AvNeil OS: Where The Streets Have No Name [Romance/Honeymoon]

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sumana.shesha

@sumana.shesha

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Amazing OS :)

Superb :)

Loved it :)

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Sitey

@ramaasita

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Can I just say that you're too perfect when you write stuff like this? I have absolutely no clue as to how to tell how beautiful this entire one shot was. There's not a single flaw I can think of despite having read it like, 20 times already. You've captured the essence of their relationship so beautifully. Thank you so much for this 😳👏

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Aww, this was great
The road-trip was an absolute delight
Enjoyed every moment

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Electro.Cutie

@Electro.Cutie

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

This was fab!!

I actually felt like I was on the road trip. As I sit here, you took me to all those places. That's how superb your description was.

Loved it! So full of emotions and love.

Keep writing.

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anam munir

@anamunir

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

This is such superb take at theur impending honeymoon!!!

Hope cvs take an inspiration from here though ;)

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sweet cherry

@sweet cherry

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Wooow such a hot os
Awesome

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Shailja

@Kshailja

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Wow!! Amazing OS..

You gave us the whole ride from Mumbai to Delhi..

And the description.. It's like you have been to all places by yourself... And if its true, then amazing girl, you are so awesome...

And that Momos of Kamla Nagar, you should have added Chilli potatoes too.. Hehehehehe..

And their blooming love..

They didn't say I Love You but it's like they promised eternity for each other..

Love your writing..

Keep writing like this...

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nandu_nan

@nandu_nan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

i loved this OS sooo much that i m reading for 2nd time ...

can i expect a 2nd part to this ...

like #AvNeil s life aftr coming to mumbai ..

i really wanna read a second part to this ...

can u write a second part ?

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Arisha

@lol_rofl

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

😲☺️❤️

V you know i am not praising yo anymore. LOL just think so many praises ok it will be for you 😛

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Pagalpinky

@Pagalpinky

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

This was a very nice story. At first I found it strange that there were not many dialogues but then your vivid description of everything made it great. Thanks so much. Going to read your other stories :)