to her and tries to move away only to be held back by him. What happened next is what she never expected. He leans to her face and slowly pecks her lips as he traps her in his arms. Roli feels something strange happening in her entire body as his warm lips touch her soft ones, tenderly yet expressing his desire perfectly. Her heart almost forgets to beat as she closes her eyes welcoming him. After some good three seconds, he pulls back only to see her with her eyes closed, her lips slightly parted and her cheeks reddened. "It's not called like...it's called love...' he says huskily running a shiver down her spine. She slowly opens her eyes as he cups her face in his palms, looking at her lovably. She smiles shyly and downs her eyes as she finds him still gazing at her. "Siddhantji...let's sleep for a while...please...' she pleads. He nods in positive with a smile and hugs her tightly making her shudder slightly. "what???' he asks, making her nod no. he moves down to get the blanket, covers them with it and hugs her again as she blushes and cuddles to his chest to hide her red face from his powerful eyes. Sid smiles and enjoys their closeness before dropping off.

Edited by RoshniMenon88 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
Cute update.
Roli is too shy and did never leaves a chance to be naughty.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update loved it thank you for pm.
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WOW..i will say this as cute one...the way roli felt shy seeing sid shirtless and the she asked whether he likes her..? And coming to sid..such an understanding hisbamd...he tried easy the situation and proved that the question is wrong..its not like but love...awwwe...it was so lovely and i loved it...waiting for more...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awww awesome update yaar. ...roli is tooo shy. ..oh my poor roli. ...how is she going to handle this naughty guy. ...nice update dear. ...thanks for the pm
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Lovely update dear...sid is very naughty & Roli is very shy...eagerly waiting for next update dear...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful update... Sid is really naughty... Waiting fr next... Update soon,...
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"It's not called like...it's called love" Just wow. Eagerly waiting for next and thx for pm

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