Dil se: From the Heart last part pg7 FS:Raina,RicIta,Mayur,Gohem - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
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thanks for the lovely updates chechi 👏 i've read part 2 only (will read part 3 later), so my comment is on part 2 now 😃

really lovely update with many sweet scenes😳 of course my favourite are Raina's scenes ❤️ i loved the flashback scene, it really brought me back to PMHMD 😳😳😳 and of course the cake feeding scene, the way the fed each other, got closer and Raghav/ Mayank becoming shy ❤️ too cute 😳 also the way Raghav felt happy seeing Naina bond with Gopi and his instant connection with Dadi and Chottu ⭐️ awesome 👍🏼 poor Naina has to witness the passionate dance of Mayur 😭

even though I have never watched SNS, i really enjoyed the scenes of the other 2 couples too 👏 especially Ricita 😳 i liked the way Ricky spoke about his wife to Sameera 👏 and Ricky 's and Sita's romance was lovely Gopi and Ahem were pretty cute too 😳 😉

One more thing ! i loved the line on marriage, that it is an unbreakable bond 👍🏼 how true 👏

fabulous episode, i'll read part 3 veryyy soon 😃 😃

P.S. the pictures of all characters are really lovely and apt

Edited by sugar.and.spice - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
Super update keep it on
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats on your new story...
good start...
nice pic edits...
thanks for the pm 👏 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44
Without Raghav's knowledge Naina became the surrogate mother of Rehaan and Ahana's baby Ahaan whom Raina call Chottu.Raghav was angry with Naina thinking that Naina cheated him and thats how she became pregnant.

Originally posted by: arisharosid20

Awesome update poor nupur get tears still she did right breaking with mayank emotional scene...
Mayank get attached with naina & chotu..
Racita dance was cute.. stupid samera want to create misunderstanding but sita doesn't believe samera good..
Mayank over hear racita conversation...
He fainta..
Good he remember everything.. why raghav hate naina or who he that person.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Without Raghav's knowledge Naina became the surrogate mother of Rehaan and Ahana's baby Ahaan whom Raina call Chottu.Raghav was angry with Naina thinking that Naina cheated him and thats how she became pregnant.


oh ok i got it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2
Very nice update, lovely plot and nice pictures :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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done reading Part 3 too 😃 awesome part chechi, thanks for not dragging the revealing of Raghav's true identity 👍🏼
Nupur is a sweet girl, I felt sad for her (but of course it had to happen) 😔
I like how Raghav fell for Naina as Mayank, this indicates the strength of the bond between Ragahv and Naina 👏 they are inseparable ⭐️ and Raghav is blessed with a very loving and supportive new family (i loved the way they were expecting him to propose 😳) ⭐️
Looks like Ricky and Sita are another couple with a fevicol-like bond ❤️ i enjoyed their dance and the scene with Sameera afterward 👏
I was very happy that Raghav's memory was back that I forgot about whatever happened between them before the accident 😕 very exciting tracks are ahead i think 😉 and who is this new entry 😲
I am super curious! waiting for more 😃
Edited by sugar.and.spice - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you all for supporting this FS.
This FS is ending.pls give a detailed comment.Also plz write your favourite jodi,fav character,fav scene n y u like them.

Dil se: From the Heart Part4

Thanks to Kavita for giving me RicIta wedding pics.


Indumati:Why did you leave the hospital in a hurry Naina?
Naina cried:Raghav as Mayank loves me.But Raghav hates me.I can't bear his hatred dadi.
She hugged Indu and cried.
Indu:No Raghav can't hate you.
Suddenly somebody came there.Naina was shocked to see him.
It was Raghav.They looked at each other deeply.

O... (ek suraj nikla tha, kuchh para pighla tha
Ek aandhee aayee thee, jab dil se aah niklee thee
Dil se re...) - (2)(Dil se).


Naina shivered:Raghav!

Dil se re
Dil se re
Dil se re
Dil se re
Dil se re

He grabbed her hand and took her to Modi house.The tensed Indumati followed them.
Naina was surprised to see the decorated room.She looked at Raghav:Raghav...?

Dil toh aakhir dil hai na
Mithee see mushkil hai na, piya piya

Ragh:I am sorry Naina.I misunderstood you.


Piya piya piya na piya jiya jiya jiya na jiya
Dil se re...) - (2)


Raghav embraced her crying bitterly:When I became Mayank I realized how pure you are and whatever you said about your secret surrogacy was right.Please forgive me Naina.Please give me one more chance.I promise you that I will never let your eyes wet.
Naina became teary eyed.


O... do patte patjhad ke pedo se utarey the
Pedo kee shakho se utarey the
Phir utane mausam gujre woh patte do bechare
Phir ugsne kee chahat me woh sehrao se gujre

She wiped his tears.

Woh patte dil dil dil the, woh dil the dil dil dil the
(Dil hai toh phir dard hoga, dard hai toh dil bhee hoga
Mausam gujarte rehte hain) - (2)






N:My Raghav should never cry for me.I can't bear your tears Raghav.

Dil se, dil se, dil se, dil se
Dil se re...

They embraced each other emotionally.


Dil toh aakhir dil hai na, mithee see mushkil hai na, piya piya
Piya piya piya na piya, jiya jiya jiya na jiya
Dil se re...

Modis and Indumati smiled seeing it.


Raghav brought Naina to an area where flowers were blooming in trees.


O... bandhan hai rishto me
Kato kee tare hain, patthar ke darwaje diware

N:Beautiful place.I love it.
Ragh:Me too.
He took out a red rose and gave it to her:I love you Naina.Will you marry me again?


Bele phir bhee ugatee hain, aur guchchhe bhee khilte hain
Aur chalte hain afsane, kirdar bhee milte hain
Naina took the red rose from him happily:Yes my dear.I will marry you again.


Woh rishtey dil dil dil the, woh dil the dil dil dil the
(Ghum dil ke pal chulbule hain, panee ke yeh bulbule hain
Bujhte hain bate rehte hain) - (2)
They got into a sweet embrace.


Dil se, dil se, dil se, dil se
Dil se re...


Flower petals fell over them.They got excited.



Dil se re, dil se re
Dil se re, dil se re(Dil se).

Raghav Naina's marriage got fixed.

Ramakanth:Sita...get ready.We will go for a dinner date.
Sita:Wow..I will get ready now.
Sita came wearing a black frock.Ramakanth was lost in her beauty.

Deewangi awargi
tujhse hi hai yeh ashiqui

While walking she slipped,but he caught her.

They shared a romantic eye lock.

Deewangi awargi
Deewangi awargi

Ramakanth pulled Sita closer and rubbed his nose with hers making her blush.

Deewangi awargi
tujhse hi hai yeh ashiqui
(SNS RicIta song).


Rama:Sita...I was thinking if we can also get married again with Raghav bhai and Naina bhabhi.
Sita smiled:What?
Suddenly Ahem Gopi came that way.
Seeing them Ramakanth Sita got embarrassed and moved away from each other.

Ahem:No problem.If that's your wish we are willing to make arrangements for your remarriage too.
Gopi:So double celebration.

Ramakanth Sita blushed hearing this surprise.
Ahem Gopi left the room.
Ramakanth knelt down extending his hand towards Sita:Sita..will you marry me again?
Sita held his hand:Yes my dear..
She pecked his cheek.They smiled.

Raghav Naina -Ramakanth Sita sat on the same mandap.

Ramakanth Sita wed each other.


Rama:Finally we got married again Sita.
Sita:Ya.And I never get tired of marrying you Ricky.I am willing to marry you hundred times.

Suddenly they became emotional.
Rama:I want you to be wife in all my births.
Sita:I too want that and I promise that in every birth I will be with you.

They shared a sweet romantic eye lock.

Deewangi awargi(SNS RicIta song).

Raghav Naina married each other.

Ragh:Naina...I promise you that I will be a perfect husband who will shower happiness on you in the form of love.


Dil toh aakhir dil hai na, mithee see mushkil hai na, piya piya
Dil toh aakhir dil hai na, mithee see mushkil hai na
Naina:I also promise you that I will never give you any chance to be upset with me.


Piya piya piya na piya, piya piya
Jiya jiya jiya na jiya
Piya piya piya na piya

Ragh:I know that you will never do anything to disappoint you.I trust you.


Dil se re..., jiya jiya jiya na jiya
Dil se re...

They shared a sweet eye lock.


Dil se re, dil se re
Dil se re(Dil se).

Raghav Naina took Ahaan in their hands pampering him.


Indumati:God...bless them always.
Gopi was smiling tearfully.

Ahem:Now all are happy.Then why are you crying Gopi?
Gopi:No Ahemji.These are the tears of happiness.

Ahem smiled.
Gopi:Kanhaji...always make both the couples happy.
Ahem held Gopi closer:Your Kanhaji will always hear your prayer Gopi.

Gopi:Ahemji...I can't thank Kanhaji enough for giving a happy life to my children.

Ahem:Ya Gopi.Kanhaji solved all the problem and gifted us a blissful life.
Gopi stood close to Ahem smiling.



After 2 years...

Raghav was feeding Ahaan and Naina was feeding their baby Raina.
Raghav:Naina..look at Chottu.He is so happy to get a little sister.
Naina:That's right.Raina is lucky to have a lovely brother like Chottu.

Ahaan kissed Raina's cheek.Raina smiled cutely.

Ahem Gopi smiled seeing their cute family moment.
Gopi:I am so happy for Raghav and Naina.They faced so much to be one.
Ahem:But their love won.They gave a perfect name to their daughter.
Gopi:Yes Ahemji.Raghav's Ra and Naina's Iana combined together and became Raina.They can't get a better name for their daughter.
They smiled.
Raghav's phone rang.
He picked up the phone.
It was Nupur.
N:Hi Raghav.
Ragh:Hey Nupur.How are you?
Naina:Nupur?What is the news there?
Nupur smiled:Anshuman and I went for pregnancy test and it is positive.
Naina:Wow!Congrats.
Nupur blushed.
Ragh:I am so happy for you Nupur.You got your soulmate and now your love's symbol is coming.
Nupur smiled:I am grateful to you for finding Anshuman for me.
Raghav smiled:No need to thank me.When I saw my friend Anshuman after along time I felt that he suits you.Anshuman too liked you,so I proceeded with the proposal.You too liked him.That's how you and Anshuman became a perfect jodi.
She smiled.


Nupur played with a teddy dreaming of her baby waiting for Anshuman to return.


Anshuman came home with fruits.
Nupur:So many fruits..
Anshu:It's for our baby.
Nup:Oh My God!I need to eat so much.
Anshu:Yep.
Nup:Don't think I will eat all this.Understand?
Anshu:Hey..you need to eat them.It's my order.
He started feeding her fruits with his hand.She smiled.

Ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
Dilbar pe ho na dilbar pe ho na koi asar

Nup:I am lucky to have a husband like you.
Anshu:You are God's best gift for me.

Ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
Dilbar pe ho na dilbar pe ho na koi asar


They both shared a sweet romantic eye lock.

Ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
Dilbar pe ho na dilbar pe ho na koi asar (Salaam-E-Ishq )




Ramakanth was holding his daughter Ricita in his arms and Sita was holding their other twin Rita in her arms.
Ricita peed on his shirt.
Rama:Oh no..Ricita passed urine on my shirt.
Sita went near Ricita:Ricita...did you pass urine on dad's shirt?Naughty naughty...

Thanks to Mansi for giving me this pic.
I will give you a beating.
Ramakanth moved away with Ricita:What are you saying Sita?You can't beat her.I will not allow it.
Sita:You were complaining about her now.But you don't want anyone to punish her.

Ramakanth kissed Ricita:What does this innocent child know?
Sita:Ricky..I never thought that you would be such a sweet dad.
Ahem Gopi came.
Gopi:Parenthood changes people.
Ahem:yes.Anybody will get mature when they enter parenthood.
Ramakanth Sita smiled.

Ramakanth changed the shirt and started playing with Ricita and Rita.
Raghav Naina too came there with Ahaan and Raina.All the 4 kids were jumping and playing with joy.
Indumati visited them.They all hugged her happily.
All were very happy.
Gopi:Ahemji...why can't we have a family photograph?
Ahem:Yes..a family photograph is a must.
They all stood together and clicked their family photograph happily.

(Thanks to Mansi for giving me the picture of Mansi with a baby to do editing)




The End
Edited by jasminerahul - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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First fall congratulations for completing this fs..
Love it... raina conversation emotional & Raghav purpose Naina.. Racita scene cute..
They to want to remArry...
Both couples get marry lovely...
Gohem scene cute..
Raina happy with child..
Good nupur got anushman & she going to mother awesome...
Anushman really caring...
Racita with babies so cute...
Photography scene amazing..
Loved this fs...
My favourite couples racita.. my favorite character Nupur.. my favorite scene when mayank see first time chottu & feel connected...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update dear
Loved it!!
Naina was in thoughts that Raghav is still angry on her but Raghav cleared her thoughts and accepted her love whole heartily. Raghav proposed Naina for their remarriage. The elders were happy for Raghav and Naina . On other hand Ricky proposed sita for remarriage as well. Both the couples were married to lead a life with love and warmth. Raghav and Naina were blessed with Raina and ahaan who was already present in their life bonding them. Ricky and sita were blessed with Rita and ricita .Loved elders blessings on both the couples. Nupur found her true soulmate too and was in her family way.
Loved all the songs and pics :))
Lovely ending dear !!

My favorite couple : Raghav and Naina
Favorite character : Nupur for being understanding person and wanted happiness for Mayank@Raghav
Favorite scene: Naina and mayank's first meet where Naina assumed mayank as her Raghav and Raghav's connection with ahaan and Naina .
:))

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