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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello everyone😊
I fell in love with the character of omkara from the first promo itself😳, when he said those dialogues...perfect pyar, perfect shaadi sirf kahaniyon mein hoti hai and learned that he is going to play the soul part in the trio.

But I am very disappointed with the show after the few episodes as it was very opposite to my imagination of omkara's character😕. So, i started writing this story for my own pleasure. Now thought of posting it here.

As I started writing it even before the entrance of ishana or gauri. You won't be finding them here. Here the heroine is "ISHANYA😊"

This is the story of Ishanya(played by madirakshi mundle) with O'bros' and especially omkara.

I am not going to give any character sketch as it will spoil the surprises. So you will get to know about the characters as you read.😛

I am posting a small prologue now, and if i get the good number of readers i will post the chapters.

Here is the banner:-
Zindagi ne li hai teri saason mein panah
Teri ishq ne di hai jeene ki wajah
Manjoor hai teri di hui har sajah
Teri sukoon ke liye ho jaaun mein fanaah

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Prologue

Arse ho gaye teri murti banate banate

Arse ho gaye tujhse kuch maange hue

Aaj maang rahu mein apne liye

Uski saason ko lautane dey use zindagi dey


Looking at the statue of ganeshji, omkara said the above words. It's true that he stopped asking anything from god long back and just started making his statues instead.

But today he is asking the god to grant a wish that too for his own happiness. Yes, SHE is his happiness, his life.

He couldn't understand the meaning of her being in his life all these days

Today when he realized her importance, She is being snatched away by the same god who hasn't listened to his pleas before.

And today he is asking the god with some hope that he may fulfill his wish. As he was the one who sent her in his life. His ray of light in the darkness he developed from all these years.

He was insecure, and upset from past few days because of the growing friendship between her and his brother. He was angry, disappointed he don't know why!!

But he does know now and he doesn't have any jealousy or insecurity now. All he want is her life back, even if she doesn't be in his life.

Closing his eyes, he remembered the most beautiful moment of his life. The moment when he realized that he love her.

Her tingling bangles, her flowing hair, her radiant smile, her mysterious eyes everything of her until all that had been snatched by that incident.

Taking a deep breath he opened his eyes. Prepared to see the most dreadful sight of his life. Her being electurated. Seeing her lay lifeless a tear slid from his eye. He watched painfully, as the doctors are trying to make her heart beat.


And finally his prayer had been heard. She started to breath, her heart is beating. She is back to life.

He took a step back with a small smile still tears in his eyes. He had seen the same looks in his brothers' face too. The O'bros' exchanged relived looks and saw her getting back to life.

Edited by Veera94 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Index
Part 1---Page 2
Part 2---Page 3
Part 3---Page 4
Part 4---Page 5
Part 5---Page 6
Part 6---Page 6
Part 7---Page 8
Part 8---Page 9
Part 10--page 12
Part 11--Page 13
Part 12--Page 15
part 13--page 16
Part 14--page 19
Part 15--Page 21
Part 16--Page 23
Part 17--Page 24
Part 18--Page 26
Part 19--Page 28
Part 20--page 29
Part 21--page 31
Part 22--page 32
Part 24--page 35
part 25--page 36
Edited by Veera94 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice prologue
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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interesting prologue
looking forward for the updates
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter-1

The first look

Guitar playing in the background, winds are wild, cars got struck in the traffic. In that traffic a girl coverd her face in brown scarf is trying to pass the traffic by walking in between the spaces of vehicles.

In the same traffic Omkara too got struck. He is waiting helplessly for the traffic to get clear. He is impatient and irritated by the vehicles horns mixed with guitar music as he lowered the window glass.

He noticed the girl coming towards his car. "So much eager to go somewhere he thought. He looked at the girl who is now passing by his car. Her scarf got struck in his car's door handle due to wind. She is trying to take it off. And suddenly their eyes met.








They were looking into each others eyes for few seconds. Suddenly the scarf flew from her face and she broke the eyelock. She looked at the handle and tried to free her scarf. Omkara mesmerized for a moment tried to help her take the scarf. She withdrew her hand seeing omkara's hand coming. He took the scarf and offered her not taking his eyes from her face even for a second, while she was looking sideways and not noticed her scarf in his hands.

He cleared his throat to get her attention, she looked at him and then at the scarf. She took her scarf without touching his hand while he continued to look at her and listened to her tingling bangles. she left from there in the same hurry.

Omkara who was still looking at her retreating back was got to reality by a horn sound and he focused his eyes on the traffic. But that 3 second moment still lingering in his mind.

Some where else the same girl, is rushing on the road and a bike came before her halting.

The biker looked at her while she was looking beyond him. He asked "hey, you! Mana ki girls rudy se milne ke liye bahut betaab hothe hain. Par itni bhi kya jaldi kit um bhaagthe bhaagthe mere bike ke neeche aagayi?

She bluntly looked at him and then looked past him and said hurriedly,ghumao!!

He looked confusedly at her, when she came to him and sat on his bike.

"I said, bike ghumaao! Jaldi!! She ordered him. He took his glasses and looked back at her shocked.

She shouted at him "Sunai nahi diya?! Jaldi karo who log jaarahe hai!

He was baffled and said "OH! Hello! Pehle tum mere bike se uthro, Only hot girls have right to sit on my bike. Aur meinne toh tumhe teekse dekha bhi nahi kit um hot ho ki nahi!

She climbed down his bike and stood infront of him. Before he can say anything she slapped him!

"What the hell!!! He uttered in shock clutching his cheek

She again slapped him on his other cheek. He opened his mouth in shock.

She shouted "Chup chaap bike ghumao, aur unlogon ka peecha karo. And again sat on his bike.

This time he did what she said. And she said "who, uss red van ka peecha karo, jaldi!!

He saw the van far away from him and sped his bike to follow it.

They both reached an old warehouse kind of location. He tried to ask her something while she looked around and finally got courage and asked her "hum yaha kya karne aaye hai?

"Unhein bachane, aur kya? She said confusing him. He asked "Kisse? She pointed towards something from a broken window and said "unhe

The scene he looked horrified him.

There was a gang of few men with a group girls tied with ropes and their mouths plastered.

He looked at her shockingly, and tried to ask something, while she was talking hushed in her phone.

He looked at the broken window and saw the girls were being auctioned. His blood boiled, he was disgusted and started to walk towards the door to enter inside.

The girl who realized that he is trying to enter into the warehouse, grabbed his hand and dragged him to a side and asked "kya, kar rahe ho?!

"Unhe bachana hai na, isliye andar jaa raha hu! He said as a matter of fact.

She said "Zyada hgeropanti dikhane ki zarurat nahi hai! Mein ne police ko phone karliya hai who log aate hi honge!

He tried to say something when a loud voice interrupted them

"yeh tum log koun ho?! Shouted a man, may be from the same gang who kidnapped the girls.

They both are shocked and looked at each other.

"Chalo, yaha se! Said the girl holding his hand trying to run. But he stood rocked at the same place and looked at the gathering gang of men with bloody eyes.

She looked shockingly, while he took back his hand from her and went towards the gang.

What followed was an action sequence, rudra beated the men with the occasional help of the girl with pepper spray.

Just when they handled all the members, Police arrived with media.

Rudra looked at the girl and tried to say something, when the girl noticed media and covered her face with scarf and left from there without saying a word or looking back once.

Rudra was surrounded by media, while police were busy in arresting the men. He didn't shied away from media and showed his heropanti. He thanked the girl in his mind for giving an opportunity like this.

Edited by Veera94 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow
Nice concept
Nice start
Continue soon
Thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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very nice update
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow wonderful start loved it can't wait for updates thank you for pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing start loved it thank you for pm.

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